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Toa Sonis

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  1. Kikanalo launching-what a genius idea! Nireta's catapult launching the farthest is also really funny. Love that you just picked a bunch of random MNOG 2 Matoran to do this. Oh, and how could I forget the "SIXTY SECOND DANCE PARTY!"? So creative!
  2. I laughed hard over the whole thing! The continuing banter over timeline, global warming, Twitter, and all the other issues is hilarious! You do a really great job in keeping the characters consistent throughout.
  3. The contrast between Furno/Bulk's project and Kopaka/Rocka's was hilarious! ...is Rocka your favorite Hero perchance? ;)Anyway, couldn't find any grammer/spelling issues with it. Yay!
  4. Captivating action! The emotions felt by Jaller and his guard team were well conveyed, and overall the depth of content was nicely done. Makuta's speeches were well worded, especially the second one. Nicely done!
  5. Ga-Matoran: Well, maybe Voldemort's in there, or Tigerstar, or Basta, or even Edward!Le-Matoran: Edward? *shudders* Now that would be scary.Onu-Matoran: What's so bad about him?Le-Matoran: Nothing, really, it's the insane rush of fanatic teenaged girls that scares me....Absolutely love that part! Totally hilarious! Great comedy!
  6. A fitting addition to the original Stellar Quest; however, I was unaware that Klimaat died. Maybe I missed something? Regardless, it was an interesting story with all the depth and wonderful vocabulary I expected. Everyone else already pointed out grammer/spelling errors, so there's really not much else I can say!
  7. Wow, nice! I like the almost alternate reality of being inside a website...or at least that's how it feels to me. I do agree with everyone else though, Bionicle weapons would be an improvement.
  8. Gollum, gollum...Smeagol wants it.Good work, I like Mazeka as Deagol.
  9. Nice! Love the song...it's one of my favorite poems from the Trilogy.
  10. Hilarious! I especially love all the different plot titles and then Levak-Kal's objections to them. Oh, and the naming...Keep writing!
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