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Grey Snow

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  1. Grey Snow
    Yes, Lightstone is here. The motto of Lightstone:
     
    Above the Toa, outside their knowledge, below the Order. Their mission is to track down any enemy, native or alien, and protect the Matoran and any others.
    If knowledge of you is found you will be terminated. Now is when everything changes, and you've got to be ready.
     
    The original from Torchwood:
     
    Outside the government beyond the police. Tracking down alien life on earth and arming the human race against the future. The 21st century is when everything changes and you’ve got to be ready.
     
    The characters:
     
    Matoro-Jack
    Orwik-Owen
    Introk-Ianto
    Torshia-Toshiko
    Rhylm-Gwen
  2. Grey Snow
    A new story, the first chapter will be done as a short story and then made as an epic. Matoro fans will like it, as it says in my title, it's called Lightstone, a Bionicle version of the show Torchwood.
     

    » Click to show Spoiler - click again to hide... «Matoro is back as the main character and leader of an organization that's below the Order but above the Toa, Lightstone (refrence to Torchwood), and with four others, possibly Order members, they have to keep the Matoran and others safe from threats, like alien threats, like humaniod Kane-Ra, etc.
  3. Grey Snow
    I have gym class and we're swimming and then math with a test and then lunch. Well my friend and I in both the gym and math class are going to do this tommorow. There's a lot of stuff in the ten to thirteen feet deep water, stuff we were supposed to swim and get and those were thrown too far, so tommorow we can stay in the pool and just dive for that stuff and get a pass to math and take the test later. It'll be great, I hate math and it'll be fun.
  4. Grey Snow
    I came up with a new one last night. I was listening to Jack Wagner-"Going Back Again" and I got to thinking. A short story about Axonn vs. Brutaka. Instead of them fighting a few times in 06 having Axonn confront Brutaka as a storm rolls in as the Piraka and Inika move down the stair case. He tells Brutaka he knows he's been betraying the Order and knows he defeated the Nuva. Brutaka replies with he can't do anything and absorbs the energy of ten antidermis zamors in one and mutates to a stronger form saying that not only his species can do it but the Orders powers on them can allow them to become stronger.
    He throws Axonn one and he refuses to use it and a long battle ensues between former friends. The "Going Back Again" thing was that it seems like Axonn trying to get Brutaka to turn back to the Order, leave his current ways, and a long battle occurs between two former friends.
    I'll probably call it "Hardships of Friendship" or something.
  5. Grey Snow
    A great theory I developed in the Status topic.
     

     
    The island would be the head/face
     

     

     

     
    And something from Greg.
     

     
     
     
    Beyond stating he has a physical body, I am not allowed to discuss Mata Nui's appearance. As far as the Maori evidence goes, I was not involved with BIONICLE when the original names were chosen, so I have no idea if those names were chosen on purpose or at random because someone liked how they sounded. Certainly some names, like Tahu, seem to have been chosen on purpose, since it means to "set on fire" in Maori -- on the other hand, the original name for the Matoran, Tohunga, means priest, and that has no connection at all to what the Matoran villagers were in story.
     
     
    I only put bits of it in instead of going into detail in everything, but in the Status topic people's responses molded my answers and defenses to defend the theory, so that has more information.
     
  6. Grey Snow
    That person I said was gone has returned today. I was suprised at lunch when I heard that and found her after school. I have yet to speak to her after about ten months, I will tommorow. But I'm just happy.
  7. Grey Snow
    Can't find it on Toys R' Us's website, the Lego or Bionicle site, ebay and Toywiz is very expensive and Amazon has nothing. So anyone know where I can get one, like a website?
  8. Grey Snow
    Yes, a new epic I forgot to mention earlier. Basically only a few, four or five, Toa live: Kopaka, Pohatu, Hahli and two others, not sure who yet, but not Taka. The Makuta have stopped Mata Nui again and from a new, permanent base, they are attacking and invading. Only one thing can stop the Makuta and drive them back to try to save the universe, and that is an item lost to time, and despite that, in multiple pieces.
    The Toa must find a new way to the enemy and locate the weapon to defeat them.
     
