-Whiplash- Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Preview of your Fan fiction. IDK who "they" are, but they sound like terrible company. Quote Gamers rise up, not down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toatali Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 My question is... where does he sleep? Quote Blog: toatalireviews.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Death the Kid is pretty special. Whatchoo gonna do now? Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I WANNA READ IT NOW! Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Really Pirok, you should update that mini comic. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Well done, Shattered Mask Productions, you did a good job. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I WANNA READ THE CHAPTER! BRING IT OUT NOW, AUTOMATON! AAGH! Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 GAH! Gimme time to finish it, I just got through a 2000 word essay for college. T_TI'd say that was a good purchase. You should never feel buyers remorse. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I suppose I can't critise you; I've already written my chapter, and I still haven't put it up.I'd say that was a good purchase. You should never feel buyers remorse.Wait 'til you've read the chapter. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I shall. Eagerly waiting. And wondering. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Same here, Automaton.Same here. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I can only wonder what the "Invention" is. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I don't have to wonder who she's talking about, but I have a pretty good idea of who she is. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I can guess who both characters are. Will the Agori receive names?And do you really...? Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 And do you really...?I could give you a Holmes-esque list of deductions, but I won't.And the Agori happen to be named Red and Blue. How very imaginative. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Well, as long as you then have a couple of characters called Gold and Silver thrown in there, I'm content. Maybe try a Ruby and a Sapphire. :PAnd please do. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 (edited) “Maybe now the queen of a Piraka might keep her word and free me…”Queen of a Piraka: Queen of a thief/murderer.Chapter 4: Queen of the NestQueen of the Nest = Queen of a Piraka?Phrase in common. Most likely deliberate.A '''nest''' is place of refuge built to hold an animal's eggs and/or provide a place to raise their offspring.Eggs/offspring = Thieves. Possbily representing place of refuge, but unlikely. Nest, almost like a web. Web sounds unoriginal, therefore nest.Now tell me: Am I right? Edited January 18, 2012 by Pirok the Va-Matoran Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Wait, did Red and Blue buy the invention or are they stopping someone from insulting their product?...Shut up...:PI'll say you're awfully close. Very close in fact. But unfortunately, not quite there. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Wait, did Red and Blue buy the invention or are they stopping someone from insulting their product?...Shut up... :PI'll say you're awfully close. Very close in fact. But unfortunately, not quite there. Nest, representing place of refuge. She controls all the thieves, all the murderers, everyone. And she wants that Skrall dead. Question is: Why? I'll need a bit more material for that, but still. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 A preview for a chapter coming soon. Alright, I'll commend you on getting this far. Fortunately, I've spun the web just a teensy bit more intricately than that. A bit. Not by much, but enough. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Alright, I'll commend you on getting this far. Fortunately, I've spun the web just a teensy bit more intricately than that. A bit. Not by much, but enough. Web. Spun. Metaphor. Suggests a lack of simplicity; Detailed, intricate.Therefore, she doesn't just control murderers and thieves. That wouldn't be enough. No, no. She controls much more. Much, much more. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Now you're just going crazy. Oh god, what have I created. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Now you're just going crazy. Oh god, what have I created. Suggesting that I've gone far; Too far.Alternatively, you're commenting on my attempt to analyse your every word for clues where there are none.Still, you can PM me on exactly where I've gone wrong, as other readers may comment in this topic.But I can't see any flaws in my theory quite yet. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObfuscatedCubeEntity Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 (edited) You have created the most valuable commodity known to inter-dimensional entities, chaos.Something I shall not read so as to preserve my ability to sow chaos and spread madness amongst my peers.Three examples that prove the inverse of a conjecture, on the subject of movies and spoilers and sequels. Edited January 18, 2012 by Killer_myr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Deadly: Suggests the ability to pose a threat, and that attacks are fatal. Darksteel: Not a real metal, therefore, Myr are also not real.Suggestion that if I can't accept someone for who they are, I have a problem. What if someone refuses to allow you to accept them for who they are? Changes in personality? Lies, deceit? Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObfuscatedCubeEntity Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 You're over-thinking it.A discussion of three movies, each significantly better than the last. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Over-thinking. Suggests...I think I see everyone's point. Going a bit too far now. :lol:I think I'll take a break from thinking... Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObfuscatedCubeEntity Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 No, you don't need to take a break from thinking, you just need to not think about the profundity of my wisdom.Well placed censoring within a quote. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 (edited) I vote we change the subject before people complain this has turned into TBKS thread! :PWhy can't you just accept me for someone who just can't accept someone? Edited January 18, 2012 by The Wretched Automaton Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I'm gonna try and get closer... I'm gonna figure out the finale in the penultimate chapter.I vote we change the subject before people complain this has turned into TBKS thread! :PWhy can't you just accept me for someone who just can't accept someone?You got NINJA'D! Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Whiplash- Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 What's a VA-matoran?(sorry for not keeping up with bionicle... kinda coulodn't buy the last few books and stopped looking up anything because I didn't want to get spoilered.) Quote Gamers rise up, not down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 I look like that when I'm waking up too. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 NiER. Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Oh good, your ferret man is back. I wonder why I couldn't see it earlier. Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel Beat Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 Sounds like They are the Joker. s. Quote ~Avatar's original image was made by the incomparable Egophiliac.~ ~Electronic Manic Supersonic Bionic Energy~~"If I am afraid of criticism, I won't be able to challenge anything new." - BoA~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protodite Karzahni Posted January 18, 2012 Share Posted January 18, 2012 That image is just fuel to all the Dash x Pinkie shippers....I need to make sure my friend never sees this... Quote I wrote stories once. They were okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
25K Now! Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 Chapter 4 is out? Quote http://vimeo.com/198967785 BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenLuke Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 A link to your BZPRPG profiles. Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel Beat Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 Kethrye, there's a familiar name. Quote ~Avatar's original image was made by the incomparable Egophiliac.~ ~Electronic Manic Supersonic Bionic Energy~~"If I am afraid of criticism, I won't be able to challenge anything new." - BoA~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dotcom Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 It's weird how only the unicorns are sticking together.racism! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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