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Writers' Alliance Weekly Update--12/5/10


WA? What's that?

 

Anyway, this week's Weekly Update is to write for the theme of--

 

Hooks

 

We're all going to write about fish!

 

...

 

8D

 

...

 

In all seriousness--It's the aspiring writer's dream to, you guessed it, write a book and actually get it published. Well, the first step in the actual writing process to do so is to hook your reader. As fast as possible. Whether it's the agent who's going to get your book published and out in public, your best friend, a complete stranger in Indonesia, or your mom. The hook is the first few pages (or even page, or paragraph, or sentence) of the book that really makes the reader hungry for more. It makes them so intrigued, or shocked, or awed that they literally cannot put the book down until they've consumed their fill. Some of you might think you're really not all that great at absorbing readers that much, but I claim it's not that hard--all you gotta do is have a creative enough imagination, and be bale to impress the reader sufficiently, which is possible i you can hold a pencil in your hands and know the English language (or another one, for that matter).

 

Weekly Tips

 

[submitted by Rising Moon]--I don't care what story you're writing, who the author is, and how the plot plays out--every single decent story is set in motion once the main char's world is in some way disturbed. To name a few you guys all probably know--Harry Potter finds out he's a wizard, that he's leaving civilization for a school of strangers, and that his parents were killed by a focal villain of the story. Luke Skywalker's rural life on a desert planet is disturbed when he finds out he's going to join a scale of literally universal proportions (ironically, same thing with his father, if you wanna start from Episode I). Percy Jackson finds out he's the son of a freakin' god, and is integrated into an isolated culture he didn't even know existed. Bobby Pendragon was tossed into a foreign world and an alien war. At the same time.

 

You get the picture. Here's the equation--Disturbance in main char's world=Intrigue for the writer=Motivation for the writer=Energy for the writer=Reader's absorption in the story.

 

[submitted by Rising Moon]--Backstory isn't necessarily a bad thing, when ya do it right--but save it for later. People are bored when the book begins like that, because a hook speaks for the rest of your book; if it starts boring, it'll go on like that. Even if it's not actually true, it gives off that illusion to the reader, and chances are they won't get very far before they drop the book. Be exciting. Disturb, disturb, disturb.

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Sumiki

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write a book and actually get it published

What if you've already done this?

Riisiing Moon

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Well, have you?

 

Besides, you might've gotten a million books published, if you're a writer, you want one more.

Sumiki

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Well, that might be kind of stretching it. :P I self-published a book when I was ten - only got about $90 in royalties off of it.
Sumiki

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Unfortunately, if I reveal it, I'll also reveal my name, which I've been banned from doing online.
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:tohu: :drooling: Lost me at "Bobby Pendragon". :tohu:
Grantaire

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btw, RM, Anakin Skywalker is Luke's father, not son. Episode one takes place twenty nine years before episode four. :P

Aderia

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Bobby Pendragon is the awesomest traveller from Second Earth ever to live. ;P

tent163phantoka

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I have a tip. Use events in your life /the world around you/mythology as inspiration. It worked for GregF!
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Bobby Pendragon is the awesomest traveller from Second Earth ever to live. ;P

:tohu: *Looks at solar system* KNI only see one Earth. Adders see two. Problem? :tohu:

Riisiing Moon

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Zar--I know that, trust me, I'm a die-hard Star Wars fan. That was a typo. :P

 

tent--Yup, that can apply to any form of worldbuilding. I take inspiration from Hebrew occasionally; in an old epic, the leader of a snow tribe was Legesh, a spin off of Sheleg, meaning snow. In my book, the seven skeletons revived by Eth are named, in Hebrew, one through seven (well, spin-offs of the numbers). Sounds a lot more original in English--Akked, Shi-Tayim, Shi-Losh, Arava, Kamesh, Sesh, and Shi-Va.

Aderia

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I actually see three. First, second, and third earth. Read the Pendragon series over the summer or sumthin. it's awesome. :D

Mayno

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...In my book...

 

Do you mean an actual book, or do you mean a story you have up on BZP?

 

And if either, where might I find this book? ^_^

 

 

 

--Mr.M

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:tohu: Comics "Darth Vader" and "Mexican Food" have been added to the Comix, along with exclusive info on the movie and how you can be in it. :tohu:
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:tohu: The WA Comix have interviewed the BZP staffer Smeag! :tohu:
ARROW404

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I added another chapter to Reawakened.

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