Toa Of Virtues Posted June 3, 2014 Share Posted June 3, 2014 (edited) Master Inika and I are writing an epic called Unseen Light, and in it, there are four mercenary Toa hunting down the main character, Ralis. I did my best to represent these Toa in Moc-form. Arkko, Toa of Plasma Jehka, Toa of Sonics Desula, Toa of Psionics Belhiru, Toa of Iron Ralis, Toa of Radiation Piercur, Turaga of Radiation (By Master Inika) Edited June 14, 2014 by Toa Of Virtues 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted June 3, 2014 Share Posted June 3, 2014 Nicely done! I really don't like these designs, but leaving so much space open and makingthem so bland really gives you a lot more flexibility with their personality! Congratulations! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tufi Piyufi Posted June 3, 2014 Share Posted June 3, 2014 Nicely done! I really don't like these designs, but leaving so much space open and making them so bland really gives you a lot more flexibility with their personality! Congratulations!Backhanded compliments like this aren't okay. If you're just going to bash a MOC, then don't post at all, rather than acting like this. 1 Quote Be excellent to each other, and party on, dudes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted June 5, 2014 Share Posted June 5, 2014 I like how these MOCs look! They're pleasingly simple and fun to look at. But there are some aspects of the MOCs that are rather off-putting...Arkko: The white and the keetorange are fairly well spread out, especially so on the arms. But the white is predominate on the legs where I think that there should be some more keetorange. Also, Arkko's mask and the blue pins break the color scheme, where his main colors are black, white, and keetorange, his mask is yellow and the pins holding the bohrok eyes in are blue.Jehka: Probably my favorite out of the bunch. I like the torso design and how it flows with the color scheme of the MOC. But I feel that the grey looks somewhat out-of-place on Jehka, where I personally think silver would look better.Desula: The colors are nice and balanced here for the most part between the old gold, metru blue, and keetorange. But the mata blue looks too bright on Desula's chest. The mata blue on the weapon is good, but I would recommend swapping the keetorange shield piece out for a silver one.Belhiru: The variants of brown on his arms look rather odd. It goes from brown to light brown. The throwbot feet on his chest are also black, where almost no black exists on the rest of the MOC, you see a lot of it on Belhiru's chest where, in my opinion, there should be brown.Ralis: The color scheme is broken here. For example, on the arms, you have keetorange on black, and on the legs you have black on keetorange. The weapons look very nice and the use of the metru armor is very clever.These are your MOCs and it's up to you whether they're finished or not, I'm just offering up my suggestions. ^^ Quote I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Of Virtues Posted June 5, 2014 Author Share Posted June 5, 2014 Oh no they are definitely not finished yet. The only problem i have with them is simply finding the right pieces, especially with Belhiru. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pohatu: Uniter of Stone Posted June 5, 2014 Share Posted June 5, 2014 I like Ralis the best, probably because of my bias toward protagonists. Quote I HATE SCORPIOS ~Pohatu Master of Stone, 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuuli Posted June 15, 2014 Share Posted June 15, 2014 I want to make you a more accurate Turaga. In fact, he's already built at my house. I just need to get back there and get him and show you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Inika Posted June 24, 2014 Share Posted June 24, 2014 I want to make you a more accurate Turaga. In fact, he's already built at my house. I just need to get back there and get him and show you"More accurate" in what way? Quote "You are an absolute in these uncertain times. Your past is forgotten, and your future is an empty book. You must find your own destiny, my brave adventurer." -- Turaga Nokama Click here to visit my library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuuli Posted June 28, 2014 Share Posted June 28, 2014 It looks like one of the 2001 turaga Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Inika Posted June 29, 2014 Share Posted June 29, 2014 It looks like one of the 2001 turagaThanks, that was my inspiration, primarily for the coloration and staff. Quote "You are an absolute in these uncertain times. Your past is forgotten, and your future is an empty book. You must find your own destiny, my brave adventurer." -- Turaga Nokama Click here to visit my library! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Imrukii Posted July 3, 2014 Share Posted July 3, 2014 (edited) These are very nice moc's along the lines of something I would make. Keep up the good work. Edit: Please try to leave more specific feedback next time!-Wind- Edited July 4, 2014 by -Windrider- Quote Quote: "Love has no fear, and no vengeance." | :i: | Andekas ⴳ A RUDE AWAKENING - A BIONICLE G1 Continuation and Video Game Project (ARTIST AND CONCEPTUALIST) | I am an ENFP, that is my Personality. Check Out Makuta Teridax: Reaper of Darkness | Check out my Taknuva Stars MOC | ⴳ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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