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  1. Yeah, is it a contest that involves voting? How can I theoretically vote for this one? I've never built a set in my life, so I don't even know how to comment well, but I do really like this one and the effort put in to go with the canon bits we do have, like probably having a mata-like build, and her weaponry, etc. Also, the dark blue is great, I think it makes her look tough
  2. Haha, realized it wasn't Ahsoka once I put my glasses on.
  3. Reading on BS01 recently, and I came across this interesting tidbit that said a character's Rhotuka power is essentially an expression of their morals/values. This is different for Rahi, exceptionally intelligent/sapient Rahi excluded, and explains why the Toa Hordika had elemental spinners (maybe, but debatable. Elemental spinners could also come from powers 'derived from that character's morals, ethics, and affinities', affinity being elemental in their case. ). I really like this concept, I think it adds a lot of layers or potential layers to characters. (click screenshot for source link and convenient list of known Rhotuka powers and those they belong to) So it would be interesting to see how aligned Rhotuka powers would pan out along the general good/evil divide. Example, Roodaka's mutation spinners make sense to me, as she plays so many different sides. Only she can really undo the mutations, which I think lines up with her ultimate allegiance to herself, and twisting others to do her bidding, whether literally or not, and she's holding all the cards in the end. Another example - Sidorak, according to BS01 held a position of minor importance on Stelt, his homeland, so developing a Rhotuka that commands obedience and thus gives him more and more power also works really well. It also appears Rhotuka powers may be able to change when one goes through a life-altering experience (reflective of a shift of an individual's moral/value structure? Like a Patronus, but for Bionicle, I guess), as evidenced in Toa Norik and Iruini, who had slowing and healing Rhotuka, respectively, and once they were mutated, their Rhotuka changed ability. Anyways, I'm interested in any insights you might have for characters and their Rhotuka powers, or what powers think characters may manifest were they to develop the Rhotuka ability. Some rabbit trail ramblings resulting from a combination of too much unstructured free time and unfettered BS01 browsing below.
  4. Oooh, this is fun! Fire Skakdi, eavesdropping vision (if I can see you, I can hear you and what you're hearing), extra power would be access to a personal pocket dimension to keep stuff in (limit, pocket dimension contents can't exceed my own mass, and it all has to be inorganic matter), and I always thought a double meteor hammer would be a sick weapon. With Skakdi, there's no element/gender locking, right? Doesn't change my answer, but still curious. Like, I'm pretty sure I've read that both male and female Skakdi exist. And I know Vezok exists, and he's a dude and he's water element, but that doesn't necessarily rule out gender/element lock, since we don't have any canon female Ga-Skakdi. Unless I missed something.
  5. Chapter 8: Tines and Helix Things were not great at the Fire Brand central. Tines had already been waiting in line nearly half an hour, and it was a two-Matoran line, including him. There was a flurry of movement unceasing that could be seen intermittently through the doors that led to the back offices, which were more like combination locker rooms, break room, messy work stations, and lined with a few holding cells. However, most of the back-room flurry was apparently coming from only two over-worked Ta-Matoran clerks. The Great Temple attack, already a week ago, had set the simmering city off to a boil, and this was just one of the manifestations thereof. The Turaga’s broadcast had only stirred the pot. Many of the policing forces were withdrawing from their respective Coliseum central stations and to their own Metrus, consolidating their resources there. “I’m sorry! We can’t process any new applications at the moment,” the clerk called over his shoulder, rushing back into the back room with a stack of tablets balanced unsteadily in the crook of his arm. “Be with you in a moment!” The Ta-Matoran who had been in line right in front of Tines turned and walked dejectedly out of the station, still clutching his resume tablets. If their districts didn’t currently hate one another more than ever, Tines might have offered a word of consolation. The waiting Le-Matoran popped a handful of bula berries into his mouth while he waited in the now empty front office reception area. He had to admit, physically eating food was much more fun when others were around to be disgusted by it. He tried to not look overly interested at all the ruckus going on back there - slamming of cabinets, the sound of tablets being shoved around, some furniture moving. “So sorry, it’s been crazy, with everyone being reassigned to new stations,” the Ta-Matoran clerk said, dragging a case of spent lightstones out with him. “And the pipes in all the policing centrals are being re-done, so everything is a mess.” Indeed, the Po-Metru workman’s truck was blocking most of the parking, to Tines’ irritation. He’d had to park his small hover-hauler around the corner in a pedestrian-only street. If he didn’t get a write up for parking illegally, he would probably get a write up for hauling a cargo crate that was far larger than regulation size for his class of vehicle. So, double write ups were on the line - and from all six enforcement divisions at that, since this area was technically zoned as part of the Coliseum district. Everything was fair game. “I’m just here to pick up a case-box of records for Tele-Metru Inc.,” he said, turning so the clerk could see his magnetic badge of the company’s logo that he wore above and to the right of his heartlight. It was, of course, a fake. “Files!” The Ta-Matoran threw his arms up in exasperation. “We just moved the all equipment upgrade crates in front of the filing shelves.” Tines almost shrugged. That wasn’t his fault. But he said nothing, and tried to look apologetic. The clerk sighed. “I’ll get a process document started, at least. If worse comes to worst, we can get the files sent over later this week.” He took out a handheld smelting tool, a faster way of taking notes than with a chisel, and a stone note tablet - a rare commodity for a Ta-Matoran. “Name?” “Tines,” Tines said, using most of his willpower to keep a grin off of his Noble Kakama. “Tines. Like the widget?” The clerk stared at him skeptically, and impatient. “The like-same.” And Tines did grin. Obviously that wasn’t his real name. The poor clerk probably thought he was being scammed, somehow. But Tines wasn’t there to scam them. He was there to rob them. With an eye-roll, the Ta-Matoran left the section blank. “Tele-Metru Inc, the Le-Metru subdivision?” he asked. The patrol of Fire Brands should be returning any minute now. Tines couldn’t help himself, and glanced at the door. “Le-Metru division?” the clerk prompted again, patience wearing thinner with each syllable. “Yes, yes. Green armor-wear and badge,” Tines gestured to his apparel. “It’s not like I’m from the Archives.” The clerk scowled. Good. The more flustered Tines could get him, the better. The Le-Matoran adjusted the magnetic pulse bracers that he wore on his forearms. They looked just like armor, if nobody actually looked. “File-records for the past seventy-five days,” Tines requested. “We keep records by the week, will that work?” Nodding, Tines asked, “There’s really no chance-way to get the files today?” They both peered into the chaotic back room as something large fell over with a resounding crash. With a wince, the clerk said, “No, sorry.” Then, he shouted back into the back room, “What in Karzahni’s twisted name is going on back there?” An indistinct, apologetic reply came muffled through the doorways, but it was drowned out by the return of the patrol squadron. Perfect. “Vohon,” the Deputy Fire Brand nodded to the clerk in greeting, as the whole patrol proceeded to ignore the Le-Matoran. “Is the armory packed up and ready to go?” “We’re close, Deputy,” the clerk said, fumbling with the gate that would let the impatient patrol members through the counter, where they waited tensely. “I see,” the Deputy Matoran said. “Is there something you need, driver?” he snapped at Tines, who had impertinently failed to cede counter space to them. “No,” Tines hunched away, as though intimidated. “That’s what I thought.” But Tines turned back with a breathing apparatus now fitted to the bottom half of his mask, and a smokescreen canister in hand. “Nothing I need, but something I want.” He slammed the canister on the counter, activating it, and hurled it at the squad of exclaiming Ta-Matoran, diving into their midst right after it. “Vohon! Get the Conservators!” the Deputy shouted. The Onu-Matoran guard around the corner would come to their aid. Whether the Deputy’s next commands were cut off by the hacking cough brought on by the smoke screen particulates, or Tines’ solid kick to his chest, it was hard to say. Another sweep of the Le-Matoran’s leg felled the disoriented Deputy, and before the Ta-Matoran knew it, his pouch of key cards had been yanked off his belt, and he heard the sounds of his fellow Fire Brands getting the wind knocked out of them around him. The panicking clerk was knocked off his feet as a Fire Brand flew across the room and slammed into him, the unlucky recipient of an amplified blow from Tines' magnetic pulse bracers. They scrambled to their feet and toward the exit. The Deputy couldn’t see anything, but he heard the sound of benches tumbling, and then, the door being ripped open. “The door!” he managed to yell, stumbling in the direction of the escaping Le-Matoran. One of his officers had made it out of the fuming building before him, and was making his way toward the Le-Matoran’s parked hover-hauler, unmistakable with its oversized cargo crate. The Deputy took up position next to his officer as the clean outside air cleared out his lungs. The last two patrol Matoran stumbled into position around the hover-hauler, all four of them leveling their handheld Crast canons at the vehicle. “You’re surrounded!” the Deputy shouted. “Get out of your vehicle!” The hauler was humming quietly. “We know you’re in there!” The Deputy signaled for his Matoran to start closing in. “It was a nice try. Not quite fast enough, though. We expected more from a Le-Matoran. Now, we don’t want to hurt you.” The two clerks staggered out of the building, finally, coughing something fierce. One was supported by the Po-Matoran workman, all three of them doubled over trying to clear their lungs. A spike of alarm shot through the Deputy. Their detainee was still in there! But the smokescreen gas didn’t seem to be lethal. An irritant and obscurant, most likely. And most of the smoke was drifting out of the building, not farther into it. The clerk from the back room, who was in better shape, took off down the street to get reinforcements. “Turn off your vehicle and step out onto the sidewalk!” the Deputy shouted, keeping his canon trained on the driver side door of the hauler. About six more steps would bring them to the vehicle. If he gave the command for all of them to fire, even at this range, there wouldn’t be much of the vehicle left intact. He didn’t want it to come to that. One step closer. “Last chance, Le-Matoran!” the Deputy shouted. “Three. Two. O-“ With a crash, the back of the cargo container flew down the block, releasing the Le-Matoran on his Nui Chaser. “Leave-move!” Tines shouted, as the clerk and the workman dove out of his way. “High-flyer with a vendetta, coming through!” He sped down the Coliseum boulevard, whooping joyfully. “Speeders! Go, go, go, go!” the Deputy yelled. He and his officers were hurriedly stowing their Crast canons and running for their own speeders. They’d have little hope catching a Nui Chaser. But they had to try. The Po-Matoran and the remaining Ta-Matoran clerk slowly got to their feet, even as the patrol squadron sped past them, shouting for reinforcements. With a low whistle, the Po-Matoran asked, “What was that all about?” The clerk shook his head, trembling a bit. “I’m completely fired.” As the smokescreen gas drifted out of the building, the Po-Matoran helped Vohon back into the building, supporting him through several hacking coughs. The few Matoran in the windows of nearby buildings watching would have been amazed to see a Po-Matoran helping a Ta-Matoran, but the escaping Nui Chaser and shouting Fire Brands speeding after him had been far more amazing. “It was an honest mistake,” the workman patted his back. “You had no way of knowing he was dangerous.” Vohon let out one final cough that shook his whole frame, and finally felt like he had all the remaining gas and particulate matter out of his system. It was unpleasant, but thankfully had passed quickly. He righted an overturned bench, and said, “Thank you. Sorry about your work getting ruined. Pakiru should be back soon, and we can get back to moving things out of your way. Once we get the detainee transfer settled, we can-” The clerk dropped to the ground, unconscious before he could get another word out. The Po-Matoran stood over him with a large workman’s wrench from his belt. “I’ll be handling that transfer, thanks.” The Po-Matoran worked quickly, locking the station door, covering the lightstones, and dragging the clerk behind the counter. Tines had done an excellent job clearing the station. Helix’s job was to get their real prize - the detainee. There were probably only a few minutes before the other clerk got back. Pushing his way carelessly through the mess of the back room, Helix made his way to the holding cell, where his quarry was huddled under the bench, still coughing a bit. “Come on, we have to go,” the Po-Matoran said, slamming on the barred door to the small room. The frightened Ta-Matoran in the cell shook his head. “I’m safe here.” “You’re clearly not!” Helix said, volume of his voice rising with urgency. Helix slipped his handheld laser-welding tool out of a loop on his belt and made short work of the lock on the door. “Rofto,” Helix said, and the Ta-Matoran started, clearly not expecting this workman to know his name. “Nuok knows you’re here. Some of his informants are Fire Brands. Come on!” Helix pulled open the cell door. At the mention of Nuok’s name, Rofto leapt up, knocking over the bench with a clatter. “Nuok is going to fire me,” Rofto said matter-of-factly, as though resigned to the grim prospect. “Not if I can help it,” Helix said. “No! Out the side. I’m parked out the side.” He pulled Rofto around and over the wreck of a storage room. A quick check to make sure they were in the clear, and Helix boosted the Ta-Matoran fugitive into the back of his truck and said, “Make yourself at home, Rofto.” And latched the door on him, cutting off a hopeful request for a lightstone to see by. The Po-Matoran hoped Rofto would have the sense to stay quiet. Helix slipped into the driver’s compartment and started up his truck. Nobody, including the two Onu-Matoran Conservators he nodded to as his truck trundled past, would blame him for packing up his job site early, after it became an active crime scene. By the time the Onu-officers discovered the unconscious clerk, Helix had long since merged onto the overhead highway. He’d take an odd exit here, stop and pick up some fuel cells there. Switch vehicles once, but probably not twice. Not this time. The last time they’d pulled off a jailbreak, Snags had been compromised during a vehicle switch, and the whole crew had had to lay low for more than half a year. They crossed the border into Po-Metru without incident, and Helix felt himself relax. Home free. And not a peep from Rofto. Helix navigated the highways of his home Metru easily, without having to think. He made his way deep into the storage district, pulling off two exits early on purpose, and taking the local roads. There were a lot less restrictions in Po-Metru, at least this sub-district. Pedestrians, Ussal carts, and motor vehicles, shared the wide streets easily. He drove around, delivering one or two small crates out of his front compartment, until the start of the next work period, and the streets emptied of pedestrians. He was pleased that their timing for their whole endeavor had worked out as close to exactly right as possible. Finally, Helix parked alongside the side of a warehouse block, backing into a loading dock carefully. Hopping out, he scanned himself into the building. “Scraps!” he cursed, as Tines jumped on him from right inside the doorway, laughing and offering a congratulatory fist bump. “How did you get here so fast??” “Nui Chaser,” the Le-Matoran said, along with an expression that said, “Duh.” “Are you sure you lost them?” “Are you sure you lost them,” Tines echoed in a mocking pitch. “I should be asking you that.” Together, they made quick work, opening the loading dock and hooking the truck up and attaching the ramp, bickering the whole time. “Your version of ‘losing’ your tail is causing a six-vehicle pileup on the freeway,” Helix snapped. “Ridiculosity!” Tines exclaimed. “It was perfectiful. We didn’t even need Bevs." He made a point of not using the typical Le-Matoran slang, instead throwing in his own occasional expressions. It was somehow worse, and something that managed to annoy both the general populace and his fellow Le-Matoran - a fact of which he was immensely proud, although he tried not to let it show. But he didn’t try too hard. Practically bouncing up the ramp, Tines flung open the door to the back of the truck. A squinting Rofto made his way a bit uneasily out of the truck and into the building. “Welcome to The Wherehouse, Rofto,” Tines said, leading the Ta-Matoran quickly into the building. “You can call me Tines. That there is Helix.” “So, smelter,” Helix said, closing up the truck and pulling the lever to retract the loading dock ramp. “How do you feel about betraying your people?" Review Topic
  6. I don't see why it can't be like this. But if we have a bigger budget, full-body motion capture on actors might work, and also give some pretty great behind-the-scenes footage. Maybe Iron Man level CGI is too big a dream, or is missing the target audience, but I think that would be great. The '06 storyline with the Piraka could be great and terrifying if they design the Skakdi right.
