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My LE has been dispatched. So exited!

Wow, thanks a lot man. Thats really encouraging. I will defiantly try to work on my grammar for you. I also woundnt say Im so much "shortening" my character list, its just that I want to focus on these two mainly(At least for this book). Anyway, thanks so much. I will try and work on chapter 2 tonight, if I have time.Also, about the rahi animals, Im really only using the earth names as place holders, as I dont know of many rahi.

I was thinking Alpha

Im like that a little with Bionicle.

Epic: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7489Description is in that thread

Hi, so this is some what of a re try of We are Metru. I have really tried hard and did a lot of reading to make this the best I could. The chapters are also a lot shorter XDAny way, just so you know, its non-cannonical. Think of it as a sort of re-boot if you will. I also really tried hard to get people to relate to the main character(Vakama)I am going to try and limit the amount of main character to two this book(Vakama and Matau), as the whole series will really arch over them two.Review: http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=7490 TGLoMN-Chapter 1 A dead silence filled the coliseum, like a soft breeze on a spring afternoon. Its gentle whoosh passed through Vakama’s body in a chilling, almost shivering presence. He could almost hear his own heartbeat racing away in his chest, its uncontrollable urge to rip right out of its place.He fidgeted uncomfortably, his aching muscles unable to relax. He rolled his neck and shoulders around, but it came to no avail. The horde of Matoran crammed together like fish in a can. Vakama could have sworn he had never seen the coliseum this busy. He had been told that every single Matoran in Metru Nui was here. He held his breath and closed his eyes, wishing he could be anywhere else.A Matoran’s elbow came crashing into his right side.“Sorry”, The Matoran said, not even giving Vakama a glance. Vakama winced. The bump was accidental, yes, but the apology was hollow with falseness.Vakama looked around, his gaze scattered his surrounding with great horror. There must have been thousands of Matoran, all tightly packed, into a space not much bigger than a large Kohli pitch. The coliseum floor was empty, and its surface was covered in dust and sand, like a thin blanket. The stands were packed so tight that was barely any room between each Matoran. So little, that arms and legs were interlocked within the crowd.He noticed the six different sections on the stadium. Each Matoran of a Metru had a differed colour. Blue for Ga-Metru, The Metru of Teaching, of which its vast majority of its population were female and was the only Metru that this occurred. Green was for Le-Metru, the Metru of Air-Craft engineering, and inventers of the great chute system, spanning over the entirety of Metru Nui. Brown was for Po-Metru, the Metru of Art and sculptures. Black was for Onu-Metru, the Metru of archives and history. White was for Ko-Metru, the Metru of engineering, and lastly his own, Ta-Metru, red and the Metru of Tool crafting and Mask Making.None of the Matoran from different Metru’s sat together. Those were the rules. Most interaction from the different Metru’s outside the coliseum was strictly trade only. Vakama couldn’t really recall if he had ever spoken to a Matoran outside Ta-Metru even once. It wasn’t like his job, mask making, really opened for high interaction with Matoran of the other Metru’s. A tradesman, in Vakama’s case, usually a Matoran named Nuhrii would pick up the masks and sell them on the border. He didn’t mind it so much and from rom what Nuhrii told him, they were strange creatures.Vakama’s chest started to cave in as the crowd seemed to converge upon him. An illusion he knew, but he could do nothing to shake the fear. He felt his head go light, as if it were a balloon filled with helium, wanting to travel off in to the distant stars, and the orange sky of Ta-Metru. He was breathing heavily. No one seemed to notice his pain and panic. Why wouldn’t they notice?Vakama could hear nothing, only the slight echoes from the shouts“What’s going on?” someone yelled. The voices sounded distant, yet close at the same time.He felt the tingling vibrations at the other Matoran slammed into him trying to see what was going on, on the coliseum floor, as if he wasn’t there - a ghost in a crowd.“Move out of the way, I can’t see!” an impatient voice behind him said. He felt a shove from behind him. Vakama turned around, ready to give him what for. A large Matoran stood there, eyeing him up, like a serpent watching its prey. Vakama wanted to punch him square in the face, but he couldn’t. He just stood there for an awkward moment looking at him, unsure of what to say.“I... I’m sorry” Vakama stuttered finally.Why did he say that?Vakama wasn’t much of a fighter, or a hero. He always wanted to be, but he felt he knew his place in the world: The quiet type, too afraid to do anything heroic. He’d be a laughing stock if people even knew who he was.“You’d better be.” The Matoran laughed, almost aggressively. His friends joined in, purposely making the laughter sound violent, just to intimidate him. Vakama felt the warm blood swarm to his face. He turned around the back of his head burning in humiliation, like acid in the back of his neck, fizzing at his metal exterior.Why couldn’t he get the courage to just stand up for himself once in a while?The violent shouting was interrupted by a loud horn. The Matoran’s faces sank, as if they were gazelles spotting a lion amongst them.The large coliseum doors opened like the gates of Karzahni, and a handcuffed and beaten Toa Lhikan stepped out.

How exactly does the map pass work? Because I'm getting pretty confused by that and it's really the driving force behind me thinking it's not worth it. I thought I was buying the map packs with this, not some pass that I'm not fully understanding yet.(That and seriously, FUD should've been a DVD, not a download code...)~|ET|~The map pass give you the two helmets and access to the DLC when it is released. Its useless in the LE and you can buy if for a lot cheaper in shops on its own.Can you not just cancel your LE and get the standard edition?But I did essentially buy the maps with it?How cheap is it elsewhere then?And no, it's already shipped, so I cannot.~|ET|~For me its £16, so add that to the £40 game and thats £56. The LE is £65

How exactly does the map pass work? Because I'm getting pretty confused by that and it's really the driving force behind me thinking it's not worth it. I thought I was buying the map packs with this, not some pass that I'm not fully understanding yet.(That and seriously, FUD should've been a DVD, not a download code...)~|ET|~The map pass give you the two helmets and access to the DLC when it is released. Its useless in the LE and you can buy if for a lot cheaper in shops on its own.Can you not just cancel your LE and get the standard edition?

The mask of stealthCant remember the exact name, but Nuparu Mahri wears it

Ive heard all skins will be unlockable at some point anyway.

I agree. It was a bit of a waste. Still might cancel mine and get season pass instead

I thinkHelmet: RecruitBody: GUNGNIR (Becuase it looks like Iron man a little)Shoulders: Pathfinder.What about you guys?

For the parts, have you tried brick link? You can get some great deals on there

He is actually Waring prototype mark IV IO believe. It just looks similar to VI. You can change flood skins off, you just cant change the weapons

Not very stupid, if you consider that the enemies in infection typically just use swords... I've only see one other varient, and that's with a hammer. I'm not too worried, as they have plenty of updates and DLC for the future. I'm actually grateful we got actual flood and plenty of new features.I would rather we had the normal spartan form if it ment the flood could carry shotguns. Cops and robbers was my fave infection game type. It just seems silly to not even have the option, even if it was only for the spartan type skin. Cant be that hard to do can it?

Speaking of the break out game, I have a ton of codes. PM me if interested

So? There a game dev. Its what they do.

Im so annoyed. Its been confirmed that you cant change the Flood weapons in customs. How stupid is that?

So Halo 4 has some pretty high reviews all around. I would say, by looking at it, that its an average of about 9/10, give or take a few milli-points. Super exited now. 4 and a half days left people!

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