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Oh, shoot, now I need to go and write a Halloween story. >_< I completely forgot, and I kind of have it as a tradition to post a story for most holidays. Anyway, enough about that, I am going to go and read this with great speed. ^^

I remember hearing that 17 people died in New York due to the power outages and the pure Karzhani that is being released by the storm. Absolutely horrible - I feel sorry for the tragic loss of those lives. =/

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Great to see some more reviews! Thanks for the comments, guys! ^^@TNTOS: Hopefully, yes. Still working on it...the chapter is in the early stages, but it should come before Christmas, with any luck. =P And I love that, too. The second episode was a lot more fun to write, since it wasn't getting things started, but simply adding on. Thanks for your review! =)@Taka Nuvia: That's totally okay! Just you reviewing is good enough! Lol, those are great. It's a pain thinking of products, people, places, et cetera. Avohkii Cereal was an easy one, since it's kind of a product mentioned in most of the comedies here, but otherwise, thinking of other stuff is hard. >_< Thanks for reviewing, Taka! =D@fishers64: Thanks! I thought it was a bit risky using such overused characters, but I thought it would also be a challenge, to see if I could make them funny and give them a sense of originality, instead of adding to the heap of comedies that have already tried to make them funny. And that's a good idea! Now that you mention it, I'll probably end up adding "whoever you are" to the show more, and end up showing them sooner or later. Thanks for the idea! ^^And riiiiiighhht...I never explained that concept fully. Possible reasoning for it would be that they were saving money for the house they were going to buy, but because they ended up losing more money, they just started scamming the owners of the Rent-A-Cabins so they'd save more money and keep on their daily budget. (which, by the way, is about the price of the house they bought, lol) I'll probably explain it in a later chapter.And thanks for the advice! I hope you keep on reading - thanks for the review. ^^Just an update, by the way: I will not be able to update the comedy for another week or two, because I'll be away from Thursday to Tuesday of next week. I might be able to bring along a laptop and write on that and also post the chapter using that, but we will see. If I'm online between those days, then you know I was able to bring it along. =P Thanks for your patience!

Yep. =/ Honestly, ignore it. People have a tendency to be rather insensitive - they might mean well, or otherwise they are just trying to be trolls. I can't really name a time writing-wise, but maybe with art, yes. Somebody will just walk up and say exactly what you quoted in response to my drawing... ._.

The update was massive on Xbox it seems...probably the same as the computer update, obviously, but interesting to see the changes. The update happened the day I bought the game, so it was new to me - I had obsessed on the game in a demo prior to that, lol.

Grant, you've pulled off once again the ability to touch the reader in so many ways. I forgot how much I missed reading your stories...now I just remembered how much I love your writing style, and how much that your stories can connect with me deep down.I swear, I almost cried reading this. The beauty created here...it is unlike any other. You gave these characters, these biomechanical beings...you gave them life and feeling, the ability to love with their heart and soul. That love is different than the love protrayed in other stories. It is a love that all of us can relate to when a loved one is in trouble, or close to death. Although life and feeling is in all BIONICLE characters, you added something to them that was different. I can't identify with what it is, but it added so much more to the story. I applaud your ability to, as you always do, connect with your audience.The wife's care for her husband's health is realistic. She takes care of him, despite her duties. She tries as hard as she can to make his life comfortable in the end, to make it something less painful than it already is. It is a basic responsibility in a marriage to take care of your spouse, but you made the wife more willing to spend every moment with her husband. You definitely wrote that feeling well without making it too corny, if that is possibly the right word.I like the idea you used of a human-BIONICLE sort of setting. I have always wanted to experiment in that type of setting, but I've never attempted to try that. And although the idea of marriage and cookies don't exist in BIONICLE whatsoever, I enjoyed that concept. It was nice to introduce those concepts to such a strange thing as BIONICLE, for it gave it a warm touch.On the concept of the Red Star: It being the main focus in a way, I must say you definitely captured the idea of the Red Star. It's representation of an 'afterlife' can be considered weak, but you made it strong in this case, to both the reader and the character. To me, in any situation, you can make any interpretation of the Red Star, which I've always found irritating. But here, you can't help but know that it represents the wife's late husband - nothing else but that.Grammar and spelling wise, I did not find anything wrong beside one mistake: There should be a question mark at the end of the periods. It's kind of a nitpick/suggestion more than an actual problem with the writing, but I just think that since it's a question or request, it'd make sense to put a question mark here. =)For the most part, Grant, this is a wonderfully tender, sweet, and touching story. Your descriptions are remarkable (as always), your overall writing style pleasant, and your plot and characters are excellent. Thank you for the enthralling, terrific read - keep up the good work, I will be looking forward to your next story. =]

