I saw the main character was an elf. WIN
I saw it has magic. WIN
I saw you've got mysterious powers related to animals. EPIC WIN.
However, on the other side, it seems to me right now that you're following the beaten fantasy road: young guy learns magic/some ability, saves the world. The end. Please please please () stray away from that, change it up. (Please)
But other than that, so far, so good. I didn't find any grammar errors, and you kept me captivated when I had a BIG project due the next day and wasn't even half-way done. Good job.
I can't wait for the rest!
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