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#41 Offline Nick Silverpen

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Posted Jan 15 2013 - 11:09 PM

Hunger Games  has been reviewed. 



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Posted Jan 18 2013 - 07:51 PM

Fate of Yrenta by The Iron Toa has been reviewed. Protip to my fellow critics: when eyeballing assignment length, be very sure all the chapters are there. :P

Edited by GSR, Jan 18 2013 - 07:51 PM.

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Posted Jan 22 2013 - 10:51 PM

Enigma has been reviewed at great length. My apologies for turning this in so late; my baby sister got a hold of my iPad and deleted a bunch of apps, my writing app among them. The moral of the story is turn in your review early and keep your electronics locked! :)

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Posted Jan 28 2013 - 02:16 PM

Reviewed "The Legend of Greno Nui". Just gotta fix up some antagonizing coding. yaaaaaaaay.....


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Posted Jan 28 2013 - 07:22 PM

Well, the good lady Eponine insists that I have her be the ECC review for this, so consider this an official request.

Story: The Shadow and the Sea
Review topic: Right over here.
Chapter count: 3, for a total of about 20,000 words total.

Take it away, madam.

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Posted Jan 28 2013 - 08:44 PM

And yep, officially assigned to Eponine. =P

 

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Posted Jan 30 2013 - 07:21 PM

New Beginning has been reviewed.

 

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Posted Jan 31 2013 - 09:39 PM

Story name and link: The Chronicles

Review topic link: The Chronicles-Review

Number of chapters: 4 so far, a few got spliced together somehow.



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Posted Jan 31 2013 - 09:48 PM

Story name and link: The Chronicles

Review topic link: The Chronicles-Review

Number of chapters: 4 so far, a few got spliced together somehow.


Assigned to TNTOS. Thank you for choosing the ECC!

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Posted Feb 02 2013 - 10:45 AM

Reviewed Attack of the Bohrok.

Edit: Also reviewed The Chronicles.

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Edited by TNTOS, Feb 06 2013 - 04:33 PM.

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Posted Feb 08 2013 - 06:27 PM

An Open Letter to the Patrons of the Epics Forum

 

 

The Library has been marked by such inactivity as of late, and we sought to inspire action through our charity reviews and a concerted effort alongside many others to make the OTC a reality. This was a moment of victory for all authors on BZPower, an opportunity to be explored. We are the ECC, the proud servants of this sub-forum through which writers have prospered and developed under our careful guidance. The insight of seven incarnations has always emphasized a strong rapport with those we serve, those who provide us a reason for our collective's existence, and those we hold most important.

 

We stand before you, accused of bringing harm to those we wish only to elevate. We have been informed that our charity work is an unbecoming statement, a sea of criticism where there ought to exist a brilliant reaction. In light of this determination, we know only unease—a concern for this forum, as our words are forced to recede. The Library's greatest threat is inactivity, trailed by poor writing as a close second. However, we have been asked to step back, to refocus our lens to a wider view.

 

The state of the epics sub-forum is a staff matter before it is an ECC one, but like the staff, this is a responsibility we selected for ourselves. We have made every attempt to be approachable, to remind you that we are your supporters, and yet we were made privy to your disregard from the powers above us. I have spent years in the company of writers here, and only in this instance do I feel a sense of failure lingers over the ECC.

 

And so we have come to a decision we choose to share publicly. Charity reviews will be reworked into a format we believe writers will find more comfortable, while also promoting the critiquing efforts of others in this sub-forum. If you feel we have done your work or the work of others any dishonor, please speak to us. We are always here, ready to listen and grow together with you as we continue to reshape our methodology. We are only young men and women, nothing so special outside of the hours we have spent refining our ability to critique. Our primary objective is to serve you and, with your advice, we predict our endeavors can only improve from here. Thank you.



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Posted Feb 10 2013 - 10:44 PM

When Rivers Run Blood has been reviewed. Trying to change my charity reviewing style a bit.

Edited by GSR, Feb 10 2013 - 10:44 PM.

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#53 Offline The Inquisitive Automaton

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Posted Feb 19 2013 - 04:17 PM

Right, my apologies that this took so long but I've finally gotten around to reviewing Destiny Quest


"I have seen my dreams laid out before me, then taken away just as quickly."

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"I have been shown fear in a handful of dust."

Chapter four - Desire

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Posted Feb 21 2013 - 01:52 AM

Well, the good lady Eponine insists that I have her be the ECC review for this, so consider this an official request.

Story: The Shadow and the Sea
Review topic: Right over here.
Chapter count: 3, for a total of about 20,000 words total.

Take it away, madam.

 

It’s been a pleasure, monsieur.


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#55 Offline Nick Silverpen

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Posted Feb 23 2013 - 06:28 PM

"In the Name of Science", reviewed



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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 01:35 PM

Hello to everyone in the Epic Critics Club :)

 

If one of you has time I would most appreciate it if you could review my epic.