  7. Chapter 7: Bleeding City “Why can’t you just let me be a disappointment?” Aulto grumbled. This was an old argument, and he started it half-heartedly. He could guess what his mentor would say next. “Just copy the scrolls,” renowned scholar Ihu said, surprising his assistant-turned-apprentice. Some days Ihu would spend the time to philosophize Aulto out of his determined trench of self-pity, but not today. “I know you’re just trying to get out of scribing.” Their usual argument went something along the lines of, “Everyone expects me to fail, maybe it’s just easier to let me.” To which Ihu would raise an amused eye-ridge and reply, “Well, now. If you succeed in meeting their expectations, you can’t be a failure, now can you?” And Aulto would usually shoot back some bitter line about the rotten expectations of Metru Matoran and their society, which gave Ihu the in he needed to wax poetic to his heart-light’s content about ethics and why their work in the knowledge towers deriving values from the Great Spirit himself and working tirelessly to find ways to effect change in their city’s establishments and societal structures to build in those values. It was a 50-50 toss up from there. Aulto would either engage in discussion, playing a sharp Karzahni’s advocate when he needed for the sake of the discussion, or tune out entirely and finally get down to whatever assignment he was avoiding. The wheelchair-bound apprentice harrumph-ed, and motored himself over to his own desk, disappearing behind the stacks of blank tablets and fading scrolls from the Centuries of Lore. Of course, Aulto had just about spent more time complaining about copying outdated information and theories from the decaying scrolls onto stone tablets than it may have taken him to just do the work. He was determined not to be brilliant, and it was an act that only Metru Nui’s foremost scholar had the wisdom and fortitude to see through. “The important question, Aulto,” Ihu knew he would ask one day, when Aulto was ready, “is whether or not you expect yourself to be a disappointment.” Ihu shook his head and made his way to his own workspace. He himself had a mount of scrolls to translate, as well as some rare tomes to start documenting. Not even a quarter hour into their work, Aulto sent a reference aide out with a file request, and the unfortunate aide was slammed in the mask on his way out the door as said door burst open, letting in a storm that was Turaga Arrakio. “Aides, assistants! Out!” the Turaga barked, harsh syllables echoing from the crystalline walls and high-vaulted ceiling of the pinnacle chamber of the knowledge tower - Ihu’s preferred study. Ihu gave a slight incline of his head when his various assistants looked toward him for permission, and said guardedly, “Turaga. What brings you to my study at this unexpected hour?” “Grave dealings, I’m afraid,” Arrakio murmured. The last of the extraneous Ko-Matoran shut the study doors behind them. “Hello, Aulto. I’m glad to see you getting along well after your accident,” the Turaga added cursorily as the apprentice scholar steered his wheeled chair out from his workspace. If being chosen as Ihu’s apprentice hadn’t drawn the ire of the other aides and aspiring scholars who made up half of the Metru, being privy to closed-door meetings with the Turaga and the Scholar Nui surely had. Not enough to be Ihu’s favorite. Had to polish the Turaga's armor, too. “Thank you, Turaga,” Aulto nodded deferentially. “Shall I call for the others?” The Turaga’s presence in the Silent Metru usually only meant one thing. “No, no need to call together the whole Optimacy. This won’t take long. I trust you will disseminate information as needed.” “I really can’t keep bending over backwards at your every whim to run your information network,” Ihu said curtly. As one of the Turaga’s oldest friends in the city, Ihu was one of the few Matoran who could speak candidly with impunity with the city’s sovereign. “I do have a rather secure career as a scholar that I happen to love, and I don’t want it jeopardized for espionage.” He grimaced ever so slightly, as if that last word tasted sour as it left his mouth. Because, who were they fooling? That's exactly what it was. Some of it, corporate espionage. “There’s been a bombing at the Great Temple,” Arrakio said, ignoring Ihu. “All evidence points to the Rioteers.” Ihu scowled. He had made a conscious effort and spent many hours rationalizing to himself, to make sure his position as the Great City’s undisputed foremost and most respected scholar didn’t make him conceited. As one who spent so much time up on the top, most esoteric floors of the Knowledge Towers, Ihu knew the moment he used that vantage point to start looking down on others, he was lost. Work was not more important that brothers or sisters in need, nor the city itself, which was why he agreed to work with the Optimacy network in the first place. But as the conflict in the city multiplied and grew more and more convoluted, simple, one-size-fits-all solutions evaporated. The time and patience it took to craft optimal solutions for everyone was simply not available - by the time any semblance of an answer was reached, the problem had hopelessly outgrown it. Turaga’s brusque manner and ever-increasing demands had only grown over the decades, growing in abrasiveness with the tension in the city, and it did have a way of needling through Ihu's armor. Yes, they were old friends, but they weren’t close friends. Not anymore. “All our information indicates that malcontent activity from Po-Matoran is focused on disrupting and rerouting supply chains away from Ta-Metru and Onu-Metru. Why, for all the pure protodermis in Artakha, would they go after the Ga-Matoran?” “That’s what we need to find out,” the Turaga said. He turned sharply to Aulto. “We still have no idea who’s behind all this chaos in Po-Metru?” Aulto’s branch of Optimacy work was focused on their stone-brothers. He’d gone in, a few decades ago, back when he was just an aide, with the cover story of studying the aesthetics employed by the sculptors. No one would have guessed that his research would end with both legs paralyzed when the assembly village where he was hosted was suddenly turned into Po-Metru’s newest canyon, courtesy of an enraged Troller worm. Aulto was lucky to be alive. Many said he should have died - even said it to his face. 'Worthless ‘facto.’ ‘Should have been widgets.' 'Waste of protodermis.’ Pity. That’s the only reason Aulto had been chosen for the coveted role of apprentice to the city’s most prestigious scholar. That’s what they said. “We still haven’t found their headquarters,” Aulto reported, tired frustration surfacing in his admittance. “That is, if they even have one. And my contact in the Garrison has gone silent. I have a friend who’s a Voweler I’ll have to reach out to. I’ll get a report to you by midweek, Turaga.” The Assemblers, Engineers, Inventors, and Originator’s Unison of Po-Metru, also called the A.E.I.O.U, or just the Vowelers were the next most likely group to know anything about supply lines and hold any useful information. Whether or not they’d be willing to talk was an entirely different matter. The instigators in Po-Metru were proving surprisingly and almost bafflingly difficult to identify, much less pin down. “You do good work, Aulto,” the Turaga said. He meant it kindly, and as a word of thanks, Aulto was sure, but it sounded quite patronizing. I never asked for your favor, Aulto thought at the Turaga’s back. "Ihu,” Arrakio said, having turned back to the eminent scholar. "I want redoubled scrutiny into any illicit Le-Metru activity. We know they’ve made nice with Po-Metru. I want a cross-reference on incidents and disturbances from the past two years. It’s not inconceivable that their radicals could collaborate. ” Were he more daring, Aulto would have scoffed aloud at this suggestion. If the Turaga had ever met a Po-Matoran or a Le-Matoran, he would know they were too similar and too different in all the wrong ways. While working together as part of a business deal to take down a common competitor wasn’t out of the realm of possibility, deliberate collusion to not just organize but also implement an entire inter-Metru embargo and calculated economic upheaval that would settle in their favor was an entirely different game. And yet, the all the whispers and pieces that were slowly, slowly falling together seemed to be pointing in that direction. “Improbable,” Ihu said measuredly. “But stranger things have happened.” “Regardless, something is going on,” Arrakio said. “Rumors of a Toa are circulating again, both in Po-Metru, and now in Le-Metru. That can’t be a coincidence.” “What?” Aulto started. “And Le-Metru now?” “It was part of Jaa’s report two weeks ago,” Ihu said quietly. Two weeks ago, Aulto had been at the Physician’s School in Ga-Metru. They were still trying to get his legs working again. There were many a biomechanics student hoping Aulto would be their big breakthrough. And for his part, Aulto didn’t mind being their lab Kinloka. If there were a chance, however small, that they could fix him, he’d take it. Anything for his fellow Ko-Matoran to see him as one of them, not just an unfortunate allocation of resources on wheels. Because they were his fellow Ko-Matoran. He was one of them, despite what some of them said, and surely many more of them believed. “Ihu, if you would accompany me to the records room,” Arrakio turned for the door. “I have a public address to make this afternoon.” Pouring over old addresses, especially from times of prosperity, in hopes of reminding this floundering city what it had been and what it could be, seemed as good a place to start as any. Aulto lazily flipped a hand in acknowledgment to the Turaga’s equally dismissive wave goodbye, and shrugged at Ihu’s non-committal, broad gesture that said, “I have no idea when I’ll be back.” Fine by me, Aulto thought. He’d look up that report from Jaa he’d missed. He'd never admit it to his mentor, but he really did love his work with the Optimacy. He thought he liked scholar work, which is how he ended up in a Knowledge Tower to begin with - and why not? It's where everyone wanted to be. But scholar's work paled in comparison to his assignments for the Optimacy. He should also follow up with the two other Optimacy agents who reported to him. They wouldn’t be happy that there had been yet another meeting with just the Turaga and Ihu. And Aulto. For the nineteenth time that day, Aulto wondered what being a normal Ko-Matoran would be like. Then, maybe he’d be free to overthink the things that mattered, such as his work. Perhaps he’d actually find the dry Centuries of Lore fascinating. No. He stopped himself. He was a normal Ko-Matoran. He wasn’t supposed to be widgets in someone’s pouch, or part of some cargo hauler somewhere, despite what some other said. He wasn’t supposed to be decommissioned at the end of the millennia, like he’d heard two of the aides saying earlier that week. He just knew that he was supposed to be, and that was the truth of it. But what did it matter, if it was true or not, if nobody believed it? ‘Facto. It was was a pejorative for a small number of Matoran in the city who, up until about fifty years ago, were completely anonymous. But, in an attempt to blackmail the Turaga into moving some policies along faster and blocking other edicts here and there, an Onu-Matoran had stolen the names of the thirty-seven Matoran out of the Coliseum’s supposedly secure files, and published them. These thrity-seven Matoran weren’t created by the Great Spirit at the grand dawn of the world. These thirty-seven Matoran had been commissioned over the years by the city and by the Turaga to replace those they’d lost over the years. The city’s first Turaga, the one before Arrakio, had commissioned roughly a dozen. Aulto, after looking through the files for himself and cross-referencing dates and locations, knew he was the first factory-made Matoran that Turaga Arrakio had ‘created’, so to speak. That’s where the term ‘facto came from. Factory. Manufactured. Fake. There wasn’t a special term for the thrity-seven of them, because they weren’t supposed to be special. But when the Ta-Matoran and Po-Matoran escalated their feud to affect the whole city, protodermis in all forms was becoming more and more scarce. Spare widgets were more and more difficult to come by. Matoran who had worked their way up to their own residences suddenly had to start moving back to the city-issued, low-quality, crowded tenements. And then the sea-gates closed and imports stopped. Matoran lost the little luxuries they’d come to find comforting. Then those in the out-of-city shipping industry lost their livelihoods, and the inter-Metru trade couldn’t handle the influx of Matoran needing work. Then the list of thirty-seven was published. The last thing the city needed was more Matoran to support. It’s not like the Turaga could just wave his hand and replace the dear brothers and sisters that had died over the centuries. It was almost like the only thing mattered was output, production, numbers. And yet, there were thirty-seven concrete pieces of evidence saying that yes, that’s exactly what had happened. Shortly after that, Aulto had lost his legs. The subtle pity he had been met with after the list was first published became much less subtle, then. But it was when Ihu had named him apprentice scholar that the resentment had sprung up. And it hadn’t stopped growing. Aulto wasn’t sure if it ever would. Why should someone who had begun life as a support beam, or perhaps the hull of some trading vessel, be the one chosen by the Scholar Nui to excel? Well, he was sure others said, it’s not like he can really do anything else. I mean, just look at him. Poor thing. None of the other thirty-seven seemed to be quite in his predicament. “Aulto,” Ihu had said one day, coming over and carefully rolling up the neglected scroll in front of his apprentice. It was nearly suns-down, and it was only scholar, apprentice, and two cleaning drones humming along the floor. “I shortlisted you to be my apprentice long before that list was ever made public. And I chose you because of how you handled the adversity.” Ihu chuckled here, and ventured, “Ko-Metru wants your job, Po-Metru took your legs, but here you are.” Aulto had glanced at him. Ihu usually let him alone when he’d thought himself into a near-catatonic state. The scholar continued, “Even if you don’t get another widget’s worth of work done this year, I’m not going to change my mind. While I can’t say I know what you’re going through, or even that I understand you, I know what it’s like when nobody thinks you can succeed, including yourself. But I was given the Great Spirit’s second chance when I was in that place, and it’s a dishonor to him if I don’t do the same for you. “But please,” Ihu added, tying the scroll and giving him two quick pats on the shoulder. “Don’t actually go a whole year without getting any work done.” And the scholar had retired for the night, leaving one lightstone uncovered for him. Aulto still hated himself for not being able to think of anything to say to his mentor in that moment. But he had resolved to at least work harder, for Ihu’s sake. And it was that resolve and that work that pushed him away from his still untouched scribing work and out of their Knowledge Tower, heading out of the Cold Metru entirely. “Well, um. I’m pretty certain-sure you didn’t kill the Great Spirit,” Larker told the frazzled Ta-Matoran beside him. “That’s impossible.” Rofto shook his head adamantly. “It’s not. Because I did. I did it. I didn’t mean to. I didn’t know. I’m sorry. Tell them I’m sorry. I killed him.” Larker was at a loss for words. He looked to his new friend, if he could call her that, perched on the stairs. ‘How?’ Erylist mouthed. “Rofto,” Larker asked. “How did you…kill the Great Spirit?” The Ta-Matoran whimpered, and hugged his knees tighter to his chest, hiding his face against them. “You won’t get in bad-trouble, you can tell me. We just want to hurry-help the city, and you.” “There was a Toa stone,” he mumbled into his knees. “I had to take it to the Great Temple. He said.” “Who said, Rofto?” the Le-Matoran prompted. “The overseer. He gave me the bag,” “Overseer? Which-what overseer?” “The overseer,” Rofto waved an arm vaguely, still not looking up. “He never said the Toa stone was for me. But never said it wasn’t. I tried to look for someone else there, to give it to. I did. But there was no one. just wanted to do the right thing! I just wanted to make a difference outside the firepits! I would have given it up, if it were meant for someone else!” He looked up at Larker, pleading. “Never-worry, we believe you.” When Rofto fearfully looked at the Midnighter on the stairs, he amended, “I believe you. I can’t speak for her.” Erylist watched them silently. “A Toa of Shadow,” Rofto whispered. “Uh, no. I don’t think-believe she is,” Larker said, although he wasn’t entirely sure. He still didn’t know what had happened at the Great Temple. “Rofto, what happened after you took your hero-stone to the Temple?” “Mata Nui knew! He got angry. He knew the moment I believed the power was for me. I was selfish and I was never meant to be a Toa hero, I should never have listened on storytelling nights,” he ended in a sob. Larker tried to calm him, which took several minutes. “What do you mean, fire-brother, that Mata Nui got angry-mad?” “He knew I wasn’t supposed to be in his sacred temple, but I was there anyways. Bad things happened, because he was trying to stop me being there. I was just trying to help the city.” He trailed off, giving valiant effort toward fending off another attack of sobs. “Bad things?” Larker repeated, confused, and really wishing he’d followed the crowds to Ga-Metru that morning. “From the little I’ve heard, there was a bombing at the Great Temple last night. I found him not far away, shortly after. He kept saying ‘I didn’t know’, and ‘I’m sorry’, and that he didn’t mean to," Eryilst said, not moving for fear of making Rofto’s condition worse. She also had to block the stairs, because impatient Subi had almost fallen down them twice, now. “The overseer,” Larker murmured. He patted the Ta-Matoran gently on the back until he’d calmed down again. “Rofto, can you say-tell us who the overseer is? He’s your overseer?” Rofto glanced from Larker to Erylist and back a few times. “I can’t. He’ll find out.” “I’m not scarier than the overseer? A Toa of Shadow?” Erylist asked the Ta-Matoran, addressing him directly for the first time in the questioning. She was slightly offended by Rofto’s presumption, but wasn’t against using his mistake to her advantage, if it could be had. “He’d fire me,” Rofto said softly, eyes wide. “That’s ridiculous,” Erylist snapped. “Your entire city could be at stake, and you’re worried about your job?” “No, he’d fire me,” he whispered, eyes wide in fear. Erylist glared at him. “I’m sure you could find other-“ “His work-job is in the firepits, he said,” Larker realized, understanding what Rofto meant. “Have you been to a firepit?” The Midnighter shook her head ‘no’. “Big jet-geysers of fire for melting all sort-types of protodermis to reuse. And melting Matoran, if something goes oops-bad. Careful-time a push-trip right, in goes a poor worker, the whoosh! It’s just another sad-accident. Fired.” Suddenly, Rofto sat upright and turned his entire torso toward Larker. “The Fire Brands. I have to go to them. Tell them everything. They can protect me. I have to get to the Fire Brands.” Larker shrugged when Erylist looked at him questioningly. He didn’t know much about Ta-Metru’s enforcement division. “You need to rest and heal, before you go anywhere,” she told him, and Roto hunched back down under her slit-pupiled glare. “Now, where did you- hey!” The Midnighter flinched and whirled suddenly, somehow all in one motion, as a shrill screech from Subi tore her attention from the Matoran. “Get back here!” Faster than the eye could follow, she had bounded up the few stairs and back up through the floor-hatch, after the quickly-escaping nipper. In a slight panic, Larker followed. He didn’t trust the Ta-Matoran to stay put, so he dragged Rofto after him. By the time they made it out of the small underground chamber, they saw Erylist’s tail disappearing out the door and into the deserted street. Although Larker was muttering some exclusively Le-Matoran profanities to himself, Rofto was replying incorrectly but conversationally to them. But, to the Le-Matoran’s unabashed relief, he could see both nipper and Midnighter crouched on the corner of the block outside. Erylist stood tall, craning her neck toward the center of the city. “What is that?” Larker hushed Rofto as he caught up to her. He could barely hear the broadcast from where they were, on the outskirts of the city. “It’s the city anthem-song. There are a few broadcast station-screens all over each Metru. It means the Turaga has word-news for us.” “Faithful Matoran. It grieves me to my core, the reason I must address you today. In the past, we have together weathered storms, and always, always, come out stronger in the end. The strong-hearted Matoran of this city - you, have found ways to stay unified even as the entire world seemed to crumble away under conquests before our very eyes. In this time of fear, I must remind you that we are still the same city. We have it in us somewhere to stand together once more.” The Turaga’s broadcast had immediately silenced the jam-packed plaza outside the remains of the Great Temple. Tengi was wedged on the outskirts of a group of her fellow Ga-students, and was uncomfortably aware of the disgruntled assortment of Le-Matoran she was jostling against. She tired her very hardest to not make eye contact with anyone at all. Most seemed to be stretching and turning toward the schools, where the nearest telescreen and the broadcast speakers were playing. Some on the edge of the crowd were making their way in that direction. But if any in the middle began to move, it set of an irritated chain reaction of Matoran who just couldn’t move, and trying to negotiate your way out resulted in being hushed in varying degrees of aggression. “…not to alarm you, but those who don’t know simply must. There is no use pretending we are a utopia. This city is full of real Matoran with real issues. The destruction of our sacred Great Temple has made that abundantly clear. I never dreamed that under any circumstances that I would have to