Mare Tranquillitatis

I agree, this set looks awesome! I love the rifle and the tree, even if there could have indeed been more leaves and vines.Thanks for the review!

Transformers are cool. At, least, movie-wise. However I never liked Devastator that much.

Happy birthday!

Haha, very funny! I love the style, simple yet very accurate. Good job!

The most fitting word for this Epic is... convincing.Continuing an official, canon story is very difficult, due to to strong limitations of many sorts. Though, this job convinces me. I'm not an expert of storyline and such like bones and many others, so I can't give much feedback about it being in the canon story main lines or not. There's only one thing that I don't understand very much: weren't the Toa Mahri under the influence of the Skakdi Fusion?Still, I can give criticism about grammar, style and wording. I numbered the errors or corrections to do I could see, instead of multi-quoting the main post over and over. I think it woul be better if the following were1) each the other2) I'd cancel "as if" and say "stared at him: they expected him to be allied with the Rahi.". It's a more fluent style.3) "Can I leave now, oh great and mighty Miserix?", he said in a voice tinged with sarcasm.4) I'd love to stay5) "We need to find Protodermis, so I can create another Olmak and get us out of this planet."6) staring her right in the eyes, as if he was challenging her defiance7) dodging and zooming8) I think "stunned" isn't the right tense: you should say "getting stunned by the impact". If they were already stunned, there wouldn't have been any need to create a wall of Stone, right? ;)9) the first part isn't clear. What did you mean to say?10) same as 9.Another thing: I'd not put "Elsewhere" every time, and absolutely not "Elsewhere once again". It kinda ruins the serious atmosphere the Epic is set in, in my opinion. You could try putting "---" or similars in the middle of the page to separate different times, places or parts of the story. I would rarely use "Elsewhere".Then, a last hint: remind to cap the first letter of every proper name!Of course, you're the author, so you can choose whether to follow my tips or not: it's your choice, after all, that must correct the Epic.As I said before, this first chapter is promising and I think that the whole Epic could turn to be very good. The plot looks a bit confused, right, but it has some good ideas that certainly need to be explored and explained deeper; wording is quite good IMO, as well as the description of the battle scenes. I think that, with a little bit of work, you could do a nice Epic! Never surrender, anyways!

Nice question, I had that doubt too. I think it was because of the Three Virtues: maybe it wasn't the Toa Nuva's Destiny to win the fight against the United Piraka, while it was the Inika's Destiny and Duty to fight those villains when the latter ones lose their Unity and thus became vulnerable. "Divided we fall".

"American Woman" - The Guess Who

Ow, Specializations look so awful to me...

Well, an open world game would be great. As well as that "blacksmiths shops" feature. 80 characters? That's pretty big. And, using the Ring to enter the world of the Ringwraiths! This looks very promising!

You know what? I was tempted to add it at first, then thought "Nah". I should have put that. No, it doesn't count."A lot" is a big word. Veeery huge. I do my best.TPBM is going to school tomorrow. *sigh*

Happy birthday, LewaLew! ET just "welceom"ed you into the AFOLs Club.

I can't get so fast with my poor scooter, but I have exceeded many times.TPBM drives something.

^ No one has ever seen his face. If you did, Halo would end. :PHis face looks a lot like angry face >:-(.

^ No, no, not wrong. ^^Not only comic making's essence: applies also to Short Stories and Epics... >.<

Creator's block, a mortal disease.

It reminds me of Skyrim's Steel plate helmet. Man, how I hate that helmet. But this one seems cool.

What,I think it'll devastate the lives of many people. First off, I don't really think spoiler tags are necessary since we're talking about gameplay mechanics. I don't want to click a spoiler thinking I'm hearing about gameplay and then get some story spoilers.Anyway, I'm not sure what video you were watching. The pulse grenade when thrown activates a small bubble that acts as an EMP and drains shields. At the end of it's shield drain, it will explode, killing anything in the bubble. That's all there is too it. It's essentially energy drain from Halo 3.~U_K~Okay.The video I was watching is from Halo 4 Follower, who's got pretty much huge news on Halo 4. It was Episode 50, if I'm not mistaken. It showed a MLG match.

I've already heard of Slizers and Roboriders...

It's a liquer made out of blueberries, as far as I know. Made in Sardinia.Nope.TPBM likes tea.

Nice color scheme, robo-boy. Er, I meant Gundam.

Your name says it all: it's a Gundam!

^Whatever. Hard to say on first impact.Not only his eyes are stretched out, but also his neck is longer than usual.

You watch Arby n the Chief?Who says Vorzakh is the best Vahki?

Perfect. The design is perfect. And, finally, something original. I don't think there have been many flower-MOCs here.It would have been better if it had more leaves, but, hey, still an impressive job. Simple yet so glorious. I want a garden full of these! :P9/10. I bow at you, sir.

He's burning... and he's getting free!