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#1 Offline Smooth Jazz

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Posted Jun 09 2013 - 10:27 PM

http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/362053

 

For a revamp contest on MOCpages. Round 2, head-to-head between Chro and I.

 

Feedback appreciated.


Edited by Randy Disher, Jun 09 2013 - 10:38 PM.

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Posted Jun 09 2013 - 10:36 PM

his arms seem a wee-bit long. otherwise, looks pretty good.


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#3 Offline XONAR

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Posted Jun 09 2013 - 10:56 PM

I would make his neck just a tiny bit longer, but other than that, its a superb MOC. Good luck in the contest!


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Posted Jun 10 2013 - 04:25 AM

Wow i must admit he is pretty darn impressive.i especially like the use of the armor on the chest


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Posted Jun 10 2013 - 07:27 AM

Is round #1 on here? I would like to see it after having seen this.

That is amazing.

 

What is the piece you used to armor his upper chest? I'm not sure I've seen it before.

 

And of course, I love the back-mounted weapon and shield.

 

Good luck! (And may the best MOCer win!) 


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Posted Jun 10 2013 - 02:26 PM

his arms seem a wee-bit long. otherwise, looks pretty good.

The arms are slightly too long, yes, but it I don't think it's that obvious. I could shorten them, but I don't want to re-photograph this.

 

I would make his neck just a tiny bit longer, but other than that, its a superb MOC. Good luck in the contest!

I might try lengthening the neck, but I generally prefer short necks - it tends to look like a giraffe otherwise. Glad you like the MOC.

 

Wow i must admit he is pretty darn impressive.i especially like the use of the armor on the chest

Glad you like it!

 

Is round #1 on here? I would like to see it after having seen this.

That is amazing.

 

What is the piece you used to armor his upper chest? I'm not sure I've seen it before.

 

And of course, I love the back-mounted weapon and shield.

 

Good luck! (And may the best MOCer win!) 

 

The chest armor is an HF piece, from Witch Doctor. Glad you like the MOC! My entry for Round 1 can be found here.

 

Thanks for the feedback, everyone!


Edited by Randy Disher, Jun 10 2013 - 02:27 PM.

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Posted Jun 10 2013 - 03:22 PM

I agree that the legs are short, and the arms are too long. But it really looks great. I love this Kopaka.


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