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Well it's up earlier than I believed.Chapter 8: The Fire-Spitter------------Narrator: Why isn't this chapter named "The Birth of Splitface"?Me: Don't reveal spoilers!Narrator: =PRocka: I'm baaack! And I'm XL-armored! Guess why?Ehlekdude: Why?Rocka: Because I have to arrest a villain named Blackface. I've heard he's somewhere in the forest.Ehlekdude: I come with you!Later.Rocka: Yo, Blackface! Where are you?Blackface: Here!Ehlekdude: He's stupid enough to answer you.Rocka: Yeah.A greyish black, Thunder-shaped being emerges from a bush.Blackface: Die, Rocka! *shoots Rocka*Rocka: falls on Ehlekdude.Ehlekdude: You almost crushed me, big fat lion!A voice in the forest: Blackface, where are you?Blackface: Here!A red, bulky, dragon-headed guy comes.Ehlekdude: What's your name?Red dragonman: I'm Splitfire, the fire-spitter!Ehlekdude: But why aren't you named Spitfire?Splitfire: Because the Author did a spelling error on my name. Anyway, I'm here to kill Blackface, my second worst ennemy.Ehlekdude: And who's your first worst ennemy?Splitfire: Hero Factory, of course.Blackface: Die, Splitfire! *shoots the dragonman* Oh #### it doesn't work. *throws the pistol away*Splitfire: Die, Blackface! *spits fire and burns the forest*Gali: I'm here! *makes a rain fall*Ehlekdude: I just glued them, so shoot them now.Gali: I just have a Kanoka launcher because I forgot my Nynrah blaster. *shoots Blackface and Splitfire and makes them merging* Oh no it was a Kanoka disk of fusion!Fusion: I'm half-red half-black. I'm the evil Splitface!Ehlekdude: Or Blackfire. Now let's go away before Bulk finds us.Gali: And Rocka?Rocka: I'll stay here to stop Bulk.Ehlekdude: And get killed. Splitface, come with us!Splitface: No, I have to organize the Breakout because Black Phantom is incompetent.Bulk (popping out of thin air): Good idea. *stabs Rocka*Ehlekdude: glues Bulk and runs away.Gali: Don't forget meeeee!!!Meanwhile in the castle...Someone: *toc toc*Me: Come on.Meltdown: Hello! Where's Kalmah?Me: A Scorpio has eaten him.Meltdown: Oh darn. He was a fool, but he was still my brother. I used to visit him every ten years, just to see if he was still alive.Me: Don't worry I can bring him back using my awesome powers.Kalmah: I'm baaack!Meltdown: Kalmah! My fool brother!Kalmah: Meltdown! Glad to see you again, radioactive cyclop!Meltdown: What's up since last time?Kalmah: Well... I'm still alive.Narrator: It seems villains are popping out here and there due to the Breakout. In the sea of Aqua Magna...Tahu: I'd better to learn how to swim since nobody helps me.Jawblade: I can help you... with my teeth.Tahu: Aaah! An ugly shark! Help!Jawblade: Raises his swords to kill Tahu.Kopaka: Freezes the sea.Tahu: Oh, good job. I'm now trapped in an immense frozen sea with a mad shark.Kopaka: At least you're alive, Mister Never-Satisfied. Good bye.Elsewhere...Takadox: Suddenly, I feel I'm no longer alone.Toxic Reapa: Raaaah! *spits toxic flames*Takadox: Hypnotizes Toxic Reapa.Toxic Reapa: What must I do, master?Takadox: You'll help me taking the bank over, toxic slave.And elsewhere...Hakann: Yay, a breakout!Brutaka: Stop!Avak: imprisons Brutaka in a psychic cell.Hakann: Since Zaktan is gone years ago, we need a new leader. In other words, me. -_-Thok: No, me.Hakann: Remember what happened last time you shared power with me?Thok: Well, I'll be the only leader. *freezes Hakann* Who wants to come with me?Avak: Me!Vezok: I prefer staying with Hakann.Thok: Then our team is broken. Goodbye.Avak: imprisons Vezok.Vezok: Hey!In the desert of Bara Magna...Ackar: We're here to hunt a Scorpio and eat it, but we don't find it.Gresh: You don't find it, 'cause you're a noob.Ackar: Hold your tongue, kid. I see something big coming.Fire Lord: Where is my brother, Phantom Lord? Answer or I'll shoot you!Ackar: Wow! I never saw a Scorpio like this!Gresh: It's a minotaur with jetpacks, noob. And it looks angry.Ackar: Who cares. For me it's a big Scorpio.Fire Lord: You didn't answer me, so I'll shoot you! *shoots lava spheres on Ackar*Gresh: Runs away.Mr Makuro: So I guess we'll have to upgrade our good old Alpha team. End of chapter 8.Word count: 704.

