The Swimming Beard Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (edited) FrontBackSidePoseAs always, C&C appreciated. Edited July 1, 2012 by Toa of Smooth Jazz Quote "I pitea the fool!" (quote by Chro) 98.7% OF BZPOWER MEMBERS HAVEN'T SEEN MY BUCKET IF YOU ARE ONE OF THE 1.3% THAT HAS SEEN MY BUCKET, COPY THIS AND PASTE IT INTO YOUR SIGNATURE I MISS MY BUCKET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted June 17, 2012 Share Posted June 17, 2012 (edited) You did a great job on this. The Lego bricks fit well with the Bionicle and HF parts but it doesn't cover the body too much. Maybe you should cover up the torso and the back a bit. Other than that, nice job! Edited June 17, 2012 by FF Ice Master Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klak Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 Creative mask and leg armor. I also like his weapons (and their color). He is a bit skinny though and seems kind of skimpy. Is he supposed to be more of a martial artist, light-on-his-feet type of fighter? Quote My Comedies: The Krika Show (Season 1)The Krika Show Season 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 I like the system/constraction combination, but this MOC is a little simple.It still looks great, though. Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onewa7 Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 I like the head, arms, and torso especially, but you should try to cover the upper torso. The upper legs are nice, but a bit long. I'd suggest making the lower legs longer and better armored to make the legs look okay. Also, nice sword. Quote Onewa7, Encountering Protodermis! I accept PBZP requests! If you want one, PM me the details...PBZPs in the Archives: A B C C F H K L N P P S T New Forums PBZPs: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T T U V W X Y ZIf a letter is already taken, I can always do a PZBP, I'll just add another to the list. Blue= done, Red= taken and in progress, Green= coming soon.------------Also check My Bshelf My comedy: Bionicle Adventures. Part 1 in the Archives. Part 2 here. I accept guest stars requests. Chapter 12 is up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Swimming Beard Posted June 18, 2012 Author Share Posted June 18, 2012 (edited) You did a great job on this. The Lego bricks fit well with the Bionicle and HF parts but it doesn't cover the body too much. Maybe you should cover up the torso and the back a bit. Other than that, nice job!Okay, I might try to cover the back more.Creative mask and leg armor. I also like his weapons (and their color). He is a bit skinny though and seems kind of skimpy. Is he supposed to be more of a martial artist, light-on-his-feet type of fighter?I don't know, I guess he could be a martial artist type.I like the head, arms, and torso especially, but you should try to cover the upper torso. The upper legs are nice, but a bit long. I'd suggest making the lower legs longer and better armored to make the legs look okay. Also, nice sword.I might try to redesign the upper legs. And yes, I am working on covering the torso. Edited June 18, 2012 by Toa of Smooth Jazz Quote "I pitea the fool!" (quote by Chro) 98.7% OF BZPOWER MEMBERS HAVEN'T SEEN MY BUCKET IF YOU ARE ONE OF THE 1.3% THAT HAS SEEN MY BUCKET, COPY THIS AND PASTE IT INTO YOUR SIGNATURE I MISS MY BUCKET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obsessionist Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 (edited) The first thing that hits me as the picture load is that you have a full, solid stomach and thighs that don't match the Bionicle parts at all. They both look tacked-on because they're wider and deeper than the surrounding Bionicle/Technic. The first problem is that the system pieces have no holes and greater volume, an effect that is very difficult to achieve with Bionicle. It is possible to combine to two well, but in this particular MOC I think the way to go is either make all the armor system or make all the armor Bionicle. Alternatively (and more easily), moving the orange chest armor one stud up and one stud forward would make it level with the shoulders and make it match up more pleasingly with the system underneath it. Then, of course, you'd have to fill in the stud gap between the armor and the Inika body, but the end effect would be worth it. Beyond that, just add some orange to the arms to even out the color scheme. Very cool head; I do like the character. The large system pieces just really hold back what could be a very neat MOC. Edited June 18, 2012 by Lego Obsessionist Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harshmancs Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 this is pretty cool thou you might want to add some more furtures like make him thicker. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Swimming Beard Posted June 18, 2012 Author Share Posted June 18, 2012 I took some of your advice and fixed areas you pointed out:FrontBackSidePose Quote "I pitea the fool!" (quote by Chro) 98.7% OF BZPOWER MEMBERS HAVEN'T SEEN MY BUCKET IF YOU ARE ONE OF THE 1.3% THAT HAS SEEN MY BUCKET, COPY THIS AND PASTE IT INTO YOUR SIGNATURE I MISS MY BUCKET Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 Your upgraded version is a great improvement. It's nice how you covered up the torso and back. Great job on this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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