Ignatius Posted April 25, 2013 Share Posted April 25, 2013 (edited) Hello one and all and welcome to...[insert fancy poster here]REALISTC KIT1.0by charge_beta This is a work in progress so please don't come andtorture me because I suck at spriting.(ACTUALLY I DON'T)Constructive criticism is always welcome,ideas too! I plan to release full version (20.0, maybe)in the not-so-near-future.I spend lots of time on this and I hope to release next update soon.Now, let's get down to the nitty-gritty:Heres the kithttp://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/charge/Kitz/realkit.pngBIONICLE FOREVER! version log: Version 1.0:basic McToran bodies Version 1.1:More McToran sprites,Masks Edited April 28, 2013 by charge_beta Quote Best Regards Iggy Failure to not recognize this user's awesomeness is punishable by Pikachu "Because some...men just like to watch the world burn" Spontaneous Combustions is back, but not in the way you expected.https://chargeinfinity.wordpress.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenebrae Invictus Posted April 25, 2013 Share Posted April 25, 2013 Accurate might be a closer description than realistic, but even so, some noteworthy flaws are the leg placement and maybe how tall they are. I'd also suggest adding more shades, because there aren't any 1-shade kits I'm aware of that ever got far. I can see a lot of potential in what you have though, keep at it! Quote Up, down, turn around, please don't let me hit the ground Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignatius Posted April 25, 2013 Author Share Posted April 25, 2013 Thanks. 2 shades, height and new leg placement.1.1's on it's way! Quote Best Regards Iggy Failure to not recognize this user's awesomeness is punishable by Pikachu "Because some...men just like to watch the world burn" Spontaneous Combustions is back, but not in the way you expected.https://chargeinfinity.wordpress.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skrade Posted April 26, 2013 Share Posted April 26, 2013 It's good to see a new kit around. I definitely agree on the shading. At least 2 or preferably 3 shades will do. I find the less cartoonish look refreshing. Your kit certainly has potential, and I'd love to see how it grows Quote Check out my sprite kit, the Nobelus Kit! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignatius Posted April 26, 2013 Author Share Posted April 26, 2013 Need help w/ nuva masks. PM me your nuva masks anda recieve credit Quote Best Regards Iggy Failure to not recognize this user's awesomeness is punishable by Pikachu "Because some...men just like to watch the world burn" Spontaneous Combustions is back, but not in the way you expected.https://chargeinfinity.wordpress.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignatius Posted April 28, 2013 Author Share Posted April 28, 2013 (edited) Version 1.1 has come!More sprites!3 masksA head (not very amazing is it?)check it out!!Still need Nuva masks! PM me! Edited April 28, 2013 by charge_beta Quote Best Regards Iggy Failure to not recognize this user's awesomeness is punishable by Pikachu "Because some...men just like to watch the world burn" Spontaneous Combustions is back, but not in the way you expected.https://chargeinfinity.wordpress.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted May 2, 2013 Share Posted May 2, 2013 (edited) I might be able to help with this, but I noticed some strange things with your masks and heads. First of all, the top half of the head is an even number of pixels wide, meaning the two between the eyes are both middle points, and the bottom half is an odd number of pixels wide, meaning the center of the mouth is middle. That makes it difficult to sprite with the head. Also, the eyes on the masks don't line up with the head, and the head doesn't fit into the mask. I would recommend changing it a bit to fix that. EDIT: Here's my try at trying to improve it a bit:Few things to keep in mind that might help:1. The secondary color is for both detail and shading. Try not to use it too much though.2. These are actual pieces that need to fit into each other.3. Keep a constant center line. Moving it forward and backward for jutting parts is okay, but try and keep it about the same.4. Simplicity is key with kits. No one wants to use a kit that takes an hour to recolor, although yours looks pretty good. I think I made it more complicated in my edit.5. Curves look nice. It might help to put in at least a few curves where they should be in certain places. So, what do you think? Edited May 2, 2013 by Click Quote ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignatius Posted May 3, 2013 Author Share Posted May 3, 2013 (edited) Okay, thanks! PM me the nuva masks and I'll see aRTbout the samples. Edited May 3, 2013 by charge_beta Quote Best Regards Iggy Failure to not recognize this user's awesomeness is punishable by Pikachu "Because some...men just like to watch the world burn" Spontaneous Combustions is back, but not in the way you expected.https://chargeinfinity.wordpress.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 4. Simplicity is key with kits. No one wants to use a kit that takes an hour to recolorWell, that really all depends on what you use. If you used programs like GIMP then that wouldn't be such a problem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ignatius Posted May 27, 2013 Author Share Posted May 27, 2013 Work on this will be postponed until I have time Quote Best Regards Iggy Failure to not recognize this user's awesomeness is punishable by Pikachu "Because some...men just like to watch the world burn" Spontaneous Combustions is back, but not in the way you expected.https://chargeinfinity.wordpress.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexann Posted May 27, 2013 Share Posted May 27, 2013 Work on this will be postponed until I have timeAnd we shall await till' then. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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