clarify that violence and destruction of both public and personal property are not acceptable ways to seek a resolution. I urge any Matoran with information pertaining to today’s tragedy to report it to your respective law enforcement divisions. I assure you that a collaboration will be put together to mount a full investigation into this and other incidents. We will not tolerate further incidents.” “All he does is tolerate all this rust-rot,” one of the nearby Le-Matoran scoffed. He’d made no attempt to keep his voice down. There was an assortment of agreements and grumblings, but all were shushed by a Ga-Matoran who was furiously scribbling notes at the head of Tengi’s group. “You don’t want to get on her bad side,” a student beside Tengi whispered, nodding toward the imperious note-taker. Tengi was ninety percent sure she was looking at the notorious Philosophy and Societies professor, Nokama. Most students were aware of the teacher’s rather assertive stance on all this inter-Metru conflict, even if they’d never taken a class with her. “Pah,” another Le-Matoran from the same group snorted. “Get a load of this book-drone. Can’t even give the Turaga the time of day. Gotta stuff-cram in more notes to brainwash all the-" “Shut it, Matau!” yet another Le-Matoran snapped, even as a flurry of protests from both sides erupted, drowning out the Turaga. Tengi had never seen a Ga-Matoran throw a punch before, but she was sure she would have seen the exception that moment, if a small group of Archivists hadn’t forced the bristling Le-Matoran and Ga-Matoran apart. It wasn’t entirely clear how a stray Po-Matoran got caught up between the moving sections in the crowd, but he wasn’t happy about it, and he managed to drop two Archivists before the entire section fell into uproar. Tengi had been pushed over, had her wrist stepped on not once, but twice, and tripped over too many times to count before other Matoran, mostly law enforcement wielding batons and threatening to ignite road flares to keep the more bellicose brawlers at bay, had separated and settled the scuffle. Tengi stumbled to her feet. “I didn’t do anything,” she insisted to an Onu-Matoran with a law enforcement magnet-badge gleaming on his armor, and he moved on, looking surly. Thankfully the crowd had thinned enough to make room for the small brawl, and she had space to make her way back out toward the safer edges of the crowd. Many of her fellow students had done the same, although they’d been much faster than she. “What did he say?” she asked a classmate beside her. The student shook her head sadly. “The whole temple district is off limits for investigation, effective tonight, and closed down indefinitely. That means the whole School of Philosophy and Society.” Tengi sighed, wincing as she flexed her trampled wrist. She’d have to find a new place to live, without school. The city’s anthem was fading in, beneath the Turaga’s words. He was already wrapping up his speech. "It’s up to us to keep ours a city worth fighting for, and we can’t do so if we remain divided as we are. We are Metru Nui, the Great City. We have long stood at the helm of the world, leaders in innovation, thought, and progress. We cannot afford to forget who we are. The world cannot afford it. "We must guard the virtues closest to the heart of the Great Spirit close to our own. Unity. Duty. Destiny.” The public address ended, for the first time in Matorans’ memories, without a resonant, ardent echo of the three virtues from the crowd. Instead, they trickled away gingerly, unsure what new bad news they would wake up to the next day, but somehow sure it would be there. Review Topic
  8. Chapter 6: Patsy The multi-colored crowd had taken on a consciousness of its own. It was unsettled, shifting and murmuring uneasily. One practically needed a Mask of Intangibility to wade through the tension. One wrong glance at the wrong Matoran could set off a brawl. All around, Matoran pressed in, trying to get a glimpse at the wreckage of the once-glorious Great Temple. Ginsa, standing with a group of colleagues, could only see smoke rising somewhere just off the coast. She had come straight from her synthetics lab, curious as to why none of the students she was tutoring for the semester showed up. In fact, almost the entire school building was empty. She’d joined a small trickle of Ga-Matoran, and they’d soon enough found themselves drawn to this chaos. The Cobalt Guard, in conjunction with the Fire Brands and the Conservators had barricaded the boulevard, but that didn’t stop the city from crowding into the adjacent streets. More pockets of the law enforcement divisions had placed themselves within the crowd, de-escalating a brawl or skirmish occasionally before it could fan out into a full-blown riot. Snippets of only the most obnoxious could be heard through the unsettled din of the crowds, shifting anxiously. “It’s a sign from the Great Spirit!” someone shouted. “No, you dolt! It’s a sign from the sculptors!” another replied. “They’re taking us all to Karzahni with them!” “Watch your mouth, icicle-farmer!” “Big talk, coming from a failed test driver!” And not far away, “Can you believe it?” “Where’s the Turaga? Why isn’t he doing anything?” “He died in the explosion, that’s what I heard!” “He lives in the Coliseum, Ruki-brain!” There was a surge in Ginsa’s section of the mass of Matoran, as a cluster of Le-Matoran lunged at two Fire Brands who had been jostled too close for their liking. Many nearby stumbled and fell, and more than a few blows were exchanged, before Po-Matoran and Ga-Matoran pulled the two groups apart. It was getting hard to breathe. Ginsa elbowed those around her, trying to get some space. She found herself surrounded by unfamiliar masks, the full glare of the twin suns magnifying the sense of unfamiliarity and hostility everywhere. This was not Metru Nui. Not the Metru Nui she knew. “I heard a Cobalt got crushed trying to salvage some artifacts,” a Ko-Matoran a few feet away said to his brother beside him. “I saw. The medics said she’ll be lucky if she only loses her legs,” the other said grimly. Other voices began to chime in. “This feuding is getting out of hand. Why is nobody doing anything?” “Obviously someone did try to do something! That’s what this was! This is why we can’t trust anyone!” “Next thing you know, the Archivists will be tunneling up into our homes and the Po-Matoran will be throwing hostages to the canyon creatures for sport.” There was a rough couple minutes of jostling and accusations and short-tempered outbursts as a large troop of Po-Matoran from the Po-Metru Garrison marched in. They remained stoic and did an admirable job ignoring those around them. A show of force? “Watch it!” Ginsa pushed back at an Onu-Matoran beside her. “It wasn’t me!” He raised his arms defensively. It wasn't me, either, she thought. Why did she feel like it was? All of it? Ginsa realized with sudden clarity that she had to get out of here. This was her fault. Nuok promised nobody would get hurt. But he was trash, barely fit for his own incinerators. Why would his promises be any better? If only she had known. She should have known. She cursed herself. She could have pushed harder, asked him what he was really planning. She never would have agreed to this. This was a scene straight out out of Karzahni. The synthetics student whipped her head this way and that, trying to find some way out. Armor, limbs, masks, bright reflections off of all of them, blinding. The air. They were using up all the air around her. There were entirely too many Matoran around. Matoran that would no doubt turn and tear her to shreds if they knew, if they suspected, that she’d been the cause of this tragic havoc. Or, at least, she’d made way for it to happen, let it happen. It was the same, surely. Surely? There! That unmistakable flash of crimson. It was Nuok. It had to be. He was here to expose her. Set her up as the fall-Matoran. She knew it. “I have to get out of here,” she said. She never knew if it was said aloud or not. Ginsa tried as hard as she could to find enough air, but there really just wasn’t enough to go around. This was probably why the Turaga never hosted events in the Coliseum anymore. So many Matoran. She flinched, as the shouting around her became louder. The shoves and bumps were becoming unbearable. Somewhere. There had to be space somewhere. “Hey.” Ginsa yelped involuntarily as another student came up beside her, gently putting an arm around her. “You don’t look well,” the student said. “Come on, let’s get somewhere less crowded.” “Crowded,” Ginsa repeated, still casting about desperately for a way out. “I don’t like it either,” the student said. “I never dreamed it would get this crowed so fast. Excuse me, sorry. Sorry, I need to get through.” The student, soft-spoken as she was, miraculously was able to make her way toward the outskirts of the crowd, a slightly hyperventilating Ginsa safely in tow. Before Ginsa knew it, they were sitting on one of the low canal walls, and the student was handing a cup of water to her. “Here.” Ginsa accepted it numbly. The student patted her back kindly, slowly, urging her to sip, not gulp, and just to count up and down for a little while. “Maybe count by twenty-sevens, or something complicated,” she suggested. Somewhere in the mid 1,200’s, Ginsa finally was able to focus on the cup in her hands, and take a tentative sip. And another. It was difficult. She hadn’t even noticed how much she had been trembling. “Wha-What’s your name?” Ginsa asked her helper, too exhausted to be ashamed or embarrassed, or even wonder what had happened to her. Slowly, everything began to come back into focus. She hadn’t realized it had ever slipped out of focus. “I'm...you don’t remember me?” the Ga-Matoran asked, trying not to let the little bit of hurt show on her mask. “I’m Hahli. You were an assistant teacher in two of my classes last year.” Ginsa shook her head, still a bit dazed. “I can’t remember every student.” “I understand.” Hahli nodded, and refilled Ginsa’s water. Everything this little Hahli was doing for her, for no reason, began to sink in, just a bit. It was strange. Did she expect something in return? Better grades the next time Ginsa taught one of her classes? A position on a research team? Trying to pin an ulterior motive was exhausting, Ginsa found, and she just couldn’t find the energy to wrack her brains to dig more. But if the student was being nice, it was probably best to at least try and say something nice in return. The strict and unspoken give and take of niceties was so tiring. "If I saw your handwriting, I’d recognize it,” Ginsa tried. It had always been one of her favorite parts of being an assistant teacher, grading the students’ assignments. “It’s insane, isn’t it?” the student nodded at the crowd instead, not knowing exactly what else to say. “The crowds?” They were now safely two blocks away. “How frightened everyone is.” Ginsa bobbed her head, reigning in her frazzled thoughts. Something the Matoran beside her said reminded her vaguely of something else. “Wait! Are you okay? Where are you going?” Hahli stood with Ginsa, as the latter stumbled to her feet. “I can help you.” “The library,” Ginsa said, with no intention of going there. “I need to go to the library.” The student nodded. “It’s quiet there. Will you be okay?” She stood back, as Ginsa shook her off, clearly wanting to help, still. But a flustered ‘thank you’ and dismissive wave were the only response Hahli got. She watched until Ginsa turned and took the road toward the block of buildings that served as the School’s library. It was the same road that would take Ginsa to Ta-Metru. Larker frowned at his directive tablet. “That can’t be sure-right,” he said, and showed Subi the instructions. “See? It’s an outdated storage district. Is this a prank-joke? Am I supposed to test-prove myself?” The Ussal nipper blinked at him and then decided turning in circles would be more worthwhile than listening to him. As an employee for Phase Dragon Enterprises, he’d signed on to run some errands for them, which he didn’t mind. It couldn’t be that much different from when he’d had his own delivery business. Except he had to give up a quarter of the profit and wear a stupid Phase Dragon Enterprises badge when he was on the job. The Le-Matoran hopped out of the flatbed of his leased Phase Dragon cargo hauler and walked around the rear of the small truck. He held down the small lever that lowered the loading ramp from underneath the bed of the truck. The delivery the company had given him was a single, moderate sized crate of unspecified equipment to an address in an old storage sub-district. It hadn’t been used by businesses since the Moto-Hubs had been built. There were mostly outdated vehicle parts and spent energy cells stored there, as far as he was aware. Sometimes Matoran from the closest residential district had drone races there, but otherwise, it was pretty abandoned. For good reason to, it was so far away - all the way on the tail of Le-Metru. The tail was the city’s biggest peninsula, or at least, all the Le-Matoran believed so. The only real business there were shipping businesses, who ran actual ships, as in, in the water. And, since the seagates had closed, not much business came through that way. Sometimes, when there was a new class of airship haulers being produced, they used the huge lots and crashpads there to test air vehicles. But again, with all the trouble in the city, time and energy that would have been spent on new inventions had been channeled into … other things. “You’re no use-help,” Larker grunted, having bodily shoved the equipment crate up the ramp himself. “We’ve gotta get you into the Ga-Metru schools for some Ussal lesson-classes.” The nipper, dizzy from his circle-spinning, had flopped himself on the cockpit floor of the cargo hauler, panting slightly, and chittering to himself. He couldn’t even be bothered to watch as Larker strapped down the crate, double-checked the foremost treads on the hauler, and hopped into the control cockpit with him. “You’re getting to old-big for this,” the Matoran told his pet. Subi was probably due for a molt soon. It was a messy, smelly process, and Larker was not looking forward to it. The Matoran deftly threw his hauler into gear. One hand controlled the throttle, and the other controlled the steering mechanism. It was the simplest vehicle control interface currently in model. He merged into one of the lane designated for business travel on the highway, and whistled at the traffic headed in the other direction, in all three lanes - personal, business, and expedited. Most highways had multiple business lanes, as that was probably more than eighty percent of the city’s traffic. Today, there was an insane amount of traffic headed north. Thankfully, that was the opposite direction of where he had to go. As he drove, there were more and more vehicles piling onto the opposite lane. Twice, he saw vehicles ahead of him exit, only to see them merging into the north-running route, a few kio down the road. Was there some sort of event he’d not heard about? Perplexed, he drove on. He should have asked the Matoran in the Moto Hub when he stopped by to get his assignment. But, he remembered, it had been unusually empty, barebones staffing, if he’d had to guess. Little traffic going his direction afforded him speedy travel, but he balked at the idea of the return trip. Perhaps it would have cleared, by that time. Larker double checked the address on the directive tablet, and pulled off the main highway down an exit ramp that led straight to a large, mostly empty parking lot. He made short work unloading the crate, but had some trouble trying to load it onto the small, flatbed dolly he’d taken with him from the Moto-Hub. One day, hopefully within the next few molts, Subi would be able to start helping him with things like this. “Come on, little shell-buddy. You can’t stay here alone,” Larker said. “I know it’s bright-day, but still.” Subi pretended not to hear him. “You’re a wreck-wretch,” Larker grumbled, and began pushing the crate toward the pedestrian street, waving as the one other cargo-hauler in the lot began trundling toward the highway. It looked like it was carrying away crates of debris to be melted down. “Hey, wait!” Larker called, running toward the driver, who he vaguely recognized. “Do you know what’s happening? All the rush-traffic, headed north?” The driver shifted his hauler into idling mode, and hopped out. “I was wondering the like-same. I heard it’s all headed toward Ga-Metru.” “Ga-Metru? Is it a skiff race?” Larker asked. “No, we probably would have heard about it, you know, for move-hauling?” the other driver shook his head. The cargo haulers of the city, or at least of Le-Metru, tried to keep one another in the loop about good job opportunities. “If it’s something we should know-hear, I’m sure the Turaga will telecast it.” Larker found himself nodding in agreement. “When did you start work-hauling for the Enterprise, anyways?” the other driver asked. “When the Archives cancelled all their business with us,” Larker told him. This was one of those interactions where they both recognized each other, but clearly neither could remember the other’s name. But clearly this other driver remembered more about Larker than Larker remembered about him. And now he felt bad. Larker hated these types of interactions, no matter how pleasant otherwise. “How are you holding out?” “Not too poor-bad. I’ve picked up lots of work with our stone-brothers,” the other said. “I can do some asking around for you, if you’re interested.” “I’ll safe-keep that in mind, thanks,” Larker said, nodding. “Happy-safe driving!” “Happy-safe driving,” the other driver returned the farewell. It was a commonly used irony between Le-Matoran drivers, who understood each other well enough on the road, but were often considered reckless and a threat to public tranquility outside their own Metru. And, what the rest of the city would consider ‘safe’ driving is not what a Le-Matoran would consider ‘happy’. Thus, ‘happy’ came first, and ‘safe’ came second. “Oh, now you’re up.” Larker shook his head as Subi skittered across the parking lot toward him. “No, I didn’t leave-forget you. Come on, let’s get this delivery over-done and go see what all that clamor-fuss in the north is about.” It took Larker a good half an hour to find the address, everything looked the same. Subi was content to follow along without a complaint. They heard one more debris-clearing hauler in the distance, but that was about it. Larker hesitantly tried a padlocked door, before realizing he’d gone one street too far, and had to back track. Reaching the right address, and mildly irritated, he knocked on the metallic door to the large storage building. There was one window in the door, tinted, and high-up rows of windows ringing the one-story building, and three large bay doors. After a moment, he knocked again, louder. His directive tablet didn’t have any lock code to get into the building, nor instructions to simply drop the crate and pick up his payment elsewhere. Sighing, he tried pushing the door open, then realized it was a pull door, and it was open. He knocked one more time, then pulled open the door, wheeling the crate through first, and followed. He’d just leave it inside the door, and go ask the sub-district administrator from the Enterprise what he was supposed to do. It was a mostly empty building, with a wide open floor broken up only by the support pillars, and some crates, pallets, and barrels piled here and there, mostly along the walls. “Hello?” he called. “I have one box-crate from Phase Dragon Enterprises?” The sub-division administrator said that this was a delivery run they did twice a year. “Hello?” Larker was almost knocked over as Subi scampered past him, gibbering excitedly. “Hey! This isn’t an adventure-trip! Get back here!” Larker stomped after the nipper. It was probably his fault for not getting the young crab enough exercise. But, if Subi were big enough to help with errands, it wouldn’t be a problem. “Subi! That’s not yours! Get away from those barrels! Come back, if you know what’s healthy-good for you!” The nipper was running in circles around a pillar surrounded by crates and barrels. “I don’t want to happy-play, okay? I just want to-“ Larker yelped, and almost fainted when a dark shape dropped from the ceiling right in front of him, and slammed him into the ground. “Who are you? How did you find this place?” his assailant demanded. Whoever, whatever she was, she was a good deal larger than he, and much stronger. Subi was squealing, somewhere nearby. The shocked Le-Matoran sputtered inarticulately, trying to get a good look at whatever was pinning him down. “How did you find this place?” she growled, shaking him. “De-delivery,” he gasped, and waved his directive tablet weakly. His assailant snatched it, glanced at it, and discarded it. “Who are you?” she repeated. “Larker! Just Larker. Just a happy-safe delivery driver, trying to survive,” he cried. “I’d really like to survive.” He felt the pressure holding him down, over his heartlight, disappear. Carefully, he sat up, and saw his assailant crouching, watching him closely, as if trying to assess every individual muscle-fibre twitch. The two stared at each other warily. “Your Ussal isn’t very brave,” she finally said. “He also said you’re an impatient brakas with him, but he likes you anyways, and says not to hurt you.” Still flabbergasted, Larker said nothing. She watched him through slit-pupiled, green eyes, undoubtedly ready to spring into action, tip of her tail twitching in anticipation. “Why would you close-listen to a silly nipper?” Larker asked, although, as he said it, realized it was not the most important question he could have asked. But she seemed to find it amusing, at least. “He may be silly, but Ussal don’t usually follow bad characters. Not willingly.” Immediate danger passed, the nipper in question had resumed his romp around that same pillar. “I don’t know what got into him,” Larker muttered, mostly to himself. This stranger didn’t seem to care about the delivery, and Larker doubted he would be getting paid. He certainly didn’t want to ask. The stranger sighed, looking pensive. “Larker, I’m going to have to ask you for help.” The Matoran didn’t quite feel he had the option of saying ‘no’. “Larker, my name is Erylist, and I’m trying to help your city. But I can’t do it alone. Things are escalating quickly, many lives are on the line.” She offered him a hand up. “Are you a Toa-hero?” he asked. She let out a short laugh. “No. But I’ve worked with Toa before.” “I didn’t think so. A Toa-hero probably wouldn’t lead off with the smash-slamming into the ground,” the Matoran said, and finally took her hand. Erylist found this amusing, and hauled him to his feet. She apologized quickly, and then asked carefully, “Have you heard anything recently about the Great Temple?” “The Temple? No, why?” Even as he asked, he started to get a bad feeling in his gut. The endless traffic headed north - headed toward Ga-Metru. “You haven’t heard?” She looked surprised. “Well, something happened there, last night. I think I know someone who witnessed it all firsthand. I need your help, because he won’t talk to me.” “I don’t blame him, if that’s how you meet-greet people,” Larker grumbled, dusting himself off. Erylist laughed at this, and Larker felt his terror slipping away slowly. He was also intrigued. What was going on with the Great Temple? What did this powerful stranger know about it? “I’ll keep that in mind for next time,” she chuckled. “Shall we?” She turned toward where Subi was still running loops and began walking. “You can’t just say-tell?” Larker asked warily, but followed, despite himself. Erylist grimaced to herself, because what she needed to show Larker, what she needed his help with, would certainly not encourage him to put much confidence in her. 