Bonkle Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Umm... yeah. this is the review topic for my new Epic, Independence. Hope you like it. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tokytot Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 (edited) Bonkle, on 26 Sept 2015 - 5:58 PM, said:"YOU CLUMSY FOOL, WHAT DID YOU DO?!" the forgemaster shouted, just barely louder than the noise.That'd be my reaction in real life also. Anyways, I love where this is going and I hope this story goes along swimmingly! You've portrayed my character great so far! Keep up the good work! Now I have posted my comment in the correct topic. It got a bit messed up, but oh well. Edited September 27, 2015 by The Tokytot 1 Quote ALL HAIL CORN GUY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Unit IRE reporting, ready to receive new story content when ready. 1 Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 Unit IRE reporting, ready to receive new story content when ready. I'll be working on chapter 2 tomorrow. 1 Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tokytot Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Sweet! I can't wait! 1 Quote ALL HAIL CORN GUY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durahk Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Man! I love this epic so far! Keep up the good work! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 I'm excited to see where this will go! Any hope of making jokes at Irrie's expense? 2 Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 I'm excited to see where this will go! Any hope of making jokes at Irrie's expense?In the future, he will rebel by paying in Irriebucks instead of widgets. And he will say "k b0ss" instead of "affirmative". 1 Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Irrie and Geha began to discuss historyHow characteristic. 1 Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 Irrie and Geha began to discuss historyHow characteristic. Most characteristic. The first thing you do when you get your mind back. 2 Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 So Ghiddy and I showed up just in time? Sometimes I wonder how I got paired with that maniac. Maybe it's because of the taco plate incident? Perhaps... 1 Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Very nice, very nice, yes... I wouldn't call myself a natural leader, so to speak. I'm more of the brilliant manipulator who offers up suggestions and points the true leaders in the right direction. Then again, this is a different dimension, so maybe I'm not the same me. 1 Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted September 28, 2015 Author Share Posted September 28, 2015 So Ghiddy and I showed up just in time? Sometimes I wonder how I got paired with that maniac. Maybe it's because of the taco plate incident? Perhaps...Well, for simplicity's sake, everyone is part of the six main elements, so Ghiddy, who was part of the "awesome" element, joins Ice. I wanted you both to show up at the same time because you signed up around the same time. Very nice, very nice, yes... I wouldn't call myself a natural leader, so to speak. I'm more of the brilliant manipulator who offers up suggestions and points the true leaders in the right direction. Then again, this is a different dimension, so maybe I'm not the same me. Someone needs to be the leader, and you do all the work for the Kanohi Force. The next chapter will introduce Arzaki, Tahu, and Durahk. I'm going to start toning down the introductions and just have characters show up, giving me a greater focus on action and plot. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Hooray for rebellion against authority figures! 1 Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Three letter combination representing "Petewa" how would that go? P2A would be pronounced 'pee too ay', but I can't think of any closer. 1 Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted September 29, 2015 Author Share Posted September 29, 2015 Three letter combination representing "Petewa" how would that go? P2A would be pronounced 'pee too ay', but I can't think of any closer.No introduction for you, no number for you. You will just show up. 1 Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 Three letter combination representing "Petewa" how would that go? P2A would be pronounced 'pee too ay', but I can't think of any closer.No introduction for you, no number for you. You will just show up. That's what headcanoning's for. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arzaki Posted October 7, 2015 Share Posted October 7, 2015 Going with the "meme" that Ghidora started... 0/10 needs more Arzaki In all seriousness, though, I'm liking it so far. 1 Quote I got Monster Hunter World on PS4, add me at bmrjw2 if you want Also I play FFXIV, my main is Anastasia Willow on Exodus but I've got characters on every NA datacenter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted October 7, 2015 Author Share Posted October 7, 2015 Going with the "meme" that Ghidora started... 0/10 needs more Arzaki In all seriousness, though, I'm liking it so far.The next two chapters are a bit boring, but you are in them. You partner up with Durahk. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted October 7, 2015 Share Posted October 7, 2015 (edited) Three letter combination representing "Petewa" how would that go? P2A would be pronounced 'pee too ay', but I can't think of any closer.No introduction for you, no number for you. You will just show up. That's what headcanoning's for. I've figured it out. M'number's probably d5.(Do note, I'm joking) Edited October 8, 2015 by Petewa Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted October 9, 2015 Share Posted October 9, 2015 Oh, by the way.... (I've been wanting to use this for a while now... ) For your excellent contribution to the lore of the Kanohi Force, I hereby give you my OFFICIAL CANON SEAL OF APPROVAL! Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted October 9, 2015 Author Share Posted October 9, 2015 Oh, by the way.... (I've been wanting to use this for a while now... ) For your excellent contribution to the lore of the Kanohi Force, I hereby give you my OFFICIAL CANON SEAL OF APPROVAL! Yay! The next chapter I have set up is mostly filler with nearly zero action, so I might end up rewriting it. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted October 9, 2015 Share Posted October 9, 2015 he tripped and fell.What? What? I'd never do that...yeah, that's totally uncharacteristic of me. [/sarcasm] Irrie slammed his fist on the detonator and the tower erupted in fire and smoke.Great, so I die in the same chapter I'm introduced. Not much later, Petewa awoke with a throbbing pain in his chest. He was pinned under a girder, with shrapnel puncturing his armor in various places. He couldn't help but smile. He was injured, but alive. And the plan had worked. He fell out of consciousness again as some of the others were dragged of by guards.Oh, why'm I under a girdle? Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted October 9, 2015 Author Share Posted October 9, 2015 he tripped and fell.What? What? I'd never do that...yeah, that's totally uncharacteristic of me. [/sarcasm] Irrie slammed his fist on the detonator and the tower erupted in fire and smoke.Great, so I die in the same chapter I'm introduced. Not much later, Petewa awoke with a throbbing pain in his chest. He was pinned under a girder, with shrapnel puncturing his armor in various places. He couldn't help but smile. He was injured, but alive. And the plan had worked. He fell out of consciousness again as some of the others were dragged of by guards.Oh, why'm I under a girdle? The tower is a fairly normal structure at the base, with several levels. The nit gets thinner and eventually becomes spindly, unfinished girders, similar to those seen in the Toy Story Trash Compacter set. One of those fell on you. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted November 1, 2015 Author Share Posted November 1, 2015 Okay, people, I know that I've neglected this story, and I'm sorry. I hope to rewrite the filler chapter I'm sitting on and post it sometime this coming week. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted November 1, 2015 Share Posted November 1, 2015 It's all good, happens to the best of us. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted February 14, 2016 Author Share Posted February 14, 2016 Turns out that "filler" chapter wasn't so bad in retrospect. It's up now! Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted February 14, 2016 Share Posted February 14, 2016 Well, Dragon's already dead in chapter four? You'd think he'd last longer..Well, at least I'm alive. For now. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted February 14, 2016 Author Share Posted February 14, 2016 Well, Dragon's already dead in chapter four? You'd think he'd last longer..Well, at least I'm alive. For now.I might bring him back later, I just wanted to trim the cast a bit. And I can assure you, there are no plans for you to die. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted February 16, 2016 Share Posted February 16, 2016 Is that sarcasm I detect in your voice Bonkle? Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted February 16, 2016 Author Share Posted February 16, 2016 No, I'm serious. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted February 17, 2016 Share Posted February 17, 2016 Well...Could I bribe you to kill Arzaki? 1 Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted February 17, 2016 Author Share Posted February 17, 2016 Well...Could I bribe you to kill Arzaki? He's already set up to die. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Endruv Posted February 19, 2016 Share Posted February 19, 2016 Well, I'm liking the story! Quote Unity, Duty, Destiny-Toa Ouberry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted February 20, 2016 Author Share Posted February 20, 2016 (edited) Well, I'm liking the story!Thanks! Sorry you're not in it, I started this a while back and I don't want the cast to get too big now. But I have plans for both a prequel and a sequel, I'll try and put you in one of those. http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/kanohi-force/images/2/2f/Ouberry.JPG Edited February 20, 2016 by Chromedome Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Endruv Posted February 21, 2016 Share Posted February 21, 2016 Well, I'm liking the story!Thanks! Sorry you're not in it, I started this a while back and I don't want the cast to get too big now. But I have plans for both a prequel and a sequel, I'll try and put you in one of those. http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/kanohi-force/images/2/2f/Ouberry.JPG Very nice. Just missing a cape. So I'm a Ga-Matoran or an Onu-Matoran?And won't you kill off some people, leaving room for me maybe? Quote Unity, Duty, Destiny-Toa Ouberry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Petewa Posted February 26, 2016 Share Posted February 26, 2016 Akhmou totally stole my face. Quote Mataru Nui, an Interactive Adventure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted February 27, 2016 Author Share Posted February 27, 2016 Akhmou totally stole my face.But you have a more noble reason. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BronzeJet (I can FLY) Posted March 14, 2016 Share Posted March 14, 2016 hey has this died? Quote HEY GUYS WELCOME BACK TO ANOTHER NIGHT OF MINECRAFT...... GARRY;S MOD... CIVILIZATION... JUST CAUSE....... STRANDED DEEP.... SUBNAUTIC.... CALL OF DUT...... DESTINY THE TAKEN..... HAL....... H1Z..... FIVE NIGHTS AT FRE.... DYING LIG... HANGOVERS AND VIDEOGAMES "The Tale Of A Murderer's Brother" "The Civil War" Quote Of The Random Time I Feel Like Changing It: "What Is Dead May Never Die" ~ Old ZexyZek Just Now "I COULD LIVE IF I DON'T DIE" - MITHZAN 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted March 14, 2016 Author Share Posted March 14, 2016 No, I've just been too lazy to post the next chapter. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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