So far this is really great! Without you I probably never would have been able to read the bionicle story. With that said, however, there is one thing that makes the books literally unreadable. You spelled "axe" as "ax" so many times.
Y-you... WHAT HAVE YOU DONE, YOU MONSTER!? ı pull out my blade and swing for your shins, causing you to flip and slam down on the ground. I then stomp your head, cracking your skull and then cut you stomach open and pour the acid onto your other organs. FATALITY My mask.
A strike from my shield is enough to send you falling off this cliff that you were conveniently standing on. My mask. BTW we're after the mask of life not creation. Not that it makes a difference...