T-Dawg Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 (edited) Welcome to Driken's Video editing(poster in production)Anyway this is my second attempt at comic making seeing how my first one sucked. First off this has been in the making for months now and I'm quite proud of them. Second No guest stars will be accepted yet, now onto the first comicCharacter Sheet1.Weddings2.Distractions3.Bugs4.Phone calls5.Loss of everything6.Lighting strike7.Merry Christmas8.Notice9.Bad Jokes10.Dentist Visit11.Bad Jokes 212:Too much anime13:Bad jokes 314:Bad jokes 415:Few seconds16:The Bill17:Meet Chase18:Meet Towner19:Teletubbies20.ProblemsCredit to Dark709 for chimoru alpha kit. Edited April 20, 2012 by Driken Toa of Shadows Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 Not bad. I like the idea of a video editing studio. :That could have all sorts of interesting possibilities. A tip, you might want to look into glowy text or speech bubbles, that could help the words be seen no matter the background.And Grammar and punctuation always helps your comics look polished. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazi the Matoran Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 Win! Glad to see you got this up.I like that bit where I turn around as well. Seems sort of like an "I told you so" kind of turn. Quote My comics: Kazi's Comics 3.0 My music: T-MG Music "And now for something completely different." -- Monty Python Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 13, 2011 Author Share Posted December 13, 2011 (edited) A few things I plan to try updating every 2 days, second about grammar I suck with it so it will be as good as I can make it, finaly expect changes seeing how the first one was made this summer. Edited December 13, 2011 by Driken Toa of Shadows Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 15, 2011 Author Share Posted December 15, 2011 New comic :Distractions Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted December 15, 2011 Share Posted December 15, 2011 I need to get that game.And how on earth DID that camera fit in there? Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 17, 2011 Author Share Posted December 17, 2011 New comic:BugsThe characters in my series are not made up, Imako and Fossu are two friends of mine who wanted to be in the series. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted December 17, 2011 Share Posted December 17, 2011 Better with the text! It's much more readable now. Now for the criticism, brace yourself...This joke was okay. I think it could have been better though. Maybe if you had the character say that himself after freaking out and telling everyone else?Just a tip. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 17, 2011 Author Share Posted December 17, 2011 I'll admit that wasn't one of my better ideas, anyway next week I will be very busy but I should still be updating. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 19, 2011 Author Share Posted December 19, 2011 New comic:Phone callsThis was a bit rushed so I couldn't include everything so it will be a continuation. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 21, 2011 Author Share Posted December 21, 2011 New comic:Loss of everythingI went through and remade this comic four times and this is as good as I could make it. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy-Lihkan38 Posted December 22, 2011 Share Posted December 22, 2011 Lol, oh my gosh, these comics are actually really great. I love the real backgrounds, and the questions/statements at the bottom definitely add to it. I have to admit on breaking out in laughter at a couple of these, especially the wedding video one. Good stuff. Keep up the good work!-CL38 Quote I'm back! -CL38 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 23, 2011 Author Share Posted December 23, 2011 Lol, oh my gosh, these comics are actually really great. I love the real backgrounds, and the questions/statements at the bottom definitely add to it. I have to admit on breaking out in laughter at a couple of these, especially the wedding video one. Good stuff. Keep up the good work!-CL38Glad you like them .New comic:Lighting strikeI actually don't play minecraft that much. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazi the Matoran Posted December 23, 2011 Share Posted December 23, 2011 Yes, always listen to my wise words, and may lightning strike that guy outside. Great couple of comics there, especially the "Phone Calls" one; very well done. Quote My comics: Kazi's Comics 3.0 My music: T-MG Music "And now for something completely different." -- Monty Python Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 26, 2011 Author Share Posted December 26, 2011 Merry ChristmasThis one was made a while back so the text might be hard to read. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted December 26, 2011 Share Posted December 26, 2011 I never knew Santa was so...Skinny and malicious. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 27, 2011 Author Share Posted December 27, 2011 (edited) In my mind he is, anyway there will be a slight delay but It did give me an idea so it should be up sometime tomorrow.Edit: fixed a text glitch (darn 3DS) but if you see one let me know. Edited December 27, 2011 by Driken Toa of Shadows Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted December 28, 2011 Author Share Posted December 28, 2011 NoticeIt doubles as a comic as well. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 5, 2012 Author Share Posted January 5, 2012 Well look who finally made a comic: Bad JokesBrace yourself for more this is a mini series.To explain low activity I had a VERY busy new years eve so I didn't have the time to stay on schedule. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 Okay, in the Christmas comic, I must be implying something ridiculous, but if your a purple object on the field during war, does that mean instant death?Or was that just something out of the purp- er blue...? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 Not bad. I would suggest ordering your text better though. People tend to read things left to right, and your speech bubbles should be ordered the same way. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 5, 2012 Author Share Posted January 5, 2012 Okay, in the Christmas comic, I must be implying something ridiculous, but if your a purple object on the field during war, does that mean instant death?Or was that just something out of the purp- er blue...?I always found a purple target easy to hit.Not bad. I would suggest ordering your text better though. People tend to read things left to right, and your speech bubbles should be ordered the same way.I think I do that cause I read a lot of manga recently but I will be fixing it in later ones. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted January 5, 2012 Share Posted January 5, 2012 HAR! Too true. It would REALLY stand out from everything else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 6, 2012 Author Share Posted January 6, 2012 New comic: Dentist VisitOh the fun of getting a cavity filled and yes this is true excluding my jaw falling off. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 11, 2012 Author Share Posted January 11, 2012 New comic:Bad Jokes 2I always see Kazi as a good break dancer in my demented little mind. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted January 11, 2012 Share Posted January 11, 2012 Puns for the win! One thing, you might want to maybe perhaps possibly leave out the little comment thing at the bottom, unless you have like an "Author's Notes" or something telling the reader something about the reason this comic was made (such as with the dentist one) or highlighting a specific effect you are especially proud of. If you leave out the kind of comments that you would make if you were reading it, it allows your readers to say stuff like that, and that can lead to other humorous comments, which leads to comic ideas! Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 11, 2012 Author Share Posted January 11, 2012 (edited) Puns for the win!One thing, you might want to maybe perhaps possibly leave out the little comment thing at the bottom, unless you have like an "Author's Notes" or something telling the reader something about the reason this comic was made (such as with the dentist one) or highlighting a specific effect you are especially proud of. If you leave out the kind of comments that you would make if you were reading it, it allows your readers to say stuff like that, and that can lead to other humorous comments, which leads to comic ideas!I planned for this series to have author notes but I get what your saying and your comment gave me an idea for a comic expect it some time tomorrow.Slight delay due to busy schedule but there should be a new comic in about two days. Edit: Please do not double post unless you have a new comic or visual preview to post. Thanks!-Wind- Edited January 12, 2012 by -Windrider- Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 13, 2012 Author Share Posted January 13, 2012 New comic:Too much animeNote: the comic I was going to originally put here is taking a longer time so it won't be up until much later. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 17, 2012 Author Share Posted January 17, 2012 New comic:Bad jokes 3There is a unintentional joke somewhere in this comic an imaginary cookie to whoever finds it. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 23, 2012 Author Share Posted January 23, 2012 New comic:Bad jokes 4Imako was going to leave an author note on this one but I had a deadline so he will comment on the next one. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted January 24, 2012 Author Share Posted January 24, 2012 (edited) New comic:Few secondsNotice I have been busy doing some side projects so comics won't be as active but I got plenty of new ideas. Edited January 31, 2012 by Driken Toa of Shadows Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted February 3, 2012 Author Share Posted February 3, 2012 New comic:The BillI had a lot of things going on in my life that delayed this comic so I apologize for a long wait. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 Hmmm..A tip, I think the joke might have come off a bit better if you said "Forgot to pay the rent again?" Because that would explain what the hand is doing to Kazi (besides torturing him) Then you might even be able to use the hand as a secondary character later on. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 In Bad jokes 3, what exactly did your friends come up with. Break dancing was great BTW. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted February 3, 2012 Author Share Posted February 3, 2012 (edited) Hmmm..A tip, I think the joke might have come off a bit better if you said "Forgot to pay the rent again?" Because that would explain what the hand is doing to Kazi (besides torturing him) Then you might even be able to use the hand as a secondary character later on.The joke is supposed to wonder why a hand took Kazi away which came with the idea of a bill to make it sound funnier.In Bad jokes 3, what exactly did your friends come up with. Break dancing was great BTW. A rubber band gun (I'm serious), a loud firework, and the real life Imako thought he died. Thanks I always appreciate compliments (who doesn't). Edited February 3, 2012 by Driken Toa of Shadows Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 Oh man...that would've been funny. IF! It was an explosive rubberband gun. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kodrak Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 Very well done, Driken. Great concept. Quote not autistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted February 6, 2012 Author Share Posted February 6, 2012 Very well done, Driken. Great concept.Oh thank you glad you like them.Anyway as of now there will be a new character coming, soon another one of my friends wanted to be in the series and belive me this is going to be "interesting". Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kodrak Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 Interesting indeed.What gave you the idea for this? Are you a video editor?I can clean up your front post and make a banner, if you like. Quote not autistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T-Dawg Posted February 6, 2012 Author Share Posted February 6, 2012 Interesting indeed.What gave you the idea for this? Are you a video editor?I can clean up your front post and make a banner, if you like.I'm not a video editor now but I would love to then it gave me the idea of a new series.I would love a banner for this thanks, I'll try to repay you the best I can.Anyway here's the new character Chase the Problem solver. He's based off my sorta gun happy friend and he is happy about his apperance, this series just got more dangerous. Quote I'm just ToaD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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