cyan-king Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/332056huzzah, a mocpages link. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted July 16, 2012 Share Posted July 16, 2012 I really like the body design and the arms. The colors are fantastic and the mask fits well with it. Also, the poseable toes are really cool. Nice job on this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyan-king Posted July 17, 2012 Author Share Posted July 17, 2012 thanks man, any criticisms? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 (edited) Sorry. I forgot that. My only complaint is that the legs are a bit too short for the body. I mean, the short legs don't look good on a tall and thin body. Edited July 17, 2012 by FF Ice Master Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeeCee Posted July 17, 2012 Share Posted July 17, 2012 Wow. I love female MOCs. there is always so much more creativity.Pros. Just a solid build. I would buy this set from a shop id it were fore sale. Maybe you could do a full team?. I also really think you did a great job on the hips and waist.Cons. Legs are a little to short but it still looks goodWell done! Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 250 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyan-king Posted July 17, 2012 Author Share Posted July 17, 2012 yeah, im working on her team, but ofcourse i have a racial balance rule, so she'll be the only toa on the team.and i'll fix her legs soon. <:'D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xinlo Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 I'm gonna' go with the opposite of what everyone else says, and say that the legs are great - it's the torso that's way too long. Everything else on the MOC is quite good, but the midsection of that torso is... well, she looks like she was stuck in the toffee puller from willy wonka. :PIf you shortened it maybe four or five studs, so the rahkshi foot connected directly with the pelvis, then she'd be more proportionately correct and also not look like a stick. If that was changed, I'd have to say this is one great MOC when there doesn't seem to be so many around these days.So yeah, mostly great job here. Quote The Toa's Hideout is once again open for business! We've been gone for a few years, but now BIONICLE's back and so are we. Click the banner to check out our friendly and laid back site where you can discuss all manners of things and chill with awesome people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyan-king Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 I'm gonna' go with the opposite of what everyone else says, and say that the legs are great - it's the torso that's way too long. Everything else on the MOC is quite good, but the midsection of that torso is... well, she looks like she was stuck in the toffee puller from willy wonka. :PIf you shortened it maybe four or five studs, so the rahkshi foot connected directly with the pelvis, then she'd be more proportionately correct and also not look like a stick. If that was changed, I'd have to say this is one great MOC when there doesn't seem to be so many around these days.So yeah, mostly great job here.true, true, but i always aim for waist pose ability. <:I Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xinlo Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Which can be attained without having your people look stretched. Not trying to sound mean or anything, but this is in every other regard an excellent MOC, and it would be great to see you test your skills to the limit and try to make it even better. Quote The Toa's Hideout is once again open for business! We've been gone for a few years, but now BIONICLE's back and so are we. Click the banner to check out our friendly and laid back site where you can discuss all manners of things and chill with awesome people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyan-king Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Which can be attained without having your people look stretched. Not trying to sound mean or anything, but this is in every other regard an excellent MOC, and it would be great to see you test your skills to the limit and try to make it even better.hmmmmmmmmmthis actually helped alot xinlo, so ima give her a new pelvis/waist in the next 20 mins. <:'D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeeCee Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Which can be attained without having your people look stretched. Not trying to sound mean or anything, but this is in every other regard an excellent MOC, and it would be great to see you test your skills to the limit and try to make it even better.hmmmmmmmmmthis actually helped alot xinlo, so ima give her a new pelvis/waist in the next 20 mins. <:'DWhat about them breathing tubes the Mahrii used. That gives off the illusion of a thicker and looks nice aesthetically as well Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 250 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyan-king Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Which can be attained without having your people look stretched. Not trying to sound mean or anything, but this is in every other regard an excellent MOC, and it would be great to see you test your skills to the limit and try to make it even better.hmmmmmmmmmthis actually helped alot xinlo, so ima give her a new pelvis/waist in the next 20 mins. <:'DWhat about them breathing tubes the Mahrii used. That gives off the illusion of a thicker and looks nice aesthetically as wellsounds interesting, could you give me a visual example? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeeCee Posted July 18, 2012 Share Posted July 18, 2012 Which can be attained without having your people look stretched. Not trying to sound mean or anything, but this is in every other regard an excellent MOC, and it would be great to see you test your skills to the limit and try to make it even better.hmmmmmmmmmthis actually helped alot xinlo, so ima give her a new pelvis/waist in the next 20 mins. <:'DWhat about them breathing tubes the Mahrii used. That gives off the illusion of a thicker and looks nice aesthetically as wellsounds interesting, could you give me a visual example?Unfortunatly. I dont MOC. I cant think of any MOCs I have seen that do this but I know there has been. Thats so annoying Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 250 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyan-king Posted July 18, 2012 Author Share Posted July 18, 2012 Which can be attained without having your people look stretched. Not trying to sound mean or anything, but this is in every other regard an excellent MOC, and it would be great to see you test your skills to the limit and try to make it even better.hmmmmmmmmmthis actually helped alot xinlo, so ima give her a new pelvis/waist in the next 20 mins. <:'DWhat about them breathing tubes the Mahrii used. That gives off the illusion of a thicker and looks nice aesthetically as wellsounds interesting, could you give me a visual example?Unfortunatly. I dont MOC. I cant think of any MOCs I have seen that do this but I know there has been. Thats so annoyingyou mean, use tubes to create the waist? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeeCee Posted July 19, 2012 Share Posted July 19, 2012 Which can be attained without having your people look stretched. Not trying to sound mean or anything, but this is in every other regard an excellent MOC, and it would be great to see you test your skills to the limit and try to make it even better.hmmmmmmmmmthis actually helped alot xinlo, so ima give her a new pelvis/waist in the next 20 mins. <:'DWhat about them breathing tubes the Mahrii used. That gives off the illusion of a thicker and looks nice aesthetically as wellsounds interesting, could you give me a visual example?Unfortunatly. I dont MOC. I cant think of any MOCs I have seen that do this but I know there has been. Thats so annoyingyou mean, use tubes to create the waist?Just make the tubes the shape and wisth you want the wast. The work as an outline kind of thing. Good for poses too Quote Signature Guidelines: Avatar and signature total file size may not exceed 250 KB! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyan-king Posted July 22, 2012 Author Share Posted July 22, 2012 oh, ima have to try that man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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