Voltex Posted June 27, 2012 Share Posted June 27, 2012 I would like to get "professional" advice on my first comedy. Lord Vakama Strikes BackAuthor: Cinnamon Grochi (thebeggerpie)Status: Completed.Chapters to be reviewed: The first and only chapter.Alright Rarity, this review is yours. -ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MetaStriker Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 The Adventures of TahuAuthor: Tahu Nuva: Toa of SilverStatus: In ProgressChapters to be Reviewed: Chapters 2.5, 2.6~TN:TS~ Quote The long awaited third season of TA:OT is finally here!! [sharedmedia=gallery:images:1377] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 The Adventures of TahuAuthor: Tahu Nuva: Toa of SilverStatus: In ProgressChapters to be Reviewed: Chapters 2.5, 2.6~TN:TS~Hey iBrow, want me to take this one? Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 Sure, you can have it. -ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 (edited) Yay, my first chance to review some stuff! I'll get to it this weekend or maybe tonight! Also iBrow... your name. XD Edited June 28, 2012 by Rarity Quote >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 It's happened both times before I remembered that members had those names. I'm sorry. I'm referring to the pony, not you. -ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 I exist, ya know. Maybe I can take the next one? Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 Yes, I realize you exist, lol. However, you've reviewed the most comedies so far, hence why neither of these is yours. xD -ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toarobot18 Posted July 2, 2012 Share Posted July 2, 2012 Bionicle: Mission SpaceAuthor: Toarobot18Status of your comedy: In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: Either 1-5 or 5-9, critic discretion. Quote Credit to Zeddy! ------------------- Click the banner above!And please also enjoy my other fine comedies:The Bionicle Entrepreneur - Nuva Join the Navy - Toy Wars - A Comedy of Comics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 2, 2012 Share Posted July 2, 2012 Alright fishers, all yours.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted July 2, 2012 Share Posted July 2, 2012 (edited) I would like to get "professional" advice on my first comedy. Lord Vakama Strikes BackAuthor: Cinnamon Grochi (thebeggerpie)Status: Completed.Chapters to be reviewed: The first and only chapter.I reviewed it! Edited July 2, 2012 by Rarity Quote >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toarobot18 Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 Question: when a comedy is reviewed a second time (say for new chapters), and the score is different than the previous time, how is the rating on the first page adjusted? Just set to the second score?For example, The Bionicle Entrepreneur got 85% on its first review, but that was used for screening so it didn't count. On its second review, it got 83%. If it was reviewed a third time for new chapters, and say got 82%, would that be the new score for the comedy? Or would you average the two and make it 82.5%? Quote Credit to Zeddy! ------------------- Click the banner above!And please also enjoy my other fine comedies:The Bionicle Entrepreneur - Nuva Join the Navy - Toy Wars - A Comedy of Comics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 None of the scores will be replaced- it'll simply be added onto the list, as it could be a different reviewer (with different opinions on what makes a good comedy), or the score could show you've improved/declined if it's the same reviewer.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toarobot18 Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 In that case, is the latest score used to determine the "Must-See Comedies"? And if the newer score is below the cut off, can a comedy lose that designation? Quote Credit to Zeddy! ------------------- Click the banner above!And please also enjoy my other fine comedies:The Bionicle Entrepreneur - Nuva Join the Navy - Toy Wars - A Comedy of Comics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 Yes, the latest score would be used to determine the "Must-See Comedies"- if the score is lower, perhaps I could add in a symbol that says it made the 85% cutoff in the past.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 Bionicle: Mission SpaceAuthor: Toarobot18Chapters reviewed: 1-5, as ordered.Review PostReviewer's Rating: 4/10 (40%) for lack of plot and poor characterization. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toarobot18 Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 (edited) Thanks Fishers! I don't mean to hog the CCC, so feel free to shove this down the list if someone else requests, but since Fishers finished my previous request and no others are outstanding, here is new request:Toy WarsAuthor: Toarobot18Status of your comedy: In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: 1 - 4 5Author's Note: this comedy is based in the "real world" except with enchanted living toys. The main toys are Bionicle sets, but the sets are not assumed to have the same personalities as their Bionicle story-line partners. (In fact, there are even duplicate sets and M.O.Cs.) Edited July 4, 2012 by Toarobot18 Quote Credit to Zeddy! ------------------- Click the banner above!And please also enjoy my other fine comedies:The Bionicle Entrepreneur - Nuva Join the Navy - Toy Wars - A Comedy of Comics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 3, 2012 Share Posted July 3, 2012 Thanks Fishers! I don't mean to hog the CCC, so feel free to shove this down the list if someone else requests, but since Fishers finished my previous request and no others are outstanding, here is new request:Toy WarsAuthor: Toarobot18Status of your comedy: In ProgressChapters to be reviewed: 1-4Author's Note: this comedy is based in the "real world" except with enchanted living toys. The main toys are Bionicle sets, but the sets are not assumed to have the same personalities as their Bionicle story-line partners. (In fact, there are even duplicate sets and M.O.Cs.)Rarity, this one is yours.