'I’ve been keeping a battered Matoran captive in my basement’, would send poor Larker screaming for the law enforcement, probably. She also doubted that Larker would follow her willingly through the trapdoor in the ground. Were she him, she certainly wouldn’t. She shooed the nipper away, because he had indeed been circling her trapdoor. It led to a single room that she’d been using as her sleeping chamber, until very recently. “It’s easier to show you,” was all she said, throwing the hatch open and descending a steep but short staircase. Larker was quite apprehensive, she was pleased to see. It would do no good to be allied with an overly-trusting air-head, as she’d found many stereotypes about Le-Matoran to be based in truth. His Ussal nipper, however, was eager to follow her down the stairs, and clacked his claws and whined impatiently when he couldn’t. “It’s safe,” she promised, not blaming him for simply looking at her skeptically. “Lightstones and all. Just poke your head in and see, if you want.” And so, Larker did just that. Erylist gestured to a dirty-armored Ta-Matoran huddled on a thin sleeping pallet, eyes squeezed shut. “He won’t talk to me,” she said again. “Perhaps you can try?” Larker cautiously descended the stairs, and Subi stretched his out pinchers after him, very sad to be left behind. But Larker’s eyes were fixed on the Ta-Matoran. “What’s wrong with him? Is he head-hurt?” “I don’t know. Shock? He woke up a few hours ago, and has been like this ever since.” Larker landed in a small, plain chamber with only the bed pallet and an up-side down crate that served as a small stand, where the lightstone lay. There were a few more small crates under the stairs. He sat down next to the other Matoran, nudging him gently. “Fire-brother, are you okay?” The Matoran shook his head, and pulled his knees to his chest, hugging them fiercely. “I should leave you two,” Erylist said. Perhaps if she weren’t present, the Ta-Matoran would talk to Larker. She wasn’t used to being feared on sight, and she couldn’t say she much cared for it. “Nuh-uh. I don’t want you up there where you can shut-lock me down here,” Larker said. Erylist rather liked his answer. “I’ll wait on the stairs, then.” This answer seemed to please both Larker and his anxious Ussal. Larker tried again, and said softly, “My name is Larker, from Le-Metru. I work doing drop-deliveries around our city-home. What’s your name, brother?” The Ta-Matoran cracked one eye open, then opened both. He turned his head to look Larker straight in the Huna, and whispered, “I’m Rofto, and I killed the Great Spirit.” Nuok barely noticed the sounds of an approaching ruckus from his office, situated above the working floor of eastern Ta-Metru’s foremost foundry. His control panel lay spread out below large, tinted windows that gave him a view of the entire floor, and were strong enough to stop a charging Kikanalo, or so his workers assured him. Even if Nuok could have been bothered to look up from reviewing the systems report, he probably wouldn’t have cared that there was a small swarm of Ta-Matoran making its way along one of the B-level perimeter catwalks, quickly approaching the landing that doubled as his office’s observation deck. He only looked up when his office door slammed open, almost knocking over the row of small stasis tubes in the corner. His workers knew better than to barge in on him. And so, he was not entirely surprised when he found himself Matatu-to-Pakari with an enraged Ginsa, with his aides and foremen floundering and sputtering excuses and apologies to him in her wake. He waved them off with a severe 'I’ll deal with you later' glare, and they were all too happy to flee. He stood to welcome the Ga-Matoran. She still wore her heavy-duty lab coat. “Ginsa. To what do I owe the pleasure? Did class let out early?” he asked, and his patronizing undertone did not go unnoticed. “Please, come in. I-“ He ducked as she whipped a sealed vial at his head. It shattered against the far wall, bubbling and hissing and emitting a foul stench. “Nuok!” she cried, voice shrill. “What did you do?!?” The pitch of her voice rose with every syllable. She readied another test tube, this one glowing ominously, and advanced menacingly toward him. “By all means, make yourself at home,” Nuok smiled easily, although he was thrown off by all this rage. Perhaps he'd underestimated Ginsa. He could use rage, though, to his advantage. He made his way toward her, his welcoming body language at odds with her hostile one. “Sit down, let’s talk this out,” he said, gesturing to his vacant office chair. “With words,” he added, as he drew level with her, and she raised her vial as though to smash it on his head. “I’m just getting the door. Can I presume what you are here to talk about is something that you don’t want the whole foundry to hear?” Ginsa found herself standing by Nuok’s chair, but refused to sit. She wasn’t entirely sure how she’d made her way all the way across his office. The overseer closed his office door, and adopted a relaxed posture, one arm resting idly on the display rack of half a dozen small stasis tubes, barely the size of his arm. “You never told me you were going to blow up the Great Temple!” she shouted at him, clenching the glowing vial in her fist and brandishing it at him again. Nuok winced inwardly. Even though there was no way anyone on the floor could make out what they were saying, he was a bit paranoid about bugs, since Ginsa’s report last week about unofficial Cobalt spying. “We set a small chemical fire in a lab building, call the Cobalts to report it, and wake up the next morning to that! I never would have agreed, if I had even the slightest idea!” I know, Nuok thought, but didn’t say as much. He wanted her to keep talking. He began fidgeting with the cap of one of the stasis tubes, trying to look sorry. He even said, “I’m sorry. I didn’t want to tell you more, because the more you know, the more danger you’d be in.” She scoffed at him, an ugly sound. “And you said nobody would get hurt!” “Well, did anyone get hurt?” he pressed. He was curious, he hadn’t been to the scene of the wreck yet, although many of his workers had shown up late after going to see for themselves, along with half the city, the smoking remains of the Great Temple. “I-I don’t know,” Ginsa said, trembling. She was frightened. But Nuok didn’t want her to stop and think about why she might be frightened. “What are they saying, Ginsa?” he asked. “They said they didn’t find any bodies, and nobody checked into any infirmary stations in the area last night.” As she spoke, she found her legs weakening, and she all but collapsed into Nuok’s chair. “Nuok, what did you do?” she asked again, weakly. Nuok smiled, and tightened the cap of the stasis tube he’d been fiddling with. “We’re one step closer to getting your lab funding, Ginsa. You and your Magisterials have done well. Suffice to say, it was only a matter of finding a daydreamer, giving him a lightstone, and sending him to the Toa Suva with a pack of Po-Matoran carving tools and explosives.” Ginsa simply shook her head at him, aghast. “I’m an accomplice.” Nuok ignored her, and asked instead, “What else are the Cobalts saying?” “I couldn’t get close,” she answered, sounding tired, eyes fixed on her lap. “They’ve closed the causeway, only the policing forces are there. I even saw some Ko-Matoran headed there. None of the schools are in session today. I heard the Turaga is going to see it himself.” “Good. Ginsa, we need them to blame the carvers. They can’t find out we were behind this. If word got out that a Ga-Matoran helped bomb her own district…” he trailed off, letting the implication sink in. She glared up at him. “Go to Karzahni.” “Eventually,” he chuckled. Ginsa dropped her gaze back to her lap, shaking her head slowly and occasionally murmuring something to herself. The Ta-Matoran opened the door to his office, but made no comment that Ginsa should leave. It wasn’t a terrible thing to have her where he could literally keep an eye on her, as the shock of what they’d just pulled off settled. He went about organizing his desk, wheeling the desk chair with the Ga-Matoran out of his way as needed. Although he appeared business-minded, going through files and record tablets and inventory sheets, his mind raced elsewhere. He’d had a small troop of his Incinerators waiting to pull the remains of his daydreamer from the wreckage, if need be. It would do no good if the city found the body of a Ta-Matoran in the wreckage. Only the remains of the carver’s tools. But his Incinerators had yet to report back to him, and Ginsa said that the Cobalts hadn’t found any body. His Incinerators had instructions that, if Rofto had survived, to make sure he didn’t talk. If they didn’t send someone to report to him by the end of the work day, he’d signal for a meeting that night. They were few in number, just over a dozen and a half, but with the high stakes game he was running, he couldn’t afford to bring in anyone extra. In selecting his inner circle, he’d carefully chosen Matoran in positions of influence, to sweep most of working Ta-Metru to his side in a matter of days, if need be. He wanted more information on the insurgent group of students which Ginsa had rounded up. Davanu and his Moles were working on obtaining more tunneling permissions, but time for permissions and permits was a luxury that, as of last night, they could no longer afford. He’d need to pay the Archivist a visit. He also needed to push to get one of his Matoran into the Turaga’s next council meeting. The list of things he needed to do kept growing and growing. “Ginsa, if you don’t mind, I have a lot of work to do today,” he said finally. She stood and pushed past him. “And, Ginsa,” he said, and she paused in the doorway, glaring at him. “I’m not one of your professors, I don’t have open office hours. I’d appreciate if you kept that in mind, in the future.” She slammed the door behind her, and Nuok could only smile. He fetched one of the stasis tubes from the display rack, slightly loosened the seal, set it on his desk. At his control panel, he punched in a quick request to have a Matoran come take care of the reeking mess that Ginsa's shattered vial, and sat down to work. There was no turning back now. Review Topic
  9. I'm not convinced the Matoran do have an overwhelming numerical advantage over other races. (if there's a citation specifically against this, I'd happily stand corrected) I think the stories we've been given just happen to focus on the Matoran society. That aside, if they do have an overwhelming numerical advantage over other races, wouldn't it make sense to balance them out with a glaring flaw? Also, while it's not as important for less-powerful Matoran or Turaga, giving Toa a handicap like that seems to make sense, with all the powers they have access to, otherwise (elemental, rhotuka, fusions, etc). Also, (total speculation) didn't the Great Beings create the Matoran rather early on in their whole Matoran Universe project? Then, later creations got more powers simply because the GBs had invented more powers by that point? On to your larger question - I agree with your reasoning about 'lack of mental discipline' being a shaky explanation, at best, and I agree with the counterexamples you provided. From what I understand, being transformed into a Toa gives the former Matoran access to latent elemental powers, as well as a reserve of Toa power. I suspect being able to access Kanohi power also may be in a similar vein. I'd say mystical Toa power is the culprit. I can see a lot of societal lore around mask powers, in Matoran society. I think concepts that would come into play are 'Duty' and 'Destiny'. Matoran are laborers and workmen, or at least were created as such. While some mask powers would be useful in a day-to-day Matoran society, I think they probably get by just fine without them. Toa, on the other hand, come into existence out of necessity, from what we've seen - their duty becomes a lot more dangerous, so gaining more powers makes sense. Multiple times, I remember Toa referring to their mask powers as gifts 'given by the Great Spirit'. I'm not sure if they actually do draw energy from their Kanohi. How would one draw energy from a powerless Kanohi, which many Matoran wear? I always thought of a Kanohi more of a ... bandaid? that stops power from leaking out? Except, again, all speculation, and not great speculation at that. I'd argue that Turaga are under greater physical constraints than Matoran. Or, at least, they're usually described as frail. I think Turaga are more like expired Toa than they are like Matoran. They can use Kanohi, like you mentioned, but I believe they also have access to weakened elemental powers. That also seems to fit with the 'transformation by Toa power changes a lot' idea. So, yes, I agree that 'lack of mental discipline/willpower' isn't a sufficient explanation. Good question and follow up questions : )
  10. I always liked this tidbit from one of the chapters in Time Trap (thanks Biological Chronicle Project for the screencap). I like the level of prestige and expertise it indicates is needed for someone to become a renowned mask maker, like Vakama. Agree, I also think Plasma Matoran would be well suited to forge/foundry work, since they also have heat-resistance (greater than Ta-Matoran, I believe?). Perhaps even moreso, as BS01 states their eyes are naturally resistant to bright lights, which also sounds useful for that kind of work.
  11. Chapter 5: The Midnighter You, Tengi thought to herself, nearly in a blind panic. She whirled and wheeled down yet another street, she’d lost count how many, and barreled ahead as fast as her legs would carry her. Her pursuer had not lost interest in her, evident from the much too close screeching and scraping of large claws against street - claws that would surely, easily tear though a Matoran. And why, Tengi had wondered at one point, about two streets back, was this monstrous, size-shifting Kuma-Kava so doggedly after her? Because she’d carried her Ussal carapace halfway across Ga-Metru on her back. She smelled like dinner. Are a complete, the Ce-Matoran’s thoughts flew all over the place. An alleyway? No, it could shrink down and still follow her. Sharp turns were the only thing keeping distance between her and it. She was coming up on a T-intersection, and fast. Left would take her closer to the inhabited residential area of the Metru. Not that way. Still, she veered slightly left. MORON!! She finished her thought, and veered as sharply right at the intersection as she could, nearly losing her footing. She found herself running with a low wall on her left, which meant she was running parallel to a canal. Could this thing swim? She would tire faster in the water, though. Tengi risked a glance backwards, gasping for breath, and seeing it had gained a bio or three on her. Come on! Think!! She could only think enough to berate herself. As she passed a promising looking side street, she realized she was headed toward Ta-Metru. She didn’t know much about the layout of the fire district. The only thing she could think of, frazzled as she was, was to try and make it to the weapon crafters subdivision of Ta-Metru. Of course, she had no idea where that was. Tengi scrabbled around another corner, and had to slow to pull air noisily and rapidly back into her lungs. She was beginning to see spots. Still, the snarling approach of the monster, easily four times her size, prodded her back to a gallop. It was slow, but it was the best she had. Her breath was coming in ragged wheezes now, and her steps much less sure. The sporadically lit, abandoned street around her blurred in and out of focus. She couldn’t tell if it was her own breath that was so loud to her, or the Kuma-Kava, breathing down her neck. No. She saw it turn the corner of her street, beady, glowing eyes locked on her. She stumbled, clutching at the side of the washed-out building, still somehow pulling herself forward. She couldn’t remember ever being this exhausted before. The monster let out a squeal that she could have sworn was a laugh, and advanced on her as she began to collapse, taking. Half crawling, half falling, Tengi saw one last hope. If she could just make it to the doorway of the building, perhaps there was something inside to give her an edge. Her head swam, and her field of vision began shrinking, giving way to blackness. The solid protodermis of the building, where her head had been only an instant before shattered under the bullet-fast punch of the Kuma-Kava’s armored boxing limbs. Tengi was pretty sure she screamed, but couldn’t say for sure. But it gave her a surge of adrenaline, and she was able to lurch out of reach for the next blow, miraculously. But she didn’t have enough energy left to steady herself, and she fell to the sidewalk once more. She rolled, raising her arms to protect her mask, as the shadow of her end fell over her. There was one last, terrible screech. Tengi squeezed her eyes shut, hoping Artakha was everything everyone always promised. It took her a few breathless moments to realize that the growling and scraping of metal she was hearing weren’t the sounds of the Rahi feasting on her dead body, but were actually sounds of battle. The Matoran half-rolled over on her side, blearily trying to make sense of what she was seeing. A tall, black-armored fighter was dodging the Kuma-Kava’s bullet-blows gracefully, almost effortlessly, careful to stay between the Rahi and the Matoran. It tucked and rolled, sprang here and there off of buildings, swung around lightstone-posts, and even got in a few counter-blows with a heavy looking combat baton it wielded. It was leading the Rahi farther and farther down the street, away from the fallen Matoran. It made the Kuma-Kava seem sluggish in comparison, and the Rahi did not like how the tables had turned. With a frustrated, guttural roar, it paused, hunching over, and began to grow once more. The fighter hung off of a second-story window, leaning out into the street. It also stopped to watch, but only for a moment. Flipping off the building to land lithely in the street on all fours, the fighter straightened up, and with one sharp movement, whipped out its baton again, and the end of it crackled to life with white-blue lightning. Without waiting for the Kuma-Kava to finish its growth-spurt, the fighter charged it with a shout. The rahi, caught off guard, reared with a screech. The fighter feinted high, as if to directly counter the rearing, colossal beast, and ducked in low at the last moment, as the rahi’s basher-blow cracked in the air. The fighter’s baton found its mark, jamming up beneath the rahi’s chin, finding the unprotected organic tissue. The Rahi gurgled and dropped with a crash, spasming slightly, as excess electricity from the stunning baton roiled off its limp form and then dissipated. “Get up,” was the next thing Tengi heard, to her surprise. “Come on, you can do it. Get up. It didn’t get you, did it?” The Matoran shook her head, which was still spinning, and groaned. The black-armored fighter was crouching beside her, tail-tip twitching anxiously, and peering into Tengi's Kakama with concerned, bright green eyes. “You…you’re,” Tengi tried to ask. But she realized that the fighter had disappeared. The Matoran concentrated on breathing deeply, counting the spinning stars above, and tried to pull herself together. She managed to struggle to a crouching position, more like a squat, when the agile fighter appeared again at her side, and pushed a cup of liquid protodermis into the Matoran’s hands. “Drink,” the fighter said, not gently, but not commanding. “Is this…” It was Tengi’s own cup, the one that she used to play caps and pins. “Borrowed it from you. I hope you don’t mind canal water.” The Matoran shook her head, downing the cup in an flash. It was amazing how fast the cool liquid protodermis cleared her head. “Who are you?” She turned to her rescuer hesitantly, and a bit fearful. The fighter snapped her attention back to the Matoran. She had been looking at something in the shadows of an adjacent street. “I’m…” She frowned a bit, thinking. “I’m someone who is trying to help the city, just like you.” “Thank you,” Tengi said, opening her satchel to put her cup back. “Do you need more?” the fighter offered, with a slight nod in the direction of the nearby canal. Tengi shook her head, “I can manage. But really, thanks. I would have been rahi-bones if not for you.” “Rahi-bones?” the fighter repeated, and snorted, amused. “I like that one.” Then, with a slight shake of her head, she pressed on, “You have to get out of the streets. Something’s happened, at the Great Temple. Something bad. I don’t know what, yet. But it’s not safe to be out. Not alone. Even with that thing down and out.” She indicated the unconscious Kuma-Kava, which had been slowly shrinking back down to its normal size. “I need that rahi,” Tengi said, getting to her feet and making her way unsteadily toward the beast. “Need?” The fighter followed her, padding along