Wotz Posted June 16, 2012 Share Posted June 16, 2012 Actually, yes, Bong would have been much better :lol:Raking Back is funnier (yep, props to good ol' TD ). Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 16, 2012 Author Share Posted June 16, 2012 @Scrathor: Whose twin is this? I assure you that he is an original character, and a truly threatening villain.Not much longer. I wrote the Prologue ages ago, and I'll soon have touched it up.@Wotz: Dun is more climactic.I don't care, we're sticking with TD's. (Props indeed) Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted June 16, 2012 Share Posted June 16, 2012 Dun isn't very... Well, y'know, like, you wouldn't see it written in an actual book or piece of literature. Onomatopoeia doesn't work when you use imaginary words (well, it is a word, but it's meaning is nothing like this )You know TD made Raking Back as well? Just recently in the RPG, actually. Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 16, 2012 Author Share Posted June 16, 2012 I don't care, it's as onomatopoeic as I can be arsed with. XPWas that in the BZPRPG? I ought to catch up on the BC stuff... Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted June 16, 2012 Share Posted June 16, 2012 Eventually the banner for this story will be finished. I hope Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 16, 2012 Author Share Posted June 16, 2012 I'm seriously considering cancelling it altogether. XP Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted June 16, 2012 Share Posted June 16, 2012 I mean, are they swamped with requests or something? Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 16, 2012 Author Share Posted June 16, 2012 Not really. He's only working on my request ATM AFAIK (but we're getting sorta off-topic here). Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I agree with Wotz. 'Dun' isn't a good sound effect.It's more of a Booooonnnnngggg sound. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 I agree with Wotz. 'Dun' isn't a good sound effect.It's more of a Booooonnnnngggg sound.I third this assertion. What is with all the randomly assorted mirror-smashing? Why are all of these people smashing things for no apparent reason? This isn't a comedy - you kind of have to explain that sort of thing. :)The Shadows characterization was good, however (He reminds me of the super-suit vendor from the Incredibles ).And of course, the Apocalypse is postponed just long enough for Inc to save the universe. Or at least survive it's end. Because plot-armor never fails. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 17, 2012 Author Share Posted June 17, 2012 @EVERYONE: I chose 'dun'. Not 'bong', 'dun'.@fishers: It's the whole 'can't change the future' stuff. The mirror shows a person their darkest day, and if they see themselves smashing the mirror, chances are that they will either be driven insane or break it to stop it going any further.He'll be playing a big part later on.Actually, this time around, plot armour means absolutely nothing. If a hero goes up against a villain that could easily kill them, they're going to die, unless they do something very clever. But there will be hero-deaths. Lots of hero-deaths. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 Actually, this time around, plot armour means absolutely nothing. If a hero goes up against a villain that could easily kill them, they're going to die, unless they do something very clever. But there will be hero-deaths. Lots of hero-deaths.Oh, boy. *Prepares Brainy-specs, and notebook for storyline notes* Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 17, 2012 Author Share Posted June 17, 2012 Yup. The Eleventh Hour is set to be pretty dark.By the way, the characters who I can tell you are returning without spoiling the plot are Pirok, Proditor, and Frustro. I know a lot of you people like Pirok best out of all the characters, so there ya go. XP Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wotz Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 YES, PIROK'S RETURNING Quote D U N E W O L F Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 17, 2012 Author Share Posted June 17, 2012 Pirok will be playing a very big part in The Eleventh Hour. He'll be AT LEAST equal to Incommodo in terms of plot importance. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 The return of Pirok the Va-Matoran...excuse me, Toa of Fire...will be an interesting advent. Maybe once you've finished the series I'll reread over it and try to figure out what logic you used to piece this together, as it currently escapes me. I don't really want Inc or Pirok to die. Oh, well, the matter only increases my fascination with your next work...otherwise it would just be boring. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 17, 2012 Author Share Posted June 17, 2012 Shadows isn't all that logical, but from Dark Mirror onwards I have thought everything through perfectly. So, while some of the stuff in Shadows might not quite fit, the rest is explained.Well, Inc you already know is going to be both shot and incinerated (yay for multiple lives gained from Time-Keeper-ness), and I guarantee you that Pirok (at least, this timeline's Pirok) will have a heroic death. Kinda. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 So the return of your original, original character?I see. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 18, 2012 Author Share Posted June 18, 2012 Actually, I thought up Proditor long before Pirok. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 Ah, I see.Tell me, why does the Eleventh Hour's banner have a guy with hair? Pretty sure Toa don't have hair. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 19, 2012 Author Share Posted June 19, 2012 @Hub: Shadows appear more humanoid than Toa-like. Scrathor drew the image (it was meant to be of a Shadow), but it was surprisingly close to the appearance of a Shadow, so I used it. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 @Hub: Shadows appear more humanoid than Toa-like. Scrathor drew the image (it was meant to be of a Shadow), but it was surprisingly close to the appearance of a Shadow, so I used it.Might help if you used my new name. Confuses people if they can't find me... Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Ah, I see.Looks pretty animesque though.Also, could you provide us a general time span for when The Eleventh Hour might be coming out? Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 19, 2012 Author Share Posted June 19, 2012 Ah, I see.Looks pretty animesque though.Also, could you provide us a general time span for when The Eleventh Hour might be coming out?Just about right now. :PAlso, there's a particular Shadow (the one from the Epilogue) who looks a whole lot like that (even the animé-esque-ness), and since he has major plot importance I thought it'd work well. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 (edited) Need T.E.H now! Haven't been this excited since the DW Series 6 premiere! Edited June 19, 2012 by Eredar Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted June 19, 2012 Author Share Posted June 19, 2012 Need T.E.H now! Haven't been this excited since the DW Series 6 premiere!I NO, RITE? Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Archaic Predicament Posted August 13, 2012 Share Posted August 13, 2012 Nice banner! *Smirks* Quote Now fades the great harvest of my betrayal... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted August 13, 2012 Author Share Posted August 13, 2012 Nice banner! *Smirks*Thanks for making it. - Vorex Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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