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Poor, poor, overexagerated Dovydas. *Starts beating the pulp out of Dovydas, then slamming him with an oversized flagpole*

*denies all of that to happen* You overeact too much. -Dovydas *Ditches that idea and uses a baseball bat to turn off Dovydas's lights*

This could make the case against RM harder...I think I'll flamethrow you like I did Dovydas...

*Goes and finds Dovydas, then uses a flamethrower to kill him. With a loud shout of: "ALL MISSPELLERS WILL BE PUT TO FLAME EXCEPT FOR RISING MOON , ME, AND INFERNA!!!!" He then dumps him into the Thames.*

Knirules. It sounds medieval.

That's a Bible story...are you christian?

I'll "help" you. On a high level of VIOLENCE!!!!

This is what you really meant to say CM.

Davydas hates me, too, or at least, it seems that way. I can be a lawyer for somebody... @Aderia: Sorry, but diplomatic solutions never work out... Ever seen Star Wars Episode one? So, yeah, even if I'm not part of it, I'll be there. I'll probably shoot the winning side. (Don't tell Aderia)

I assume you refer to the BZPRPG?

Not to try and shoot you down or anything, KNI, but I disagree. I mean, you do have a good point, but I think writing is more of a way of putting your emotions to words in a different form and letting the world know what you think. When I'm angry, I write about a character who's angry, and finds a way to resolve the problem. If I'm sad, I write depressing stuff. As a more personal example, I wrote 'Forget the Mountain', not when I was angry, but after I'd calmed down. I personally didn't like how the story turned out, which might be what you were trying to get at, but I certainly wouldn't say that my anger ruined the plot. Thinking back, I'm tempted to say that writing helped me simply to forget about what I was angry about, and move on with life. You know what, you're right. It only tends to go to my point occasionally...you're totally correct. Anyways, the first WA Comic 1has come out. This comic is made by me, however, it is 75% owned by RM.

[submitted by KNI] Try not to right when you feel emotional. This may seem obvious, but anger can ruin/has ruined plots. Now, some people right when they feel sad, to let it flow out. I'm in no way saying don't be passionate. But think about it. You get really mad, because someone said/did/implied something to you that made you feel angry. How likely is it that an enjoyable story is potential?

Heres a link to the review, which has a link to the story.

Nobody has answered in my review topic for Alternative yet Please read, and comment there.

Between daily updates and the WA, what else could an eleven year-old writer ask for? But other than that, maybe a few contests.

I'll take reviews.

I think I'll ditto that. If you need a hand with this, feel absolutely free to ask me. -Zarayna Same here. You need me, I'm here.

Just reviewed "Never Goes Away" by Zar.

Go check out SoT, he has many enjoyable stories!