on four limbs easily, to look at the downed Rahi. Although it had stopped shrinking, it was still bigger than both of them, combined. “I took a job trapping it for an Archivist,” Tengi explained. “The Archives,” the stranger stopped, and raised herself to a crouch once more, gazing at the Kuma-Kava. “Stasis?” “I’m not sure,” the Matoran answered with a shrug. “Probably.” The fighter didn’t say anything for a long moment, and then sighed. “I can’t help you with stasis. I still think you should go home. It’s dangerous tonight.” She cast her gaze in the direction of the Great Temple. The Matoran didn’t answer right away, and the fighter rose to her full height, turning toward the Temple. “Don’t die, after I just saved you,” was all she said, and began walking briskly away. Tengi watched, startled as, about halfway down the street, the fighter vanished into thin air. Erylist cursed as she began to flicker between translucent and fully visible in the moonlit street that would bring her right to the Great Temple entrance. She was far from mastering her relatively newfound nocturnal stealth skill. And, with strange Rahi on the loose, and the Matoran terrified of the other side hiring foreign mercenaries, practicing the stealth ability had become a priority by necessity. Being seen would spell trouble in capital letters. Breaking into a run, she dashed into an alleyway, and clambered easily up the side of the building, crossing the last few blocks on rooftop. She had an unobstructed view of the broad causeway that led to the Great Temple. And what she saw, she didn’t like. Her little detour saving that Ga-Matoran had cost her. It was worth it, but she hated inconvenience. The causeway was now packed with murmuring Ga-Matoran. Her keen night vision also showed her the entrance of the smoking Temple crowded with armed Ga-Matoran, and lit with portable lightstone-posts. The Midnighter heaved a sigh, and crouched low, peering over the low wall of the rooftop at the scene. She could try and wait out the crowds. But more and more Matoran were arriving by the minute. She could make her way through the residential district and out to the next small peninsula over, and swim to the temple. That was not appealing, for a number of reasons. Or, she could try and sneak her way to the Temple. The underside of the causeway, indistinct as it was, seemed promising. She’d gotten pretty good at traveling beneath the highways, via the various support beams, cables, and girders. It was strenuous, but she was only getting stronger. Big-city living really was something else. She’d seen a lot of cities in her day, but Metru Nui dwarfed even the largest of those. And perhaps that’s why she’d made next to no progress on any of her mission objectives, thus far. The city was entirely too vast. The abbreviated version of the city’s history she’d studied during her training was laughably unhelpful. But moping wasn’t going to get her anywhere. There was more then enough work, tagging and tracking all these mutated Rahi in the city, trying to piece together and patterns of movement and trace sources of origin. And occasionally, there were encounters with Matoran. Metru Nui Matoran were rather wary of outsiders to begin with, and so she hadn’t been able to make any solid connections yet, frustratingly. Most encounters ended with the citizen running for help or screaming like a rock raptor, or both. But the little Ga-Matoran she’d saved earlier didn’t seem to fear her. There was something off about that one, but Erylist couldn’t quite place it. Still, she’d snuck a small tracker into the Matoran’s satchel, just in case. Erylist noted the direction most of the incoming Matoran seemed to be arriving from, and prowled to the opposite side of her rooftop, intending to give the crowds as wide a berth as possible. She vaulted back down into the cluttered alleyway, landing lightly, and completely invisible and silenced in the shadows. She could stomp around all she wanted and be surrounded by a ring of fully charged lightstones, and nobody would be able to see or hear her, unless she spoke, or willed herself visible and audible. It was only when in the moonslight that it became more difficult - her shadow fell, and she became both translucent and fully audible. Once any fraction of either one of the moons dipped below the horizon, or either one of the suns peeked above, any and all of her stealth powers vanished. And then she'd just have to sneak around the good, old fashioned way. She was getting a lot of practice with that, too. She glanced at the moons in the sky. She still had a good three hours to work. More than enough time. The Midnighter came to a dark crossroads of alleyways, again pausing to count roughly how many Matoran were passing by. Even without nocturnal Rahi and Rahkshi loose, it was rare for any Matoran to be out this late, let alone in droves. Erylist was nearly boiling over with impatient curiosity. Wait. She turned to her left, keen audio receptors picking up faint noises from the dark alley that shouldn’t be there. The faint whiff of something burned also floated in the air. The sea breeze wouldn’t carry the burning Temple smell all the way to the mainland. In fact, it was blowing in the opposite direction. Erylist crouched low and crept toward the sound, belly nearly brushing the ground, triple checking she was safely and fully shadow-cloaked. She cautiously rounded a cluster of sealed barrels, and dropped her shadow-cloak ability with a sharp intake of breath. “Mata Nui,” she breathed. Tucked behind the barrels and pressed against the alley wall, was a trembling, terribly scuffed up Ta-Matoran in a tattered cloak. His eyes were squeezed shut, and he was whimpering under his breath. “Hey,” she whispered as gently as she could, and reached out toward him carefully. His eyes snapped open, and he yelped involuntarily, trying to make himself even smaller. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry,” he kept repeating, frantically looking around and never quite focusing on her. She was sure she had made herself visible, but checked again anyways. She laid a hand on his arm, mindful to keep her touch feather-light. “What are you sorry for, little brother?” “I didn’t mean to. I didn’t mean to. I didn’t know. I just wanted to help. I didn’t mean to. I did what he told me. Just wanted to help,” he broke off in a sob. Erylist gaped at the poor Matoran, completely at a loss. “I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to. Wanted to help. I’m sorry, sorry, sorry,” he kept repeating. “What are you sorry for?” Erylist asked quietly, withdrawing her hand and quickly checking both ends of the alleyway to make sure they were still secure. But the Matoran just broke into incoherent sobs. She had a feeling she knew. In the distance, she could hear the din of the ever-growing crowd, As day approached, news would only spread, and more and more of the city would show up, she was sure. She couldn’t stay when that happened. She also couldn’t leave this poor, wretched Matoran huddled in an alleyway. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath, not relishing the plan of action she had settled on. But, with a ticking clock, and remaining unseen a priority, she didn’t see any other options. She unlimbered her stunning baton, and set it to the lowest intensity possible. It hummed quietly, and she said, “I’m sorry too, friend,” and zapped him. At least he looked less troubled in his sleep. Now, the fun part was figuring out how in Karzahni she was going to lug an unconscious Matoran, who was likely a fugitive, literally to the far opposite end of the city, before daybreak. Suddenly, three hours until dawn seemed woefully inadequate. She carefully checked the Matoran over for other injuries, and hauled him up over her shoulder, staggering slightly. Matoran were not large, but she was not the strongest being around. Still, this would have to do, for now. Erylist made her way carefully out of the alleyway, eyes and ears on prime alert. All things considered, she decided, tonight hadn’t been a terrible night. True, she technically had knocked out one of them, but still, two Matoran saved overall was a personal best. 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  12. Hey friends, So, as far as simple games go, this is one of them. I picked up RPG Maker MV in a recent Steam sale because I was looking for a new hobby, and voila, I have a short game here for anyone who's interested! Estimated play time: less than 3 hours. Premise: You're a spoiled cat of a rich family who, despite herself, finds herself on an adventure to help out a surprise visitor. Zip files available for both Windows and MacOSX (EDIT: Mac version is having .... issues. Can't save, can't 'always dash', but besides that, it works). Definitely let me know if you can't get it to work, or feel free to shoot me a PM! Here are some screenshots I'm actually really looking for feedback, since I've not made anything like this before. Specifically, pace of the story, enemy strength progression, stat distribution (over or underpowered players), inconsistencies, suggestions/criticisms, etc. I've played through a few times to try and weed out any bugs and inconsistencies, but am always looking to improve! Thanks, and hope you enjoy! Some hints: Feel free to shoot me a DM with questions, I've encountered different bugs in different playthroughs, hopefully it's something I can help with.
  13. Chapter 4: Nothing is Sacred “See ya, Rofto,” his fellow firepits worker, Kalama waved as he packed up his things for the day. “Hey, are you going to the ground drone races tonight? Over on the Fifth Kio?” “Probably not.” Rofto shook his head. “I’ve gotta work on my application.” “Application?” “I’ve been thinking about taking some Protodermis Processing classes,” he said. But, then again, he already had a good portion of the form complete. Why had he been putting it off, anyway? “But I might stop by if I get far enough.” “It’ll be relaxed. Nobody’s betting this week,” Kalama assured him. “I’ll try to make it,” Rofto said noncommittally, swinging his own rucksack onto his shoulder. He didn’t usually bring a bag to work, but this one had shown up right inside his doorway that morning. It hadn’t been there when he went to sleep, but it was there when he woke up. It was heavier than it looked. Inside, he found three tightly wrapped parcels, and an oblong crystal that fit comfortably in his grasp. There was also a small note with two lines. It read: Take the stone to the Great Temple tonight. You’ll know what to do from there. If he could get his application finished, perhaps he could take it to the Ga-Metru school offices on his way to the Great Temple. Rofto joined the multitude of Ta-Matoran workers headed home for the day, or headed to pubs or hurrying off on errands before this or that shop closed. The five blocks it took him to reach his residence passed beneath his feet quickly and unnoticed, as distance has a tendency to do when the mind is elsewhere. Surely, this anonymous rucksack, with its mysterious contents was from Nuok. It hadn’t quite hit Rofto that night talking with Nuok in the pub that they had been considering entrusting the Toa stone to Rofto himself. Physically holding the stone, it became entirely clear that it it wasn’t at all clear what they wanted him to do, besides bring the stone to the temple. Would someone meet him there? He certainly hoped so. Perhaps he was to deliver the stone to someone. It was an easier idea to accept, than to become a Toa hero himself. Still, hope gnawed at him, hard to ignore, but oh, how he wanted to. He wouldn’t even know where to begin, thinking about so much change. Mata Nui, the benevolent and wise Great Spirit was the one who chose worthy Matoran to become Toa in times of need, everyone knew that. Not Nuok the overseer. But, then again, Mata Nui’s will was often accomplished through others. Maybe the well-wrapped packages in the rucksack would help him understand more. But, then again, maybe they were special Toa gear, and there was no guarantee that Rofto was meant to be the Toa. Best not to touch them. Yes, there had to be someone there at the temple to meet him and explain all this to him, or to give these items to. Being an errand Matoran for someone else’s destiny was a much less scary thought than oneself being transformed into a powerful warrior for Destiny. The Matoran’s head swam with questions and wonderings. It was only by supreme force of will that he was able to shake himself out of his musings and focus on the set of stone application tablets before him. He had to talk himself through the last few questions out loud, and even then, he barely managed to stay on task. He wasn’t worried about whether or not he’d gain admission to the School of Synthetic Sciences. With the sea gates to the city closed, the schools were sorely hurting for an influx of students. Many of their students who hailed from foreign islands had left when the commerce disputes started affecting tuition and living costs, and now no new students could come to the city. The applications were simply a formality. Rofto reviewed his now completed form once more, and sighed. He still had a good two hours before it was fully night, before he could go to the Great Temple. It never ceased to amaze him, how little time it actually took to accomplish those little, chore-like tasks that he always wanted to put off. The actual putting off of the tasks was more agonizing that completing them, he was now convinced. For now. With an inward chuckle to himself, he tossed the tablets into the rucksack, and grabbed his pouch of ‘cills and cogs from his nightstand. He had time to hit the Fifth Kio, maybe catch a few drone races. The prosperous vendor’s boulevard was probably the most popular evening hangout in this half of Ta-Metru. It sat between two firepits sectors, as well as three foundries, and a multitude of artisan streets and local businesses. It helped that it was one of the few vendor lanes not criss-crossed with noisy overhead highways, giving it a pleasant open-air ambience. There was nothing wrong with hitting the downtown district and seeing a few friends. Besides, this might be the last time he would see them as a Matoran. He tried to push away the thought, as he ambled out of his home, but the whispered offer of heroism, although it still made him shy away, was too alluring to completely shut out. The twin suns were almost through setting for the night when Tengi rushed to to the counter of the Ussal Drag ’N Drop station, breathless. “Made it back in time, here.” She offered the Ussal cart key and locking chain to the unimpressed Ga-Matoran clerk behind the counter. “How much?” The Ga-Matoran checked the small timer built into the lock-chain, and told her, “Eleven and a half widgets.” “What? I only had it out for an hour!” Tengi caught her breath, and craned her neck to try and get a look at the timer herself. “Rate went up since last week,” the clerk told her. The fact that Tengi had cut it so close to their closing time, also, probably didn’t help. Now the Ussal stable hands would have to wash down and pen up a last minute Ussal before they could go home, and the clerk would have to record the transaction and figure out which original station the Ussal had come from. Tengi sighed, and fished out a helical, two tines, and a snag. “Eleven-point-five,” she sighed, pushing the widgets across the counter. “Thank you, have a good evening,” the clerk Matoran said, sweeping up the widgets and waving her away. The incognito Ce-Matoran was already out the door. She hurried around the corner toward the Ussal pens at the back of the building, sparing one “thank you” pat for the Ussal she’d just returned. She ran up to the fence of the Ussal pen, leaning over, and asked one of the Ussal hands leading another crab past, “Hi, um, excuse me?” The stablehand looked at her curiously, and Tengi continued before the stablehand could greet her. “Do you have any recent nipper molts? I’m looking for an molted husk or a shell or something.” “Uhh, I can go check, I’m sure we have some husks that haven’t been sent off to the firepits yet,” the slightly confused Ussalry worker said. The stable-hand's calm demeanor was at odds with the clerk's rushed irritation. Tengi paced back and forth for what felt like ages, until the stablehand returned, lugging a carapace about the size of a Matoran’s torso behind her. “Will this do?” “Yes, yes! Perfect. Do I owe you anything?” Tengi asked, reaching for her widget pouch. “Nothing,” the stablehand said, waving a hand. “Students, especially biology students, come around, and ask for far more, far stranger, too, sometimes.” Tengi laughed, although she was afraid it sounded a bit too anxious, and called thanked the stablehand. With a heave, she hauled the empty shell up, having to awkwardly grip it with both hands up behind her shoulders, like the city’s most awkward cloak. She wished very much she had thought to ask for an empty shell while she still had the rental cart out. But it would have to do. She rushed off into the dusk, toward the old protodermis processing plant district, long out of use. The Toa of Tais was a daring and honest Toa of Fire. Tais, the southernmost island in the southeastern island chain, was said to be a land of giant fungus forests, ravenous, powerful Rahi, and not much light. That was, until the Toa of Tais arrived. The Toa brought light. The Toa bravely fought back the ferocious and frighteningly intelligent Rahi that threatened his people, and chose the bravest and the best of the villagers to join him in his adventures, granting them the awesome power of a Toa-Hero. The Toa of Tais and his team liberated their home and their people from darkness, and traveled across the islands of their region to help others in the same way, passing into legend. These were Rofto’s favorite Toa tales - strange tales from the backwards southern islands. It was rumored that the inhabitants there had to physically eat things to get energy. As in, eat things with their mouths. Rofto shuddered involuntarily, whenever that little detail came up in a story. There was talk of cunning warrior species that even a Toa would have difficulty taking out, species with non-elemental abilities beyond a Metru Nui Matoran’s wildest dreams. And Rofto was quite the dreamer, as far as Metru Nui Matoran went. Perhaps I’ll voyage to Tais and see these things for myself, Rofto thought. Someday, when I'm a - He caught himself, stopping his train of thought, almost embarrassed when he realized what he'd been about to think. A hero? “Someday when I’ve saved up enough vacation time,” he said aloud. His mind wandered much faster than his feet did, as he crossed into an outlying residential district of Ga-Metru. There were no inter-Metru crossing stations, or even booths that he could see. Those mostly connected business districts or were along roadways. Having a station between adjoining residential districts would be silly. Daring and honest, he thought vaguely, reminiscing about his far-off hero. That’s what I’d want to be. But he didn’t feel daring or honest, as he tried to inconspicuously make his way to the Great Temple, shrouded in a large cloak that concealed his mask and the heavy rucksack he carried. He clutched the carefully wrapped Toa-stone in his hand, close to his heartlight. It was quite comforting. It was fully night time now, both moons waning above. Rofto was relieved that he only passed one small group of Ga-Matoran, as he picked through the outskirts of a residential district. They hurried past, headed toward the schools without sparing him a glance. But, why feel relieved? He wasn’t doing anything bad. Right? It was just, well, how would he explain himself? ‘My boss gave me this Toa stone and I’m supposed to take it to the Great Temple, and maybe become a Toa-hero’? he thought, and shook his head at the absurd idea. However Toa were created, it certainly had to be different than this - more grand, more ceremony, more Mata Nui, more Destiny, perhaps. But, who was he, really, and what did he know? Still, there had to be some guards at the Temple gates. What on earth would he say to them? He wasn’t even sure if there were open visiting hours to the central sanctuary, and if there were, they certainly wouldn’t extend to this late hour. 