I'll take that as you like. =P Thank you, I hope you keep reading! Episode 2: Places to Go, People to Scam Sponsored by the Toa Inika, that underrated Toa team that everybody dislikes even though they were really cool. Thanks Toa Inika! Narrator: Last time we saw the Toa Nuva, Onua and Lewa were arguing about the fact that Onua may or may not have stolen Lewa’s collection of classic Pink Floyd albums. We also figured out Lewa may or may not have created a leak in the Matoran Universe that connects our world with theirs. In this way he obtained his Pink Floyd CDs. We also figured out that Pohatu might want to blow himself up again so he can get through doorways, Onua can eat three dozen pancakes for breakfast, and Takanuva actually has a nickname, much to the surprise of our network. Next up, the gang is heading out to find a house for the magnificent seven. (At the Rent-A-Cabin…)Lewa: First, we’re heading-going to…how is this pronounced?Kopaka: Ah-ah.Lewa: Haha?Tahu: No, it’s baba.Onua: I thought it was lala?Kopaka: It’s pronounced ah-ah! AH. AH. Actually, let’s just call it Alpha. Who would name a street Aa?Tahu: There is a type of lava named aa, so I guess why not name a street Aa?Kopaka: …Tahu: Don’t look at me – you’re supposed to be the smart one.Lewa: Well, anyhow, we head-go to Aa first, then Le-Koro Avenue, Ga-Wahi Drive, Ta-Wahi Street, Hinceralpitowsky Street, and then…how is this pronounced-said?Kopaka: Oh, not this again…Narrator: After a few more minutes of trying to figure out how their last destination’s name was pronounced, they eventually found out it was pronounced Get Heron Dot Drive, a name which confused them thoroughly. It also confused them how Lewa could possibly mispronounce the name. They got on their way and first went to Aa, or Alpha, and viewed the house.(At Aa…)Tahu: Well, looks okay.Kopaka: Are you nuts?Tahu: As a matter of fact, yes.Kopaka: …Anyway, look at this place. The paint is all worn off, the porch is ripped up…it’s like a cannon went off inside the place, considering all the furniture is wrecked.Narrator: Indeed, Kopaka was actually right. For a change. Anyhow, a cannon did go off in the house, since it last belonged to a group of Matoran. These Matoran, unfortunately for them, still lived here – they just didn’t see them when they walked in. Until…(Enter Ta-Matoran falling on Tahu)Tahu: WHAT THE –Director: Due to some of the content and sound provided by Tahu, we’ll have to cut the filming and play smooth jazz for a little while. Be patient! Yeah, riiiiiiiiight…(Activation of smooth jazz)Director: Back to the film!Tahu: WHY YOU LITTLE –Director: Well, apparently we aren’t prepared for that yet. Back to smooth jazz!(Activation of smooth jazz)Director: NOW CUT THAT OUT OR I’LL HAVE YOU FIRED, YOU HOT-TEMPERED –(All eyes on the Director, including the audience.)Director:I’ll have you for this, you little…Narrator: Don’t do that or I’ll…ugh, now I’m doing it. Forget it. Well, to update you after that unfortunate little outburst – *glares at Tahu and the Director* – a Ta-Matoran jumped on Tahu’s back from the ceiling. Don’t ask…just…don’t.Tahu: Why in Mata-Nui’s name did you just jump on my back, you little – Kopaka: Don’t go down that road again.Tahu: Oh, yeah, sorry. Well, anyway, why did you do that?Ta-Matoran: You’re invading our home! Why do you just walk in here acting like you own the place?Tahu: Surprisingly, we were thinking of buying it, so if I’m going to be walking in here, then yes, I’m going to be acting like I own the place.Ta-Matoran: Unfortunately for us, that actually makes sense.(Enter two other Ta-Matoran)Tahu: So what are your names?Ta-Matoran 2: You tell us yours first.Tahu: This is an outrage! We are the Toa Nuva, how could you possibly not know us?Ta-Matoran 2: I’ve never heard of them. Have you?Ta-Matoran 3: Nope.Tahu: …Lewa: I’m Lewa, he’s Tahu, she’s Gali – Director: He’s Sneezy, he’s Bashful, and he’s Dopey! Get on with it!