Ghidora131 Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 This is the review topic for Fractured Light. You can be in Fractured light, too. Just put your name and gender below. Note: this gives me artistic license rights, so i may do whatever i wish with your character. SIGNUPS OPEN FOR 48 HOURS. Have a nice day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Name: KovikaGender: Male Anything else you need? You've seen mah wiki page. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 Dude, you KF member. U is already included. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Bring Jakura back to life just to kill him a second time. 1 Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 So just to confirm, KF members are automagically part of it? Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 So just to confirm, KF members are automagically part of it? Dude, you KF member. U is already included.That's what it seems like. Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 So just to confirm, KF members are automagically part of it? Dude, you KF member. U is already included.That's what it seems like. Yesh says Gresh. 42 Hours Remain. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 For some reason I feel like making a parody of Until Dawn just by looking at how many hours are left.. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unit#phntk#1 Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Name: UnitGender: Male Is this what those blog entries a while back were for? ~Unit#phntk#1 Quote BIONICLE MAFIA XLII: GRAVEYARD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 A most interesting start, indeed! I look forward to seeing where this goes. Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted September 28, 2015 Author Share Posted September 28, 2015 Name: UnitGender: Male Is this what those blog entries a while back were for? ~Unit#phntk#1 Yes, and you have signed up for it three times, giving me the impression you really want in. Also, if you guys don't mind, i could use some sponsorship. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Also, if you guys don't mind, i could use some sponsorship. Links in sigs and such? I shall work on it. Give me a brief synopsis of the story, and I should be able to conjure up a banner for it. Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naota Takizawa Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Name: LiliatheGender: Female Let's see what you do with this. Quote If you like Pingu & want to support a good project, click here. Also, I've rejoined the BZPRPG & I have a new profile for a new game. Click here to see it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Name: DaneGender: Male you better make me over obsessed with soundwaveyou BETTER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Uh, Dane? Ghiddy said KF members get automatic entrance. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 (edited) I did not realize this.I apologize, Ko-toa. Edited September 28, 2015 by Jayne Cobb Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted September 28, 2015 Share Posted September 28, 2015 Dane is apologizing to me? That's a first.. Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted September 28, 2015 Author Share Posted September 28, 2015 Signups open for 24 hours. Tell your friends! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted September 29, 2015 Author Share Posted September 29, 2015 And nobody else likes me. :C Signups closed. Next post coming soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted September 29, 2015 Share Posted September 29, 2015 And nobody else likes me. :C Signups closed. Next post coming soon!Get a degree in marketing. Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted October 3, 2015 Share Posted October 3, 2015 I am the 1337 h4x0r of Shadow's computer. Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted October 3, 2015 Share Posted October 3, 2015 Irrie doubleposted!!!1111! The story is good so far, but the chapters could be longer and would benefit from more descriptions and richer vocabulary. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted October 9, 2015 Share Posted October 9, 2015 Lovely chapter, now that I'm caught up. By the way... For your excellent contribution to the lore of the Kanohi Force, I hereby give you my OFFICIAL CANON SEAL OF APPROVAL! Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted October 9, 2015 Share Posted October 9, 2015 that poor seal..he never asked for this- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted October 9, 2015 Share Posted October 9, 2015 that poor seal..he never asked for this-He seems happy enough. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kovika: Visorak Lord Posted October 12, 2015 Share Posted October 12, 2015 Name the quote: "I never asked for this." Quote "In this new- Wait, why am I being quoted?!"-Kovika, Toa of Ice, Bread Enthusiast, and Ko-Metru Scholar. [flash=250,100]http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/sprxtrerme/BANNERS/thornax.swf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted October 14, 2015 Share Posted October 14, 2015 I suppose since I left the Kanohi Force I'm not going to be in this anymore.Probably for the best. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted October 14, 2015 Share Posted October 14, 2015 I suppose since I left the Kanohi Force I'm not going to be in this anymore.Probably for the best.Care to explain why you left? Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted October 15, 2015 Share Posted October 15, 2015 dudeI have literally explained like 5 times already.it was a lot to do with you people just following me into topics, and generally not letting me do my own thing. a good example of this would be the vahkidane show, you guys tried to turn into what, the 50th kanohi force comic? no thanks.I also kind of find you guys annoying. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted October 31, 2015 Author Share Posted October 31, 2015 Next Chapter Is Up.We see two new characters, and we find out some plot points. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted November 14, 2015 Share Posted November 14, 2015 alright ghidorai'm gonna be honest with you herei wasn't expecting much from this here epicbutthat has to be one of the best chapters i have read from ANY of the things you've written before. i justi don't knowi really liked it, i don't know why(and it's not because i'm in it.)good workplease continue Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted November 15, 2015 Share Posted November 15, 2015 This is confusing, but I like it. I've... died... twice? But I do enjoy the war elements and the darker tone. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted November 15, 2015 Author Share Posted November 15, 2015 alright ghidorai'm gonna be honest with you herei wasn't expecting much from this here epicbutthat has to be one of the best chapters i have read from ANY of the things you've written before. i justi don't knowi really liked it, i don't know why(and it's not because i'm in it.)good workplease continue Wait, someone commented on this? Okay, better answer it then. You'll find out in the next few chapters exactly why the prologue is so so sooo corny. (yes I write bad on purpose, what) This is confusing, but I like it. I've... died... twice? But I do enjoy the war elements and the darker tone. Died twice? You supposedly died once, but I don't remember writing a second time. Is Jakura dead, however? Well... We'll see. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted November 15, 2015 Share Posted November 15, 2015 Oh, a chapter? Why didn't you tell me about this, Ghids? I would have read it the day it came out! Nice one so far. So that was Dane, eh? To be honest, i thought it was me in the chair. You pretty much described me, so you can understand that. The whole "tinker, lots of weapons and figurines, bad leg, lots of gadgets, big swivel chair, dealing with Fishers" deal more or less felt like me. Imagine my surprise when I found out that it was Dane. If that's the case, I wonder what I'm up to? Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted November 15, 2015 Author Share Posted November 15, 2015 Well we'll just find out won't we. Chapter 3. Another coming later tonight(I hope). 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted November 15, 2015 Share Posted November 15, 2015 I like the darkness and mystery, but it continues to confuse me, sorry. Was it Dane or me working on the computers? Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted November 16, 2015 Author Share Posted November 16, 2015 I like the darkness and mystery, but it continues to confuse me, sorry. Was it Dane or me working on the computers? Looking forward to the next chapter. ...Computers? What? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted November 16, 2015 Author Share Posted November 16, 2015 Nobody else? okay. New Chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bonkle Posted November 17, 2015 Share Posted November 17, 2015 The group continued in absolute silence aside from the noises of the vehicle until the massive cityscape seemed years away. "Earthquake." Bonkle said suddenly. He jumped up from the rear of the vehicle and into the back seat, curling into a ball and blankly staring at the floor.Accurate. Quote I been away a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted November 17, 2015 Author Share Posted November 17, 2015 New chapter again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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