'Mata Nui told me to meet him there', he laughed to himself. That will work. He passed one more group of Ga-Matoran, headed in the same direction as the first, without time to spare him a glance, and talking among themselves quietly. Too quietly? No, that was just because it was a quiet neighborhood. Right? Rofto pushed the worries out of his mind as the modest residences around him gave way to a wide boulevard, lined with moss-covered carvings of great Kanohi masks, most of which he couldn’t identify. The wide, cobblestone street became a bridge spanning gentle inlets of the Silver Sea, the Great Temple gates looming ahead. Rofto kept far to the side of one street, passing in and out of the shadows of the sculptures at intervals, nerves standing on end. The closer he got to the Temple, the more illegal it all felt. He paused in the shadow of the last carving before the impressive gate, taking a second double-take. Surely, there had to be at least one guard Matoran, or even a drone, around, especially with the gate itself wide open. He sorely wished he knew more about the Great Temple. Perhaps this was normal. If Matoran wanted more Mata Nui in their lives, no matter the hour of day, then it would be heretical to have closed gates. Still, Rofto stood frozen, watching for any sign of movement. Finally, it was the weight of his rucksack that drove him cautiously forward. He edged his way through the gate, after long minutes of nothing happening, and made his way to the Temple doors. They were large and grand, and he nearly fainted trying to push one open enough to get in. He slipped inside, out of breath, and leaned back against the heavy door to close it, which resulted in quite a noisy clang, to his dismay. The sound reverberated through the Temple’s ornate antechamber, also empty of any other Matoran. Minutes after the sound had faded from the air, Rofto finally let out his breath that he hadn’t realized he was holding. A few more deep breaths, and he felt ready to proceed. Yes, he was slightly terrified, and this all felt rather surreptitious, but what else was he going to do? He rolled his tired shoulders, and decided to drop the heavy pack just inside the doors. It was a large temple, and it might take him a while to find whatever it was he was looking for. You’ll know what to do from there, the note promised him. “Well, I’m here,” Rofto whispered to the stone in his grasp. He readjusted his cloak to hang much more naturally, after removing the large lump of his rucksack with a relieved sigh. “What now?” There was only one way to go, and that was across the antechamber, and through a candle-lit corridor, through which he could see a fraction of the main hall. If the sunslight had been streaming through the masterfully crafted windows of the temple, it would have been a breathtaking sight, with intricate carvings and murmuring hieroglyphs. But in the dark, to a frightened Ta-Matoran, with the constant sound of trickling water in the background, it was breathtaking in a bad way. “Daring and honest,” Rofto told himself, with another deep breath to steady himself. “Daring, honest.” And he continued bravely on. It must have been nearing midnight, and Tengi was about to give up for the night. The carapace she’d lugged halfway across Ga-Metru lay in the middle of a long-abandoned four-way intersection of pedestrian streets. On each street corner, a small tower, not much taller than Tengi herself, hummed gently, and a singular, calming blue light pulsed at the top of each tower, in unison. These towers were what she’d needed to rent an Ussal cart for. They were stasis-field towers, used by field Archivists and some Ga-Metru students. She’d shelled out more than she would have liked to rent the equipment from the biology department. Her plan was a simple one, although it might take several nights of staking-out. The Ussal shell was in the center as bait. Tomorrow, she would try and find more shells to use. The Kuma-Kava she was hunting, ideally, would go to it, and Tengi would trigger the towers remotely, from her safe hiding place on the corner rooftop, overlooking the whole intersection. While the thing was trapped in the stasis field, she would carefully move the towers closer and closer to one another, and trigger the stunning gas cartridges in each tower to knock it out, and be done. The towers were fully charged, and could keep a stasis dome running full-force for up to eighteen hours. That was more than enough time to arrange for transport for the Rahi back to Mavrah. That was one advantage to this wondrous city - the technology. Back home on the Tren Krom Peninsula, she never would have dreamed of portable stasis devices. She probably would have had to painstakingly set up a rockslide, rock by rock. And, of course, rockslides were just as likely to kill your quarry as they were to miss it entirely. What was she going to do when she went back, without all this hi-tech? But, she didn’t have to worry about that, since it looked like nobody was leaving the city anytime soon. She yawned, shooing away a small rodent-rahi with her foot. According to her slap-dash research, this protodermis processing block had been bought out by Metru Formulaics, and its resources and employees had been moved closer to the large processing and refinery company’s base of operations, closer to the heart of the Metru. Small rahi birds and rodents seemed to be the only residents. Soon, this old block would be demolished, and the parts from the buildings and underground street mechanics torn up and processed into either widgets if they could get the Turaga’s approval, or simply sent to Ta-Metru. Tengi considered taking a quick lap around her flat rooftop. She should be on alert, anyways. But, if something as large as her quarry was approaching, she could be in a coma and still hear it. She sighed, regretting not bringing any homework to work on, or lightstones to read by. “Hey! Scram!” she yelled, her cry echoing down the streets, still lit with lightstone posts. It was by their light, she caught the shadow of another small rodent scampering right up to her carapace, down in the street. “That’s not for you!” she hopped onto the ladder that led down to the street, tucking her remote into her small satchel. She bore down on the Ussal shell, flipping it over in search of the rodent. Angrily, she hissed, “I said-" Except the rodent wasn’t a rodent. It was the Kuma-Kava. Not even half the size of her foot, but complete with powerful, clawed little hind legs of a rodent, and the spring-loaded club arms of a Tarakava. And teeth. Little sharp teeth that glinted even in the lightstone lights and blue lights of the stasis towers. “What?” was all she could say, staring at it, baffled. Was this all a grand joke Mavrah had contrived? Was it- The little monster screeched at her, and before her startled eyes began to grow. And grow. And grow. With a cry, she fell back, jolted out of her stupor as the monster surpassed her quickly in size, and kept on growing. Her remote! But she couldn’t trigger the stasis field while she was in there with it! The monster’s screech had turned into a sidewalk-shaking roar. It was not happy that Tengi had tricked it out of a meal. Stumbling to her feet, Tengi ran for her life. Not all that far away, Rofto completed his third, slow journey around the perimeter of the Great Temple’s main chamber. A large, intricately carved fountain of very pure looking protodermis served as the room’s center, ringed with a pristine, metallic dais that was covered in carvings, some were words, some were pictures, some were pictures that looked like they could be words, and vice versa. Still, nobody besides the Ta-Matoran was there, and he still had no idea what to do. There was one more side chamber that he hadn’t explored yet. His loop took him to the side chamber’s entrance. Peeking in, it looked rather unremarkable. It was not ornate, like the antechamber, or the main hall. It was a high-ceilinged stone room with impressive pillars spaced in such a way that drew the eye to a simple, segmented dome that rose out of the floor in the center of the chamber. If Rofto could read the ancient language above the doorway, he would have been able to identify the Toa Suva. Still, he was intrigued. He took a step into the side chamber. And then an explosion ripped through the Great Temple. Dazed, and partially buried in rubble, Rofto dragged himself back into the main chamber. It was by luck alone, he was sure, that he had been in the shelter of the doorway when the explosion hit, and hadn’t been completely crushed. But he was pretty dazed, and badly shaken and bruised, so he wasn’t completely sure of anything. But he was scared. Not everything had been torn apart, but many things were scorched, a few things were on fire, and a lot of things had either fallen over or been shattered. Smoke filled the air, and the fountain spurted its last. Rofto was so confused. What had happened? He made his way uneasily to the main doors, where the damage was by far the worst. There were only two walls left standing of the antechamber. The remains of his rucksack lay smoldering by what was left of the great doors. Fuzzily, a realization began to form in his mind. But that formulation was cut short by shouts and quickly approaching bright lights. And so, Rofto ran for his life. 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  14. Chapter 3: Dastardly “Please,” Tengi implored the somewhat flustered Archvist. “I’ve been working with Rahi for centuries. At least give me a shot.” She had gotten up early that next morning, and spent three agonizing hours trying to get to the Archives. Even for a weekend, the crowds were insane. The various policing forces seemed to be out in droves, as well. “I believe you, I believe you,” the Matoran said, holding out his hands as if to calm her. “It’s just, well, Mahi and and Ussal are one thing, but we’re talking about something that eats those for a light snack.” “Rahi are Rahi. I can track and trap,” Tengi said. “I’ll just need some higher tier equipment. I’ve even listed out what I think I’ll need.” She offered him her notes tablet, with a small list written on it. He waved it away, saying, “Even if I wanted to fund your paraphernalia, you can’t use the same hunting or tracking techniques on a hunting Rahi that you would on a domestic Rahi.” “I’ve worked with all kinds of Rahi,” she insisted. She was kicking herself for leading off with the fact that most of her Rahi jobs had been Mahi-wrangling. “Well, has someone else already taken the job, then? I could help them.” She highly doubted the job had been claimed already. There wasn’t exactly a line out the door of the cluttered office. In fact, it was a pretty desolate wing of the Archives. “No, but… well, no,” Mavrah sighed. “But I can’t fund your equipment upgrade with no promise of a return. I’m not made of widgets.” Very technically, he was. Protodermis was protodermis, in the end. But Tengi knew that would be very unhelpful to point out. “Could you show me the sketch again?" Tengi asked instead, craning her neck to see over the piles of clutter on the desk. There was a charcoal sketch of what the Archivist and a few of his coworkers thought they were after. This was the Rahi that they believed to be terrorizing the Ussal pens all over the city. There was a small task force of combined Conservators, Jet-Setters, and Cobalts that were supposedly chasing this thing, but, like most cooperatives, was probably falling apart due to the inter-Metru tensions that just kept getting worse. “It almost looks like…” the blue-armored Matoran turned the sketch this way and that. “A lizard-rat. A Kuma-Kava. That’s what they were calling it,” the Archivist supplied. “Any reports of it attacking Matoran?” she asked. “Only if they get in the way of prey.” “I can’t believe something that large can avoid capture for so long,” she said incredulously. “Like I said, we don’t know much about this thing, only that it likes Ussal and has left at least one Conservator unable to walk.” “I have some ideas that will help me keep my legs, I hope,” Tengi said. She stepped back, examining her feet as she weighed her options. “Okay. I can get my own equipment. Just give me a week.” It was a bit risky, but Tengi had enough saved up that she could afford a small gamble here. Especially since she wasn’t good at actual gambling, and she knew she wouldn’t be winning any sailer-skiff races soon. Might as well try her hand in another ring. “I was honestly expecting a team of Matoran or something to answer the ad,” the Archivist fretted. He couldn’t have a dead or maimed Ga-Matoran on his conscience. But she seemed so determined, and she did know what she was talking about. “Well, maybe the Rahi is expecting a team to come after it as well.” As much as she hated to step on someone’s toes, this was taking far too long. "Don’t worry. I know when I’m in over my mask. I’ll let you know if it doesn’t work out. If you don’t hear from me after a week, here’s how to contact me.” She scrawled the information on the corner of the Rahi sketch with charcoal. Before Mavrah could protest further, Tengi had picked her way through his messy office, and disappeared. He hadn’t even agreed. But, of course, if she did bring in the Rahi, he wouldn’t refuse it. Still, he wouldn’t be getting his hopes up anytime soon. The heated argument of the three Matoran in the Council chamber seemed to fade away as Turaga Arrakio regarded his valor sculpture fondly. It was barely more than an indistinct figure cast in a heroic pose that suggested victory, obscured by the low-quality, early stasis technology that encased it. It was a life-sized statue that was cast from a rare metallic protodermis from the eastern island chain, and it didn’t react well with air, or so they’d told him, hence the stasis container. He liked it because it reminded him of his days as a Toa. Those were days spent mostly on the Southern Continent, leading many teams and never wanting for adventure. Just because one could lead a team of Toa well did not mean one could lead a city well. And, oh, how Arrakio wished someone had told him that beforehand. “For the last time, it’s not the Archivists!” the Onu-Matoran in the room yelled. “I swear it by Karzahni, Artakha, and Mata Nui himself!” “You’re not going to convince the city of that, Davanu,” the Ta-Matoran replied, in a similar tone of voice. The two were nearly mask to mask, both seething. “I’ve lost three of my firepits workers in the last two weeks to these attacks.” “The Cobalt Guard lost a patrol member, two days ago,” the last Matoran, a Ga-Matoran, cut in before Davanu could fire back an accusation. “What about the Fire Brands, Nuok?” “I don’t do much business with them, you know that.” The Ta-Matoran crossed his arms. “They’re idiots.” “You’d say that about Mata Nui himself, if he showed up in the armor, and looked at you wrong,” Davanu scoffed. “Ginsa, what else are the Cobalts saying? You have Matoran on the inside?” Nuok gestured rudely at the Onu-Matoran, and turned fully to the Ga-Matoran student. Ginsa smirked at Davanu’s indignant sputtering, and reported, “Just one." No need to mention in front of the Turaga that it was her. "They’re not interested in assigning blame, they just want the schools to remain open and the students to stay safe,” “Quaint. Staying safe never won over any cities,” Nuok said. “If you and your Magisterials want that funding for your synthesis studies, we’re going to need to push a bit harder to get more of the Ga-Matoran on our side.” “Don’t you talk down to me,” Ginsa snapped. "I know you and your Incinerator group want that breakthrough in energized protodermis as badly as we do. I’m not in your pocket, and we both know it.” “Davanu,” Nuok turned sharply to the morose Archivist. “What about the Conservators?” Onu-Metru’s policing force had always been difficult to get information on. “They’re demanding inventory reports on all rahi exhibits, and recounts of those exhibits, to make doubly sure that none of our exhibits are the ones loose in the city. That’s all I know.” Listen to them squabble, Turaga Arrakio lamented inwardly. Worse than Gukko chicks with a bula berry shortage. He shook his head, and the tall, vague figure of his valor sculpture seemed to gaze back at him sympathetically. Or, was it mocking? If your Toa-self could see you now. Relegated to arbiter of petty, dysfunctional business Matoran. The Turaga of Ice turned away from the imposing statue, and slammed his staff on the edge of the dais where he stood. “That’s enough, Nuok. Davanu.” The two bickering Matoran quieted, and Ginsa took a seat smugly off to the side. Arrakio rather liked the effect the valor sculpture gave off, as he stood in front of it, ready to command. It practically whispered victory into his audio receptor. Of course, victory in a the Council chamber was very different than victory on a battlefield. Not that this was an official Council meeting - that would be scandalous, meeting with such recalcitrant insurgents. “Nuok, you promised me that Metru Nui would be able to rival the Xian market by now- surpass it, even. And where are we?” “It takes time to change the entire economic playing field of a city-island, Turaga,” Nuok replied in a measured tone. “The Po-Matoran and the Le-Matoran won’t cooperate.” The Ta-Matoran’s words were a thinly veiled accusation. The Turaga was not passing reductionist regulations against Po-Metru and Le-Metru, as Nuok and his allies urged him to. “We agreed to make Metru Nui a world power, not just Ta-Metru,” Arrakio countered. Yes, the Great City had a shining reputation, but nobody considered them a force with which to be reckoned. They were just a nice place for Matoran to work, and made nice things, and taught nice classes. And, as the recent League wars had proven to the world, 'nice' wouldn't cut it anymore. “I have to listen to all my citizens, and honor their requests when I can. It is my duty, and my privilege.” It really had never felt like a privilege, but Arrakio would never admit that to anyone besides himself. “All the muddling about in regulations and politics has set us back indefinitely.” Nuok didn’t bother to keep a respectful tone this time. Beside him, Davanu and Ginsa kept silent, and very still. “You and your incendiaries are making a mess of the city," the Turaga ordered. "Stop encouraging your Matoran to take matters into their own hands. The Metru policing forces have enough on their hands. I need them to work together to get to the bottom of these Rahi attacks.” He glanced pointedly at Davanu, who glared back. “Stopping their own brothers and sisters from sabotaging each other is an enormous and tragic waste of resources.” “You’re one to talk about waste of resources,” Nuok said acidly. “We all know you don’t really have the power to enforce your edicts, that the separate policing forces don’t really answer to you. You’ve been trying to play both sides for too long, and have ended up irrelevant. Now, what we need is to have another Council for the chief business Matoran of each district, probably with the policing heads as well. I expect-” Nuok’s demand was cut off with a cry, and he dropped to the ground. “You need to learn when to stop,” the Turaga said calmly, pointing his staff at the Ta-Matoran insurgent. “And you need to learn that you don’t have all the pieces, and you certainly don’t have all the power.” Nuok made some incoherent, muffled sounds. “Are we clear, Nuok?” The Turaga deactivated his noble Kanohi Garai, and Nuok’s armor returned to its normal weight. “Yes, Turaga,” Nuok growled, getting to his feet with a mutinous look in his eyes. “Perfect. Then, you are dismissed.” The three Matoran wasted no time making their exit, the Turaga watching their retreat with an unreadable expression. Once the heavy door to the Council chambers had slammed shut, the three Matoran began making their way down the grand corridor, not looking forward to the long descent. There was something about being in audience with the Turaga that set even the most even-tempered Matoran on edge. And none of Nuok or his conspirators were even-tempered to begin with. They weren't always at one another's throats, usually they managed more subtle hostility between one another. But just...something about the pressure of being in the Turaga's own audience chamber. “You pushed him way too hard,” Ginsa grumbled. “He might have let us take the elevator down, otherwise.” “Really? That’s why you’re upset?” Davanu laughed. “Shut up, mole.” She glowered at him. Nuok was shaking his head. “We need Ga-Metru to cooperate.” “They’re onto you, Nuok. There’s a small group, students mostly, running some basic espionage for Marka. They’ve got some bugs in your break rooms.” “Marka? The Cobalt?” Ginsa shrugged. “She’s newer, but she’s risen quickly. She’s getting things done, Nuok. She wants to make peace, not just keep it. She’s collecting information to feed to their diplomats. For now. If she finds anything solid, though, I’m sure she wouldn’t hesitate to get the rest of the Guard involved.” “Well, I won’t give her anything solid to find,” he said. Then, he guessed, “You’re part of her little spy group?” “I feed them information from my contact in the Archives,” she told him, elbowing Davanu, who looked at her, alarmed. “Nothing true, don’t worry.” “Don’t draw any attention to the Archives at all!” Davanu protested. “If anyone gets wind of our project…” he trailed off worriedly. “Be careful, Ginsa,” Nuok agreed. “I don’t want even a reason for someone to turn their mask there.” “I know what I’m doing, calm down. No need to make a Kikanalo stampede out of a Kinloka scampering,” she snapped. “More bad news, they still don’t know who’s running the operation in Po-Metru, either.” Nuok let out a half-sigh, half-growl of frustration. “I’ve been after them for years.” He went on muttering darkly to himself for a few moments. “It’s fine. I have a play to force their hand. But, again, we need Ga-Metru.” He fixed Ginsa with an intense stare, and she paused on her stair nervously. “Don’t look at me. I’m just a student. I can’t mobilize the masses,” she said, looking down. Ideally, he’d want to cut off the sculptors and their allies from the Matoran feeding point, which would cripple them. The Ga-Matoran would never go for it, cutting off nearly half the city from a basic necessity. They clung to their jaded, moralistic neutrality as though their lives depended on it. That was going to have to change. “Leave the mobilizing to me. I just need to know one thing: How are you and your Magisterials with diversions?” “Diversions?” The Synthetics student tilted her head curiously. “What type?” “The type that brings the Cobalts running.” The three Matoran began descending the impressive spiral staircase. “We can probably manage that,” she said, and smiled, ideas blooming rapidly. “Energized protodermis experiments go bad all the time.” “Good. The night after tomorrow. I want all the guards away from the Great Temple,” Nuok said. Ginsa and Davanu gasped, pausing on their respective steps. “Nuok…” Ginsa stared at him. “Not the Great Temple.” “It’s won’t be anything crazy,” he promised. “If you do your job, no Ga-Matoran will be hurt.” “Don’t you have any fear of the Great Spirit?” Davanu demanded. “Apparently not,” Nuok chuckled. “Davanu, if we get the Ga-Matoran to work with us, it will be a lot easier to pass anti-Le-Metru regulations. We can finally take down Kesian.” This gave the Onu-Matoran pause. It was because of Kesian that Davanu was stuck in this menial Archives job, which he hated. Yes, it was an envied position for some, but not for one who had no other options after failure. And, to make matters worse, the failure that was his was not his fault. He, like many, was the victim of sabotage. But he, unlike others, knew who was to blame. “Maybe this could work,” was all Davanu said, with a one-shouldered shrug, and continued down the stairs. “So, about this diversion,” Ginsa began. “I already have a plan in motion,” Nuok said confidently. “Don’t worry. Just get the Cobalts away from the Temple and enjoy the show.” Review Topic
  15. So well-traveled! That's awesome! How long did you live in Paraguay for? The little I've seen of South and Central America was beautiful, I bet Paraguay is, as well. Haha, I, too, wish I'd hung onto more Euros. I think I traded them all back in because of the exchange rate, but I don't remember. Now, getting some of the pre-Euro currencies of some of the European countries would be fun. And probably difficult. And I feel like I'd have to learn more about European history and politics. But still.
