Aeolus

[Gamma-Ray]

Hey everyone here is one of my recent mocs I tried to use lots of unconventional peaces and keep a nice flow to the whole moc.

If you want to see a higher resolution picture click

http://www.brickshel...s/_dsc8093s.jpg

Also here is a link to my Flickr if you want:

http://www.flickr.co...s/62196035@N07/

Thanks!

Edited December 1, 2011 by Gamma-Ray

[Orin]

This is really cool. In fact, this is amazing. I really love his legs and staff, and his wings are awesome. The whole chest is a very unique build. The only things I don't like are his waist and feet. His waist is kind of thin, but then his hips are really bulky. Also, his feet are a little awkward, the way they stick out beyond the leg like that. I think, though, that you certainly succeeded in creating an moc with unconventional pieces, and a great color scheme, too. I would like to see some more angles, though. Keep up the good work!

[Gamma-Ray]

Thanks very much! I'm not a fan of the feet ether they were the best I could do however :(Thanks again for the feedback!

[ObfuscatedCubeEntity]

My only suggestion for improvement is that you replace the light bley axles on his ankles with shorter, black axles. 9.99/10

[Gamma-Ray]

Good call. I'm not sure why i didn't do that

[BrickPharaoh]

Awesome as can be!!! Somewhat too thin around the middle torso, though.. And do the legs support it? Does it really stand up?9.25/10:tohu:

[Gamma-Ray]

Thanks! Unfortunately the legs don't support him, this whole moc was a huge learning experience and I know for sure I do not want to make another one this tedious or flimsy So yes he needs a stand.

Edited December 1, 2011 by Gamma-Ray

[Dralcax]

Are those Exo-force stickers? And does the character on the forehead mean "Ascend"?

[Gamma-Ray]

Are those Exo-force stickers? And does the character on the forehead mean "Ascend"?

Yeah there Exo-force stickers but I have no clue what that one means it just looked cool so i put it there However it would be awesome if that is what it meant!

[Obsessionist]

The upper torso and wings are phenomenal! The use of the axe blades is great! The jetpack on the waist is a bit too bulky, and the gaps on the top look odd. Some smoother, less greeble-y thighs and feet would flow better with the best of the MOC, but the rest is very cool. Fantastic MOC in general, though.

[flameman]

nice, i love the unique design, the torso is nice, and that legs are great, i'm neutral about the wings and weapon, although i would suggest try using something blue for the spear's end, and the way you made the torso and limbs proportional are awesome, and those usage of axonn's axe are geniusoverall, this MOC is awesome, great jobbtw, did you paint those blue pieces or what ?

Edited December 5, 2011 by flameman

[Gamma-Ray]

Thanks all!

nice, i love the unique design, the torso is nice, and that legs are great, i'm neutral about the wings and weapon, although i would suggest try using something blue for the spear's end, and the way you made the torso and limbs proportional are awesome, and those usage of axonn's axe are geniusoverall, this MOC is awesome, great jobbtw, did you paint those blue pieces or what ?

Not sure what pieces you are talking about but none are painted, however they do have some stickers placed on top of them.Thanks again for the constructive criticism!

[The 1st Shadow]

Wow. That is beyond amazing. The thin build looks great, and the wings are a nice touch. I love your usage of stickers on the various parts here. It all just flows together so nicely! I really like the design of the lower legs and the chest. Very cool!

[Captain Marvel]

I love this MoC. The fact that you used a body design that is rarely seen is always a plus, and the color scheme went with it well too. If you had made this a darker-colored MoC I don't think it would have worked as well as it did, but you used light colors. Kudos on that. Also, I absolutely love the way you used Axonn's axe. It's beautiful the way you use it in the chest. The only thing I would change, IMO, are the backs of the feet. They're just...missing. I feel like the MoC would look 100% complete if you filled in the holes behind the feet. For some reason, without them, the MoC looks about 95% finished to me. At any rate, it's a great 95%! This is a phenomenal MoC. Keep up the good work!-CM

[Let's Henshin!]

Awesome MOC, my only complaint is that the feet are really plain and simple, kinda of, IMO ruining the flow of the MOC.By the way I used this MOC as my inspiration for my entry for the SBC contest.

[Zarohum]

Ooh. Preety silver and white robo-ninja. Cute.9/10. Too skinny. (It's 3:44 AM my time. I'm grumpy and have to complain about something.)