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Thanks! Well, wait no longer! New comic everyone! I debated wither I should put this up or not, but I did cause I think even if someone doesn't understand the end, they might get a kick out of it. This comic is in response to WVUFan's Christmas comic, as seen here.
I hope I will too.I really look forward to the next one, as this has become a new favorite of mine to read. It's comedy gold, I'm tellin' ya!
This post really made my day. I'm very glad you enjoy the comics, and hope that one day you'll get back into the swing of things =)New comic will be coming soon! I will now have to balance this and Eljay: The Becoming, so thank you all for keeping watch and enjoying the comics!Finished catching up, and I must say, I like what you've decided to do by using a plot of sorts for the season rather than just the same old deal where the plot spans one comic. Another thing: You're still incredibly hilarious. I should really come out of procrastination at some point, because this made me realize how much I actually miss making good, humour based comics.
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Oh yes, I saw the intention. I've done it many a time. It just seemed the that background could have done without the mass blurring, at least to me.
Thank you, Eljay! And you too Meso, your commentary looks very promising too.Back to you, Eljay - I the panel with the Rorzakh seems okay to me... the shot was intended to blur out the Keerakh and focus on the guys who are really there. I don't see how it's "too" blurred.Man, I really loved this new comic. I feel that you've improved your artistic style a lot more than from previous comics, and the plot is getting really good. I love that planet as usual, and the fight scene was really well done. Although, the panel where the Rorzahk come out seems a little too blurred, I still enjoyed the comic as a whole.Looking forward to the next one Invi!
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Not a fan of the idea of this being hosted there. It's an improper use of the site. On a side note, the creator of this movement on that site was banned from THIS site. His same user name is shown. Dunno if that's allowed or not.
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Man, I really loved this new comic. I feel that you've improved your artistic style a lot more than from previous comics, and the plot is getting really good. I love that planet as usual, and the fight scene was really well done. Although, the panel where the Rorzahk come out seems a little too blurred, I still enjoyed the comic as a whole.Looking forward to the next one Invi!
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Text is much easier to read! New comic was funny, cause I don't have a clue what happened to the other characters. Will we be finding out what happened to them? Looking forward to more!
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Glad to see these return, Kazi! First comic was pretty funny! Although, with all that standing, a couch might be nice
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A very nice epic you have here, Kini! Reading the first chapter was a joy, and I immediately noticed the references to RvB and Canada
Loved the characterization of Skieros. I'm eager to get into his head a little more and find out more about his past. Love the pacing so far, and I eagerly await the next chapter 
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Glad to see you making comics again! Only thing I can say is that the text is a little hard to read, but I have to say he's in for a shock if he'd just turn around! Looking forward to the next comic!
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It has ended in blood for me for nearly 4 years. I don't see it stopping any time soon =P AND HEY! IT WAS HER SIDE!Gotta watch out for those cat-women.It will always end in blood.=[Lolzy comic, Eljay.As Kahi suggested... Watch where you place your hands.-V-
She would, however. Thanks!Eljay, I would never recommend pain and suffering to you. D:Nice comic, though.
This post really made my day. I'm very glad you enjoy the comics, and hope that one day you'll get back into the swing of things =)Finished catching up, and I must say, I like what you've decided to do by using a plot of sorts for the season rather than just the same old deal where the plot spans one comic. Another thing: You're still incredibly hilarious. I should really come out of procrastination at some point, because this made me realize how much I actually miss making good, humour based comics.
*sniff* Thank you, so much ;-; But seriously though, I'm glad you enjoy them to some extent (at least in SkypeThey suck. Period.JKing. :PTheir lulzy. X3
)New comic will be coming soon! I will now have to balance this and Eljay: The Becoming, so thank you all for keeping watch and enjoying the comics!
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Font looks good, so I'd say go for it! And if by "do or die" you mean say hi to Alena, then I'd say you'll just die =P
Hmm...guess that joke was more relevant back in the day...Anyhow, new font y/n?C-C-C-COMBO BREAKERToo many quotes.Anyway, what? Pickle? I don't get it, what's to laugh at?Whatever...--
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I figured this should return, so join me for...
The North-Western Isles Continuity presents...
Many years ago, months before the beginning of One Nation Under The Great Spirit...Eljay, a simple Matoran, wanted to peacefully live his life. He never thought about why it was peaceful, or that it was. He just lived. Slowly but surely, this would change. He would embark on a mission to bring back the peace that so many had longed for. He'd have to pay a huge price, and ask himself if it's really worth it...
Let the adventure begin, in that case...
Chapter 1: Remembering the beginning
Comic 1: Sweet beginningComic 2: Unsettling offense
Comic 3: Disgruntled costumer
Comic 4: Dark dreams
Comic 5: Snuffed flame
Chapter 2: Beginning the quest
Comic 6: Lucky find
Comic 7: Have a nice fall
Comic 8: Hard landing
Comic 9: Destiny's choice
Comic 10: Turning point
Chapter 3: Becoming a Toa
Comic 11: Fighting lesson
Comic 12: Long ago recap
Comic 13: Collected
Comic 14: Show and tell
Comic 15: Practice
Chapter 4: Home sick
Credits: InnerRayg for the sprites!
