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    RO: Fool!

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    I'm trying something different now.

    Smaller panel sizes, inner text for sound effects (maybe).

    Might end up consulting Soran for some backgrounds later on, but for now, since it's the inside of a dark cave, i don't think it's too necessary.

  2. Good to know these comics will resume again soon. These comics are by far my favorite series on the site, it really mixes comedy, seriousness and saga quite well. With plot twists and hidden meanings. Its like reading an award winning graphic novel.I'm sorry that you're sick, I hope you feel better soon. You shouldn't really stress about making comics when you're sick. It might help to plan things though like how the dialogue is going to end up being in each panel, and such. Thats normally what I do when I'm sick.Anyway, I'm extremely happy to know that these comics are continuing and I hope you feel better soon.~Soran
    I wouldn't dream of ending them unless i absolutely had to.Personally, i'm less sick now than i was Monday - but still a bit disoriented/dizzy. I think i'm almost better though.Then when it comes to 'stressing it' - well, i've sort of got it planned out, i'm just thinking on how to execute it in comic form. Like, what they should do to get to certain points that i've planned. The dialogue i generally figure out on the spot, and it turns out pretty good.But here's something to tide everyone over.Rockets don't explode Leraku.Leraku explodes rockets.
  3. Okay everyone, here's some good news and bad news.Good news? I'm working on a comic, a panel is already done. Still not sure about the others though.Bad news? I'm sick, and trying to push myself past my 'phase' so i can get some stuff going for you guys.Either ways though, i hope you guys still try to keep up with this now and then, because i really enjoy making this stuff for you all.

  4. @comic:I gave some sound advice. I am satisfied@opinions:you are unwise not to fear me. you will not last long
    For one - i as well don't really have any fear for you. You have a particularly overboard powerset, making you pretty much invincible with no endearing part of it. Leraku, however, is actually NOT invincible, and has a backstory. So far, i have seen no real proof and reasoning behind you having such insane powers. Thus... i don't actually acknowledge it. And no, 'mal was created really strong' or something like that doesn't count. It just doesn't make sense, compared to a very carefully thought out backstory.
    I really feel for that guy. It's obvious Leraku doesn't notice Tammy, yet this guy does. :crying:
    Leraku does notice her - but not in the way that she thinks of him. He just finds her to be oddly enthusiastic, as mentioned.
  5. I knew something was up by the second panel!And ha, I'm outside detonating missiles! Because I'm a robot!
    And i'm helping, probably. You know, the one making the missiles explode into different shapes or stuff.
  6. ronoticesler.pngLER: Hm. This new armor works pretty well. At least it still lets me use my powers...RO: Who..?RO: OBJECTIVE.RO: Huh?RO: THAT IS YOUR OBJECTIVE.RO: THE JUGGERNAUT PROJECT WAS CREATED TO HUNT DOWN RENEGADE MEMBERS OF [REDACTED].RO: THIS IS LERAKU, THE FIRST MEMBER OF [REDACTED], WHO REGRETFULLY WENT VIGILANTE. HE IS YOUR PRIMARY TARGET.RO: But... what did he do?RO: HE DECIDED TO RECONSIDER WORKING FOR [REDACTED].RO: THAT WAS AN UNACCEPTABLE DECISION.RO: Why did he leave?RO: HE THOUGHT WHAT [REDACTED] DID WAS... IMMORAL. POINTLESS DESTRUCTION AND HARM TO INNOCENTS.RO: THAT WAS INTOLERABLE. [REDACTED] FOLLOWS THE IDEA OF THE ENDS /ALWAYS/ JUSTIFY THE MEANS. REGARDLESS OF WHAT IS HARMED.RO: That seems... cruel.RO: RELUCTANCE DETECTED. ACTIVATING OVERRIDE.RO: What? No! Don't-RO: OVERRIDE AT 50%.lerjudo.pngLER: Well, look what we have here.RO: Help! No... run! Just run! I can't control...RO: OVERRIDE AT 100%.
  7. I had to squeeze the fight in. I was going to have them both fire at each other with large cannons as well, and both be blasted back, but that would exceed the nine panel limit.What you must realize, Leraku, is that TNG is also a powerful fighter. They were fairly even throughout the whole fight, until it was called off due to the pie theft being a lie.
    Regardless, Lerkau is not one to just suddenly lose his sword just because it was knocked away.Second of all, he's... not really the kind of person who would use cannons, either. We can continue this discussion via PM, so as to not clog the topic.
  8. So thats what that computer does. So does this mean that everyone is going to be Chimoru R or just you, Ro and possibly Soran? Ro is finally making his appearance. I'm wondering what is going to happen next. I suspect battle.Great job on the comics and keep up the good work,~Soran
    I'm not sure if i can get everyone into Chimoru R - for instance, i haven't heard from some of the others in ages, thus i think it might be a bit... difficult, to get them to whip up an R sheet for me. It'd probably be pretty time consuming, so i kinda doubt i'd be able to do it. So, i'm not sure what i'm going to do. If anyone wants to, they can make a sheet. I'm probably kinda busy to do so for now.
    You got Ro into this? Inspired partly by Soran's comics, I'm guessing.
    Nope. Ro asked me quite awhile ago to get into the comics, and i finally decided on how to do so. It just happened to be around the time of Ro being a main-ish character for the moment. Also. Keep in mind - i don't really invite people to the comic, they send in their own requests.
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    LER:WHAT.