(Lewa cuts the Director a dirty look)Lewa: That’s Onua, Kopaka, and Pohatu.Ta-Matoran 2: Hey, I know that guy! I saw him get stuck in one of the automatic doors at the super market!Pohatu: …Kopaka: Can we just move on? It’s obvious we’re not getting this house, so let’s keep on checking out the places we had on our list.Gali: Works for me!Tahu: Why must she be so optimistic…?Narrator: So, the Toa Nuva continued to the next destination. As they went Hinceralpitowsky Street, they saw it as too small – or, at least too small for one of the Toa Nuva…(Pohatu is stuck in the entrance to the house)Pohatu: Hold on! I can get out of this myself!Tahu: You obviously can’t, because if you were smart enough, you wouldn’t have gotten yourself into this in the first place!Pohatu: Put a LEGO brick in it, Tahu!Kopaka: This goes against every fiber of my being when I say this, but he is actually right, Pohatu.Narrator: Sorry about this. Let’s just say that wasn’t planned. They passed Le-Koro Avenue, for there was a bit of an argument. There were seven bedrooms at the large house – a thing of the imagination, obviously – and a rather violent argument ensued between all of them, since there was a large bedroom unlike the others. After our technical staff helped rebuild some of the Toa Nuva, they headed next to Get Heron Dot Drive. Although none of them really understood the name, and some of them found it suspicious, they headed there with hope that they would finally find a house.(Upon arrival…)Tahu: I think living in Karzhani for the rest of our lives would be more pleasant than living here for even a few minutes.Narrator: To elaborate, the house is a mess. The wood on the outside is old and rotten, and the entire house looks like it will fall apart if one person steps even within a hundred feet of the house.Kopaka: I hate to say this, but I agree. What does everybody think about this?Lewa: There’s no way I’m living-staying in this rattrap. I’d think even the rats-mice would have gotten sick-tired of this after awhile.Onua: I know earth is my element and all, but sometimes a person can get sick of being with their element, and I know I would if I stayed here.Gali: I usually don’t like to be critical of things, but this place is horrible.Kopaka: Pohatu, do you have any thoughts?Pohatu: …Director: We only allowed him two lines maximum this episode. Until we get him more sponsors – which, personally I don’t see happening within the next century – he’ll only have at least two to five lines maximum in any episode. Sometimes he doesn’t even get more than two…Kopaka: …OK, then fine. Takanuva, do you have any thoughts?Takanuva: Let’s take it.Tahu: You know, I always thought you were a little eccentric, but now I know you’re just insane.Lewa: You’re nuts!Onua: Who in his right mind would want this?Tahu: Unfortunately for us, Takanuva.Takanuva: Now, hold on, I think it would be kind of us to repair this house to its former…something. It was obviously nicer-looking at some point. Anyhow, I think we should take it!Tahu: Somewhere, I believe several thousand cockroaches currently fear that they’re going to have some unfriendly neighbors…Kopaka: Let’s just think about it. Otherwise, let’s head to the last two places. Ga-Wahi first, then we head to Ta-Wahi last. Let’s get moving…Narrator: As they headed to Ga-Wahi Drive, they were disappointed to see the house was smaller than the Rent-A-Cabin they already inhabited. When they went to Ta-Wahi Street, however, they were pleased to see a decent-sized house. It contained four bedrooms, which they were pleased with.Kopaka: Thoughts?Gali: Let’s get it.Onua: No place would be better than this!Lewa: I like it.Tahu: Since it isn’t a rat-infested, cockroach-inhabited wooden remake of Karzhani with the strong smell of stale linen, then yeah, I’m fine with it.Pohatu: …Takanuva: I don’t like it.Tahu: Six-sevenths of the vote says we get it, so objection overruled.Kopaka: Let’s head inside. The owner should be there.Narrator: They headed inside, and thankfully for them, the owner was willing to sell. Matoran: First off, what are your names?Tahu: We’re the Toa Nuva. Matoran: Sorry…?Onua: Well, at least we’re not like the Toa Inika, that Toa team nobody really recognizes and everybody hates…Matoran: You guys know the Toa Inika? I always thought they were cool!Kopaka: This just keeps on getting worse…Tahu: What’s your name?Matoran: Niruk. How much are you looking to buy this house for?Kopaka: No more than a few thousand widgets.Niruk: Maybe six thousand?Lewa: Sounds reasonable-right.Tahu: How about five thousand?Niruk: You’re nuts!Tahu: You think I am? You should have heard our comrade at the rattrap we visited earlier. He wanted that over this house – that’s the definition of nuts.Niruk: Five thousand-five hundred, that’s my final offer.Tahu: Fine, we’ll take it.Niruk: Deal!Narrator: So, they bought the house. Each rather irritated at the fact it had taken them so long to find a house, they went to the Rent-A-Cabin and slept, not looking forward to the strenuous next week or two of moving. Not to mention confronting the owner of their Rent-A-Cabin… Episode End ~:~Word Count: 1,582

