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Here's my headcanon :Far later after the events of D3, after the three 'Eventful Heroes' (Ler, Soran and Ro) disbanded after no longer being needed, Facade went off and did this.
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...Will he end up like SelfInsert!Hussie in HS?
Sorry. I'd rather adress that question in comic - So, if you really want to know, send an AC in that asks him. I could really use it, too, since I've had none. At all. For... ages, actually.
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Who's this guy?
???: A little message from the big guy... Allrightie then.
???: So. Anyways. Yeah, ACs have been open since the end of... yeah, that big post with nine panels? Anyone gonna send something in, or do we need to wait till you guys remember what the point of a CYOA is? I mean, the break might be cool and all, but, seriously.
???: Send something, at least. Even something about me. I'll answer some questions.
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Yeah, guys. Waitin' and all. I'm fine with waiting a bit, and I understand after the long period of no ACs... but have you either not noticed, or does everyone think everyone else is going to send them in? Eh. Well, there you go.
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LER: YOU! What are you doing here?!
SOR: Calm down! Calm down! I'm not here to hurt you!
LER: It's not like I could hurt you anyways. You have your stupid little Imperium to come and run along to save their little 'pet'.
SOR: ...
LER: Or are you just going to run away again?!
SOR: It's not 'my' imperium anymore.
LER: What?
SOR: I quit. Ages ago. I thought about what you said so long ago... They didn't really give me everything, anyways.
LER: Do you mean -
SOR: Yes. Slaughtered like a fat Mahi.
LER: ...
SOR: I understand if you don't trust me.
SOR: I just wanted to try and fix things. It's not exactly fun being enemies.
LER: ...
SOR: Please. From an old friend.
LER: ...
SORAN has joined the Matoran Company
LER: OH FOR-
LER: Fine!
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So...
Did anyone even notice this on the last post?
VVVVVVVV
Anyways, I'm back from camping. Exhausted from the trip, had to force myself to make this, but It's all said and done so the satisfaction is worth it.
Comics might drift into the slow streak again for me as I also have schoolwork to manage with again.
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That was amazing, it truly was.It was really worth the wait in my opinion. The way you integrated and explained Ro's sprite change and name change was genius. The effects, phenomenal, its those tiny details which I find completely awesome. Things like the energy from entering rage mode slowly disappearing in the 3rd panel. The scorch on your armor (although as you stated, you had forgotten it in some of the panels), The smoke in the background, etc. All of it just amazing. I also was surprised by Exile's appearance in the last panel and I anticipate what will happen next.Now I can't just leave with compliments (although I normally do), so heres the things that I think you should improve on. One of the things is consistency, the scorch mark for example is one. You need to focus on every little detail, although it seems as though you recognized the mistake so its fine at the moment. Another consistency issue is the shadows. You've done a good job with shadows so far, but there are some cases here youu either forgot one or you 'messed up' a little. Considering how bright it looks like the sun is in the background, in the last panel Exile would've had a shadow present in front of him. Resizing is another thing. You're actually good when it comes to resizing, so its not really an issue. There are some cases though that you could've done better however. An example would be Exile/Soran in the last panel. The head and the body looks like they were resized individually which makes it look a little odd, especially the head (which looks a little too small). There are also backgrounds. In some cases I honestly don't mind the backgrounds, for example, when you were in the facility/base/HQ. There are other times where the backgrounds just look ridiculous like the ones in the last few panels of the most recent update. It might be better if you photo manipulated pictures of locations, whether its the simple floor in a picture, or a base or something.Your comics excel other comics in graphics and story, there is no doubt about that. There are times where they do lack in quality whether its backgrounds or consistency but in the end it is still an amazing comic series, and I anticipate more in the future.~Soran
In response to your notations (Which are constructive and appreciated), I'd like to say some things.
The panels were made over the course of a few days, so some inconsistincies are likely. Shadows are something I'm still experimenting with.
Resizing - I'm trying to set up the characters so that their heads match their size - For instance, certain full-sized masks wouldn't fit on Matoran bodies. I tried to correctly resize Soran's mask with correct percentage, but it simply looked odd, so I had to chop it up.
