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Zaxvo

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  1. "quickly advancing to where the crib was." IMO the word advancing has an aggressive connotation, it doesn't really fit here. The syntax of that sentence is also rather awkward. I'd use "quickly walking up to the crib."

     

    Other than that, it's a great short piece. I like the transition from one unrelated subject -- his baby -- to another -- the Eiffel tower.

     

    And if this is the kind of dad you want to be, it sounds like you'll make a great dad :P

  2. Lol I'm gonna switch topics...in terms of TV shows, be sure to check out Grimm. It's got a great dark fantasy meets CSI premise, I think you'd like it.

     

    The premise is that the Brothers Grimm (and all other writers of fair tales) weren't actually making things up: they were writing about actual events. Check it out.

  3. ....digital?

     

    I do like this though. It has a nice sense of depth to it, almost as if it's part of a scene for a movie or a game, as well as some amazing colours in it. Very rich and lush.

     

    -Nukaya

    That made me think of something... why don't we see more video games that look like this?

    Two words: Skyward Sword.

     

    That's what it reminded me of.

     

    Because this is AWESOME.

  4. I think you'll like Stormbreaker [i think I was the one who originially suggested it way back when you were looking for suggestions]. It's a good book; the author is excellent at writing suspense and humor.

     

    Enjoy the books!

     

    *Looks up Term Limits*

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