     
    I plan it to have three to four parts overall, can't wait to start.
  9. Grey Snow
    Well, Defection which is a short story of Nidhiki is up, and now I have one s.s., Seige of the Tower of Toa.
     
    Information on it:
     
    The Toa and Rahaga are in the tower with the Rahi in it that survived battle. Sidorak takes the hordes around and open fire, trying to break through the elemental barrier and get in with the help of a new general of Sidorak's, I won't say anything about him/her, because I haven't started yet.
     
     
    And my epics: Rebirth of Chaos.
     
    Information:
     
    Chaos was revived when the Piraka came and then he battles them on the island Mata Nui. Vezon has escaped before this, so its after they make it back to the surface after the Mana Ko attack.
     
     
    Legacy of the Phantoka (working title).
     
    Information:
     
    Well, I got the Phantoka except Icarax and Mutran/Vican a few days back and I started using them and now have an idea for my epic. I won't say much except say this:
     
    Many battles between Av and Shadow Matoran, Solek being hit by a Leech, Toa Ignika being destroyed by Vamprah I think it was, otherwise it's Antroz, and a few battles I have planned:
     
    Kirop vs. Solek
    Radiak vs. Photok
    Gavla vs. Tanma
     
    Later after everyone else is in the sky: Kirop vs. the bit Solek as Solek struggles with the fading light in him.
     
     
    And that's it.
  10. Grey Snow
    Some new projects.
     
    Epics:
     
    1. Oban Star Racers Season 2
     
    2. Something probably based on the 08 story
     
    3. Rebirth of Chaos, follow up to Birth of Chaos
     
    Short Stories:
     
    1. Siege of the Tower of Toa, follow up to Battle retold
     
    BZP Contests:
     
    1. Archives for BBC 47
     
    Other:
     
    1. Avatar the Last Airbender: Expanded Universe
     
     
    That should be everything.
  11. Grey Snow
    Well I decided to post a part of my new short story Defection since it'll be a while until I finish since I have other things to work on and not having a computer at my home with internet is a problem for posting as well. So here's what I have so far of Defection which is my take of Nidhiki's story.
     
     

    Defection 
    A hideous green four legged two clawed creature stood on a beach, looking at its reflection in the ocean, tears running down its eyes. It wasn’t always like that as it remembered back to a few months ago…..
     
    Toa Nidhiki had dodged another dagger from a female Dark Hunter who wore black Vortixx like armor and resembled one, but was of another species. “Odd how one can look like a Vortixx, a greedy species and yet fight for another and get no money, I guess that’s the difference between Vortixx and this species.” He told himself, knocking one out the air with his scythe.
     
    “I can’t beat this woman in this manner, I need a new plan.” Nidhiki told himself, jumping up onto the side of a Le-Metru building, digging the blade of his scythe into it to hold himself.
     
    She threw another dagger at him and this time he pushed off the wall, getting above the dagger. He pushed the end of his scythe’s handle into the ring at the end of the dagger and had a hold on it.
    He snapped the end of his scythe forward, hurtling the dagger forward back at the female Hunter. She couldn’t dodge and was struck on her right arm, the arm she was using the best accuracy and power with.
     
    She tore it out, having felt greater pain in her time, but the pain wasn’t the point, it was that her aim would be worse then. She took a defensive position, her left dagger raised to cover her body in case of attack.
     
    Nidhiki smiled and jumped at her, bringing his scythe up and brought the blade down. He pushed the end of it the handle up and knocked the dagger away so he could bring the blade back down with great strength.
     
    He slammed it down to feel it hit steel. He looked and saw a sword blocking and looked to see a red hand holding it. “What is it Lhikan?” Nidhiki asked, angered as the Hunter fled.
     
