Wow, thanks, Aderia! I have actually written more Bionice-related stuff on another site, but that wasn't really serious writing, just for fun. So in a sense, this was my first purposeful piece, if that makes any sense. I do plan on making Adray's story into a short epic (that's so contradictory...) with this story as a sort of epilogue. In fact I already have quite a bit (almost 2000 words or so) done; I'd say it's going pretty well. And yes, I do have a Skype, but I may not have time to do writeoffs and such that you guys have; I'll have to take a look, though. Thanks.