Haha, nice. ^^ I swear, that is basically everyday life for me, lol.

Thanks for dropping by and reading this, Velox! I feel the same way about comedies, but for some reason I still felt I wanted to make a contribution to the sub-forum and see if anybody liked this. It felt odd posting here at first, but I did it anyhow. =PThanks for talking about the format I used. Surprisingly, I had been reading some of The Tradgedy of Macbeth by Shakespeare, and although not necessarily the most humorous of plays, I still noted the format, and tried to stick to something along those lines. I preferred that style as opposed to the common style used by the people here in the comedies forum. I liked it, so I used it. I'm glad to see somebody noticed. ^^You mentioned the use of emoticons - I wasn't a big fan of them myself, but I used them anyway. Since you mentioned it, I removed them, since I thought it made this too mainstream. I want this to be different, and using a little bit more wit and making this more like sitcoms like Frasier and whatnot. Although this is supposed to be a reality TV show in which the Toa Nuva play in, I want to use situational comedy throughout.You also mentioned the astericks. I removed those as well, and just had the narrator sort of describe in a humorous way what the character did in action as a response to what another character said. I'm happier with that to be honest, so I'm glad you mentioned that. =)Most of the 'nitpicks' you made (trust me, they weren't, in my opinion ) I edited. I neglected some unfortunately, but most of them have been changed. By the way, it's great to hear I made you laugh. I didn't think this would have that effect, but I'm glad that it made you chuckle at times - to me, that's probably the greatest compliment I can receive. =)I must agree. I've always felt that characterization is vital, and I didn't really think about that up until now. With characters like these that are used constantly, it is tricky to give somebody like Tahu a distinct personality, but it'll be a challenge for me. I suppose that's what every story always needs, and it's something that's hard for a writer to master. I personally think I can do it, not to be overconfident, but I just think every writer can achieve it, and I want to with these characters. Thank you very much for mentioning it, I will focus more on that and try to give that distinct style to each character.Otherwise, I'd like to thank you a lot for giving me such an in-depth review, and for giving this a chance. I was afraid it'd be too much like other comedies here, but I'm glad to hear it's not like others - to hear that it stands out is great. Thanks again for the review, Velox, and I hope you'll keep reading. =)

Word filter, unable to talk about religion/politics and world problems, and a lot of other things. It gets irritating - politically speaking, I can't just say I support so-and-so and be done with that. I have to state some sort of reasoning as to why before somebody just gets on my case because I support that candidate. It makes me - a bit - irritable, but I guess you can't change that. =/

