Haecceity

Hey all, I was recently sorting through my collection (or what's left of it), looking for unopened sets, when I happened to find this sealed Vorzakh canister with a green top. As far as I remembered, Vorzakh lids were colored red, matching their eye color, and that Nuurakh had green lids. Curious, I asked a couple friends about the lid, and Taipu1 seemed to remember that the Vahki were notorious for packaging errors. Has anyone else run into this sort of defect before?

Agh. You just have to take all the fun out of it.Isn't that what you keep me around for? =3c No, but seriously. Hope you have a great time, man.

Have a non-lethal birthday, dude. Oh, and you can be happy too, I guess.

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Created by Miserix during his time in the Brotherhood, Kirzikani are a fierce breed of draconic Rahi. PIC Head With Jaws Open With Kongu (I sorta procrastinated on this, leading to the choppy look of the legs and the lack of back claws. I'll probably work on those when I have the time.)

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~For ages the two have struggled- those who fight and those who are fought. The hero and the beast, the spectre and the dream, the monster, the titan. And as untold ages pass, the cycle repeats, creating new fighters in the battle of ages.Sometimes these fighters are heroes But most of them are mad... Sometimes a madman is stuck into situations beyond the control of their shattered mind, beyond anything they could ever dream of. Sometimes a madman must become a hero...Sometimes a hero must become a casualty.Sometimes dreams are the end of lives Thumbnail (.JPG) .PNG Version This was an attempt to portray the meeting of Annona and Telluris, specifically the end of the latter's life. C&C greatly appreciated.

Links to goodies should always be italicized. It's a good way to let the world know that yes, this link does contain goodies. And they are good. And ies.

Although goodies are tempting, I'm supposed to be describing your sig-so I sorta have to be here.

Are you suggesting I visit your character pages instead of Saturn? Let's think about this for a minute... Well, they both have rings...and both will kill me...But only one has a bearded guy telling me about my death. I'll stick with Saturn.

Credit is very important.......but I prefer cash.

Hmm... Perfectly triangular teeth, a rectangle for a mouth, and a circular head...Is it...A rectangle-mouthed shark-snowman?

An utter lack of links to profiles or words-for obvious reasons. The pug cannot be described by mere words, and profile pages do it no justice. No, what this majestic animal needs is a throne of rotating smile gifs, one that shall bathe our signatures in its glow and cure the world of all its woe. Pug, we embrace thee....

Can... Can I go to the Sun, then?

So... Are you "Tilde Phantom," "Phantom Terror," or "Phantom Tilde?" Your sig and screename can't seem to come to an agreement.

I see that Mister Green and Gold there is continuing the time-honored tradition of massive blades being used as one's weapon of choice.

Fool me about what? Everyone knows that links to "toothpaste kits" are always found in the first spinny disk in a signature, not in the text. It's one of the immortal laws of the internet, is it not?

I don't usually find shriveled bird necks with red accents, bulbous shining eyes, and menacing claw-like beaks cute.

Quite good for a first attempt, Sam. A few qualms here and there- (Grammar and punctuation, how we loathe you) -but a nice solid concept overall. Here's my major issues with the story: "It’s a magical world the ocean." Try something along the lines of: "The ocean-it's a magical world." "It's a magical world, the ocean." "It's a magical world, the ocean- full of ______ and ____." "Being a Po-Matoran, Keprin didn’t have much interaction with it, so being this far out was something he treasured dearly." "Didn't" should be "Hadn't", "Have" should be "Had" "...wore a dimmed lilac prowess" Try changing "prowess" to: "pall" "shroud" "semblance" "facade" "veil" “I hope you’re not thinking about killing that poor creature” Pezi, the Ga-Matoran said, standing over him and her hands placed firmly on her hips. "And" should be "With" Try: "I hope you’re not thinking about killing that poor creature...” Pezi, the Ga-Matoran said," “You arrogance will only get you so far rock head” she tapped the top of his Kanohi three times to get signify its apparent hollowness. "You" should be "Your" Try: "Your arrogance will only get you so far, rock head.” She tapped the top of his Kanohi three times to get signify its apparent hollowness. The truth was though that Pezi had chosen him for this mission and it want just because of his experience in military matters. Try: But when Pezi had chosen him for this mission, it wasn't just because of his experience in military matters. "although she seemed un-phased." "unfazed" ​These were just the major issues I noticed on my first read-through, and are in no way all of the errors in the story. But overall, you developed the characters nicely-and brought the lovers' tale to a satisfying conclusion within the bounds of a flash fiction piece. Good work.

Does this challenge include the promo models as well? Good luck, it must've taken quite a lot of work to assemble a complete collection of sets. :3

Hey. Thing is, you've linked that pic to your brickshelf gallery, which isn't public yet. You need to deeplink it by clicking on the image until it's the only thing on your screen, and then copy the URL. Hope this helps,Haecceity

I'd like to request a review, if possible. Fruitful - Haecceity

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I seem to recall sweating being mentioned in the books, and I know it was mentioned by Brutaka in Into The Darkness... "Now I guess you could say my vision's improved and I just want to see you sweat." (Although he was referring to Teridax in this context, I assume his comment applies to most inhabitants of the MU, seeing as he brought it up offhand and in the middle of a battle. I doubt he was racking his brain for information about some obscure biological process specific to Makuta, implying that other beings- and possibly Brutaka himself - sweat.)

I really admire your skills with line drawings and ink- that's something I've never been very good at. -.- Of course I remember you! (I just wasn't 100% certain whether or not it was you ^^") And you've improved greatly over time - in fact, some of your works, like you avatar, already look incredibly professional; so yeah, um, forgive me please? :3Hey, it's perfectly fine. I'm not blaming you or anything- I've been honing my photoshop skills in my absence, so my style has evolved quite a bit. =3

Ah, the immortal "picture of me standing against a wall." Truly the greatest of modern photographic techniques. (I kid, I kid. ;3) Yes, I did-that's the defining feature of my avs, in my opinion. I'm not sure if you remember me, but I used to be Temporphilic, if that helps.