Not bad. I always enjoy the simple black pen + cross hatching style, which is a plus. However, the leaf itself seems odd that it had almost no shading on it at all apart from the creases. That and some for the lines aren't very straight. They're kind of wiggly at some parts. I also think gali might have a little bit of extra shading on her, and that the sea should have more detail as well. Those black spots in the water seem.... odd. While I love the perspective of which you are seeing gali (adds some character as it's sort of a candid shot), the rest of the background has an odd perspective. It's not wrong, but it's... off. I can't describe it. Also, I don't think she'd fit inside that hut. I aplogise for being negative, but while this picture isn't amazing, it's not bad either. It could use some work like I mentioned above. I love line art, and I am eager to see more pictures like this once you have mastered it. 6/10I know it seems low, but it's not