Lemony Lepid Posted October 19, 2012 Share Posted October 19, 2012 (edited) UNITY. DUTY, AND RAISIN BRANFollow the toa and there jurney to Epic as this all new series kicks off with a laugh!(WARNING: this comic is totes random and is incredibly cute looking)COMICSThe one word of awsomeLewa and cheetoesTak & Mak look alikeFourth wallFourth wall P2Fourth wall P3Fourth wall P4Fourth Wall P5New comics I do thisSagas I do this Edited November 8, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Absorba- Posted October 20, 2012 Share Posted October 20, 2012 Aw... cute art style!I'll be checking on it, but you've set a pretty good first impression as of now. Quote Have a good question? Yes? Good answer. Click here now to ask it to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted October 20, 2012 Author Share Posted October 20, 2012 Why thank you good sir! come again! Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted October 20, 2012 Author Share Posted October 20, 2012 NEW COMIC Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Absorba- Posted October 21, 2012 Share Posted October 21, 2012 Man, Lewa really wants to really screw them up, doesn't he?Though I do wonder how panel destruction leads to vaporization. Quote Have a good question? Yes? Good answer. Click here now to ask it to me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted October 21, 2012 Author Share Posted October 21, 2012 (edited) Yes, but this isn't all. prepare for the next ep of fourth wall!NEW COMIC! Edited October 21, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted October 21, 2012 Author Share Posted October 21, 2012 (edited) New of the comicness!I go beyond the fourth wall! FEAR ME! MWA HA HA! Edited October 21, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terra Nuva Posted October 22, 2012 Share Posted October 22, 2012 I really love your art style. Great Job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted October 22, 2012 Author Share Posted October 22, 2012 Thank you Terra nuva. I try. ; ) Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calvirick Posted October 27, 2012 Share Posted October 27, 2012 The drawings are nice. And I can see that you're trying to go for a different comic-reading-format, which is cool it's always good to be original. It's not the best way to do it. I'm still trying to read it left to right instead of right to left at a downward angle. I don't have a suggestion for an alternative, but maybe try something else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted October 29, 2012 Author Share Posted October 29, 2012 Well, Outside of the fourth wall can be tough to read sometimes! Dont worry, though. They are going to be back in place soon.I hope. Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iPenguin Posted October 31, 2012 Share Posted October 31, 2012 (edited) The first two fourth wall comics were reallt well done. I like how you drew it. Especially how it faded out a little at the end.The others were confusing to read. I know what you were going for, but it ended up more annoying than anything."I feel a *disturbance... someone broke my face plant record!" That was really funny. I laughed at that.I like your art style too. Also, check your spelling every now and then Edited October 31, 2012 by Reckoner Quote Majhost sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 2, 2012 Author Share Posted November 2, 2012 Sorry about that! I'm thinking of removing text and typing instead. Thoughts? Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted November 8, 2012 Author Share Posted November 8, 2012 New comic up guys! enjoy! sometimes I even go Behind the outside! wish the toa luck. Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katoris Posted November 25, 2012 Share Posted November 25, 2012 (edited) That Fourth wall breaking there is pretty bad. Edited November 25, 2012 by Katoris Quote | Tahukan's Comics Mark II | I love Tea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted March 1, 2013 Share Posted March 1, 2013 (So since you said you might come back to those again someday I thought it would not harm to give you a small review of the comics so far. Hope it's okay and stuff... ^^) When I first clicked on the topic to check out the comics, something I immediately enjoyed was the art style. The high level of abstraction, lack of feet and general sock-puppet style of appearance makes the characters incredibly endearing. You could also say cute. Same goes for the expressions, which too are very cartoonish and abstracted, yet likeable.The colouring is sublte, almost a bit too sublte IMO; more vibrant colours would probably suit the comedic nature of your comics a bit better.* You use a scanner, that's good. I would suggest turning down the contrast a bit though, so that it all looks a bit less grainy. (also, *hinthinttutorialhint* =P)As for redibility, using only capital letters usually helps a lot, and flows better with the rest of the comics than digitally adding the text. (at least it's that way for me ^^") Humor's fine, it's random but not too random. There's one last thing I'd like to comment on, and that's the layout, particularly of the latest "Fourth Wall"- comics. Normally the "rule" is that "if you have to number your panels something's wrong", but I guess I know what you were going for. However the latest ones were just... incredibly confusing. Of course, in a way that does make sense, with the fourth wall broken and stuff. Maybe you could make the numbers stand out more? Like, in colour or something. It would make finding the next panel to read a bit easier ^^ Overall I've enjoyed these so far, and would like to read more if you ever get back to them! :3 ~*just a personal opinion ;D Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted March 2, 2013 Author Share Posted March 2, 2013 I am currently working on an actual kit for these. that way I can get back to them faster. Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hitoshura Posted March 2, 2013 Share Posted March 2, 2013 Hey Loganto, I never knew you had these comics as well. These were quite funny, especially the Takanuva and Makuta one. Quote profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted March 6, 2013 Author Share Posted March 6, 2013 They really do look alike though.They really do look alike though. Quote ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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