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Sorry about the delay on reviewing Toa of Silver's, but I've been a bit busy. Should get it done soon. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toarobot18 Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Rarity, if you haven't already started your review, I edited my post to read chapters "1 - 5" instead of "1 - 4," since I just posted another chapter. If you could review the new one as well, I'd appreciate that. Sorry for the inconvenience. Quote Credit to Zeddy! ------------------- Click the banner above!And please also enjoy my other fine comedies:The Bionicle Entrepreneur - Nuva Join the Navy - Toy Wars - A Comedy of Comics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted July 4, 2012 Share Posted July 4, 2012 Rarity, if you haven't already started your review, I edited my post to read chapters "1 - 5" instead of "1 - 4," since I just posted another chapter. If you could review the new one as well, I'd appreciate that. Sorry for the inconvenience.One... MORE??? I JUST FINISHED YOUR FOUR!jk I didn't even know I was supposed to review it. I'll get to it. Quote >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Smoke Monster Posted July 6, 2012 Share Posted July 6, 2012 The Three Matoran and HakannAuthor: The Smoke MonsterStatus of your Comedy: Finished. Quote Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 6, 2012 Share Posted July 6, 2012 The Three Matoran and HakannAuthor: The Smoke MonsterStatus of your Comedy: Finished.I'll try and get this one done for you by tomorrow evening. If I can't, you'll be notified within this topic.To the critics: We might be moving to our own topic soon, but if we do, please let me take fifteen minutes to get three posts in first. =P That way all the information will be stored nice and neatly. However, I'm hoping to have some banners done so it looks better to that end, so it might end up waiting until after next week when I return.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 The Adventures of TahuAuthor: Tahu Nuva: Toa of SilverStatus: In ProgressChapters to be Reviewed: Chapters 2.5, 2.6Finished review.Rating is 75.3 ...% Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 7, 2012 Share Posted July 7, 2012 I will round that down because I hate decimals. =P Unless it's .5.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 It's 75 and a third percent man! The extra third gives it the feeling of ... 'Hubert-ness'.Without the decimal, it is not an accurate average! Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Oh well. 75 or 75.5? By the way guys, I am posting the new topic NOW. Nobody post until I've got all the information in though.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 75.5 might be better then. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Editing it then. By the way guys, for the next week while I'm gone, I've put fishers temporarily in charge of the CCC.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 I, for one, welcome our new comedic overlord. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 I, for one, welcome our new comedic overlord.More like regent while the true comedic overlord is away. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Alright- fishers, Rarity, Hubert, you guys can all move over to the official Comedies Critics Club topic now. See you all in a week.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 Got it your highness.Well guys, this topic is now for random Comedic Federation shenanigans. We're off to migrate over towards the CCC Topic.*Packs luggage.* Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted July 8, 2012 Share Posted July 8, 2012 I'm gonna miss this old place...not really. :PSo, is the CCC topic gonna get pinned? Quote >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 9, 2012 Share Posted July 9, 2012 It already has my dear. It already has. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rarity Posted July 9, 2012 Share Posted July 9, 2012 It already has my dear. It already has.Please don't refer to me as your dear. Ever. It's creepy. :PThat was posted before it was pinned xD Quote >Not reading the first greentext story on BZP >2013 Be a cool kid and vote for mighty morphin' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 Please move all CCC stuff over to the new topic completely. I've returned! =D-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 So what exactly will this topic be for now? Because we sort of took over everything with the CCC and I've forgotten the true purpose of the thread. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 To be honest, I'm not sure. I think the original pan was to host unofficial competitions and the likeand also include major crossover comedies, but it seems to have partially collapsed. It doesn't help that one of the four leader guys (Maniac) has vanished as well.-ibrow Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 Well, I have an idea.Give challenges to writers so they can write a comedy to fulfil the requirements of the challenge? Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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