Thanks. I'm going to correct this grammar mistake. More MOCs of mine are coming in the Tenth Chapter. (Narrator: Now it's you who reveals spoilers) Anyway, Chapter 8 should be up this week.

Well for once you won't have to wait too much.Chapter 7: The Mad Doctor---------Part 1: And his mad patients--------Me: Do you remember what happened, reader? Because I don't.Anonymous Reader: Yep. You and Ehlekdude have to stop a crazy doctor named Vezon.Me: Oh right. Let's go!Ehlekdude: Knocks at Vezon's door.Vezon (opening the door): Come on! Who are you?Me: I'm the Author, unspiked Piraka. And this guy is my friend Ehlekdude.Vezon: I'm not a Piraka.Me: Then you're a Skakdi.Vezon: I'm not a Skakdi.Me: Then what are you?Vezon: I'm a doctor! Now sit down and tell me your problem.Me: Well, our problem is you.Ehlekdude: Can we see your patients? We're... hmm... expert doctors who want to know if you do a good job.Vezon: Of course you can see them! Why didn't you tell me this before, mister?Ehlekdude: What's up, Leafix?Leafix: ROAAAAAAAR !!!Ehlekdude: What happened to him?Vezon: Oh, I simply replaced his brain with a Muaka's. And vice versa.Muaka (with Leafix's voice): Help me! This guy is mad!Vezon: Trust me, I'm the Doctor.Me: I already heard this somewhere.Ehlekdude (to Vezon): Do you have other patients?Vezon: Yup. Look at this dwarf. He said he's named Nuju.Nuju: *squeaks furiously*Ehlekdude: Why is he speaking so weirdly?Vezon: Dunno. He must be mad. Anyway, he said "I'm not a dwarf!"Muaka: This place is full of weird people. There's even a living Kanoka launcher.Ehlekdude: Where?Kanokuaza: Here! My name is Kanokuaza! Fear me and my spikish arms!Me: Oh no. A Quaza-corrupted Kanoka launcher. And a MOC of mine.Ehlekdude: Really?Me: Yep.Kanokuaza: I'm not a MOC! I don't have a master!Vezon: Oh, shut up.Kanokuaza: Throws his disk/head on Vezon.Kanokuaza: I lost my head!Vezon: You said you're doctors? Well, you have to try my brain exchanger.Ehlekdude: No!Meanwhile in the Author's castle...Scorpio: kss kss!Rocka: I don't want ending up being eaten by a Scorpio.Narrator: Neither do I.Rocka: Then let's jump out by the window, okay?Narrator: Okay.And they jump out.Scorpio: Grrrrrrrrrrr!Kalmah: Have you guys forgotten me?Scorpio: walks towards Kalmah.Kalmah: Fear the tentacled Barraki!Scorpio: eats Kalmah.Meanwhile in the sea of Aqua Magna...In the floating cell/ship, Tahu wakes up.Tahu: Where am I? *goes out and falls in the water* Help me! I hate water!He's rescued by a boat that was sailing around.Tahu: Thank you very much! Who are you?Nektann: It's me, stupid victim!Tahu: Aaargh! The nasty killer Nektann! You don't want to kill me again, do you?Nektann: Yes I do.Tahu: Goodbye. *jumps in water* Wait... I hate water. Help me!Another boat rescues him.Tahu: Thanks! Who are you?Kopaka: It's me. I'm back.Tahu: Argh! Kopaka! I hate you! *jumps in water* I hate water, too. Help meee!!!Kopaka: Good luck. *goes away*--------Part 2: We need to take risks sometimes.-------Me: Wow Ehlekdude, your body is better than I believed! I love controlling glue!Ehlekdude: Can't say so much about you...Vezon: What do you think of my brain exchanger?Me: It's great!Ehlekdude: It sucks!Me: Now take this, mad Doctor. *glues Vezon to his desk*Vezon: You betrayed me!Me: You betrayed us too.Vezon: Because I knew you'd betray me.Me: Then why didn't you run away?Vezon: I wasn't sure.Me: Then shut up.Leafix: jumps and destroys Vezon's brain exchanger.Ehlekdude: Oh, good job! Now I'm trapped in this body!Muaka: So am I.Me: Let's go to my castle, we'll find a way to repair this.Nuju: *squeaks*Ehlekdude: What?Me: I think he said "Don't forget me".Kanokuaza: Don't forget me too!Me: Okay. Good bye, doctor!Vezon: curses the Author.Me: slips on a banana peel.Vezon: Yay it worked! I'm the new Witch Doctor!Later to the castle...Scorpio: kss kss!Me: Don't annoy us. *throws Scorpio through the window*Ehlekdude: What happened to Rocka and Mister Pointless? Wait, I don't care about Mister Pointless.Me: I don't care about both of them.Muaka: So what do we do now? Me: I don't know.Muaka: Oh cool.Me: Let's reflect.Three hours later...Muaka: What's up?Me: Nothing.Ehlekdude: Couldn't you use your awesome powers?Me: Remember, I'm in your body. And I don't suggest trying something with my body. You could make the entire city explode.Ehlekdude: I see you trust me.Me: Yeah, because I'm going to ask you to try something.Ehlekdude: Really?Me: Yes. You'll make the entire city explode, but who cares... Ehlekdude: You Splitface. *tries something**the city explodes*Me: Yay I'm back in my good old body!Ehlekdude: So am I.Leafix: Hurrah for Ehlekdude!Me: *using my awesome powers, I recreate the city* And now let's have new adventures! Next chapter: The Fire-Spitter.Word count: 801

