This is really good. I really like the cape-ish thing, it gives the upper body a bit more bulk where it would otherwise look wierd. Also yellow and blue is a much better colour scheme for lightning than white and blue, so it's good that you decided on that. Personally, I think it's a 9/10, my only gripe is the thin torso. So yeah, you've got talent and hope to see more of your creations.