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Posted Jul 17 2012 - 09:20 PM
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Posted Jun 06 2013 - 10:34 AM
I was browsing through your library when I ran across this. I would like to encourage you to finish this. Obviously, something happened to this Toa to make him lose his memory.
You mentioned you had plans to remake this, so I suggest combining some of these very short chapters together. This concept doesn't deserve to sit in the dust. You can do it!
Posted Jun 07 2013 - 02:17 AM
Whoa, someone read my stories!
This has really been a favorite of mine, but I just didn't like the way it was going. Such an awesome story needs to be written in a just-as-awesome way, and I just don't like this version. I'll probably start it in over the summer after I finish up Shattered and Seared.
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Posted Jun 24 2013 - 02:45 PM
Edited by ToaDraconixMahvi, Jun 24 2013 - 02:53 PM.