The upper legs would look better if they were black instead of grey, and those silver rahkshi heads stick out. Other than that, it's awesome! I like the upper torso/shoulders area and head. The cape works very well there. Oh and the hands would maybe need fingers. Overall good job.

Wow, very good job. I'd just suggest moving down the bristles a bit. Now make toothpaste =D

Chapter 9: It was pretty cool. Zaktan is very... Zaktan-ish. And what Bitil said was great too: "Who cares? There are at least 20 shots a day in this house." And it's funny to see how Brutaka can destroy the house with his experiments.Chapter 10: That was so funny. Kalmah is always a good thing to add in comedies. And the "1/140th of a pancake" story is just crazy. I guess the "white hero" must be Stormer. Overall, good chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

Thanks Ehlekdude! I agree simple ways are boring.Chapter 6.5: The Wizard and the Lion-------------Someday to the New Atero City...Me: Stronius!Stronius: Yes, my lord?Me: I need a newspaper.Stronius: Here is it, my lord!Me: Let's see... "The Heroes are in the process of being upgraded for the Savage Planet mission. A rookie named Daniel Rocka joined the Alpha Team 3.0."Someone knocks to the door.Me: Yeah?Stormer: Hey Author! Look at my new rhino armor!Me: You should've been a polar bear, as said a friend of mine months and months ago.Stormer: I've heard there's a Raw-Jaw there.Me: Really?Stormer: Yeah. (Shoots Kalmah)Kalmah: Silly! I'm a tentacled Barraki!Stormer: What's a Barraki? Where am I?Me: On Spherus Magna.Stormer: Oh my... I believed I was on Quatros.Ehlekdude: Look! There's Witch Doctor in the forest!Narrator: Through the window, we can see a tall, white silhouette emerging from the trees around the City.Stormer: See, Author? We're on Quatros!Me: http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/mad.gifLater, in the deep forest...Me: Hey, skull wizard!Witch Doctor: Hmm?Me: Why are you here?WD: There are so many creatures to corrupt with Quaza spikes... and your Protodermis might make me even more powerful.Stormer: You're a villain! We Heroes will throw you in jail!Me: Preston, shut up!WD: Your dinner is ready, Scorpio.A wild Scorpio jumps and attacks Stormer.Furno: Fear the red eagle!Ehlekdude: Weren't you supposed to be dead?Furno: Oh yeah. *falls*Nex: Fear the orange tiger!Raw-Jaw: attacks Nex.Stringer: Fear the black bear!Bulk: Fear the werewolf! *attacks Stringer*Stringer: You betrayed us!Bulk: Yeah. *kills Stringer*Nex: runs away.WD: Good job, Dunkan.Bulk: Call me Bulk.WD: Good job, Wolfy.Bulk: My name is Bulk! *kills WD*Me: Well, there's nothing to do here. Let's go.Ehlekdude: Yeah. I want an ice-cream.Matau: It costs around 50000 widgets.Ehlekdude: Whaaat?Matau: Because it's a gold ice-cream.Me: Where did you find the gold?Matau: I used Rocka's mask.Rocka: Fear the golden lion!Me: You look silly without your mask.Rocka: Grumble.Stronius: Author! The newspaper has been updated!Me: Let's see... "Witch Doctor has corrupted Bionicle beasts and objects. A Hero named Dunkan Bulk betrayed the Hero Factory and joined the white wizard."Ehlekdude: Look! A