Backgrounds-wise, it's still a very extreme work in progress. Backgrounds have never been my strong suit, and they are the slowest-progressing improvements I've had so far. Compared to my other developing techniques, backgrounds are the slowest developing, so it's going to take plenty of time for that to work.
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When I use the banner on the top of a post, it's usually important.
In this case, it's no different.
There are going to be no comics whatsoever for the next week, for a very simple reason.
I'm going camping. So, I can't really bring my computer with me.
See you all later.
This should give you all some time to... you know, notice that little thing I added at the end of the last comic post.
It's something you all haven't been able to do for awhile.
Plus, it'll then give you some time to think about what to do.
EDIT: Really guys? No ACs? I can't be subtle. Well, you have till the end of the week to figure something out, y'goofs.
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LER: Hmm...
Much time later...
RO: What..? Why did you-
LER: I figured out you weren't exactly acting under your own choice.
LER: I fixed that, after... dismantling your old form.
RO: How..?
LER: Removed your core, reprogrammed it - well, more like removing your override AI, and rebuilt you using parts around the lab. Turns out they were originally planning to mass-produce you... I made sure that hopefully won't be possible, however.
RO: Well... thanks, I guess. But why would you even go out of your way to help me?
LER: So others don't have to deal with what I've been through. Decided something, too. I don't think your codename fits anymore. It was sort of what you were created to do - not who you are.
LER: An illusion, almost. I'd say a facade.
LER: More fitting, if you ask me.
FAC: ...
LER: I'm guessing you haven't been out in awhile. Why not think this over, then come out here and see the sunlight.
LER: ...Though you may want to take your time, since we have company.
FAC: I made my decision. I'm coming with you - It's not like I have any reason to stay in that blasted cave. It might be better, since I don't really know what to do anymore. Anyways... speaking of company, there's someone behind you.
SOR: That would be me.
Also, here's a little something for you guys.
What now?
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I decided that I'm gonna give you guys this to look at for now, as these are currently all of the done panels. Still, larger posts here and hopefully a few more. Enjoy. Also, something I missed - I accidentally didn't include Ler's scorch marks on some of the panels.
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Funny thing, this.I personally kind of feel like I'm the 'batman' of Soran's Comics. I don't even really like superheroes that much, but that's sort of what it feels like.
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So, I've now updated the OP with the new banner - as well as now being officially part of the UCS.
It's generally another continuity - though Soran made a better post about it.
Anyways, the next comic post will take longer than usual because I'm going to make an incredibly large comic post. As in, a lot of them. They will be released in either one large post, or many smaller ones. What I will do is announce when the comics are done, then post them all some time later to give people time to make sure they're caught up.
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Let's see... For starters, a massive rant I made in 'unpopular opinions'. I was extremely tired from a lot of housework (Moving and rearranging pretty much everything) and had been somewhat nostalgic from seeing some of my old Bionicle and Rescue Heroes stuff.
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Taking chances is not always the smartest thing to do.Weaponry is his insurance....Literally.Weaponry Insurance Co.For all of your no-risk needs.Always the violent one, Leraku! He draws swords at things that shock him three times as much as I do! XDYes, there's quite the pattern here. -
You know, my original headcanon was going to be that Kenny was some sort of random project of Ler's - Perhaps an elastic brain so as it wouldn't be damaged by impacts. But then, say, someone mistook it for a toy, shenanigans happened causing it to grow, and then it got away or something. Was going to make a fancomic about it, but the kits aren't up to date, so I can't use them. Oh well, whatever works. Your plan, after all.
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Hey guys.
Yeah, I'm still alive.
Just really busy, and not really feeling like making the next two panels.
Mostly because I just mowed a gigantic lawn.
Maybe sometime, though.
Anywho, I hope you guys are still interested in this snail-pace comic.
