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Just as the other two, I liked reading this. Very simple, but still great. And it's got a nice moral to boot.

Well I've had type 1 since I was ten, so I've had it for at least five years. I have to say it wasn't as bad as I first thought it would be. But with my laziness, I don't always check my blood sugar like I'm supposed to, even then, I control it well. Probably because I got the pump about a year and a half ago, that really made diabetes way easier.

I fell in love as soon as I started playing BioShock. While I do enjoy the story of the first game better, the second came up with great improvements to the overall gameplay which was a great plus.I feel that BioShock has one of the most atmospheric single player campaign that I've ever played. It's just creepy, enthralling, and just plain interesting. It had great twists and characters. The first play through of both games had me being a good guy, mainly because I just felt so sorry for the little sisters, but also because you get some seriously cool stuff in the long run by helping them. I really can't wait for Infinite to come out. I will miss Rapture, but Columbia seems like an awesome setting as well.

This site... and Glee. My girlfriend made me watch one episode, and I've been pretty hooked on it.

Do you mean grammar wise? because yeah I have really awful grammar, it's something I'm trying to improve. Yeah. But obviously that wasn't too big of a deal.

This is a definitely good read. The writing isn't awesome, but then again, you're obviously going for a 'crazy man writing a story' kind of thing. I'm really glad to see a great horror story on the forums, especially one that doesn't rely on gruesome scenes. You're story is just plain creepy and scary and that's what makes it such a great piece. I've always had trouble writing horror myself, I just can't get it right. I'll definitely take some tips from this story whenever I try my hand at horror. The last few sentences tied the story together so well, it's just plain haunting with the way you wrote it. I really want to see some more writing from you, especially something on par with this.

Seemed pretty interesting. It had its funny moments and all, but nothing that was too laugh out loud. Of course this is only the first chapter so it's okay. For some reason, I really like the setting and the characters so far, so I guess you're doing good there.

Yes! Threat Level Midnight! That episode kept me content for a while. I couldn't stand Will Ferrel for one second, though. Glad he only lasted a few episodes. I actually liked the few episodes that Will Ferrel was in. I especially like the first episode that he and Michael first met. But, I already like Will Ferrel as an actor, I just don't think he was good for the Office, and honestly, I'm glad that he didn't stay for too long.

I love the Office. It's just a great comedy show, and basically the only one I watch. I've been having something of a marathon of the Office the past two weeks on Netflix, and I'm almost at the end. I still haven't seen any of the episodes after Steve Carrel left, is it still worth it to actually watch anymore?

Since BZPower was my main source of writing, I've had a huge down time from it. And I'm ready to get back into it. I've had two story ideas that have been in my head. I'm trying to have them both deal with some actual issues and opinions. One of the stories are set in the future. It deals with robots being treated as slaves by the humans. I'm trying to have it bring up issues such as equality, revenge, emotions, and stuff like that.The other story has this guy who somehow lives and dies, then comes back to life, as a cycle over a century. I'm still trying to figure out how I could make it work. It's supposed to be addressing changes in society and opinions over that century.Unfortunately... I don't know if I could post either on BZPower.

I like this story. It's obviously not long, and it's got a pretty vague setting and characters, which I can see is what you were going for. But, everything else was well described, especially the sad and dreary mood. I'm glad to see some sort of story on BZP so soon.

I have to say I kind of like the change. Albeit, I'd rather have had BZP the old way if I could've just had it during the summer. But I'm pretty excited to explore some of the new features and what not. I'm really ready to get back into posting.

Haha. Wow, I just started playing pokemon again and I thought the exact same thing.

Amen.

Yes! Finally! I have got a little Short Story for this occasion. I think I've got the dialog going pretty well. Anyway, here's the story: Gunslinger, it's a western.

I'm determined to enter a piece one of these days. Perhaps I'll start my western this way. Maybe a cool explosion or chase scene will fit the epicness.

This one will be fun. I haven't had much success in the horror genre, but hey, this is why I joined the writer's alliance, to get better.

Reporting for a review of Scientist Alex Humva's SS: Island. Rising Moon, if you keep getting new members here you're going to need some help counting up points for reviews, tips, and new stories. Whenever that day comes (probably soon), feel free to ask for some help from me on counting those little awesome points.

Well, this is a question I've seen about ten thousand times. Though every time I usually just put some BS on the paper. About ending wars and stopping pollution and blah, blah, blah. But really, just for people to see each other as people. There's still racism, and all that mess still going around in this day and age is ridiculous. Second to that would be for people to get a little more self confidence. This goes behind my previous change because the first one seems to be a bit more important. But really, people agonize when other's make fun of them. I've been made fun of more than a lot of people have, and, of course I hurt afterwards, but others just can't seem to get over it. But really, that seems to be about it for me. I can't exactly think of ways to fix the whole world in all its glorious diversity.

A good character is rather easy to make. As I see it, a good character is exactly what you want it to be. A character may be the most evil, vile, and disgusting thing imaginable, and not have a redeeming quality about him, or could be the image of perfection, challenged by only God himself. Either way, however you see the character, and as long as you made that character exactly what you wanted them to be, that character will truly be a 'good' character.

This sounds amazing, and I can't wait to get back into writing. So, count me in.

This is a great idea. I'll probably be doing... one of those. Should be fun, and... I'll most likely actually turn one in this week. Oh, and one more vote for a two week deadline. (if I already haven't voted for it)

All right, I've finally got my entry for the project from a couple of weeks ago, the conflict one. Hopefully, you will all enjoy the ancient setting of... Fate

Maybe not a deadline, but rather a two week period between tasks instead of one week? Not sure how others feel about this, or if they feel the same, but I know that I'll need at least that for a while as at the moment I'll only be able to write two days a week [possibly five days, but three of those would be for a very minimal amount of time, and probably won't be of good quality unless I'm feeling very inspired]. But I don't want that to influence other people's opinions. I want to honestly know if you'd rather have it one or two task a week. ~ Velox So far we still only have one vote (Rising Moon) for one task a week. Please put forth your opinion so we know what changes need to be made, if any. Here's a second vote to that. It seems like a perfect amount of the time that we don't feel overwhelmed.

I think you forgot to give me some points.