    “You were going to kill her weren’t you?” Lhikan asked and Nidhiki started to walk away from him. “Answer me Nidhiki, I see you’re troubled and I want to help.”
     
    “You can help by leaving me alone! What would we do if we didn’t kill them?” Nidhiki yelled back, uneasy silence following as he waited for an answer.
     
    “We can show them the errors of their ways, we can imprison them.” Lhikan replied, but the answer didn’t suit Nidhiki and he slipped away using his Volitak.
     
     
    Nidhiki had walked for some time and saw another Dark Hunter standing on the rooftop near him, but he hadn’t been spotted. It was a black Skakdi with a drill in hand. Nidhiki raised his scythe up and started to generate his wind energies.
     
    “Show yourself Toa.” The Skakdi said and Nidhiki realized he could be seen. “Thermal Vision.” The Skakdi said, telling Nidhiki how he had been seen.
     
    “I guess I can go head to head with you then.” Nidhiki said, smiling at the prospect of a good fight as opposed to an assassination type attack. Nidhiki jumped up as Reidak jumped down, his drill aimed at Nidhiki.
     
    Nidhiki slashed and the blade was driven into the drill, stopping his swing and the rotation. They were both locked in combat; their weapons colliding and neither could push the other back.
     
    Reidak had considerable strength, but Nidhiki was keeping him back with his wind energies. Nidhiki pushed the end of the handle of the scythe forward and hit Reidak in the head, stunning him momentarily.
     
    He whipped his scythe back around and aimed the blade an Reidak’s neck, ready to take it off with one swipe. Nidhiki missed and noticed he sank and saw the drill in the ground, turning it to quicksand, sucking him in too fast to eliminate Reidak.
     
    Reidak smiled and punched Nidhiki in the face, knocking him back, putting him on his back, sinking him in harder, but dead sooner.
     
    Nidhiki remained calm, he knew panicking would kill him and he created a vacuum above him, sucking him towards it and out of the quicksand. Reidak put his drill where the body would be momentarily and plunged it, ready to make contact and kill the Toa.
     
    Nidhiki swiftly moved the end of his scythe’s handle to that spot and knocked the drill of target. Nidhiki used that moment to levitate before Reidak and deliver a punch of his own to the Skakdi’s face.
     
    Reidak got up and jumped at Nidhiki only to meet the end of his scythe again. As he was struck in the face, Nidhiki got down and used Reidak’s weight to propel him forward and into a building.
     
    Reidak surprisingly got up, still giving his sadistic grin. “This isn’t good, if that couldn’t put him down for at least a minute, how am I going to stop him without killing him?” Nidhiki asked himself.
     
    He then remembered, that’s what Lhikan didn’t want him to do, kill his opponent, but he didn’t need Lhikan’s ways and he wasn’t around. He pointed the blade of his scythe at Reidak and ran at him, fully intent on ending the Dark Hunter’s life.
     
    “Hm, kill him, I really don’t care.” A voice said and Nidhiki and he turned, seeing a red Skakdi approaching with a gun in hand, a Lava Launcher. “Hakkan, shut up.” Reidak said and got up.
     
    “Two Skakdi, fun.” Nidhiki said, the smile from deciding to kill Reidak still on his face.
     
  12. Grey Snow
    I will be gone for a while, only on and active for a few days a week. I still have my computer, but no more access to the internet from it, so I can still write my epics and short stories, but I can only get acess to the internet at school where I check my PMs daily, and at my towns public library about three times a week average. So if I am slow in responding to anything or posting in RPG's, or anything else forgive me. I will try to get a new computer I can use the internet on soon, it may be a month or two though, so please be patient with me.
    This also includes contests.
  13. Grey Snow
    Some updates:
     
    New contest, it'll take place before the Barraki contest because I want to do it before the set comes out.
     
    Digimon War RPG is the RPG I'm going with, and my Kenshin RPG will be given to a fellow player, Necro.
     
