Velox Posted June 17, 2013 Author Share Posted June 17, 2013 Might as well see what people think of my first attempt at Bionicle-themed writing. Revenge - SonicBOOM XS Assigned to Tyler. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted June 18, 2013 Share Posted June 18, 2013 Woah, this took me a while, but here're the reviews for Climbing the Tree of Life and Rock, Paper, Scissors. And with that, I believe the charity reviews are completely concluded. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted June 19, 2013 Share Posted June 19, 2013 Prelude to Darkness reviewed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Relapse Posted June 20, 2013 Share Posted June 20, 2013 The Best Catch - Shuhei Hisagi BZPRPG ProfilesIC: "It comes with the job," Halfimus explained, "I'm not paid enough to give anything outside quick flavour descriptions." So pay me more AuRon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted June 20, 2013 Author Share Posted June 20, 2013 The Best Catch - Shuhei Hisagi Assigned to...myself. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dual Cee Posted June 20, 2013 Share Posted June 20, 2013 117 Reviewed I'm back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted June 25, 2013 Share Posted June 25, 2013 Might as well see what people think of my first attempt at Bionicle-themed writing. Revenge - SonicBOOM XS Assigned to Tyler. Thanks for choosing the SSCC! Byawwwwwww. -Tyler SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted June 28, 2013 Author Share Posted June 28, 2013 "The Best Catch" reviewed. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted July 2, 2013 Share Posted July 2, 2013 Could someone review Find the Power? And what's the status on becoming an SSCC member? I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted July 2, 2013 Author Share Posted July 2, 2013 Could someone review Find the Power? And what's the status on becoming an SSCC member? Assigned to Tolkien. =] And geh, I'm really sorry about that! Tolkien and I were really busy with other projects, and then I just completely forgot. >_< I'll try to talk to Tolkien ASAP and get back to you! Really sorry again about the wait. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted July 4, 2013 Share Posted July 4, 2013 (edited) Averted Trial has been reviewed has been reviewed. Edited July 4, 2013 by Wasp I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted July 7, 2013 Share Posted July 7, 2013 "Find the Power", by Wasp hath been reviewed. JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 Breaking the silence by requesting a review for the first story I've posted in a bit. Ozymandias - Jon Osterman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted July 21, 2013 Author Share Posted July 21, 2013 Breaking the silence by requesting a review for the first story I've posted in a bit. Ozymandias - Jon Osterman Assigned to Nuile. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick Silverpen Posted July 26, 2013 Share Posted July 26, 2013 Just wondering if I could get a review for "Truth at the Fingertips"--Nick Silverpen. Thanks! Disassembly-- Review Collective Works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted July 28, 2013 Author Share Posted July 28, 2013 Just wondering if I could get a review for "Truth at the Fingertips"--Nick Silverpen. Thanks! Oops, sorry for the delay--assigned to Yukiko. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 With a brushing-off of dust and creaking of rusty hinges (has it really been little more than a month?) my review is complete: Jon Osterman's Ozymandias. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grey Snow Posted August 3, 2013 Share Posted August 3, 2013 It's been a while, and I wrote this as the potential start to an epic, but seeing as I have received no normal reviews, that idea is gone (unless I start getting non-critic reviews). I'm mostly curious if it was a good read. For the Glory of the Arena by Lord Koji Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted August 4, 2013 Author Share Posted August 4, 2013 It's been a while, and I wrote this as the potential start to an epic, but seeing as I have received no normal reviews, that idea is gone (unless I start getting non-critic reviews). I'm mostly curious if it was a good read. For the Glory of the Arena by Lord Koji Assigned to Zaxvo. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted August 4, 2013 Share Posted August 4, 2013 Truth at the Fingertips has been reviewed. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted August 11, 2013 Share Posted August 11, 2013 For the Glory of the Arena is reviewed. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kanakalackin Posted August 16, 2013 Share Posted August 16, 2013 Could you guys please review this? Also, how's that hiring process coming? I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. House Posted August 21, 2013 Share Posted August 21, 2013 (edited) Well, here's my second story story. Could you give it a read? "Go"- Mr. House Edited August 21, 2013 by Mr. House I occasionally return to BZP for a nostalgic trip back. Hit me up on discord if you need anything. BZPRPG Characters that I will possibly revive, Mons-Shajs-Tarotrix-Aryll Vudigg-Jorruk Yokin-Senavysh Angavur Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted August 22, 2013 Author Share Posted August 22, 2013 (edited) Sorry for taking so long for this. Could you guys please review this? Assigned to Dual Matrix. Well, here's my second story story. Could you give it a read? "Go"- Mr. House Assigned to Tyler Durden. Thank you both for choosing the SSCC! Edited August 22, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALVIS Posted April 14, 2014 Share Posted April 14, 2014 "An Even Exchange" -- Angel Bob "You are not entitled to your opinion. You are entitled to your informed opinion. No one is entitled to be ignorant." -- Harlan Ellison Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 17, 2014 Author Share Posted April 17, 2014 "An Even Exchange" -- Angel Bob I forgot about this topic...but assigned to myself as I'm not sure who/if anyone is still active besides Nuile. I'll have your review for you within a week. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALVIS Posted April 18, 2014 Share Posted April 18, 2014 Ah, yes, I hadn't noticed how desolate it was. If this club is defunct, you needn't bother. "You are not entitled to your opinion. You are entitled to your informed opinion. No one is entitled to be ignorant." -- Harlan Ellison Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 30, 2014 Author Share Posted April 30, 2014 To all Short Story writers: Unfortunately, as is obvious, this club hasn't been very active as of late, and due to inactivity and the lack of demand, it's time for this incarnation of the SSCC to be shut down. We've had a great run, and it's been my honor to be a part of several incarnations and even curate a couple. I'd like to thank all the critics and my co-curators for making this club possible, and to everyone who requested reviews, as it has been our pleasure to provide them. I also owe a great deal of thanks to Cederak, my partner in crime for many years, who has been absolutely invaluable to the SSCC and library as a whole. If anyone is interested in seeing a new critics club or even running one themselves, please feel free to PM the library staff, as if there's enough interest I'm sure something can be worked out. ~ Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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