Nice armor and hair. Face, looks a little awkward, but okay. Neck's a little too long, and the way the arm and sword are held looks flat. A would recommend tilting them towards the viewer (with the appropriate angles).

Still, nice work! You definitely draw humans better than I do. =P Took me a few centuries to draw Zelda perfectly, and couple more to draw the one with me and Dorumon (my favorite Digimon), and even then, I drew in manga style and cheated and drew my hair over the ear region so I could avoid drawing them. XP

Ears aren't too hard... but thanks for the input. Yes, the neck is too long. Plan to see more of these coming soon

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Ears aren't too hard... but thanks for the input. Yes, the neck is too long. Plan to see more of these coming soon

 

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Let's just say I'm really, really, REALLY particular about how ears look and leave it at that. XP

I'm really looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Oh. I just kinda do an oval-esqe shape with the little line swoshes. Now, I really look at limb/torso proportions. That's what I'm about. So you should see some really... interesting posses coming

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The main issue I have is that the eyes are too high in the head, but otherwise it's pretty good.

Ha, yes they are, now that you mention it. I'll lower them next time.

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She kinda looks like me before I outgrew my side bangs. Creepy.

Also the torso's too long. Her hands should end near the middle of her thighs straight down. Her breast feel latched on. Drawing females is pretty difficult to get right. I applaud your effort.

Frankly, I can't tell if this person is supposed to be a girl or an effeminate-looking guy.

ITS A GIRL. Chest area?

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I like the picture! Well done, bro!

ITS A GIRL. Chest area?

 

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Heh, didn't really notice that; I thought it was how the armor was stylized. ^^;

Well, you'll see it in the one I just finished. Very pleased with this one ^^

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Long neck =

Old or new one?

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Overall better, but the shoulders are too small, and the head and neck are too large in proportion.

I'm going to point out everything until you're better better.

Look at YOUR sig. The head is bigger then her ENTIRE shoulders.

Thanks for the help, I need all I can get

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1) I didn't draw it.

2) chibi style is like that.

I like chibi :3

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It needs to be used at the right time.

Which is actually pretty much most of the time.

So I gues it should be said that it shouldn't ever be used when it shouldn't be used.

... Yeah... Something like that...

You're doing a good job. I love the balance of the form, but her proportions still needs a bit of work. Here, let me help you show a couple problems that has been pretty off-putting for me. I'm terrible explaining flaws in writing, but I hope you learn a thing or two about this experience.

The rib-cage/hip ratio does great wonders to determine the sex without relying on boobs and eye lashes. (And it works on MOCs! /whisper)

If you were trying to create a chibi, remember that the body proportion is 1-2 heads tall.

Cheers.

Thanks man I really appreciate it. Moreso during my prototype stages...

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...reasons??

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They just look really strange to me.

...Not that I've ever drawn a human. But they still look odd.