Aderia

Do you fear death? [/davy jones]

Posted: Walking Her Home (albeit, in the wrong fourm, it should be moved soon) It's not really for the 'characterization' theme, but you could stretch it, if you really wanted to. (EDIT: There. Character development. Guess it'll have to count for this week's theme. XD ) Reviewed: Epics- Blazing Dawn (here) Fading Blaze (here) and BTW, I get those two epics mixed up, cuz of their carkin' similar titles. The Toa With Black Eyes (here) A Soldier's Destiny (here) Short Stories- Collapse to Rise (here) The Forest Fire (here) Thinking of You (here) Tip: BEWARE RABID SUE'S AND STU'S Okay, not to insult anyone's intellegence, because we've all had writing experience, and we know what Mary Sue's and Gary Stu's are. Any female or male character that's too perfect, gets any guy/gal he/she wants, masters an instrument/weapon in a matter of days, etc. etc. etc. But just keep an eye out for those buggers, and if you find one, I think it would be fairly logical to use the 'calm, cool, and collected/big brother' approach, not going around and pointing fingers. Not saying that any of us do that, but just saying.

oh, oh oh! I do too. I shoudl be doing homework right now, but I"m not. XD

Posted: Forget The Mountain Reviewed: Once More, even though it was sometime last week or something. I forgot to let you know. (Edit: Also dropped a review by Zar's Epic, Fading Blaze.) (Edit: I also updated my Epic, Second to None, if that counts towards anything) Tips: When you write, don't be afraid to just let the words flow. On a more personal note, writing is the way I communicate best. I can't stutter, I don't constantly abuse the words 'like' and 'um', and I can be as creative as I want. On another note, watch what you post. Other people might not have the same opinion as you, or they might simply be easily offended by something you thought was innocent.

Am I the only one who is cursed with the inability to make an epic banner around here?

aww, darn. i wish I had that much time to procrastinate... but I only have until monday, sadly. I have to make a freakin' pyramid out of either sugar cubes, or popsicle sticks, and write an essay about it. XD, that'll be and interesting paper for sure. "... and then I found my little brothers bouncing off the walls, with my empty box of sugar cubes on the table... blahblahblah".

Hahaha, yeah, you're just the random team member who happened to come up with the whole idea, on top of the name. Nothing special, right? XD And Redwall, huh? It's been a while since I've set foot into that fandom... But lemme know when you get the story started, and I might just go take a looksee.

Riggie, do you know how much I envy you, living in Athens?

I'm sure this is just coincidence, but the Toa of Fire in the Bionicle storyline seem to be some of the most round and dynamic characters we've seen so far. Well, I know other people think differently, but I think Vakama is a pretty good character. He's dynamic. Saying, he is one of the most developed characters in the storyline. His jumping around with the insecure Toa to dark-sided Hordika could have been cleaned up a bit with more detail and page time, I'm sure. Tahu is as realistic as a Toa can be. His fiery temper, and impatience really seem to give him life. And then, underneath, his fierce loyalty and dedication to his team just give him that much more personality. Anyways, what I'm saying is, that IMO, a good character has to develop along with the plot, be relatable and realistic. You know the author's done a good job with the charater when you look back and that one character stands out, even the tiniest bit, from the rest.

They're funny if you're not trying to make one, and leave out 'no pun intended'.

XD, 'in fact, it's epic'. Very punny.

I've been asked what year I am in college and what my major is, and I just kinda smile to myself and say I'm a freshman. In high school. And then burst out laughing when they turn all red in the face and say sorry. And then other days, people still ask me if I want the kiddie's menu.

Heyyy, I like banners and sprites. I'll take you up on that offer.

... No... way. We're reading that rite now in English. It wouldn't be half as bad if I understood what half of those words were :rollseyes:

Hey, whomever's counting, don't forget me! The idea is simply genius, and I'm all for it.

I really thought the Taggerrung was gonna go somewhere with an evil otter. Disappointed as I was, I still liked the way it turned out. I wanna see a good fox, and and evil otter, and more birds with scottish accents.

Hahaha!! I love weekends! I was up till six in the morning living off of iced tea and grapes. ... Alice in Wonderland? I honestly didn't like the new one. Johnny Depp just creeped me out at his Mad Hatter role, because he looked like Willy Wonka, but acted like Jack Sparrow. About that Proto Boost. I'm all for it People go Premier for wanting to support BZP (at least, that's how it should work) *coughshouldcough*, and Proto goes for making BZP a better place, so I'm thinking all's well that ends well.

Ah, fun. My neighbors do that, except they're usually laughing really loud. They're the hardcore Eagles fan type. Wait, five brothers? *** *almost catches links* Darn. Have to work on my hand-eye coordination some more.

Dude, I envy you and your brothers. I have two little brothers, and I'm kinda wishing they were older than me. Happy belated b-day, too! *reads on* o...mg..zzzz *faints* Seriously, Zar, thank you. But honestly, my stories are not better than yours!! In fact, I have half a mind to go stalk your stories right now and prove you different.

So I saw you finally updated your blog, and I'm like OMGZZZ!! Then I get here, and I'm like ... depressing. Sounds like Aero. But what 'higher goals' are you talking about?