Katoris
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Thanks! Special Announcement! New character coming next comic! And sorry, TBK, not you.
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New Comic! Been Forever! Return from "Vacation" Though I don't know if anyone will notice me. ~Katoris
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My elder brother was your chosen first random viewer.
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Well I'll be honest, I didn't read all your comics at first, but now I did. So withe visuals, I think you know what you're doing. You're really good with gimp or photoshop or whatever you use. So I don't think you need feedback on that. Story wise however I think needs work. So to begin, if your series is being taken this seriously, you should definitely hold to your standard to make good fun story arcs. However, I'm not sure if the overall tone of your series so far is fun and exciting. Kortis's (or you in this case) always seems like he's peeved with everybody. When it comes to comics and comedy, anything could be funny if done right. However, it feels that since you've surrounded the series around Kortis being peeved with everyone around him, it's more annoying and discouraging to me as the reader. So I think you need a happy character, or at least, you should bring another one that will change Kortis for the better. Cause the flow of the comics is that Kortis is bored, everyone annoys him, and he can never get to his tea that he's inexplicably attached to. Also as a side note that everyone can grow on I think. When it comes to comics with the "PGSs vs the Author" genre, what the heck does that entail? Does this mean, the author produces comics elsewhere off screen but is never recorded and the PGSs are there to...be interviewed? Interviewed for what? I don't think your comics are stupid. We're all comic makers, therefore we're all gonna take it seriously. And the comic section is to provide enjoyable strips to read on a daily/weekly bases. And I believe your comics have potential! But don't take all of what I've said as an excuse to not continue. My next implore for you is that you except what I've incited, take what you want, and then change what you think should change. I can't rewrite your comics for you, but I do believe it does need some more work in the story aspect. I won't go into the specific details, but I think I've already generalized in the above statements. How's that critique? This is very helpful to me. I really appreciate it. I'll review it thoroughly later, and work on it.
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Well, I really don't know what to do next, so I'm just going to request critiques. Thanks.
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Just want to say congratulations! Your series is on the main page!
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One day I'll probably reveal what's behind the door, when I can make the torture devices. To tell the truth, it was pretty much laziness that it wasn't revealed, so I don't really mind what you say.
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Was that... Me? In the closet? As you know I always refer to you as freeloader, so no.
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Finally, a new comic! Been a while! The Torture Room ~Katoris
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I do not recall any "stabby stabby". Oh well, it fits.
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Never seen it. Glad you enjoyed!
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Yes! My Jedi mind trick on Katoris worked! *Ahem* Thanks! I've been thinking about how this'll work for a month, so it should go well. Ha ha. Looking forward to it.
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This begins to interest me. I will follow this.
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Well said!
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Training "dummy". I'm going to see if I can whip something up this weekend. No promises. Eventually I'm going to bring my character's insanity to a different level.
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Okay.
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Since my entry became canon, that basically means I will have co-authored 4 comics when I'm done.
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Oi. How'd you become Premier Member?
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I made a clone? Ooh, boy.
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Ah well. I get to co-author 3 comics, so I should be able to kill you 9 times in possibly just one
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I'm going to try and make a comic soon this week, so stay tuned. Also, I won first in Tahukan's Comic Contest and I get to co-author 3 comics, so look out for those.
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Didn't anyone notice the blood in my comic? Oh well, I got first! Hooray! I get to Co-author 3 comics! Heh heh. You're going to regret this, tahukan. I just noticed that 3 out of 4 of the entries, Tahukan was killed.
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Belated Happy Birthday and Happy Anniversary and Good Luck. Might as well say something before you go.
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The end of it all. I have always enjoyed this series even before I joined. Well, you deserve a rest. Best of luck to you, sir.
