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Just as the other two, I liked reading this. Very simple, but still great. And it's got a nice moral to boot.

Well I've had type 1 since I was ten, so I've had it for at least five years. I have to say it wasn't as bad as I first thought it would be. But with my laziness, I don't always check my blood sugar like I'm supposed to, even then, I control it well. Probably because I got the pump about a year and a half ago, that really made diabetes way easier.

I fell in love as soon as I started playing BioShock. While I do enjoy the story of the first game better, the second came up with great improvements to the overall gameplay which was a great plus.I feel that BioShock has one of the most atmospheric single player campaign that I've ever played. It's just creepy, enthralling, and just plain interesting. It had great twists and characters. The first play through of both games had me being a good guy, mainly because I just felt so sorry for the little sisters, but also because you get some seriously cool stuff in the long run by helping them. I really can't wait for Infinite to come out. I will miss Rapture, but Columbia seems like an awesome setting as well.

This site... and Glee. My girlfriend made me watch one episode, and I've been pretty hooked on it.

Do you mean grammar wise? because yeah I have really awful grammar, it's something I'm trying to improve. Yeah. But obviously that wasn't too big of a deal.

This is a definitely good read. The writing isn't awesome, but then again, you're obviously going for a 'crazy man writing a story' kind of thing. I'm really glad to see a great horror story on the forums, especially one that doesn't rely on gruesome scenes. You're story is just plain creepy and scary and that's what makes it such a great piece. I've always had trouble writing horror myself, I just can't get it right. I'll definitely take some tips from this story whenever I try my hand at horror. The last few sentences tied the story together so well, it's just plain haunting with the way you wrote it. I really want to see some more writing from you, especially something on par with this.

Seemed pretty interesting. It had its funny moments and all, but nothing that was too laugh out loud. Of course this is only the first chapter so it's okay. For some reason, I really like the setting and the characters so far, so I guess you're doing good there.

Yes! Threat Level Midnight! That episode kept me content for a while. I couldn't stand Will Ferrel for one second, though. Glad he only lasted a few episodes. I actually liked the few episodes that Will Ferrel was in. I especially like the first episode that he and Michael first met. But, I already like Will Ferrel as an actor, I just don't think he was good for the Office, and honestly, I'm glad that he didn't stay for too long.

I love the Office. It's just a great comedy show, and basically the only one I watch. I've been having something of a marathon of the Office the past two weeks on Netflix, and I'm almost at the end. I still haven't seen any of the episodes after Steve Carrel left, is it still worth it to actually watch anymore?

Since BZPower was my main source of writing, I've had a huge down time from it. And I'm ready to get back into it. I've had two story ideas that have been in my head. I'm trying to have them both deal with some actual issues and opinions. One of the stories are set in the future. It deals with robots being treated as slaves by the humans. I'm trying to have it bring up issues such as equality, revenge, emotions, and stuff like that.The other story has this guy who somehow lives and dies, then comes back to life, as a cycle over a century. I'm still trying to figure out how I could make it work. It's supposed to be addressing changes in society and opinions over that century.Unfortunately... I don't know if I could post either on BZPower.

I like this story. It's obviously not long, and it's got a pretty vague setting and characters, which I can see is what you were going for. But, everything else was well described, especially the sad and dreary mood. I'm glad to see some sort of story on BZP so soon.

I have to say I kind of like the change. Albeit, I'd rather have had BZP the old way if I could've just had it during the summer. But I'm pretty excited to explore some of the new features and what not. I'm really ready to get back into posting.

Haha. Wow, I just started playing pokemon again and I thought the exact same thing.

Amen.