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Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS (BFTGM)


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Name: Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS


Origins: Stelt


Current Location: Spherus Magna


Status: Alive


Goals: Conquer the known universe


 


Spherus Magna has had a very rough time as of recent. After the Battle of Bara Magna, there was a enourmous battle between beings made from a golden-skinned being, and also Matoran Universe inhabitants. Omega Pridak was created by the golden-skinned being, and was driven by a goal to obliterate the real Pridak, unknowingly though, his destiny was to merge, to create a ultimate being. Omega Pridak and Pridak warped to another alternate universe, where soon after they began to merge into something similar to a Kaita. In this universe, there was an island separated by mountain ranges, this was seen by Dormendar Makardzya, and this island was called Okoto. Also, Dormendar Makardzya also pursuied his private wars on the planet, deactivating Matoran left and right, and obliterating Omega Bad Guy, but allowed the white piraka to leave unharmed, as he thought it was time he became known to the world. This would eventually lead to his downfall. Along with that, there was marendar, a mechanical being of mass destruction with only one aim; destroy toa. Toa Tahu tried to use his Golden Armour filled with a little over 22 of the 42 Kraata powers to defeat marendar, but Tahu met a terrible defeat, and died. Then, 6 Toa; Lessovik, Helryx, Krakua, Takanuva, Norik and Kualus, did the impossible. They all completely mastered the virtue of 'unity' and formed what was previously thought a myth; the Toa Nui. This was also met with a sound defeat. Dormendar Makardzya later completely obliterated marendar in such a short time, that it was unbelievable. While this was going on, there was a crazed Great Being running around and killing of powerful beings, and there were also two of the Toa Nuva missing. No one has heard from Kopaka and Pohatu since they left to check on Lessovik's alleged murders. The white piraka later returned to Dormendar Makardzya, in an Exo-Skakdi armour, and disabled all his abilities, and was able to defeat him. This is all we know of the current status of Spherus Magna, but there is a secret kept from all, until now.


 


Hopefully, these final short-stories will give a conclusion to the small universe I created using my entries for the BFTGM competition. This epic conclusion will decide the fate of the universe.


 


From Stelt


3... 2.... 1....... Wait for it... wait... just one more second.. or minute? It should happen soon eno-. Finally! It is here, it is alive. I thought it was going to be a complete failure. Let me introduce my self, o' reader of the books of Destral. I am... hmm. Maybe not. I already got a bunch of rumours about me being spread because of that darned Makoki Stone, so I should keep my identity a secret... I am a Makuta. My assigned region by Miserix was Stelt. So you can just call me the 'Makuta of Stelt'. I suppose that I should explain what I am doing here. My fellow Makuta think that only grand schemers like Teridax, and even Icarax to an extent, and those scientist types like Mutran can create good rahi, disgusting beasts, or weapons of ultimate power. I want to show them wrong. What I just created is something to rival Makuta Teridax's Kraata-Kal. His Kraata-Kal ended up being rebellious, and turned over to the Dark Hunters. Mines wont. I'll just check out his current status over there and... It looks just like a regular Kraata... or DOES it? Well it may look like a stage 4 Kraata of Heat Vision, but this one has secret powers. It's power level is beyond that of a Shadow Kraata, and was made in a very special way.


 


This special Kraata, which I'll affectionately call Kraata-Kal Nuva, was created by using the substance that transforms Krana to Krana-Kal. It was used on a Kraata, therefore 'Kraata' - 'Kal'. I'll make a second one in a second, so I can dip it into energized protodermis alongside the regular kal substance, to create some armour for it...


 


*2 hours later*


 


What I made is a monstrosity... It is... lt's chest is like an Av-Matoran... But I suppose everything else makes up for it. But it doesn't matter. This guy far surpasses the Kraata-Kal from Teridax. Also, this kinda reminds me of something I saw from a 'kratana' a while back... Something about "stars"... I shall dub it 'Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS'.


 


This extraordinary being has many powers. Along with it's natural element, Heat Vision, it has powers over fire, water, shadow, air, psionics, sonics, x-ray vision, telekenesis, and every other Kraata power. Along with that, it also has something I personally added in case I feel this universe is too much for me... Keep it a secret to everybody, it can create black holes.


 


I sent Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS to a secret area underground Stelt. It will train there until I summon it. The only other time it would be possible to be released, is if an event akin to the Great Cataclysm occurs again, but with master Teridax soon in control of everything and anything, I doubt that would ever happen.


 


"Master... Makuta of Stelt..."


"Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS, what is it? You were ordered to be sent into the underground catacombs of Stelt.."


"I have... secret information. Things that I think might convince you to allow me to stay in the outside world permanently."


"Don't even think about it. Head directly back to the stasis training room, I won't be tricked. I won't let you turn like the other Kraata-Kal"


 


I wasn't about to be tricked. I left Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS as he went back to the room, and obeyed. I see something in the distance... No... NO NO NO NO... Impossible! It cannot be... 


"Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS, COME BACK NOW!"


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"Oh great... I will deal with this my self..."


So my eyes did not decieve me... Makuta Mi... Mi... MISERIX... He is here, and he is here now.. I will wrap this up quick. Fear Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS, he may look puny, and a bit different... but he is not here to play games....


 


- The Makuta of Stelt


 


Listen up puny readers of this article. Tell everyone that Miserix is back, and when I find the Makuta of Metru Nui, he is dead! I have learn about this Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS, and I will come back to control him after I blast Teridax into oblivion.


-Miserix


 


Ultimo Magna (Grand Finale)


(coming soon)


In this epic finale, it reveals the future to Kraata-Kal Nuva STARS. Stay Tuned.


 


Entry Picture: http://www.majhost.com/gallery/Boidoh/Kraata-Kal-NuvaStars/dsc_3343.jpg


Gallery: http://www.majhost.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=290184


Video: (uploading; I will post in the morning.)


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Honestly this thing just looks like it's all over the place, and way over done for it's own good, I'd suggest totally redoing this but you probably already have it submitted so you can't alter it.

I think that's the point. :P Also, this is a very unusual MOC, Boidoh, and like the rest of your BFTGM entries, it has a hilariously over the top look & story. :P

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While there are too many colours, I really dig the actual design of it. It's a nice upgrade of the Rahkshi Star set, and if the colours were more muted it'd look epic indeed. Great work!

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