    LER: No, seriously. WHAT.

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    LER: Okay... now, what does this mean?

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    RO: ONLINE. ANALYZING SURROUNDINGS. INITALIZING PERSONALITY...

    RO: ...

    RO: There's someone else here.

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    Hey guys.

    I made a new Faxon.

    It looks pretty good, in my opinion. You guys like it?

  10. To be honest... it doesn't really seem to fit to me. The fact that Leraku loses his sword so easily is just strange - Given all that he's been through, i doubt it would be broken/knocked away that easily, regardless of flame weapons.

  11. I'd like to mention something i've discussed with soran here - Leraku is fully capable of building his own robots, and, in fact, a discussion between me and him actually involved Ler doing so. Aside from that, i guess it works.

  12. Okay... unfortunately, not much good to say about this. For starters, some of the character's colors look like they were taken from the default MS Paint color pallet. Then there's the background - there's no shading to add detail, but this can be excused. However, the line distinguishing the floor from the wall is too thick, and it looks odd. The couch looks decent, however, with no shading, it also seems to ruin that fact. Also, the speech bubble looks too smooth to match with the rest of the comic, thus making it seem... well, a little strange on the eyes. Other than that, i commend you for choosing Razor - i don't think there are any on-going comic strips at the moment that use the Razor sheet, so, nice choice on that. Also, i suggest that you should quickly get two more strips up - the best way to start a comic is to have at least three strips, so as people can get a good idea about what the comic is like/is about/how it looks in general. Unfortunately, at the current moment, this says nothing about the comic other than the fact that a couch is miscolored. Good luck, though, an aspiring comic maker is always welcome.

  13. The simple backgrounds look really good in some cases, while in others (like when he opens the door) they really look odd (its probably because of the high quality cloud brushes vs a simple background).
    I can explain this one. I did that first panel late at night, and i finished the rest the next morning when i was fresh and mentally ready.
    The things I do wonder, however, is whats happening in the last panel. It seems as though he is either being transmitted power or is being drained of power, or something similar.
    Leraku is recognized by the computer to be using similar technology to Project Juggernaut, and assumes to continue it's last action, which was giving the Juggernaut being a power boost and activating it's armor, thus usually activating the juggernaut.If, say, the Juggernaut being is not correctly equipped, the computer will convert the armor to an active mode.Since those who Leraku worked for at first also made Project Juggernaut, Leraku's enhancements were triggered and connected to by the computer.
  14. He' an Android! [/reference]Anyway, look like LER has some secrets.And whats happening with Joe, Justax and Utah?
    1. He's not an android, however, he was enhanced as mentioned before, remember? The computer and this 'project juggernaut' are made by the same people who enhanced him/made him into what he is now.2. The other three are still boating. I want to finish up on some plans before i get them back together - i'm still having to rethink what's going to happen next.
  15. Oh dear.Oh dear, oh dear, ohdearohdear.Let's see, a robot versus an enhanced psionic with insane experience with working with machines?I'd probably end up dismantling you.Like, literally.

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