Dear Mr. Fantasy - Steve Winwood

Thanks for the comments, you guys! Sorry for a shorter response, I'm just going to summarize what I had previously written in more of a brief way, since I lost it due to my computer's stupidity. =PJV, I agree, I would have liked to have created a scene here, but it's one of those things I'm not that skilled at. I am, however, writing a short story to accompany this and will be posted soon. It will have a scene and whatnot, obviously, including some characters - I hope you will have an interest in it. :)SkyLandOceAnna, thanks for your comments! I like the idea of associating more things with the season, but it was something that was hard for me to interject into it. I always notice the beautiful colors and the cold in autumn, so I couldn't help but focus on those changes.And the line " found beneath the silver trees" wasn't exactly the best line, but I thought it fit. Any other words used as adjectives, such as brown or grey, don't necessarily work because they are single-syllable words. Silver, having two syllables, seems to work better with the rhythm and whatnot, but maybe that's just me, and probably is. =PThanks for the comments, and I hope you guys check out my other stories and poetry! =)

So, this is my first take on comedy, so forgive me if my own personal writing style tends to interrupt with any comedic points. =P Anyhow, this isn't going to be a long series, maybe just ten episodes. I'm writng this to get back into writing again, since I still have an unfinished epic to write and other stories I had planned, but I haven't really had an interest in writing them lately. Well, anyway, I'll shut up now so you can get on with reading the comedy. =P Unity, Duty, Stupidity Episode 1: Morning At The Nuva Cabin Sponsored by Avohkii Cereal, the #1 cereal of Mata-Nui, that sandbar in the ocean that nobody remembers anymore. Thanks Avohkii Cereal! Narrator: In the time before time…Director: Alright, cut that line! It is too corny, it is overused, and it is stupid. Can’t we at least have some originality in this? Alright, rant over, continue.Narrator: *ahem* The seven Toa Nuva lived together in tranquility after the terrible reign of Makuta. Since they hated the way they looked when they were in Karda-Nui, they had a bit of a makeover and look like their old selves again. Unfortunately for Pohatu, he’s still a hunchback, so hopefully he’ll understand if we cut some of his lines since he has absolutely no sponsors to support his hunchback…ness. We still pay him money to play the bit parts, though, so if you see a couple of large, hunchbacked Matoran, then you know who they are. Onto the episode. (Also, don’t ask how Takanuva got back to his original self. Let’s just say it took a few tons of plastic explosives to blow him up and put him back together again…)Narrator: At a small Rent-A-Cabin the Toa Nuva are staying at until they find a house to live at, which they have neglected to pay rent for over the past four months…Gali: Good morning everybody! Oh, and if I don’t see you again later on today –Director: Keep the originality of this concept going, please! That’s already in a movie!Gali: Whoops. Sorry.(Enter Tahu and Kopaka.)Narrator: Tahu, who had been playing in the basement of the cabin – suspend your belief here, folks, seeing as cabins don’t have basements – on the Xbox, had purple bags under his eyes that went about halfway down his Kanohi Hau.Gali: Tahu, you look terrible!Tahu: You look beautiful, so maybe that will make up for it.Narrator: Gali fought her natural instincts to slap Tahu, and decided to simply ignore the comment.Gali: …Either of you like some pancakes? I just made some!Tahu: Sure. Narrator: Upon seeing the pancakes on the small yellow plate, he grabbed two of them, and put them on one of the plates set aside for the seven Toa Nuva. Sitting in his chair, he pointed his scarlet finger at the pancakes, and a spiral of orange flames turned the pancakes into flat, circular charcoal.Tahu: Just how I like them, heheh...Kopaka: Tahu, don’t do that again. Remember the last Rent-A-Cabin we stayed at? That you burnt down? If you recall, I literally dragged you out of the fire to keep you from getting burned. That dehydrated me for about a week, which was a bit troublesome when we didn’t have enough money to buy ice. I’m lucky I even had elemental powers for even a part of that summer.Tahu: Yeah, that was a fun time, wasn’t it? What was that? The third Rent-A-Cabin I burnt down? Thank goodness Onua and Lewa made that dirt tornado to keep that owner away. He was pretty ticked-off if I recall. And by the way, you didn't need to do that, I was doing well on my own...even though I hit my head on that two-by-four and knocked myself out.Kopaka: ...