corrupted Muaka!Me: I'd suggest... running!And we run to the castle.Narrator: Author! An army of beasts is going to take the castle over!We can see Mantax, Vezok, Hakann, Thok, Avak, and many beasts such as Muaka, Raw-Jaw, Waspix, Fangz, Kikanalo, Sand Wolves, etc... some of them being corrupted with Quaza spikes.Me: I knew I should have killed Mantax... Where's Lake Eternity?LE: Here! And now my name is Toa Leafix! Mantax will lose against me! *jumps out with a sword in each arm*Me: He's totally mad!Ehlekdude: At least, let's try to help him. *glues beasts*Me: Rocka, help us or I kill you!Rocka: I can't without my mask!Me: http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/mad.gifNex: Hero Factory is here!Evo: I'm here too! Why haven't I been upgraded?Nex: Are you jealous?Evo: Yeah, I think so. *starts fighting against Nex*Hakann: I am your opponent!Leafix: Knocks out Hakann.Me: Okay now this battle isn't serious. Mantax, I kill you!Mantax: Aah... *falls dramatically*Brutaka: Police is here! *imprisons the Piraka and scatters the beasts around*Me: Cool.Brutaka: You're under arrest.Me: And why?Brutaka: Because you stole a truck.Me: It wasn't me, it was Onua.Brutaka: Ah okay. Now go away before I find another reason to arrest you. I love arresting people.Me: Try arresting Nex and Evo. They're annoying.Brutaka: Good idea!Later in the castle...Stronius: Newspaper has been updated!Me: Again?! Let's see... "The Piraka are back in jail. Onua was arrested for stealing a truck. Nex and Evo were arrested for being annoying. Leafix has turned mad and is being currently cured by a doctor named Vezon." Oh my god.Ehlekdude: Vezon is crazy!Me: We must save Leafix. Even if he's mad too.Ehlekdude: Which means we're also getting mad.Rocka: And don't forget looking in stores, there might be a new mask for me.Ehlekdude: He's even more annoying than the Narrator.Narrator: Someone called me?Ehlekdude: Yeah. Someone named Someone. Try finding him.Narrator: Someone? Where are you? *opens the door of the Author's bedroom* Aaargh!Me: What?Narrator: There's a Scorpio in your bedroom!Me (locking the door): Who cares? I'll sleep in the living-room.Ehlekdude: Is this door strong enough?Me: Of course.As soon as I said this, the Scorpio destroys the door and enters the living-room.Rocka: Fear the golden lion without lion mask!Narrator: And what do we do now?Me: Well, good luck. I and Ehlekdude have to find Leafix.We go out and leave Rocka and the Narrator with the hungry Scorpio.Word count: 808

My latest MOC is the Redrone (red drone), a small, purple-eyed, flying Mecha. I tried to make something small and intricate. This is the "Number Two" MOC of 2012 mentioned in KK's topic.BackHere you can see that all the body/head/arms structure is built around a Waspix bone. And the jetpacks.Oh and yes it has a cartoonish face. It's even smiling.C&C welcomed.Matt

It's interesting to see how you gave Corroder a bird shape. The legs and wings are very bird-ish. Of course the head isn't, but who cares. Corroder was designed as a clawed, humanoid rhino. This MOC would need some lime armor plate on the chest though. Overall, I'd rate it 9/10.

