Toa
Posted Feb 10 2013 - 04:43 PM
Wow, it's been a long time since I've MoC'd anything.
This guy is part bat and part mosquito. I'm pretty happy with how he turned out, even though I've already seen entries way better than mine. I think my favorite part is the wings, I'm proud of how bat-like I actually got them to look. 
Click Above for Entry Picture
Comments and criticism are greatly appreciated. 
Edited by Senrab, Feb 13 2013 - 07:03 AM.
Exo-Armored Toa
Posted Feb 10 2013 - 05:39 PM
He is a bit thin, but I guess it must be that way for a mosquito.
My Epic: A Hero Rises Coming Soon: Bionicle: Republic Commando My Short Stories: Shattered Past, Doomsday, Life, The Murder, A Glimmer of Hope
Please review these good, yet wonderful stories. They need the love.
Epic RPG's that your should play=>Halo: Forerunners, To Save The World, Castles In The Air, Lego Universe, Ninjago RPG, X-Men: Darkest Days, Transformers: Eternal Conflict, Mass Effect: Division, Fallout: Austin City Limits
"We all suffer from our own self actions. The only problem is, how do you control it?" - Flaredrick, Shadows Within
A Fire Shall Rise In The Coliseum. PM me to battle Tahu or Lhikan in Technic Coliseum.
Phantom Terror. Avatar maker.
Descending into Protodermis
Posted Feb 10 2013 - 05:57 PM
Neat idea. The legs are pretty nice, and the general spindliness is cool. Not sure about the head, and those swords seem a little excessive.
Likus ||| Shellshock ||| Endymeron ||| Solek ||| Jaller ||| Thastanus
BZPRPG profiles
⇒ Brickshelf
⇒ MOCpages
Toa
Posted Feb 10 2013 - 06:03 PM
Yeah, I couldn't decide if the swords looked good or not. I might switch the entry pic to something that doesn't include them. What do you mean by not sure about the head?
Descending into Protodermis
Posted Feb 10 2013 - 06:29 PM
Not sure how much I like it. It's not bad by any means; I guess I'm just comparing it to other insect head designs I've seen. This one looks a bit like it has large ears. 
Likus ||| Shellshock ||| Endymeron ||| Solek ||| Jaller ||| Thastanus
BZPRPG profiles
⇒ Brickshelf
⇒ MOCpages
Toa
Posted Feb 10 2013 - 06:47 PM
He does actually have ears, because he's part bat. I'm actually kinda glad you saw they were supposed to be ears.
Edit: Just linked to the Brickshelf gallery and more pictures.
Edited by Senrab, Feb 10 2013 - 07:13 PM.
Inhabitant
Posted Feb 10 2013 - 07:52 PM
Overall, I like it, but I especially like the head and wings.
Defender of Mata Nui
Posted Feb 11 2013 - 04:27 PM
I love the design. It's nice and spindly and really captures the feel of a mosquito, although I question your choice to mix in bat elements, seems like making it pure mosquitoid would have been more effective.
(O++O)
Toa
Posted Feb 13 2013 - 07:04 AM
Thanks for the comments, guys. I just uploaded a few more pictures to the Brickshelf gallery and linked to a better view of the head.
Fluidic Master Nuva
Posted Feb 17 2013 - 11:03 PM
0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users