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Oh look. Terra Nuva and Loganto.Refereenceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.CAN YOU SEE THEMI SURE CAN'T
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This post was originally going to have four panels, but somehow 'fell out' of the comic phase after making these two. I'll make the next two for the next update.
I posted these so you guys could have an update.
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There is an issue with the new style - the text is too small, so it looks a little blurry for me now. Or at least a little too... rough. Anyways, yeah, try making the text a little bigger.EDIT: Turns out it's just because the image was resized for the forum post. It's fine when i click on it, though it does bug me a teeny bit that i have to do that.
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Log 9371.
The subject has shown exceptional skill and power in his tests. He will likely be used for missions very soon. He's had incredible successes harnessing his power, but at some times, he can use control. His mental abilities give him vast amounts or strategizing capabilities, and his augmented side which we added - which shows up as a 'red' side to his Psionic power... It adds to him an ability to harness his aggression and destructive power in focused amounts. We're not telling him, but, unfortunately, he was supposed to be completely... 'red'. He was supposed to be a simple machine of destruction, though he was originally made for stealth... we scrapped the idea, for the fact that fear tends to get better reactions than a mysterious infiltrator. He has since been trained extensively... excrutiatingly. He's had his fair share of pain along the way...
However, there are some occasions where his 'red' side takes full control, say, under extreme pressure or as an unintenional last resort. During these occasions...
He becomes an unstoppable force of destruction. Immense power, strength, and speed... He does not flinch in these cases. Ever. If hit, he will simply recoil, immediately and brutally. When he attacks physically, he is incredibly fast. When he attacks mentally or with energy, it is also incredibly fast - mentally, it is a constant barrage of mental shifts - blinding the opponent with a red tint and shaking. Their vision becomes blurred and the headaches - from the few test opponents that have survived - are nearly unbearable. With energy... he unleashes incredible power, and in some cases, it almost appears that even he cannot control the power once it is let out. It is like a beast wriggling out of a small space - or a water flow. Once it starts going through, it struggles to get out in a rushing force. He can even propel himself with his energy, in some cases using it as a 'rocket boost' to send himself hurtling into an opponent. He feels very little pain in his 'red' mode. All in all, he is incredibly dangerous for everyone near him... which is why he is best for solo missions (Except for odd circumstances with his current best partner, Exile).
In general, I, and the rest of the team that have worked on this project, find him to have once been seen as a failure... but at this point is an incredible success.
In finishing, Dr. Akavir of the Emperium Science Team, in regards to the Warrior project.
Day 471 of the Warrior project
432 Days since the Polaris was created
431 days since the Polaris began training
Sent to [REDACTED] of the Emperium Command
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Hmm... well, I guess that's okay.Also, you forgot Ler's updated mask.
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RO: Hah! That was just a test to see just how resistant you are at the moment... you might have been weary.
RO: Evidentially, you are not.
RO: Thus, i'm bringing out my ace in the hole. This is the 'trick up my sleeve'... I was built to defeat you.
RO: This... THIS was made to kill you.
LER: GAAAAAGH!
RO: Heh...
RO: Hah! Ha hahaaa!
RO: You foolish try-hard.
RO: You should never have left [REDACTED]!
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Okay, to be honest... now i'm really dissapointed. That's really not what would happen...I specifically designed Ler to not be like that. If anything, the reason he wouldn't be around soran would be because he'd be tinkering in the garage. And not for the purpose of avoiding soran, he's just busy fixing things that the others have inevitably broken.Also.I spy an Akino in that thar background.
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I'm honestly going to hope Lera comes to cheer him up or something. That's probably what he'd do - something like that.
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I have a feeling Leraku would chop the TV in half before Soran got in there. Soran is pretty much his best friend in soran's canon.Not sure on the characterization there. I never really mentioned how he would react to honor vs. pie, especially when the pie's just on TV. Oh well, it was still funny. He'd probably have a mental breakdown and a seizure if faced with that conflict anyway.I liked the way he at first was grateful and then just forgot. Kinda like a classic "Uh nevermind that can wait a few more...days."Wait, when you run out of cast members...LOL. Soran walks in and...
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