@PooZy: I also hate this rubber band. But without it, Krika's back would "open" all the time. Glad you like Waspil.@Ehlekdude: Thank you! You know, Waspix looked better than Bitil as a set.@Akuna: Agreed. I said Bitix's legs were a fail. Especially the upper legs. Thanks anyway!

Surge is pretty great. It looks like a Breakout Surge with a 2.0 color scheme, which is cool. Is that me or his core is yellow?I like Bulk's silverness and upper chest area, however the neck is a bit long.

Thanks guys. I know, Waspil/Bitix (or whatever I call him)'s legs need some work... It's what happens when you work with a limited number of parts. You're running out of pieces, and only half of the MOC is good. I might revamp this guy.@Eragon: Krika's new head was an experiment, yes it will never be as cool as the original mask, but I already used it, so...

As the title says, I played with two Mistikuta : Krika and Bitil.First experiment was a Bitil/Waspix combiner. I had to use extra pins/axles/ball joints because Bitil is sadly lacking of those :/Also, this is the "Number One" MOC of 2012 I mentioned in Kanokuaza's topic.Click here for gallery:Now, Krika.I got a second (and second-hand) Krika. I was lazy to build him again. So I made a custom version using my two Kanohi Crast as front blades, and adding a Rahkshi spike. This is my Fourth MOC of 2012.Nynrah blaster/upper arm connectionOther side viewEnjoy!

Oh, thanks.Chapter 6: Teridax is one of my favorite characters... The whole chapter was funny, here are some of the best quotes: And yay Mister Purple is back.Chapter 7: Yay, Breakout sets are here! Evo is so capricious... Chapter 8: One of the best chapters. Oh lol the Toxic Reapa part was cool. Nuparu makes me laugh too. Yeah. http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/cool.pngSplitface's halves is a good idea too. Oh, btw, is Brutaka a MOCer? That sounds cool.Overall, my favourite chapter. Until I read the 9th chapter, who knows....

Chapter 4: I'm kinda lost. Wasn't Jetbug supposed to be with Nitroblast, heading to Makuhero City? Oh wait... Wouldn't they be the real Jetbug and the real Drilldozer? Anyway, Stormer made me laugh. I always thought this, for years, about the toys themselves. Chapter 5: It was funny. Especially about Gresh and Kopaka. Wait, now I see Drilldozer and Jetbug are toys (right?), so the real Jetbug must be the one with Nitroblast. Help me...Anyway, I'm getting addicted to your comedy http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/cool.png

Well it was supposed to levitate, and thus be feetless. It's not a bad idea though. Thanks!

Thanks, I might think of this when I get bored of this dude.Flameman, Didonchu, Ehlekdude: Thank you too.

The second chapter was even funnier than the first one. Good idea to see minifigs. Good bye Julius...The third chapter was good too. I almost turned mad reading mad characters' sentences. Oh lol.Overall good job. I'm glad to see Bionicle characters here and there, and the idea of narrating parallel adventures in that way is cool. Going to read and review other chapters soon.

Hey! I'm now going to show my 2012 MOCs! Starting by a tablescrap (which means it's not a serious MOC) named Kanokuaza.Yes.A powered, living Kanoka launcher corrupted with Quaza spikes.I said this wasn't serious.I lost my head!Oh right. I guess it could never work as a launcher.Just ignore the "#3" on the main picture. It's something about me, and nobody else. Well... I'm going to count how many MOCs I make this year. That's all.So in case you wonder where are the Numbers One and Two, I should show them soon.Enjoy.Matt

