{Adam Jensen} Posted March 26, 2012 Share Posted March 26, 2012 I'm expecting a moment where Max, as his name is now, ends up at least snapping. Mentally and somebody's neck, probably.That's just me, though Quote "I like everyone, Dr. Reed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted March 27, 2012 Share Posted March 27, 2012 Poor Toasterbot.I have a feeling he's going to react to this soon. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted March 27, 2012 Author Share Posted March 27, 2012 That's a good guess. We still need to see what role Mister R plays with this.Comic-RevelationThe mind is a beautiful thing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Adam Jensen} Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 I actually don't like those Matorans. I actually feel like twisting their heads 180 degrees and impale them. You don't treat somebody like that that's trying to fit in. Quote "I like everyone, Dr. Reed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted March 28, 2012 Author Share Posted March 28, 2012 You said something similar to that back in "The Child Inside". That's good.Comic-Another Memory Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 Interesting Story. I like how he is understanding but also is confused. It seems his memories of being abandoned and not wanted are coming back to him, and his motive to be something else has been lost. He just wanted to fit in but now he is nothing, forgotten, abused. Reminds me of high school. The corruption of his "Soul" is taking place and I can't wait to see what will happen next.Nice comic, and story arc, I like it a lot. Keep up the good work,~Soran Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
weirddisplayname Posted March 28, 2012 Share Posted March 28, 2012 VIVA LA TOASTALUTION!!!!this arc is reallly great Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sycron Posted March 29, 2012 Share Posted March 29, 2012 THE REBELLION OF THE TOASTERBOTS HAS BEGUN!!!!!!! Quote Sycron's Comics - Ten Minutes Or Less - Here Come Dat Toi - The White Gryffon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted March 29, 2012 Author Share Posted March 29, 2012 Well thank you very much, Soran.Also, remember gentlemen- Excess use of the ! symbol isn't always the best. Cha.Comic-The Sad TruthYou may have noticed that some characters don't really.. show the eye emotions in full. Examples would be the Onu and Ta-Matoran in this comic. I realized that their masks have ridges and such that make some of the other side's eye not fully visible. So where it may look like that Onu-Matoran is showing anger in Panel 2.. he's really showing shock like the Ko-Matoran by his side.It's the little things in comics that I enjoy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted March 29, 2012 Share Posted March 29, 2012 I like how hes telling the matoran off. Starting to show more characteristics of being a matoran (Human behavior), by the chapter. Just makes you think about whats going to happen next. Although since most of your Story Arcs end in typically mystery of what is going to come next, I hypothesize that some of the matoran who ran/walked off screen are going to contact the police and he is going to be put in jail for holding a matoran at gun point. I also hypothesize that if police are contacted, that he will run away at the sight of them, and will be one of those stories where it will probably be continued later.~Soran Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted March 30, 2012 Share Posted March 30, 2012 Did he always have that handgun? Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted March 30, 2012 Author Share Posted March 30, 2012 ..Yes. Read the past few comics before Mister R arrived and you should see him get it.Comic-The Final BlowI dunno what the that Ko and Le Matoran are to each other. If they date/are related. Don't know, really don't care. Consider them what you wish.We're in the final segment of this saga. I think I timed it perfectly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Absorba- Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Wow.... that's emotionally engaging.AGAIN, THIS IS A FREAKING ARM'S MIND ATTACHED INTO A ROBOT.GAVLA, YOU ARE AWESOME. Quote Have a good question? Yes? Good answer. Click here now to ask it to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JiMing Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Wow.... that's emotionally engaging.AGAIN, THIS IS A FREAKING ARM'S MIND ATTACHED INTO A ROBOT.GAVLA, YOU ARE AWESOME.I know, that's why we love Gavla.I'm actually attaching and feeling sorry for Max like an actual person, and I also despise the other matoran who want to take him.That is just amazing for a comic series on a Bionicle/Lego forum Quote Haven't seen one of these in a long time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted March 31, 2012 Author Share Posted March 31, 2012 (edited) Thanks gents. That means a lot.Comic-The Last Shot Edited March 31, 2012 by Gavla Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Absorba- Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Max.... was shot!? Oh my god... It was the black matoran, wasn't it!? Quote Have a good question? Yes? Good answer. Click here now to ask it to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Adam Jensen} Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Yeah, I officially hate that Onu-Matoran. Quote "I like everyone, Dr. Reed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 (edited) Why would the Onu-Matoran do such a thing to Max? :???:The homeless Matoran better stop him or else! Edited April 1, 2012 by Feline Oneker Quote 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewafan21 Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 MAX! NOooooooooooooooooooo! h-he had so much to live for, so much to learn! why that little matoran is gonna get it! Quote sandvich don't hurt me, no more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted April 1, 2012 Author Share Posted April 1, 2012 I don't suppose you gents have heard the saying: "In cold blood" ?Cause that's what he did.Comic-HarbingerIt's been a long time. A very long time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Who's Makron? Quote 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted April 2, 2012 Author Share Posted April 2, 2012 I should of taken note that newer readers might not remember him. I apologize. You'll want to read the past few sagas to understand. Though granted he never really had a real importance in them.I don't consider most of the old sagas as canon now. Since they were made on the fly and absolutely horrible by my standards. I really only consider.. maybe Final Wars as one. But Revenge of the Gavlas is indeed very canon. Makron plays a big role in that one near the end.On the subject of sagas: Even though I consider the past sagas before Revenge as bad, they really do show how far I've come in terms of comic making. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Absorba- Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Is.... is Max dead!? Quote Have a good question? Yes? Good answer. Click here now to ask it to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Adam Jensen} Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Is Makron gonna be assuming direct control now? Quote "I like everyone, Dr. Reed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Well then, you've successfully killed one of my favorite characters.I'm gonna go cry in the corner now. Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted April 2, 2012 Author Share Posted April 2, 2012 (edited) Did I..?Comic-Diplomatic Force Seems I made another sprite error yesterday. His "heartlight" is meant to be green like his Anti-dermis.Also I see what you did there, Adam. Edited April 2, 2012 by Gavla Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 He didn't especially need to kill those guys, did he? He just did it because he could. What a #####. Quote i know what youre thinking, whos gonna care what shoes shes wearing but BELIEVE ME, WOMEN notice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Adam Jensen} Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Considering his heartlight is still glowing, he's still alive actually. It was probably some sort of taser or something to deactivate him momentarily.And is he actually going to do what I think he's gonna do? Quote "I like everyone, Dr. Reed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted April 3, 2012 Author Share Posted April 3, 2012 If I kept the brown and red Matoran from before in the panel, they would of been shot too.Adam, there is a hole in Maximilien's head. I doubt a stun rifle would do that. However.. your spotting of his heartlight is very good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Chuck Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 Of course he is still alive. His consciousness is in his arm. Quote The Chirox Codex Chuck's Very Dead Comic Series This is my signature. Exciting, huh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted April 3, 2012 Author Share Posted April 3, 2012 Comic-Explosive Development Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 Wow.All that work for a body...Good news is in the last panel, he (the arm) goes flying. I'm under the impression that his arm holds his consciousness, so it looks like he won't be going with good ol' Makron after all. Nice job on the comics as usual.~Soran Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 Comic-Explosive Development D:STOP BEING A GOOD AUTHOR/COMIC MAKER.I don't care about the story anymore, I just want this Max to live... Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
{Adam Jensen} Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Oooh, dang. I was hoping Makron was close enough to get blown up alongside with his... I guess his rahkshi hybrids? Quote "I like everyone, Dr. Reed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted April 4, 2012 Author Share Posted April 4, 2012 Gold Rahkshi, basically robotic Rahkshi Matoran. Nothing organic about them. They were the basic bad guy henchmen in my past sagas.They were never really dangerous in the comics, they just acted like some type of soldier. This time I want them to pose some form of a threat. As you saw, one killed three Matoran.Comic-Forever AlrightThere is a reason I never explained what project called for a dead robot body in the comic.Anyway, the saga ends tomorrow with the epilogue. We jump right into another one on Friday. It's this one's direct sequel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Absorba- Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Max..... we're so sorry. Good luck. Quote Have a good question? Yes? Good answer. Click here now to ask it to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chath Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 Max...No... Quote Dude I am literally just a fart More soon maybe? We'll see... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akuna Toa of Sonics Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 And we come back to the arm. Quote Does anyone want to play the Master Chief Collection with me? I'm trying to get a team going for ranked. PM for GT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lewafan21 Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 one big FAT circle. wow, back to square one i guess Quote sandvich don't hurt me, no more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavla Posted April 5, 2012 Author Share Posted April 5, 2012 We have come full circle.Comic-Epilogue Anyway, this saga is done! I view it as a success, though it did take a bit of time. There was a lot of text to write!Next saga is more open, not all set in /one/ spot like this one. It also will have somewhat less text. Tomorrows comic will probably be wordless.Anyway, you might be wondering the whole point of the Arm saga. One of the biggest points is to establish that Makron is on the same island as Gavla. We know little of what he wants.Second, as a personal thing. Maximilien represents the people we look down on. The ones that are normal, yet we associate them as being wrong. I know that I felt like Maxi' in school. So this reaches out from me in a sense.This will also be the first time I directly link two sagas together. So I'm going to be pretty burned out plot wise after this month. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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