  16. So, over the past few years (about 3?), I've had the privilege of being able to travel to a few different countries. Mostly for academics. I started collecting the different bills, because, as a United States resident with a mostly monochromatic currency scheme, the other colors and sizes of foreign currency is one of my favorite things ever. Also, sorry, the coins photographed really terribly, but I realized too late. 这是中国元。 我在大学的时候, 专业是中国文化, 所以我需要学习一个学期在中国。我三年以前是留学生在上海。 Translation: This is Chinese currency. (if you didn't guess). When in college, I studied Chinese, and needed to study in China for a semester. Three years ago, I studied abroad in Shanghai. The two small bills, which are the equivalent of a few Chinese cents, were pretty hard to come by, I think I only encountered two or three of each my entire semester there. Entonces, tengo dinero Guatemalan tambien. (lo siento, mi español es muy muy poco, jaja). Viajé a Guatemala uno año pasada. Creo los dinero Guatemalan esta mucho bonitos. Translation: I've also collected Guatemalan money. (sorry, my Spanish is abysmal). I traveled to Guatemala about a year ago, and I think their money is gorgeous. A fun fact, the exchange rate for Chinese Yuan and Guatemalan Quetzales is almost the same. (or at least, it was when I was in each country, respectively). While I don't think I can say I've been to Colombia, I do have Colombian bill (the little blue one beneath the Guatemalan coins). It was acquired during a layover in the Bogota airport. My personal requirement for being able to say I've been to a country is 1) leaving airport/customs/border crossing property and 2) buying something in the country in the native language. The Colombian bill was more of a gift, and was kept because it's really pretty and makes a good bookmark . Now, what I really need are some widgets.
  17. All info/screenshots from BS01 From the "Matoran" page: From the "Ga-Metru" page: From the "Flora" page: Bula berries are the only plants that jump to mind that specifically are to restore energy. I'm not sure on the canon use for these. Were these items in the MNOLG? I'm not sure about Rahi - canonically if they eat and if they are eaten, but it seems within the realm of possibility. Most interestingly, from the Skakdi page, a more cultural tidbit : ( edit: what @Xboxtravis mentioned, I think) I found this bit to be the most insightful. One thing - there's so much of our cultures and daily lives that are facilitated and structured around food, mealtimes, grabbing a coffee with a friend, holiday meals and traditions, regional cuisine, etc. While a lack of foodstuffs and what societal developments come with it, it makes sense mechanoid-based society, but it sometimes does feel like there's a layer missing. As @Makuta Luroka pointed out above, I guess there are exceptions, probably moreso in early G1 than later on.
  18. Chapter 2: Flotsam The game of caps and pins was about bluffing and being able to count better than everyone else at the table. It was a rather popular game in pubs and breakrooms throughout the city. One could win some nice pocket-change, and there were a few Matoran who could afford to work reduced time, they’d gotten so good at the betting and counting game. “Pass three,” the Ga-Matoran next to Tengi said. Tengi obligingly handed over the first three bits that fell into her hand as she shook her game cup, which was filled with a mix of ancillary widgets and worthless valve caps. She passed over two caps and a washer warily. “Call it,” the same Matoran, Amaya, said. The other two players at the table cleared some space, as Tengi and Amaya carefully spilled the contents of their stone game cups onto the table, and counted their pieces. One pile for the ‘cills, and one pile of the valve caps. “Widgets?” Amaya asked. “Thirty-four,” Tengi replied, sweeping the valve caps back into her cup. Each player had to have a minimum of ten caps in their cup, and Tengi liked to play with the minimum, because she was honestly not very good at this game. More worthless caps in the overall game made it harder to figure out how many widgets everyone else had in their cups. “Me too,” Amaya crowed. “Tengi, you’re out!” At the end of your turn, after getting or giving a trade of one to five pieces from a player of your choosing, if you suspected that player and you had the same value of widgets in your cup, you could call for a count. If you were right, the other player was eliminated, and you got their ‘cills and caps, and could choose to add however many caps and ‘cills to your own cup you wanted, usually based on how you thought you could best match the remaining players’ widget values. Tengi leaned back in her chair, watching the rest of the game intently. Luckily, they weren’t playing for keeps. Amaya was a statistics teacher for the School of Applied and Synthetic Sciences, if you wanted to get better at caps and pins, you watched Amaya play. After losing yet another skiff-sailer race, Tengi was running low on widgets. It was probably the last race she could afford, which she didn’t like. She considered renting out her skiff. Citizens of Metru Nui were guaranteed basic living necessities - housing and access to the Matoran Feeding Point. If one wanted a nicer living space, or anything resembling a hobby or interest outside of work, whether it be recreational, academic, athletic, whatever, that’s where one spent their widgets. But Tengi wasn’t a citizen of Metru Nui. She would probably have to pick up a real job soon, instead of taking classes full time, which were also not free. Amaya made short work of the other two Matoran, and called, “Anyone up for another go?” The most recent losers, and all around the tavern, a couple heads shook ‘no’, but most of the Matoran ignored the challenge. “Tengi? How many widgets did you put in?” The Matoran began helping Amaya divvy back the ‘cills they’d played with. “Started with thirty, most of them pins. But it doesn’t matter which, I guess.” Tengi would prefer to get mostly pins back, as they were currently worth a nice round five widgets. Snags and bearings weren’t worth much recently, and tines were only worth half a widget. Before the game started, they’d agreed - everyone puts in between ten and twenty-five caps, and between twenty-five and sixty widgets worth of ‘cills. Tengi usually put in low, both in widgets and in valve caps. For an inexperienced player, it was best to minimize any variables as best as one could, in better hopes of controlling them. “Glad we’re not playing for keeps,” one of the other Matoran laughed. “No one ever plays for keeps against me,” Amaya said, shaking her head in subtle mock exasperation. Then she smiled, and added, “They know they’d get cleaned out.” “Do you really give extra credit if your students can beat you?” Tengi had been dying to ask, ever since she had taken Amaya’s class, years ago now. “Take another one of my classes, you can find out,” the teacher said, sweeping her own widgets back into her pouch. “Next semester is booked for me,” she said. “Well, I’m just taking a communications class, but I want to start working a bit. Get out of the school bubble, you know?” “Anywhere you go, there’s a bubble,” Amaya told her. “What communications class are you taking?” “Something about conflict resolution, I think,” Tengi replied. “I’m on the fence about more classes anyways. There seem to be a lot of changes going on in the city.” “Communication and Conflict? With Nokama?” “Yeah, that’s the one.” Tengi nodded. "Why?” “She’s so wrapped up in the peace demonstrations and truce politics,” Amaya said, shaking her head ever so slightly, as she began to pack up her things from the table. "I’d be surprised if she teaches at all, next semester. Especially with the way things are going, you know?” The teacher swept an arm in a wide gesture. The Ga-Matoran generally were doing a good job of staying neutral. It was a delicate thing, not wanting to anger one side, or ingratiate themselves to another. But the growing frequency of unity rallies and demonstrations, often headed by some of the more opinionated Ga-Matoran, were drawing negativity from both sides. “Hm. I’m sure I’ll find something to take, either way,” Tengi waved a goodbye. “You’re headed home early.” “Exams to grade,” Amaya sighed. "But I'd still make time for another round. Or even a quick game of 'cills." Her companions declined, most getting ready to take their respective leave as well. It was a school night for students and the weekend for workers, although many Ga-Matoran were both. "Well," Amaya laughed a bit as she took her leave. "Your losses. Well, it would have been, anyway." Tengi was left alone at her table, which suited her just fine. She had worked it out with her lab group to finish their write-up here, at the tavern. Kailani’s tavern, called The Silver Seafarer’s, was unusually busy, even for a weekend night. Usually other sporting events would be going on, especially the test track circuits, which ran throughout Le-Metru’s largest moto-hubs. But a new restriction against Le-Metru and Onu-Metru had been published earlier that week, after Matoran from both districts were exposed in a case of corporate espionage. It was the story of the month, in the news tablets Tengi now shuffled through at her table. There were always more Rahi attacks to read about, and some speculation columnists had some interesting theories. These were mostly in Po-Metru, the outskirts of Le-Metru, and some in Ta-Metru. There were always Matoran being attacked by Rahi in Onu-Metru, so nobody batted an eye at those reports. But, an advertisement in the Onu-Metru section of the news tablets caught her eye. “Archivist seeking SAFE capture of rare Rahi for study,” it read. Intrigued, she kept reading. “Are you going Rahi hunting?” One of Tengi’s classmates sat down at the table with her. They were waiting on one more group member to brainstorm for their mid-semester write up for Elementary Protodermic Theory. “Thinking about it,” Tengi replied, flipping over the tablet to see if the back had anything interesting. Her classmate looked at her incredulously, and asked, “Where did you say you were, before you came to the city?” “The Northern Continent,” Tengi said, copying down the important information from the ad in charcoal on her spare stone half-tablet that she carried around, like most students, for diligent note taking. She hailed from the Tren Krom Peninsula, specifically, although she didn’t think it was wise to talk about it so openly. She’d held a handful of rahi-related jobs there, including Mahi wrangling, Ussal training, runaway Rahi tracking, and had been on a few Fikou nest raids. And, for a Matoran of the treacherous Peninsula, those were considered the easy jobs. “I’ve worked with Rahi a bit before. I’ll go talk to the Archivst, tomorrow, and see what he thinks.” Tengi had come to the Great City just over a decade ago, now. Yes, she had always wanted to study at the Ga-Metru schools. It wasn’t an uncommon ambition for Northern Continent denizens, who lived close enough to Metru Nui to make that dream realistic. But secretly, she had also been tracking something that was probably a bit more dangerous than a Rahi. The trail - a trail of murdered Steltians, led north, to the city, and then went cold. And, just as luck would have it, the year she spent in the enormous city trying to pick the trail back up, the sea gates were shut down after an outbreak of muggings and skirmishes along the Le-Metru and Ta-Metru border. So, she was stuck in the city indefinitely, and trying to make the best of it, although that wasn’t necessarily difficult. There was plenty going on that would keep a curious, tenacious Ce-Matoran occupied. That was also something she hadn’t told anyone. They all seemed content to think she was a Ga-Matoran. In fact, before she left the Peninsula, she’d traded in her gold-colored armor accents for pale blue, not wanting to stand out so blatantly. “Where in all the firepits is Paitia”? Tengi’s classmate demanded, slapping her own research notes down on the table. “She’s not usually late.” “I told her when and where we were meeting to start the write up, and she agreed.” Tengi shrugged, getting out her own class materials. “We can fill her in when she shows up.” The two students reluctantly bent over their notes, exchanging data quietly amidst nearby games of ‘cills and traded sailing stories. None of the Matoran in the Seafarer’s tavern were any wiser, as Paitia, the missing Matoran in question, was dragged along the bottom of the nearby canal, securely wrapped in the many barbed tentacles of an amphibian hunter. Of course, nobody knew she was missing yet. And by the time they did realize it, the Rahi was sure that there wouldn’t be much left of the Matoran to find. “We think someone is trying to shut down the schools,” Hasira stood at her table to take the floor. “I have some Ta-Matoran firepits workers in my Intro to Protodermis Solids class, I made sure to get in their lab group. We went to the northern smelting sector, two weeks ago to do some research for a write-up, and I was able to plant a bug in one of the break rooms.” The Ga-Matoran student, and part time student-teacher held up her small playback machine, and pressed the button. The dozen-odd blue-armored Matoran crowded around the three tables in a side room of Kailani’s tavern, Tengi included, with her lab write-up complete, despite Paitia’s no-show. The Matoran all leaned in to listen to the thin, recorded voice issuing from the device. “…should do something about those cursed diplomats. They’re the ones coming up with all these leniencies for the sculptors. Those rock-bashers aren’t clever enough to be blocking all our policies on their own.” A second voice, very hard to hear, suggested jokingly, “It’s probably the Jet-Setters helping them out.” Both voices on the recording shared a good laugh. Le-Metru’s policing force, if one could honestly call it that, was full of bored test drivers and ambitious Ussal jockeys who often created more disarray than they tried to fix. “Well, what I heard is that the Incinerators cut a deal with some of them, and policies are going to start working in our favor pretty soon.” Hasira cut off the recording, looking to Marka, who was running this covert meeting. The sole representative of Ga-Metru’s Cobalt Guard thanked Hasira, and stood. “It’s not much to go off of, but it’s more than we could have hoped for. Good work, Hasira. Yes, we have some of our best diplomacy professors and power structure theorists working on the Coliseum front. They’ve been working with some of the Scholars Nui of Ko-Metru, actually. So, the Ta-Matoran on the recording are either talking about one of theirs having made a deal with some of ours, or some of Ko-Metru’s.” “They don’t want a three-sided standoff,” someone in the corner interjected, a prominent Synthetics student. If Ga-Metru and Ko-Metru formed their own allegiance against the other two... Some murmuring broke out, but Marka quickly got their attention back. “Yes, thank you, Ginsa. We can’t take anyone’s side, and we can’t make our own. Now, I know what all the other Metrus like to say about us, that we’re cowards who play both sides, no backbone, and so on.” There was some more discontented murmuring that ran through her audience. Apparently, not all of them were aware how fed up the others in the city were with the obstinate Ga-Matoran. “Obviously, that doesn’t make it true!” she insisted. “I know it’s tedious, and I know it’s not easy, but the work we’re doing is important. The Cobalts can’t investigate other Metrus without instigating hostilities and arousing suspicion. But we need this information to stay ahead fo the politics games that go on in the Coliseum councils. We’re doing what the Ko-Matoran truce trustees couldn’t. They tried to solve this with high-minded philosophy and idealistic morals. They had a good run, but their theoreticals didn’t offer any practical follow-throughs or consequences. We can negotiate a truce with hard facts and evidence against both sides. "My contacts in the Assembler’s villages indicate that a mass boycott of Ta-Metru goods, by both Po-Metru and Le-Metru is in the works. The Coliseum can't make anyone buy Ta-Metru goods. We have to be ready for whatever blowback might come from that.” Marka began making her way from table to table, getting updates from the Matoran about their various contacts, connections, and informants, furiously taking notes in an old sailor’s shorthand. "Hasira, keep working on your Ta-Metru connections. See if you can find some artisans, too. The firepits workers a bit too opinionated." “Nireta, how about that Moto-Hub contact? Hm. Well, I wouldn't be happy about those assembly supply restrictions either. Okay, good work." “Tengi, your Po-Matoran transporter?” “Gadjati stopped doing business outside the sculptors and their allies, apparently.” Tengi crossed her arms on the table in front of her in frustration. Then, she remembered, “But there might be a Le-Matoran transporter who would have similar information.” Marka nodded, “Good, follow up on that and see how that pans out, then.” She went around addressing the gathered Matoran, mostly students, with a few traders and waterworkers in the mix. At the table beside Tengi, the Synthetics student, Ginsa, shook her head. “The longer this stalling goes on, the more the entire city suffers. Regulations and restrictions just frustrate the workers and add to the tension. I’d say its only a matter of months before one side or another loses it. Did you hear about Kesian, armoring up his new class of transporters?” “That’s just talk,” another Matoran at her table dismissed the assertion. “The nutjob probably started the rumor himself.” “I think it’s foolish to write off Le-Metru’s most prominent player so quickly,” Ginsa snapped. "I think Kesian and his whole company are bad news." “Everything is conspiracy and woe for you, Ginsa,” Nireta chuckled. "I’ll see what headway I can make with my Moto-Hub informant, then maybe we can worry about conspiracy.” “Besides, what we really need to know is who’s running the insurgents in Po-Metru,” Ginsa pointed out. "They’re supposed to be the ones who started this whole thing.” Many Matoran from surrounding tables expressed disagreement with this. “Yeah, they’re not known for their subtlety. They shouldn’t be so hard to find. So why are they?” another fretted, neither agreeing nor disagreeing with Ginsa’s accusation, but not wanting others to continue taking sides over it. Quiet conversations died off as Marka had made her way back to the front of the small room. “I know it might not seem like we’re getting much done,” she looked from mask to mask deliberately. “But I promise, it’s important. Information is powerful, and gathering and appraising it is no small feat. I know, ideally we’d never have to use it to leverage against either side, but we can’t afford to live in a world of ideals anymore. Let’s meet here again, same day of next month. Great Spirit be with us all.” Review Topic The classified ad that Tengi was reading.