Bionicle Adventures Part 2Starts where the old comedy ended. You can find it in my sig.As always since I'm French, feel free to point out any grammar mistake. You'll help me improving my English ---------Chapter 6: Breakout---------Takanuva (still writing): "We've been captured by the Zglorff. We hope to get some help from Ehlekdude."Gali: Author, since you're the one who writes the story, make us escape from this darned planet!Me: It's not that simple... Just wait and see.Gali: Grrr.Pohatu: A good way to spend time is joking.Lewa: Oh yes! I know a good joke! What is orange, fat, and with a rock instead of a brain?Pohatu: hmm... me?Lewa: Yep.Pohatu: Knocks Lewa.Takanuva: "Suddenly, the ground is shaking."Onua: Oh right. Trust me, I'm an expert.Kopaka: Looks through the window.Pohatu: What's up buddy?Kopaka: It seems our cell is... flying through space.Everyone: :blink:A hatch opens in the ground and Ehlekdude goes out.Ehlekdude: Guess what?Onua: You saved us?Ehlekdude: Yeah.Onua: Tell me how!Ehlekdude: I glued all the guardians, and the Zglorff king on his throne. Then I repaired our spaceship and glued the cell on it. And there we go!Kopaka: You could help us in a lot of simpler ways.Tahu: Throws Kopaka through the window.Tahu: He's so annoying.Pohatu: Knocks Tahu.Gali: By the way, who is piloting the ship?Ehlekdude: It's me, let's see.Gali: But you're talking with us!Ehlekdude: Oh right!!!The ship crashes.Pohatu: Looks through the window.Gali: Where are we?Pohatu: We're floating on the sea around Mata Nui... but Mata Nui is destroyed now.Mata Nui (materializing in the cell): What are you saying? I'm alive, orange noob!Pohatu: I meant the island, keetorange noob. How did you manage to get here?Mata Nui: It doesn't matter. What's keetorange?Pohatu: Doesn't matter.Mata Nui: http://www.bzpower.com/board/public/style_emoticons/default/mad.gifMe: So we're on the sea of Aqua Magna. We're so far from our city and my castle. But at least we're on Spherus Magna.Lewa: *wakes up* Looks like we're floating.Me: Yeah.Lewa: Which means my bath is ready! *jumps through the window and falls in the sea*Onua: I can't leave this fool alone in the sea. *jumps out*Gali: I am the expert of sea! *jumps out*Pohatu: Don't leave me with this keetorange noob! *jumps out*Mata Nui: I must kill him. *jumps out, again*Me: Well Ehlekdude, I guess we should jump out too.Ehlekdude: Agreed. *we jump out*Takanuva: "jumps out"Now that everyone is swimming in the sea...Pohatu: Help! I can't swim!Mata Nui: Wow I don't need to kill him myself.Pohatu: curses Mata Nui and drowns.Takanuva: "We already lost two Toa."Lewa: And I'll soon be the third! A tentacle grabbed me!Gali: fires Nynrah stuff underwater.Onua: Show your face if you're a man, monster!Kalmah: Who called me a monster?Me: You still have tentacles?Kalmah: Yep. Tentacles are cool. Is this guy Ehlek?Ehlekdude: No I'm Ehlekdude.Kalmah: But you're an ugly green monster like Ehlek.Ehlekdude: And you're a silly.Gali: Let's swim, the coast is near!Three hours later...Takanuva: "We finally reached the coast."Lewa: How can you swim and write at the same time?Takanuva: Dunno.Gali: Oh my god!Mata Nui: The only god here is me.Lewa: What's happening, Gali?Gali: We forgot Tahu!Lewa: Who cares? He's annoying, like Kopaka.Gali: slaps Lewa.Onua: I found a truck! Let's go to our city!Gali: Where have you found it?Onua: I stole it.Lewa: Look! A police car!Onua: Let's go!Everyone jumps in the truck and they go away, followed by the policeman.Gali: I'm not sure this is a good idea to have Onua as driver.Onua: I'm an expert.Gali: Let me drive!Onua: No!Gali: Yes!Onua: I said no!The truck misses a turn and falls in a pit.Everyone: AAAAAAAAAH!!!Me: Don't worry, we'll survive.Gali: Why?Me: 'Cause I'm the Author. -_-Using my awesome powers (again), wings appear on the truck's sides.Gali: What about the policeman?Me: Oh, I guess he crashed.Takanuva: "The truck is flying towards our city."Many hours later...Tamaru: There's a winged truck in the sky!Matau: Where?Tamaru: I don't know.The truck crashes on the Author's castle.Me: Onua! You are the biggest noob driver of the world!Onua: Well at least we're back.The Toa and Mata Nui jump out and go to see friends and homes again, leaving the Author, Ehlekdude and Kalmah in the semi-destroyed castle. A surprise is waiting the Author.Me: Narrator! What are you doing in my living-room, watching TV and eating pop-corn?Narrator: I was bored.Me: Okay. Welcome back. Now start working!Ehlekdude: Oh no... Mister Pointless is back...Narrator: Goodbye everyone! Keep looking around for the next chapter, because it will feature a new Hero.Lake Eternity: What about me?Me: Don't worry.Word count: 801　

