Freezer Burn Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 So where with Antroz I tried to go bigger and more armored, for Chirox I tried to make him look tall and lean. Also, I tried to get something similar to a hindu deity with the raised wings. Tell me what you think!http://www.brickshel..._down_front.jpghttp://www.brickshel...gs_up_front.jpghttp://www.brickshel...ngs_up_back.jpgSo there he is. I would appreciate comments regarding things you like and things you can't stand, but please avoid discussing any moderate emotions. (not really, if you're ambivalent I would love to know.) Quote Look at me still talking when there's science to do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AuRon the champion Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 Looks pretty good! I like the use of the HF parts for the arms/legs/wings. Quote BZPRPG Characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBBBalta Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 The build looks good, but the arms are positioned much too far inward on the torso. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freezer Burn Posted February 9, 2012 Author Share Posted February 9, 2012 Toa Balta #3: I was actually trying to make it look like he has 4 arms. The bottom ones are supposed to be small, and the upper ones were repurposed as wings... But thanks for the comments! Quote Look at me still talking when there's science to do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFlash Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 The whole model seems a bit skinny. Should there be actual hand pieces? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sumiki Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 (edited) Work on the upper torso. You have some nice armoring until you hit the upper torso, where it just stops. I don't think that he's supposed to be wearing a strapless dress ... ( ) In the same vein, the lower torso is also really skinny. I doesn't need to be beefed up a lot, but I don't think he should look anorexic.Anent the arms ... they don't really look too good right now. You could ...[*]beef up the lower arms, bring them up, and move the wings to the back[*]bring the lower arms upwards, connect them with the wings, and then put claws on the end of the wings (like a bat)[*]eliminate the lower arms altogether, use the parts to extend the wings, and add clawsA minor issue for me is the lack of lower-ankle armor. Triple-jointed legs go a long way for animalistic and/or evil MOCs, and I think some black HF armor (maybe with spikes attached) would make the legs a lot better. Edited February 9, 2012 by Sumiki Quote avatar by Lady Kopaka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 Definitely a cool remake, but the arms and wings could look better. The lower pair seems pretty much useless to Chirox. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Genris Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 Not bad. GOod job, but I think his hands could do well with some claws! 8/10 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freezer Burn Posted February 10, 2012 Author Share Posted February 10, 2012 Wellp. Apparently I took the really-skinny-scientist thing a bit too far... You're right about the lower legs, unfortunately I have no black armor... Haven't really kept up with the hero-factory buying lately. Thanks for the comments everyone, I shall certainly keep them in mind for future things... Like pre-mutated Bitil. Quote Look at me still talking when there's science to do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrSciFiGuy Posted February 11, 2012 Share Posted February 11, 2012 First off, I love the blades on the wings. I wish I had a million of those. And I really like the legs you made, very bird-like. Quote Bionicle: ANP aims to create narrated versions of all the Bionicle books, with voice actors for each character, and music taken from various media to enhance the story. Check here if you're interested in voicing a character, and here for the chapters that've already been released!Formerly: Tahu Nuva 3.0Looking for a Bionicle Beanie. Black one with the symbol on it. Contact me if you are willing to sell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smitty Posted February 12, 2012 Share Posted February 12, 2012 Is that my wing design?It's not bad but is does look a bit like Chriox's skeleton that Chriox himself. Quote At some point you realize that you are but a speck in the Universe. That you time in this worlds is but a blink. You see the whole of reality as it unfolds before you. You try to see how far you can reach, and it’s not that far past your face. But then you come back from the brink. You hold them in your arms again. And you know that you are where their world begins. You are their rock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freezer Burn Posted February 13, 2012 Author Share Posted February 13, 2012 (edited) This is built similarly to your Teridax, but I assure you that I've had Chirox laying around since the summer. I suppose great minds think alike... Edited February 13, 2012 by Ranubis Quote Look at me still talking when there's science to do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smitty Posted February 13, 2012 Share Posted February 13, 2012 This is built similarly to your Teridax, but I assure you that I've had Chirox laying around since the summer. I suppose great minds think alike... Similar nothing they are the same, well your wings are bigger but if you say you did it over the summer I believe you. Quote At some point you realize that you are but a speck in the Universe. That you time in this worlds is but a blink. You see the whole of reality as it unfolds before you. You try to see how far you can reach, and it’s not that far past your face. But then you come back from the brink. You hold them in your arms again. And you know that you are where their world begins. You are their rock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freezer Burn Posted February 14, 2012 Author Share Posted February 14, 2012 Thanks. As a rule I try not to rip people off. Quote Look at me still talking when there's science to do! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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