(Enter Onua and Lewa, arguing.)Lewa: I told you, those were mine!Onua: I have the receipt for them! I bought them myself!Lewa: No, I bought them, you stole them!Narrator: Kopaka, wanting a peaceful morning, quickly divided the two arguing Toa with a thin wall of ice. Lewa had unfortunately caught his hand in it – his wrist was frozen while his hand was in the face of Onua.Kopaka: Oh, be quiet, both of you! Now what is this all about?Lewa: Release my wrist and I’ll tell you, iceman.Tahu: Oh yeah, like that wasn’t a cheap shot…Lewa: Stuff a LEGO brick in it, Tahu. Narrator: Kopaka quickly removed the wall of ice, and Onua hastened to dodge Lewa’s hand before it hit him in the face.Gali: Alright, explain, please.Lewa: Onua stole my –Director: OK, before you make a big mistake here, don’t say pie. Or anything food-related. We want some originality. Then again, the idea of a director interrupting his cast twenty-four-seven isn’t that original, but hey, I wanted to be a part of the show. Continue.Narrator: Lewa shot the director a dirty look after his words, and continued on with his statement.Lewa: As I was saying…Onua stole my collection of CDs.Tahu: Depending on the CDs, we can justify Onua’s reason for stealing them or maybe wanting to listen to them. So, what were the albums?Lewa: Basically classic Pink Floyd. Dark Side of the Moon, Animals, Wish You Were Here, and my own special selection of songs from The Wall.Tahu: How dare you steal Floyd, Onua! Kopaka: Hey, just a sensible question here, how can we possibly have Pink Floyd in the Matoran Universe when that’s something the outside world has? Unless we have a leak in our universe and some guy sold the albums to you, then yeah, there’s no sense here.Lewa: No, I created the leak and stole them from some kid in the outside world. Luckily he had an action figure of me, so it was pretty easy to convince the kid it was only a dream.Gali: Oh, wonderful…that isn’t one of those things we’re going to have to fix, like, right away or anything is it?Kopaka: Wait, you said you had the receipt…?Lewa: No, not until a few chapters from now. And that was a ploy to get them back from Onua. Anyway, I would like them back.Onua: You’ll have to fight me for them!Tahu: I’m surprised the Director didn’t call you out on that for not being original.Gali: Alright, let’s just get on with breakfast. Eat your pancakes, and then I’ll give you a list of the places we need to stop by later on today.Tahu: We’re actually going to places? I thought we just stay at one of these cabins for the next year and keep on scamming the owners! That makes it no fun that way! (Enter Pohatu and Takanuva)Takanuva: Come, come, Tahu, we must stop cheating these owners out of money. Eventually we’ll have to pay them back, and be at least honest about what we have done the past few months.Tahu: Could somebody stick a LEGO brick in his mouth? Mr. Nobility needs to realize that we don’t have any money. Also, Pohatu, what is that on your back? Oh, it’s just you. Narrator: Pohatu, who still was a hunchback, was constantly made an object of teasing by Tahu and others.Pohatu: Do we still have some of those plastic explosives from when Takanuva was blown up? Maybe I can rebuild myself from scratch…Gali: Pohatu, stop being so superficial. There’s nothing wrong with you being a hunchback. Then again, it’s kind of hard to get in through doors sometimes…Pohatu: Whatever...Gali: Well, eat, everybody, just for the sake of getting rid of these pancakes. I make three dozen, and they just sit here on a plate all morning!Kopaka: Kiss those pancakes goodbye, Gali. Remember, Onua has that many for breakfast alone.Narrator: Gali, unfortunately, did not take that into consideration immediately, and within a minute, Onua hastily ate the 3 dozen pancakes sitting on the plate. It was a rather disgusting, Rahi-like showcase of the Toa of Earth’s instincts.Lewa: Well, I guess I wasn’t really in the mood for pancakes anyway. Instead, I’ll have Avohkii Cereal, the leading brand in cereal and the #1 breakfast on Mata-Nui!Tahu: Talk about product placement… Director: Can we just end the episode here, please? THE END Director: NOT THE END OF THE SHOW, YOU MORON! THE END OF THE EPISODE! YOU ARE FIRED…WHOEVER YOU ARE! Episode End ~:~Word Count: 1,274Alright, it seems kind of slow, but hey, this is my first time working with this. Comments are, as always, appreciated, and I would love for this to catch on. Thanks for reading! ^^