Your comedy is back. Yay. So will be mine soon.I've only read the first chapter at the moment. It's cool to see Jetbug as a toy "again". (Well, I think he never appeared before...) The dialogue between Surge and Nitroblast made me laugh. Nitroblast is so pessimistic... Oh lol.And it's funny to see Jetbug called Bug. This is funny, too.Overall, keep up the good work! I'll read and review the other chapters as soon as possible.

Thanks Ehlekdude! Glad you like my new Self-MOC, Von Nebula and Kopaka. I think the Brown Titan was supposed to be a titan version of my old self-MOC, who had spikes. I know about the Steltian. It's one of the "older experiments" I mentioned. Ah, this "Experiments" folder is full of randomness and doesn't care about timeline.Oh, I forgot. The Gunmetal Drone's centre piece. It's a big wheel from some Castle set. I've heard it can be found in dark grey in Jetrax T6, which would have been better to suit the color scheme of this MOC.

Thanks Paleo! You're probably right on a lot of things here. Big Head was a quick build from a random idea and I thus didn't care about the back... I agree about the Elite War Limulis and Crocosaur too.The Xmas Creature was supposed to be some kind of aquatic larva and lives underwater. I let you imagine what could the adult form look like.Oh and yes I'm going to fix the link for Kopaka's gallery

Hello BZPers! How are you? I'm finally back. I'm glad to be back. Before anything, I'll show all the MOCs you guys didn't see: the Dowtime MOCs. Where to start?GolemOn a rock planet, there are stone creatures named Golems. Here is a warrior-class Golem. They're supposed to be one-eyed, with large shoulders. The bohrok eye on the weapon is a kind of "battery" to power the blade and allow the Golem firing energy from it. All Warrior Golems have a different eye and battery color.GalleryBionicle ShipAs title says. The back sail is sooo bad IMO. Gallery 'cause I'll never have the time to show every MOC's main photoCrocosaurA cross between a crocodile and a dinosaur.GalleryBig HeadIt's a funny thing. I used the Piraka Stronghold's giant Vezok mask. Gallery hereClockwork KopakaA birthday gift for KanjaRyu. Click on the picture for the gallery.Fangz Alternate ModelNothing special. LookCyberMothMade this some time before Christmas. Akamai RevampYes I know it still needs work... I should revamp it again. LookExo-Toa of FireThe Great Beings gave a consciousness and an elemental power to an Exo Toa armor. It is still completely mechanical. Made this after getting Raw-Jaw for my (14th) birthday.War Limulis This is inspired from the Horseshoe Crab. If ya dont know what this is, check wikipedia. This Rahi lived in the sea around Daxia for millenias. Gallery Oh and there's an EliteWarLimulis in this gallery. Thornspix Guardian Inspired from Waspix and Thornraxx. Back Small Silver Tank Made for a MOC-off with my friend Lord Oblivion. It used Rhotuka as wheels. Gallery Von Nebula Revamp Nothing to say here. Click on the picture for Gallery. Random Stuff Here you can see random Dowtime experiments, mixed with older and newer random stuff. Eldrone One of my last 2011 MOCs. Which means it's been recently built. I finally decided to combine parts from my two Hahli Inika. Name comes from Elda (Hahli's Kanohi) and Drone. The Gallery Random Gunmetal Flying Drone Picture is too big, check here Aquatic Rat/Rahi Believe it or no, but I made this with random parts I randomly took in The Pile. Gallery for side view and Revamp which looks like a dead rat according to Felix. Definitely not my best MOC. Christmas Creature Another random experiment. Gallery here Christmas King A special Christmas MOC! As suggested by Felix it will be my new self-MOC. Oh and before you say it needs more gold, I say it was supposed to have only a touch of gold. Gallery *** So I guess it's pretty much all for Dowtime MOCs. I've improved, but constructive criticisms still are welcomed. Enjoy, BZPers! Matt