Velox Posted March 8, 2013 Author Share Posted March 8, 2013 Let us Remember -- Dual Matrix Assigned to Tolkien. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted March 8, 2013 Share Posted March 8, 2013 And Truth is reviewed. Sorry for the lateness. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted March 11, 2013 Share Posted March 11, 2013 Reviewed "Let us remember", by Dual Matrix. JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted March 13, 2013 Share Posted March 13, 2013 And I've finished my review of our very own Velox's poem Eldritch Abomination. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted March 13, 2013 Share Posted March 13, 2013 The Luckiest Grandfather in the World is reviewed. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted March 14, 2013 Share Posted March 14, 2013 Thank goodness I had that extra week; I needed every day of it. A Jaunt in the Woods, and also O Dark Legion, reviewed. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 14, 2013 Author Share Posted March 14, 2013 (edited) Edit: "Someone's Waiting For You", reviewed. For this week: Velox: The Story Behind a Picture, by KragghNuile: Rainbow Powers, by KragghYukiko: Leaving on a Jet Plane, by KragghZaxvo: Shredded Radiance, by Zarayna Yes, it looks like we've come to the Kraggh section of OTC. =P Due March 20th. Edited March 15, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted March 21, 2013 Share Posted March 21, 2013 We have traversed the highest peaks of OTC, and now we explore the deepest Kragghs.Yes, that was a very bad pun.Rainbow Powers, reviewed. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted March 21, 2013 Share Posted March 21, 2013 Leaving on a Jet Plane has been reviewed. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted March 21, 2013 Share Posted March 21, 2013 Shredded Radiance has been reviewed. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 21, 2013 Author Share Posted March 21, 2013 And I have reviewed "The Story Behind a Picture." For this week: Velox: Endgame, by ChroNuile: Paradise, by Alex HumvaYukiko: Accomplishment, by KakaruZaxvo: Nixie Lands on an Island, by Kraggh Due March 27th. Thanks guys! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted March 21, 2013 Share Posted March 21, 2013 My semi-ocd is weeping that I didn't get the Kraggh story last week when everyone else did lol.Anyway, here's the review. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted March 22, 2013 Share Posted March 22, 2013 Might as well take the opportunity to request a review: The Power, by Tolkien. JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 22, 2013 Author Share Posted March 22, 2013 Might as well take the opportunity to request a review: The Power, by Tolkien. JRRT Assigned to Nuile. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 I would appreciate review of the below story. As always, I look forward to your advice, and thank you for your time. Rebirth - Replicant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 24, 2013 Author Share Posted March 24, 2013 I would appreciate review of the below story. As always, I look forward to your advice, and thank you for your time. Rebirth - Replicant. Sure thing! Assigned to Yukiko. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted March 28, 2013 Share Posted March 28, 2013 Accomplishment has been reviewed. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 28, 2013 Author Share Posted March 28, 2013 I reviewed Paradise, by Alex Humva, because Nuile accidentally reviewed Endgame and I didn't want to make him review another thing. =P This week: Velox: Being the Only Girl, by SkyLandOceAnnaNuile: Newfound Land, by Alex Humva (giving you another go for Alex =P)Zaxvo: Beyond the Ridge of Tears, by Tolkien (Yukiko exempt due to assignment) Due...wow it's April already. April 3rd. Thanks guys. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted March 30, 2013 Share Posted March 30, 2013 Late, but better than never, Tolkien's The Power has been reviewed. If you were looking for harsh criticism, co-boss, I'm sorry to disappoint you. =P This was a spectacular story and I highly recommend it. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted March 31, 2013 Share Posted March 31, 2013 I have reviewed Rebirth. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 4, 2013 Author Share Posted April 4, 2013 (edited) In lieu of the Easter holiday/Spring Break (yeah I know, a little late, but I didn't think about it last week and wanted to give people a week off), I'll be extending the deadline one week (if you need it) and not assigning another charity cycle this week, so have fun with the week off, guys. =] (though of course all official assignments still have their due dates as stated). I'll be assigning new reviews next Wednesday as usual. Edited April 4, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted April 4, 2013 Share Posted April 4, 2013 Woah, sorry about that. Somehow I thought it was due the 4th.Anyhow, here's the review to Beyond the Ridge of Tears. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted April 6, 2013 Share Posted April 6, 2013 Newfound Land reviewed, as of three days ago.Reporting. Reporting my reviews is important. =P Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 11, 2013 Author Share Posted April 11, 2013 Here's the next batch: Velox: Sinking by TekuloNuile: Settlers of Disaster, by ChroYukiko: Coloring Between the Lines, Thinking Outside the Box, by AderiaZaxvo: And We Are Only Human, by Chro Due April 17th. Thanks guys! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted April 11, 2013 Share Posted April 11, 2013 Velox, since I'm part of the team now, may I ask which story I have to review? I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 12, 2013 Author Share Posted April 12, 2013 Ah right, I forgot to assign you one because I was waiting for your reply first. But here you go: Dual Matrix: Ending, by Tekulo And with that, as an announcement: We do indeed have a new critic, Dual Matrix! It's good to have another hand on deck. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-Ray Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 I'd like to request a review: West of Po-Koro, by X-Ray X-Ray "Though one may be overpowered, two can defend themselves. A cord of three strands is not quickly broken." - Ecclesiastes 4:12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 16, 2013 Author Share Posted April 16, 2013 I'd like to request a review: West of Po-Koro, by X-Ray X-Ray Assigned to Zaxvo. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted April 16, 2013 Share Posted April 16, 2013 I'll get on that one.Here's the review of And Are We Only Human. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted April 16, 2013 Share Posted April 16, 2013 Ending is reviewed by Dual Matrix: A very short but enjoyable story, good descriptions and well-chosen theme, not much to review though... I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted April 17, 2013 Share Posted April 17, 2013 Coloring Between the Lines, Thinking Outside the Box has been reviewed. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 18, 2013 Author Share Posted April 18, 2013 And I have reviewed Sinking, by Tekulo Velox: Special, by EzorovNuile: Pink Bow, by SkyLandOceAnnaYukiko: Disturbed Zen, by Ilyusha BlokfaseZaxvo: Allison, by Zo'TomanaDual Matrix: A Cry Ignored, by Nick Silverpen Due April 24th. Thanks guys! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted April 22, 2013 Share Posted April 22, 2013 And here's West of Po-Koro reviewed. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted April 23, 2013 Share Posted April 23, 2013 Through The gates of Eternity(http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=9542&view=findpost&p=536680) -- Dual MatroxI'm extremely tired and just would like to say it appears something went wrong with the copying and pasting and the most down part is missing, just not that, as I will fix it tomorrow. I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted April 25, 2013 Share Posted April 25, 2013 (edited) I needed every day, nearly every hour, of that extra week. But by the skin of my teeth: Settlers of Disaster, reviewed. and Pink Bow, reviewed. On another note: Welcome to the team, Dual Matrix! Always the more, the merrier. And now I would like to request a review for myself:The Eye of the Storm, by Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith Edited April 25, 2013 by The Novelist Called Nuile When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted April 25, 2013 Share Posted April 25, 2013 (edited) Here's the review for Allison. Edited April 25, 2013 by Zaxvo . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted April 25, 2013 Share Posted April 25, 2013 I have reviewed Disturbed Zen. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted April 25, 2013 Share Posted April 25, 2013 I feel sorry to ask, but life this week was not so nice, I've got most of my review ready, just a few final tweaks, could I please get 1 day more? Next week and the week after that are sure to be npt a problem. I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 25, 2013 Author Share Posted April 25, 2013 (edited) @ Dual Matrix ~ Yeah, that's fine. Just keep in mind that for official reviews, you'll need to give me notice within four days after the review is assigned; for charity reviews, things are less strict so you're fine. Through The gates of Eternity(http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=9542&view=findpost&p=536680) -- Dual MatroxI'm extremely tired and just would like to say it appears something went wrong with the copying and pasting and the most down part is missing, just not that, as I will fix it tomorrow. Assigned to myself. The Eye of the Storm, by Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith And assigned to our newest critic, Dual Matrix. Charity Reviews for this week: Velox: Unfortunately I'm going to have to take this week off.Nuile: The Hardest Thing to Hold, by LegoloverYukiko: Attic Treasure, by VeloxZaxvo: Somewhere, by Alex HumvaDual Matrix: Creation, by Ilyusha Blokfase Due 5/1. Thanks guys. Edited April 29, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted April 25, 2013 Share Posted April 25, 2013 Finally, take that Life! After all you trew at me I still did it:A cry Ignore reviewed by Dual Matrix: A short story woth amazong descriptions, but not much to review on.I hower feel to tired to do anything else and mist continue to my math work, bye. I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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