I Knew You Were Waiting - Aretha Franklin (with Georgia Michael)Back to obsessing on this song again...

Taka NuviaInferna FireswordAderiaLegoloverGrant-SudVeloxCholsZaraynaBasically all my friends. I probably have more I'd want to meet, but I can't remember them.

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1. When was your favourite point during your stay on BZP?Hmm...probably when my stories got noticed. It was nice for people to actually notice me and like something I had created. I had never really received any thoughts on any of my writing before that, and it was great to get somebody's opinion.2. How long have you been a member of BZP?Three years.3. Should that previous question have been the first question?Almost definitely.4. Have you had any long disapperances from BZP? If so, why?Yes, just recently as a matter of fact. I had to concentrate on school - BZP was taking to much time away from my actual life.5. Are you as interested in BZP as you used to be?Not really. The only thing I came on here for ever was to post my writings, and talk to my friends.6. Do you feel that BZP is slowly losing its members, or that BZP generally has less activity?Yes.7. If Bionicle had not been replaced, do you think that BZP would always remain strong as long as Bionicle was ‘updated‘‘ on a regular basis?No. People grow up - they can't live in the past forever. Most of the people here are now in their late teens, and that means eventually they have to move on. Whether BIONICLE had lived on or not, people would have left eventually.8. Have I asked enough questions yet?You tell me.9. Do you want a hug? Please?

My epic, Danger Close. I'm slowly working on it, but...it's just gone so slowly. I feel it will never be finished - and even if it is, nobody will care. =/

The people. Some of them can be irritating and rude, but then you meet those people who are great and understanding. Unfortunately, that seems like a minority these days...

Personally, I wouldn't really want BZP as its own country. My role would just be one of those members who isn't really recognized by name, but people know when they see me.

Happy birthday, Chols! =D

I can believe it. =P I remember I had to do a day's worth of math to catch up on it, and I had to take at least five breaks just to actually concentrate. Unfortuantely, I was studying geometry...ever since then I've hated it. ><

1. What are the little things you do around BZP? Do you make MOCs? Write Stories? Are you an all-rounder? What?I write.2. What are the little things you like about BZP? Everything.3. What are the little things that annoy you slightly about BZP?Everything.4. If you could change one thing about BZP, what would it be?Everything.5. Are there little things you do in your posts? Like using a specific colour, various emoticons or generally typing in a horrific font and a scary colour?Nope.6. Have I asked enough questions yet?Maybe. I'll let you figure that out for yourself.

1. What country are you from?United States of America.2. What languages do you speak? I don't speak any specific languages with the exception of English obviously, but I can speak some French, German, and Spanish. I'm going to be taking Latin in high school, though I wish I could speak Italian - I know a little bit more French than the rest of the languages, though, and I can say "I love you" in German and Spanish. Unless I'm in a corny romantic movie, I don't think it will help me much. :P3. Can you easily buy Lego products in your country?If I go down to my local Wal-Mart, then yes, I can easily buy LEGO products.4. Can you still find Bionicle/older Hero Factory sets in your shops?Nope.5. How long does it take for the latest Lego sets to reach stores?Not long.6. Do you buy Lego products in shops or online? Which is easier?Either works, I buy in store more often, though.7. Would you like to see more Lego products available in your country?Not really.9. Why do you think I missed out the number 8?...You bypassed mathematics in your school studies?10. Am I wasting my time, and does anyone remember me? Nope, and yeah I remember you.