  19. I'm so glad you've enjoyed it thus far, as well as my research post! I've been a huge fan of the City of Legends since the first pages of the Mystery of Metru Nui, so fleshing out some history is just my favorite thing ever! I do worry, though, that I get a bit heavy-handed on the descriptions of politics and economy and stuff. Definitely edited out a lot, haha. Let me know if it ever gets to be too much, and starts to take away from the characters and plot! Thank you, again, for the feedback, and I hope you continue to enjoy
  20. Hey! So, like I mentioned, I've been enjoying this epic for a little while now, and am finally getting around to doing the review thing. Admittedly, I'm always initially slightly averse to first person present tense writing, but you have a very elegant way of making words do what (I assume) you want them to. Your writing style struck me as artistic without being frilly - no frivolous or flamboyant word use. If I had to equate your writing to another art form, I'd probably say it's like carving, which I suppose is ironically appropriate, considering the content of the epic You have great, hard-hitting lines, as well as intricate, deliberately crafted lines that enrich and give detail to the characters and story, working very well together. A hard-hitting line that stood out to me: A detail-y one: And, a nice mix of both: Probably not a coincidence that two of the three lines above are openers for their respective chapters. Well crafted. Other details that I enjoyed enough to want to point out: Clever explanation of the location etymology, without explicitly saying so. Adds a great layer of culture/society to your world, love it! The inclusion of the title, verbatim, in chapter 1 was also a nice touch! So, Corvec is a great character so far. Clear flaws, motivations (or lack thereof), and distinctive personality. How he chooses to use his Mahiki was pretty creative, I thought. Looking forward to seeing how more of his skillset plays out in his predicaments. My only gripe thus far is that, in comparison to Corvec, and perhaps Ahret (I like this villain, lots to find out about him, great power set. Mind powers are always terrifying) I feel like I don't really know who Halak is. She is certainly more than just an observer of events, but I feel like I should know more about what goes on in her head, why she says what she does say, etc. Her disdain of the Toa is currently her defining quality, at least to me. Now, I understand that this is one of the difficulties first person present narration presents, but as you've done so well so far, I'm more than confident you're able to handle the challenge. Keep up the great work! Ads
  21. Chapter 1: Gale Without warning, the howling winds changed direction. The boom of Tengi’s one-Matoran sailer swung with a vengeance across the unprotected deck, and she was lucky her Kakama wasn’t smashed, as she dove into the shallow cockpit of her vessel, which was barely more than a divot in the deck of the sailer. She scrambled to get the tiller and sheet under control, nearly strangling herself in the process. The sail was full to the bursting with the gale winds, and the sheet threatened to rip her arm out of its socket. The torrential downpour made the deck of her sailer slick, but worse, made visibility nearly zero. It was by sheer dumb luck that an aggressive wave passed under her boat, and turned her course, that she was able to maneuver sharply around the towering stone column that erupted in the water right in front of her. With her feet hooked under the hiking strap that ran across the cockpit, Tengi leaned all the way over the edge of her sailer, keeping a sharp angle on the tiller that controlled the rudder, and yelling as the sheet rope attached to the sail pulled her other arm in the opposite direction. Unfortunately, her quick sailing around the pillar drove her directly into the beginnings of a huge whirlpool. This was the homestretch. It was almost impossible to escape a whirlpool, because it was almost impossible to keep wind in the sail. And the winds weren’t letting up. Tengi trimmed her sail as her boat began to pick up speed, going around in circles. She caught a brief glance through the rain of another Matoran on a similar sailer dodging around the same pillar she had, and having learned from Tengi’s mistake, swung out and around the whirlpool. Tengi was distracted for a split second too long, trying to see who it was that sailed past her, and the wind caught her sail from the opposite angle, throwing the boom again, across the deck. She didn’t dodge in time, and with a scream, was knocked from her sailer into the churning waters. Followed closely by her flailing sail-skiff, the Matoran struggled valiantly for a few moments more, before disappearing into the gullet of the whirlpool. And, all of the sudden, instead of being pulled downward, spinning violently, Tengi found herself free-falling. She only fell a short distance, before a magnetic field cushioned her fall, and gently deposited her on the floor. Still, she had to roll quickly out of the way, as her entire sailer was none too gently deposited right where she had been standing. She stood in a large, well-lit chamber. The room was dominated by puddles and some repair crews, and a few other competitors. “What took you out?” the Ga-Matoran closest to her called. It was Nireta, who had also been a classmate of Tengi’s, three terms ago. “Whirlpool,” she replied. “Again.” “Ah,” the Ga-Matoran nodded in understanding as she loosed the halyard of her own sailer, letting down the battered sail carefully. “Rookie mistake, Tengi. They always set up the whirlpools rotating counter to whichever way the winds are going.” Another sailing competitor was suddenly dropped from above, much too close for either of their comfort. They both yelped, as the dejected Matoran’s boat also crashed to the floor. In pieces. “Stini! What happened!” Both Tengi and Nireta rushed over to the younger Ga-Matoran. “Smashed between two falling pillars,” she sniffled. She gaped at her ruined sailer skiff. “I just shelled out huge to repair the entire hull.” “The course designers are getting careless, I’m telling you.” Nireta shook her head. “They only care about the Le-Matoran races now, that’s what brings in the most money.” To this, nobody said anything, especially when the she-Matoran noticed the Le-Matoran and Po-Matoran repair crews go quiet and try not to look like they were listening. Usually, the repair and transport crews would chat and congratulate competitors, as they helped prepare vehicles or vessels for transport from beneath the Coliseum’s arena, where they were, back to the Matoran’s residence. But not recently. “Stini,” Nireta changed the subject. But not entirely. “A bunch of us are going over to Kailani’s tonight. You should join us.” Both Nireta and Tengi gave the young Ga-Matoran a pointed look. “Tengi, you’ll be there, right?” “I’ll try to make it,” she said, as she began stepping away to meet a Le-Matoran who was waiting for her to inspect her boat with her. “I still have a lab write up to work on with my group, though.” Nireta rolled her eyes, and called, “You should just drop out, like half the metru. Nobody has time for classes, anymore.” Again, this was a loaded statement, and there would definitely be more talk later, at Kailani’s tavern. The experienced sailor Matoran turned back to Stini and the mess of Stini's boat. She waved over a Po-Matoran mechanic. They would probably need an Onu-Matoran as well, for this mess. Tengi assessed the Le-Matoran standing by her boat quickly, and warily, but smiled as she approached. He looked a bit unsure, just like she felt. She didn’t know this one. “Are you from repairs?” “No, transport. I have some cargo haulers you can rent-use,” he returned her smile naturally, and offered her a fist in customary greeting. She returned the gesture, tapping his fist with her own, inwardly sighing. These city Matoran and their customs. She’d never been anywhere, where this salute and greeting was so widely and ubiquitously adhered to. “To rent? What happened to the equipment haulers? Last race, I just gave the Po-Matoran some cogs and my address, and my boat showed up the next day.” “Oh, you must have worked with Gadjati,” the Le-Matoran waved vaguely. “He had to take some work-job with a big client, a few months past.” Tengi saw through the Le-Matoran’s wording. Gadjati had given his business exclusively to the sculptors. She shook her head. She’d thought better of the Po-Matoran and his cargo-hauling business. But, she realized that it would probably be impossible to get a Po-Metru delivery to her home in the education districts of Ga-Metru, nowadays. “I can give you the same rate-prices as Gadjati did!” the Le-Matoran said quickly. “I heart-promise!” “Well, I…” Tengi trailed off, shifting her weight to one leg, trying to look unsure. While she didn’t need better prices, she did want to see if she could keep this eager-to-please Le-Matoran talking. It was always good to know who the loose talkers were, and better to build rapport with them. “I can give you a cut rate-price if you’d want to use my cargo haulers for the next … say, three boat races.” “It’s not that, not the pricing,” Tengi glanced out the large gates of the chamber, where she could see numerous businesses’ cargo haulers and equipment transports waiting. She looked back to the business Matoran, a bit sheepishly, and admitted truthfully, “I don’t know how to drive a cargo-hauler.” Although, it might be worthwhile to learn, she thought. Renting and driving a cargo hauler was usually a lot cheaper than getting a delivery. But, Tengi raced at the Coliseum infrequently enough, she was willing to just pay for delivery. “Oh,” the Le-Matoran shuffled around, a bit embarrassed. “Well, I usually only deliver-drop for the Archivists or the warehouse businesses, but-“ “Tengi! Don’t forget Kailani’s!” Nireta’s shout interrupted the Le-Matoran. “Don’t bother, I still have my Onu-Metru equipment transporter rented for another two days. I’ll take care of your boat.” In her first few races, both on the Coliseum’s treacherous Sea of Protodermis and on the Silver Sea itself, Tengi had been woefully unprepared to face the small swarm of businesses and laborers that eagerly awaited a cut of the competitor’s potential winnings, promising quality repair jobs, or the quickest deliveries, or the most reliable cargo hauler rentals at the best rates. Thankfully, many a Ga-Matoran with no patience for these games had taken Tengi under their collective wing. Although fiercely competitive when racing on the waves and in the stadium, the sailor’s community, comprised of mostly Ga-Matoran, was a very close-knit and protective group. Tengi was very glad to have found them, so early on. But now, as a more established competitor and more established resident in general, Tengi wanted to start doing more things on her own. Tengi saw the Le-Matoran’s mask-expression fall. She did feel a bit badly for him. He was clearly new to the sports competition scene, and was eager to make connections and deals. Then again, she was probably newer than he. “Hey, let’s try for next time,” she said, and plucked up the courage to pat his shoulder. It seemed like a very Metru-Nui type thing to do. “What’s your name?” “Larker,” he said, and pointed to where his cargo hauler was parked. “I’m with Phase Dragon Enterprises.” Indeed, the company’s logo was emblazoned on the sides and back of his vehicle. “Larker, with the Phase Dragon hauler,” Tengi repeated, already turning back to her buffeted boat, to find a Po-Matoran already inspecting it. “Hey! I didn’t call you over! What are you doing? I don’t need repairs!” The Po-Matoran backed off apologetically. Newer competitors who took the advice or even labor services of unsolicited repairmen or repair crews often ended up paying far too much for mediocre repair jobs that one could easily learn to do themselves. Tengi had learned this the hard way. But, since coming to the Great City over a decade ago now, she wouldn’t be falling for their scams any longer. “Tengi, the skiff-sailor with the blue eyes,” Larker muttered to himself, as he turned back toward the entrance. It would be easy to remember her, at least, he hoped, because most Ga-Matoran had amber or yellow eyes. It was good business, to make an effort to remember potential clients. And Mata Nui knew, he needed good business. Reaching his cargo hauler, he hopped into the control pit, and sighed. It was time to go home. The only competitors left in the races, which were more like survival matches, would be only the most experienced ones - the ones with their own cargo haulers or immovable contracts. He wouldn’t gain any new clients here. He had no desire to stay to see the results of the high-stakes obstacle course race. Every Matoran knew that Macku was dominating the sailing racing, recently, ever since Marka stepped back. Word on the street was that the famed skiff-sailor had gotten a promotion within the Ga-Metru Cobalt Guard, which was the current iteration of the water district’s policing force. Also, he didn’t want to be around after the races, when they drained the arena. It was usually a mess. “Time to go home, Subi. No luck getting job-work tonight.” The Le-Matoran tapped the sleeping dome-shape that slept in the control cockpit, which was little more than a platform with waist-high walls, a cheap windshield, and a creaky access-gate. But, at least the levers and controls worked well, despite looking like they didn’t. It was a beater, but it was the one he could afford. “Subi, leave-move.” He rapped the shell of the sleeping nipper, or juvenile Ussal Crab. Subi was one of the few survivors of the most recent Ussalry raid by a mysterious and ravenous rahi in his district. His old Ussal had been devoured in the attack, along with most of the others, and the Ussalry masters didn’t have enough supplies left of earnings saved to take care of the survivors of the attack, which were the smallest and youngest of the Ussal. Still, there hadn’t been enough earned to resurrect their business. It would take a few decades, but with the right socialization and diet, Larker hoped someday Subi would be able to do delivery runs with him. Of course, Larker himself had recently lost his free-lancing solo-running delivery business. It seemed that every other Matoran he talked to these days were having similar hardships making a living. More and more workers were turning to the larger companies in the city, in every district. It was the large companies that could hold their own against the new regulations and power through the lines being quickly drawn to divide the city. The Le-Matoran gave up trying to wake up the baby Ussal, who looked more like a Kanohi-sized pebble, and hoisted the lazy thing into the low-walled bed of the cargo hauler. “You’re never any use-help.” Larker powered up his cargo-hauler, triple checking over his shoulder as he threw the vehicle into reverse. Some Ta-Metru Gukko-brain had double parked right next to him, and there was a great deal of honking and name calling as the Le-Matoran executed a sullen 17-point turn. At long last, his hauler was pointed toward the right direction, and he merged without his turn signal onto the elevated ramp that would take him up to the impressive, colossal roundabout that encircled the Coliseum. The city boasted an extensive elevated highway system, with its nimbus around the Coliseum. Before Larker had gotten into transportation, he had been a mechanic and constructor for Viaducts Nui, and had worked on many of those roadways. But then again, almost half of the city’s Matoran had worked on the initial highway build. The Le-Matoran took the upper exit that would take him to Le-Metru’s Moto-Hub district. He had a corner in a small lot where he kept his cargo haulers. All two of them. One was his own, small hauler that he proudly owned. It had served him many decades faithfully, during his time as a trusted and well-connected delivery Matoran. The other was the one he was driving. It was a bulkier hauler he had on lease from Phase Dragon Enterprises, who had taken him on as a ‘partner’, and they'd given him some low-level deliveries and pick ups from their endless list. The company was run by a high-up Le-Matoran named Kesian. Kesian had even been part of some of the Turaga's Councils, and apparently he had been the Matoran to negotiate for Le-Metru to be able to keep proprietorship of Tele-Metru Inc, the city's largest communications company. Larker had never met the Matoran who technically employed him mask-to-mask, but he also didn't want to. Phase Dragon contractors only met with the boss if they failed. So, Larker never intended to meet him. Kesian employed enough administrative staff over his expansive transport and assembly network that he didn’t need to bother with day-to-day matters, such as expendable errand-runners like Larker. But with Ta-Matoran businesses backing out of and avoiding outside contracts, followed predictably by the sheep-like Onu-Matoran, work for free-lancing delivery Matoran like Larker had become rather scarce. It was completely unorthodox for some of his most regular and stable delivery jobs to cut him off. At first, it was the smaller vendors that stopped having him deliver their shipments - an artisan shop here, a laboratory there. And, the cancellations were from every metru, so he just blamed the growing tension between the Ta-Matoran and the Po-Matoran. It was okay, because he only had three deliveries a month, at best from those small businesses. His own moderately successful network could take a few losses. But then, when the Archivists for some reason threw their lot in with the Ta-Matoran, and decided that the Le-Matoran weren’t trustworthy, Larker had lost over half of his source of income. And it had happened almost overnight. None of the other Le-Matoran he talked to, who were in a similar dilemma, knew what had happened. And so, here he was, working late nights trying to scrape up a haggler’s deal to support a dying sports entertainment vein of business in the city. A quarter of whatever profit he made, transporting whatever in a Phase Dragon vehicle, though, went back to the company. And although the company said they’d reimburse for maintenance and upkeep of their vehicles, it took nearly two weeks of documents and processing to pocket that reimbursement. It was horrendous. But there was nothing anybody could do, because the state of the entire city was like that. The Ga-Matoran, at least, were still civil to the Matoran who had sided with the Sculptors, and would take business without discrimination. But, Larker suspected even that was changing. It was no secret that the Ga-Matoran were inevitably join the smelters It would be foolish of them not to - both Metru relied heavily on one another for production, processing, and advancement of protodermis supply. Now, if a Matoran wanted a good income, breaking into the Protodermis industry was where it was at. Larker swerved and let out some expletives that a young Ussal crab probably should not have been exposed to, as an electric green Nui Chaser sped past him, blaring its horns. It was a new, expensive, and obnoxious class of personal vehicle that had just been released earlier that year. “Ever-sorry, little shell-buddy,” Larker pulled to the shoulder of the road to check on the howling Ussal nipper. “You’re safe-fine. From your cry-wailing, you’d think Mata Nui himself couldn't help you. What a drama-king. You’re staying home tomorrow.” At long last, the Le-Matoran turned into the commercial vehicle lot that he called his own - at least, a corner of it. He also had his old Ussal cart parked in his cluster of parking spots. He meant to move it to to the next Ussalry over, after the local one was destroyed, but hadn’t gotten around to it yet. Larker heaved Subi out of the bed of the Phase Dragon cargo hauler, and pointed. “See, one day, that Ussal cart will be yours. When you’re big and healthy-strong.” The nipper gave an understanding twitch of his eye-stalks. “Exactly.” Larker nodded in agreement. He set his pet down, and began walking toward the Moto Hub entrance. Technically, the lot was an extension of the Moto Hub, serving as roof-level, outdoor parking for extra or rejected vehicles. Extra space was rented out to locals, like Larker. Having worked part time at the Hub, on and off for decades, though, he was privy to a tenuous but generous employee’s discount, and he milked it for all it was worth. He also was able to cut through the levels of the Hub down to the pedestrian walkways of the city, that would take him to his apartment nearby. He pushed open the door that led to the spectator’s ring around the test track. “Come on, a bit of hurry-rush would be nice,” he urged the nipper, who trailed behind him. “You’re too big to lift-carry. I've spoiled you wreck-rotten.” The crab grumbled and scuttled through the doorway. Larker did feel bad for the nipper, though. While the next Ussalry over did have space to hold his Ussal cart, it didn’t have room for any more Ussals, young or old. Subi needed to interact with other Ussals, and learn from them. Perhaps he’d look into other Ussalry centers, in other subdivisions of Le-Metru. “Well, at least we’ll be able to get a head start on our sleep tonight,” Larker half-laughed. Test track drivers sped around the perilous, undulating track, even at this late hour, since most of them had the day off tomorrow. A few of the drivers were residents in Larker’s same apartment cluster, and he didn’t bother to hide his relief, knowing they’d be back late, and he’d be long asleep. Larker started down the stairs they had made their way to, planning which businesses to visit the next day, and ask with as much dignity as he could, if they had any work for him. “What now?” Subi’s squeals from the top of the stairs halted him in his tracks. “Oh.” The nipper was still too small to go down stairs on his own. The few times he’d tried, he’d ended up flailing on his back, having fallen halfway down the staircase. Spoiled and as lacking common Ussal sense as he may be, even Subi knew enough to avoid being left out at night, at all cost. Even the heart of a well-lit, well-populated metru wasn’t safe with the hunting Rahi on the loose. In fact, as the scent of the hunting Rahi spiked in the air, perhaps the well-populated areas were even more dangerous. Review Topic
  22. Salutations! Yes, I definitely had a ton of fun planning the setting and stuff, and writing it out is also an adventure! The thing I love about fanfic writing is that you don't have to worldbuild from the ground up. Fitting stories into an established canon and making them coherent is like doing a puzzle, but on the level of people and societies. I'm sure you can relate. Haha, definitely is a hobby that keeps me on my toes (ps, I also have been enjoying your epic! I am not the best at committing to leaving a review, haha, but reciprocity is a decent motivator)
  23. Haha, as someone who aspires to be a teacher eventually, this makes me very happy. As someone who is still recovering from recently being a student, you have my apologies XD
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