    Karzahni Contest voting begins November first, as the contest ends on the same day, and voting will end on the 25 while the next begins.
     
    That's all for now I think.
     
     
  14. Grey Snow
    A little preview of what's to come after the Karzahni contest, I made this, so it's not great quality, I'll probably request a better one though, but here's the link.
     
  15. Grey Snow
    Unfortunatly, I won't be able to get onto the internet as much for probably the next month or two, so I'll only be able to get on 30-60 minutes a night at the most.
  16. Grey Snow
    Well, tommorow, Wednesday the 24th is my last day of school for the week, which means four day weekend. Thursday I get to stay home, Friday through Sunday we'll be at Lacrosse Wisconsin visiting friends, and I can get a Karzahni set there since there's a Toys R'Us store there. I might not be able to get on BZPower much, but I should be able to get on for some time, maybe about a fourth of the time I normally would on a weekend that I'd be home.
  17. Grey Snow
    Not much yet, but a new CoT RPG has been sent, here it is: Zatch Bell RPG, can't wait for that one, I don't have much, so I have nothing else to post.
  18. Grey Snow
    Just some new information:
     
    Story:
     
    You work for DATS (or some other organization) which gives you a Digivice of you choice/design. You are sent to the Digital War to participate in a war, with an army of Rookies with about three generals, Garurumon (sp), Greymon and another Champion level. You Spirit Evolve into Legendary Warriors (only the first few members will) or another Digimon and fight on. Every enemy you defeat and scan the data of becomes one of your soldiers.
     
    You are occasionaly sent back to the real world via portals that open and you have to live your life there, while you're in the Digital World you have a "clone" from the organization that lives your life for the time. Eventually another portal will open and you return, though random events happen, your army could be wiped out, etc.
     
    Digimon:
     
    The first members can have Legendary Warrior spirits since only about five will be available and I'll have one coughspiritofwaterLakdreimoncough. Anyone else can become any Digimon they want, though it will take a different, more human form and must be a Rookie or lower.
     
    Map:
     
    About seven to ten cities on the map that we'll be on, about five locations total, so about fifty towns total. Each town has a Champion as a general, then Ultimate, then maybe Mega. The leader of each map will be a stronger Digimon, and after that Digimon's defeat, we move onto another group of towns in the same sector, kind of confusing because of what I previously stated.
    Every once in a while, a Legendary Warrior on the enemy side will engage in battle with the players.
     
    That's about it.
  19. Grey Snow
    I just watched the first episode of Deltora Quest online. Though it was in Japanese, I had subtitles, not that bad reading and watching like that. I just watched the first, I'll watch more later, but now I really can't wait for that show to arrive in America.
  20. Grey Snow
    I just heard that a DS game called: Deltora Quest is out in Japan as a real time RPG. I love the series and have an RPG requested. I can't wait for the show to come to America and can't wait for the game, probably similar to Phantom Hourglass by some things I've read. I just can't wait for the show, game and my RPG.
  21. Grey Snow
    Well I have some updates:
     
    Birth of Chaos epic is up
    --Birth of Chaos is nearly finished, almost done with chapter three so far, only one is up
     
    Digimon War RPG is sent to Janus and awaiting approval
    --I'll give a hint at it: A massive war between armies of Digimon led by your character who spirit evolves, like in Digimon Frontier
     
    Aranos of Ardgoune made me a trainer card in my signiture, he did a great job at it
    --I'm trying to make my own following his instructions, no luck yet
     
    My second epic, which I will keep unnamed, is being planned, not very far in the planning stages yet though
     
    My Naruto Epic, A New Age is comming along nicely
    --Though it's only being planned, I'm nearly done with Shippuden, I have to start posting soon
     
    Good news at school, I have a Communication Technology class where there's a video unit, my groups doing Mythbusters, can't wait to get to that unit
     
    That's all for now.
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