 

 

1) Its called "Of Rahi and Toa" and it is for the Lesovikk hiatus contest. Here is the topic link. 

 

2) Here is the review topic link.

 

3) The story has 10 chapters.

 

 



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Posted Feb 26 2013 - 02:24 PM

Hello to everyone in the Epic Critics Club :)
 
If one of you has time I would most appreciate it if you could review my epic.
 
 
1) Its called "Of Rahi and Toa" and it is for the Lesovikk hiatus contest. Here is the topic link. 
 
2) Here is the review topic link.
 
3) The story has 10 chapters.
 
Of course! Assigned to GSR; thank you for choosing the ECC. =]

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Posted Mar 06 2013 - 10:19 PM

Charity review for Glatorian Chronicles # 9 is fin. Sorry about the super delay - I got a full time job about two weeks ago and it's been crazy making the adjustment.

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Posted Mar 15 2013 - 03:56 PM

A New Promise has been reviewed.

 

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Posted Apr 04 2013 - 11:20 AM

Whoops, forgot to log my two most recent reviews.

Of Rahi and Toa was reviewed on March 9th as requested (thanks for choosing the ECC!), and Chronicles of Tara: Ascension was reviewed on April 3rd as part of the charity initiative.

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Posted Apr 07 2013 - 06:08 AM

I was gonna wait for a few more chapters, but I want to become the best author I can. So, without further ado...

 

Bioni-Lords Origins: Phaenyx. Link

 

Bioni-Lords Origins: Review. Link

 

Chapters: Six

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. Enjoy.



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Posted Apr 08 2013 - 02:27 PM

I was gonna wait for a few more chapters, but I want to become the best author I can. So, without further ado...

 

Bioni-Lords Origins: Phaenyx. Link

 

Bioni-Lords Origins: Review. Link

 

Chapters: Six

 

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. Enjoy.

 

Assigned to The Tolerable Automation. Thank you for choosing the ECC!


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Posted Apr 11 2013 - 10:26 AM

1.) The Adventures of Sandstorm

2.) Review Topic


3.) Number of chapters: Seven (So far.)

 

Thanks! :D


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Posted Apr 11 2013 - 01:57 PM

1.) The Adventures of Sandstorm

2.) Review Topic


3.) Number of chapters: Seven (So far.)

 

Thanks! :D

 

Assigned to our very own wonderful Director, Steelsheen! Thank you for choosing the ECC! =]

 

 

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Posted Apr 25 2013 - 04:43 PM

My patience has almost run dry... :bored:


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Xirax (Topic Established), Vohan (Topic Established), Planachar (Topic Established), Kirana (Topic Established),

Muhaki (Topic Established)

 

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Posted Apr 26 2013 - 05:13 AM

My patience has almost run dry... :bored:


My review is actually ready, (and long) but for some reason, every time I try to post it or PM it to you, I get an error message.

"Fatal error: Allowed memory size of 134217728 bytes exhausted (tried to allocate 523800 bytes) in /home/bzpower/public_html/board/converge_public/sources/classes/text/parser.php on line 434"

I'm trying to figure out how to fix this, but in the mean time, please hang tight, okay?

-Steelsheen

Edited by Steelsheen, Apr 26 2013 - 05:14 AM.

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#67 Offline Phantom Terror

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Posted Apr 26 2013 - 01:50 PM

Thanks for the review Steelsheen. I now know what I need to do in part two. I tried to post the review from my email, but it wouldn't let me. I got the same message that you did.


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Xirax (Topic Established), Vohan (Topic Established), Planachar (Topic Established), Kirana (Topic Established),

Muhaki (Topic Established)

 

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Posted May 08 2013 - 02:26 PM

Hey there. Sincere apologies that this is so inappropriately late but I've finally completed the review for Bioni-Lords Origins: Phaenyx. I tried as best I could to compensate for the delay with length but we'll see how it turns out. 


"I have seen my dreams laid out before me, then taken away just as quickly."

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"I have been shown fear in a handful of dust."

Chapter four - Desire

Coming soon!

Short Stories: The Commute ~ Rasinov ~ In Your Absence ~ Hunter's Game ~ Suchia (Coming soon)

Epics: The Best Kept Secrets (Chapter 27: The Shadow Walker coming soon) ~ The Shadow of this Red Rock


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Posted May 09 2013 - 02:24 PM

I already answered this is the rules topic, but I'll post here to make sure everyone sees it. :) Kinda surprised that an ECC review would be too long for a single post, but Steelsheen can post it in parts as long as he mentions at the top of both posts that he has my permission to double-post in that one case.

 

I'm fine with letting this happen once, but in the future, please refrain from writing reviews that are too long to post. If the problem is pointing out many instances of incorrect grammar and/or spelling, I would recommend just posting about a few of those and sending the rest via PM.



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Posted May 17 2013 - 05:55 AM

@The Inquisitive Automaton. Thank you so much for reviewing and worry not about how late it was - I understand perfectly that, despite our best efforts, life has a habit of interfering with what we want to do.






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