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Review Topic - The Resistance

Ragnar Lothbrok

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  • 3 weeks later...

Chapter 4 brings some really interesting developments. I really love the depth of character you've put into Ahkmou here, making him conflicted about his emotions vs. wanting to do what's right.

Every hero is born from his enemy; every leader, his followers; and every father, his children.

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  • 2 months later...

holy Mata NUI COW! that was good! Honestly I often find myself despising the fictional stories made on here, but this one is GOOD. although cliche at times, I think the whole 'alternate universe' thing works really well for this story. The only thing I could suggest is maybe a little more background about the world and what things are like (voya+mata nui s, what happened to icarax and teridax,etc), but you're probably gonna get to that stuff anyway.

Keep up the good work! Excitedly waiting for more!

move along.

nothing to see here.

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