A failed Toa of light

[cjr205]

https://www.flickr.com/photos/100637370@N03/shares/y17g5w

 

A toa of light that I just couldn't get to look right. Any suggestions?

[BrickPharaoh]

It's actually got a lot going for it. I like where the chest was going. My suggestions are to make the shoulders quite a lot bigger and to give it thicker arms and legs. 

 

[Makuta Luroka]

I agree with Marei. Give it thicker limbs and broader shoulders. Aside from that, add more white, the gold seems a bit overpowering.

[cjr205]

I agree with Marei. Give it thicker limbs and broader shoulders. Aside from that, add more white, the gold seems a bit overpowering.

 

 

It's actually got a lot going for it. I like where the chest was going. My suggestions are to make the shoulders quite a lot bigger and to give it thicker arms and legs. 

 

Thanks. I'll work on that and post it when I finish.

[The Invisible Handman]

I think it's more to do with the torso, you could make the bit below the orange circle a bit shorter.

[Dark_Stranger]

Offhand, I'd say the torso needs to be a little shorter (right now it looks a bit long compared to the legs), and the shoulders could stand to be positioned a bit higher (the arms seem kind of low on the torso as is). Otherwise, I'd call this solid.

[ToaTImeLord]

Bulkier arms and legs or a more slender chest and body that would fix the proposition issue.

[banana92]

I would personally rid the orange disk on the chest, just my touch, and the obligingly red and blue pins might be better in other colors, though I know that can be limiting, I think he looks really cool though, I have to agree with the above comments, maybe do white shells with gold accent pieces/add ons, and last thing, I would subtract the silver/gun metal, but that's just me, all in all he looks very solid and I look forward to seeing it reach it's full potential!