How often these will be updated is unknown, but there are more comics ready in case. I shall be working hard on these, but I need your guys help to keep it a float! I hope you enjoy these, and make this something to remember.
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These look wonderful, and I'd really like to make a version of that Miru. Problem is, I have no clue how to assemble it. =P I look forward to more, and hope to figure out how to make one
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Ay, I do believe I had some part in inspiring that shoulder Kahi joke :POver all, that was a fantastic comic. I laughed real hard at the part where Alena is coming up behind me, and I mention the noose tightening around my neck XD People who don't know Ven, Var, Meso and Alena might not get all the jokes, but I loved it.
Ah, the ideas that result from Skype conversations. Skype: Providing Comic Inspiration Since 2010."We're also lawyers"That whole part of the comic got a good laugh out of me.Great comic.
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I love this.Now, with this comic, the fan-girls of Kopaka and Tahu shall rise up, and we shall all fall. It will be the end of the world (as we know it).Really loved this comic Ven XD I like the kit used aswell. Very fitting I must say.New Outliner Comic!
A new V3 comic will be up within this week.Enjoy!-V-
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I need to listen to these rules like my life depends on it.Yeeeeeeah.BZPower Comics safety tip number 25:Never mess with cardboard boxes that are glowing pink.AND if you do, number 26: never turn it off.
It was on her hip/side!You know, I can't really blame Alena for that. I mean, look at where your hand is when you land on top of her.
Sadly she is ;-; And thanks!Oh no! Alena's staying! :PGood comic LJ, I found it quite funny, for most of it being off screen.
SHE WAS!"Please, help she's doing terrible things to me !"Best.Line. Ever. Great series EljayAnd Kahi...XD-Star
Glad you liked it!Well, I have put up the Good guys character sheet and the PGS character sheet. Enjoy!
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Thanks! Yeah, you told me all about my errors :PWell, hopefully I made up for it in this new comic!Enjoy!I enjoyed this comic, LJ. Like the part about Rainbow's gun and the part leading up to the Alena bomb.And I just told you the errors in voice chat, so I'm not gonna post them.
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Glad we can get back to work here! Also happy to have helped out and edited one of the episodes! I hope everyone enjoys!
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Oh, you'll see. It'll be fun.Glowing box? This can only lead to something that I think has to do with Pink... simply because of the glow.Watch me be a mile off now.
Thanks! And yeah, but he exclaimed that he liked that certain shotgun the USAS-12Oh dear, a box full of guns suddenly has something odd happen to it.Nice comic LJ, though I thought Ven was a sniper guy.
It'll be your last meal >=)New comic! Happy Thanksgiving!Really Eljay? "Eat lead"? :PAnd yeah, I thought so too, Invi.But then again, that's a different Operation.-V-
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Any time dude! And yes, they sure are >=)Thanks for the Birthday comic ^^And on note of the Guest star comic: Guns are always fun >:3
In which case, it's best to be the one aiming it, not being aimed at!
Not when they're aimed at you!And on note of the Guest star comic: Guns are always fun >:3
It's a song parody, so unless you have heard the song, you wouldn't understand it much.I didn't really understand the Halloween one... probably because I've never actually heard that song before. It was a song right?
I was hoping ;_;New comic!Yes, it was a song.Also, LJ, I liked your guest star comic. Of course you'd look when someone called out Mangosteen.
: Also! I am currently looking for at most, three co-authors. They'd need to be someone dedicated, and help me keep this topic up while I set up Eljay: The Becoming. Send me a PM if interested, along with a preview of your work!
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I really loved the story, as it really gave a depth of feel toward the Toa and the new mystery character. I couldn't find any spelling or grammar errors (not that you let me
) I felt that the ending was kinda abrupt, but it works for the story. Love the inclusion of the Bald Eagle I hope this does really well, and I honestly believe it will have a really great chance! -
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New Guest Star comic! I also forgot to mention this, but I'm going to be holding a small contest. Basically, I want anyone who was NOT in the Halloween comic to guess what the people who were in it were dressed as. The one who gets it right (or closest) will get a PGS spot. Happy guessing!
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Yeeeeeaaah maaaaan! Although, I really wanted to put an AK in thereNice Special. I Lol'd Thankfully, I remembered the song from last year, so it's all "Cool and Groovy".
Glad you liked it! And yeah, I messed up on it a littleDUN GET MASHED. Oh. Too late. Cool comic, Eljay. I like my failed-Carnage costume.
-V- New short comic! Happy birthday Omega!
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Loved the backgrounds in that XD I would imagine that anyone who hasn't seen The Matrix wouldn't get that, but it was a very funny comic
