Voxumo Posted November 17, 2011 Share Posted November 17, 2011 Alright I built a Helryx moc and i have decided to post it and here it isI also decide to give her a custom mask so i took a kanohi jutlin,a noble komau and a noble ruru and cut certain parts of the jutlin and ruru and super glued them to a komau and a little paint and ta-da a Mask of Psychometryand did some custom weapons my first attempt at a mace and i think i is nice for first time and the shieldand here is the link to the gallery on mocpage http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/287225I hope everyone likes it Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Takiah, Toa of Space Posted November 17, 2011 Share Posted November 17, 2011 Well done with the construction of the new mask! Did you design how it was gonna look in the first place by taking parts of the other masks, or was this a random trial and error process? Quote See...to them, you're just a freak. Like me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted November 17, 2011 Author Share Posted November 17, 2011 Well done with the construction of the new mask! Did you design how it was gonna look in the first place by taking parts of the other masks, or was this a random trial and error process? it was more so i had the three mask and thought what i could do with them. glad you like it Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Takiah, Toa of Space Posted November 17, 2011 Share Posted November 17, 2011 The mask came out looking very nicely. I can't tell very well if it looks somewhat rusted and banged up. It's kind of a cool texture. It's funny because normally these toys are so smooth and have a sheen to them. Quote See...to them, you're just a freak. Like me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zarohum Posted November 17, 2011 Share Posted November 17, 2011 The mask is great, but the MOC itself isn't the best. But I can't stress how awesome the mask is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted November 17, 2011 Author Share Posted November 17, 2011 The mask came out looking very nicely. I can't tell very well if it looks somewhat rusted and banged up. It's kind of a cool texture. It's funny because normally these toys are so smooth and have a sheen to them.The mask is great, but the MOC itself isn't the best. But I can't stress how awesome the mask is.well i'm really glad everyone likes the mask i kinda of thought the paint made it look dented as if it were battle damaged Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zarohum Posted November 17, 2011 Share Posted November 17, 2011 Well, something I should've given you credit for before was the weapon and shield. And you did capture the "Indescribably ancient" feel. Just... the color scheme needs work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paleo Posted November 18, 2011 Share Posted November 18, 2011 The mask and mace are cool, but the rest could use some work.Legs and arms are too short and long, respectively. I'd get rid of the trans-red pieces on the shoulders, not quite sure why they're there. I'd also try to distribute and even out the color scheme more, seeing as the feet and body have one blue, the mask another, and the arms a third .I also recommend changing the armoring on the arms, legs and torso, making the bulk more spread out. Quote Flickr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted November 18, 2011 Author Share Posted November 18, 2011 Well, something I should've given you credit for before was the weapon and shield. And you did capture the "Indescribably ancient" feel. Just... the color scheme needs workThe mask and mace are cool, but the rest could use some work.Legs and arms are too short and long, respectively. I'd get rid of the trans-red pieces on the shoulders, not quite sure why they're there. I'd also try to distribute and even out the color scheme more, seeing as the feet and body have one blue, the mask another, and the arms a third .I also recommend changing the armoring on the arms, legs and torso, making the bulk more spread out.Well sadly this is what happens with a lack of pieces. And the blue on the mask is as close as i could get to the feet. I also wanted to just get rid of the takadox heads since i did not have anything else that would work with. I'm glad everyone likes the mask. Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fsnorglepuff Posted November 18, 2011 Share Posted November 18, 2011 Nice mask concept, even while it isn't so refined. The body is a bit Inika-ish, not much custom there. I do like the weapons very much. Overall, very well done. Quote Toa Gali Nuva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katuko Posted November 18, 2011 Share Posted November 18, 2011 I will be honest and say that the overall MOC isn't too original, but that mask more than makes up for it. It looks very interesting; good job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted November 19, 2011 Author Share Posted November 19, 2011 Nice mask concept, even while it isn't so refined. The body is a bit Inika-ish, not much custom there. I do like the weapons very much. Overall, very well done.I will be honest and say that the overall MOC isn't too original, but that mask more than makes up for it. It looks very interesting; good job. Thank you everyone i'm glad the mask make up for the moc overall. Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Takiah, Toa of Space Posted November 19, 2011 Share Posted November 19, 2011 I actually like the body. This dude is a fat leader of a strange organization full of corrupted members. If anything he reminds me of Cornelius Fudge. The color scheme DOES need work, but it's getting there. I'd get rid of the shoulder pads... Quote See...to them, you're just a freak. Like me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted November 19, 2011 Author Share Posted November 19, 2011 I actually like the body. This dude is a fat leader of a strange organization full of corrupted members. If anything he reminds me of Cornelius Fudge. The color scheme DOES need work, but it's getting there. I'd get rid of the shoulder pads...Who are you referring to when you say this dude. And I want to point out that the body of Helryx is actually a backwards makuta phantoka body. And i know the shoulder pads are really just because i absolutely wanted to get rid of those takadox heads and the little red pieces are there because my mother wanted me to incorporate them into there somehow because i originally had them in the takadox heads. Also I thought that the head might give the appearance of "prizes of war". Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peach 00 Posted November 23, 2011 Share Posted November 23, 2011 All right, here's another MOC review you requested. ^^Well, first off I'd like to start with the design. It's decent, and the Phantoka Makuta torso isn't something you regularly use, but you used it quite well. The Rahkshi feet were a little big, but the one on the torso was neat touch. The Takadox heads were cool, but the one complaint I have is that the colors don't really meld well together. The white is good, but the other colors don't go together. You probably need a darker blue so it kind of goes with the mask - just saying, which was probably the only complaint I had with the MOC.Now, the mask. You created a very unique design for the Mask of Psychometry, and I think that's a good representation of the mask. You did fit the 'ancient' look of Helryx, I must admit, which made her realistic as she is described in the storyline. Kudos for succeeding on that level. ^_^I loved the weaponry you equipped her with. The spear and the shield that you gave her were both interesting weapons, and very well crafted and very creative.All in all, this is a creative and interesting MOC, and a good interpretation of Helryx. Keep it up, great job! Quote On the day the wall came down / They threw the locks onto the ground And with glasses high / We raised a cry / For freedom had arrived On the day the wall came down / The ship of fools had finally run aground Promises lit up the night / Like paper doves in flight I dreamed you had left my side / No warmth, not even pride remained And even though you needed me / It was clear that I could not do a thing for you Now life devalues day by day / As friends and neighbors turn away And there's a change that even with regret / Cannot be undone Now frontiers shift like desert sands / While nations wash their bloodied hands Of loyalty, of history / In shades of grey I woke to the sound of drums / The music played, the morning sun streamed in I turned and I looked at you / And all but the bitter residues slipped away slipped away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voxumo Posted November 23, 2011 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 All right, here's another MOC review you requested. ^^Well, first off I'd like to start with the design. It's decent, and the Phantoka Makuta torso isn't something you regularly use, but you used it quite well. The Rahkshi feet were a little big, but the one on the torso was neat touch. The Takadox heads were cool, but the one complaint I have is that the colors don't really meld well together. The white is good, but the other colors don't go together. You probably need a darker blue so it kind of goes with the mask - just saying, which was probably the only complaint I had with the MOC.Now, the mask. You created a very unique design for the Mask of Psychometry, and I think that's a good representation of the mask. You did fit the 'ancient' look of Helryx, I must admit, which made her realistic as she is described in the storyline. Kudos for succeeding on that level. ^_^I loved the weaponry you equipped her with. The spear and the shield that you gave her were both interesting weapons, and very well crafted and very creative.All in all, this is a creative and interesting MOC, and a good interpretation of Helryx. Keep it up, great job! it actually a mace. but thanks any way. Quote Banner made by Onaku BZPRPG CHARACTERS Syvra-Tivanu If you interact with one of my characters and I don't respond or acknowledge the interaction within a day, send me a PM. Odds are I missed or did not see the post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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