Wotz Posted September 6, 2014 Posted September 6, 2014 So here's a little thing I'm doing on the side, hence the simplistic style. Feel free to review or criticize or whatevs. Quote D U N E W O L F
ZippyWharrgarbl Posted October 31, 2014 Posted October 31, 2014 I have no idea why no one has replied here yet. This piece is both well-written and captivating; I'm very much interested in what happens next. The characters are, well, in-character, and there's already a lot of events happening to pique my interest. As more chapters are posted, I'll probably do a more in-depth review, but I'd just like to say that this has a lot of potential, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Quote Memoirs of the Dead entry: The Unknown Turaga, a tale from the late Chronicler Kodan's journal. Strakk's Best Friend, the story of a confusing yet somehow canon friendship. Terrible Comics, a collection of comics that are terrible.
Gifthammer Posted November 1, 2014 Posted November 1, 2014 Well I simply saw nothing to critique and am looking forward to what the next chapters hold. Quote Every hero is born from his enemy; every leader, his followers; and every father, his children. Metru Nui: the Fall My 3D printing designs on Thingiverse
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