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Eljay becomes a Toa [And Other MakutaFest Stories]


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#1 Offline ShadowWolfHount

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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 05:54 PM

[FL Hijack: in the interest of keeping things semi-sane, post your MakutaFest fics here.  Thanks! -GSR]

 

I hope you like it Eljay and all others :)
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ELJAY BECOMES A TOA

 

One day, Eljay was reviewing some bionicle set until something it his back yard 

and there he found a real life size Toa Canister.

He went out side to see the Canister and tuck it and fell into a portal.

 

He later found himself in the Bionicle Universe with a Toa stone in his hand.

When he got up and look into the water and can see that he became a Toa.

But it was not just a Toa, no normal Toa.

Eljay jumped up the yell.

 

'I AM A TOA OF CANON"


Edited by GSR, Jul 20 2014 - 06:30 PM.

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#2 Offline Rahkshi Guurahk

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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 05:58 PM

Best Makutafest fanfic so far.


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:01 PM

I was there to witness his transformation. c:<


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:02 PM

*Slows claps*

Just perfect. Even better when it was read aloud..


Edited by VoxuChro, Jul 20 2014 - 06:09 PM.

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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:02 PM

I hope you all like it, there will be a chapter two and it's about Eljay making his friend become the Toa of KFC


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:03 PM

#EljayJumpedTheYell


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:05 PM

*Slows claps*
Just perfect. Even better when eljay read it outloud..

That was me... =(

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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:06 PM

Holy Visorak, you guys... almost 60 users are viewing this.

 

Mine's going to be better though :P


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:06 PM

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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:07 PM

*Slows claps*

Just perfect. Even better when eljay read it outloud..

Eljay is Tomana? =P


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:08 PM

Toa eljay was walking on BZP nui when makuta mesonak came along.  Makuta meso spread the darkness of makuta fest on BZP nui. Toa eljay came up to him "THIS HAS TO STOP!" MAkuta meso clubed him in the head. Eljay passsed out. 

 

"What is happening?" Eljay could only see whit. He sat up and looked around. "Wow my noggin took a nokkin" he started to feel hopelss. "I cant go back and fight meso. Then he saw him. Shrek was walking towards him. "Shrek what are you doing here it is a bionicle story?" Shrek looked him in the eye and said "Why not i am life you know" Eljay accepted it. Shrek kneelt down and eljay obidiantly sat on his knee. "YOu must go back" shrek said. "Ok" Eljay said. "Go now my child" shrek said. 

 

Eljay awoke. MAkuta meso was standing over hima nd laffing! he took his cannon and shot makuta meso in the head! "I WIN"! HE YELLED! 
 

THE END!
 

 


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:09 PM

 

*Slows claps*
Just perfect. Even better when eljay read it outloud..

That was me... =(

 

Well... Had no idea whose voice was who. That is my defense


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:10 PM

This made my day hahaha Thank you


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:13 PM

 

 

*Slows claps*
Just perfect. Even better when eljay read it outloud..

That was me... =(

 

Well... Had no idea whose voice was who. That is my defense

 

Listen to TTV more. =P


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:22 PM

I hope you enjoy my short and beautiful story.

 

Omega Tahu x Toa Eljay

 

Toa Eljay finished with a mission to capture the evil Jawblade. Eljay went back to TOA HQ and went up to omega tahu. Omega tahu sounded upset. Eljay went and asked what was wrong and tahu replied, "Applego took my Omega" Eljay cried and gave omega tahu a warm embrase. Eljay started to sing "Hey Jude". At the end, omega tahu stared straight into eljays eyes and wispered "That was almost as beutiful as you..." Tahu kissed eljay and they got married the next day. Eljay adopted 12 le-matoran and named them all Patrick Amigo.

 

 

The END




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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:25 PM

#EljayJumpedTheYell

Oh I love using the bad grammar on that XD


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:29 PM

[FL and/or buzzkill voice on]

 

Okay folks, as much fun as we're having, having a separate topic for every paragraph-long MakutaFest fanfic is getting pretty spammy.  Just post 'em here.

 

Also you're not nearly as 'bad' as you all think you are. :P


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:30 PM

[FL and/or buzzkill voice on]

 

Okay folks, as much fun as we're having, having a separate topic for every paragraph-long MakutaFest fanfic is getting pretty spammy.

 

Also you're not nearly as bad as you all think you are. :P

We aren't? =P


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:34 PM

This is absolutely hilarious. Today seems to be a pretty great day.

 

Keep it up, guys. And thanks, GSR. Great idea. XD

 

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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:38 PM

I really want to sleep but all this is must-hear live lol.


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 06:59 PM

Here's a Story:

 

Eljay, Eljay, Wake up, it's Shrek!, Wake Up!

 

*Eljay Wakes up, Shocked*

 

What happend? said eljay.

 

He destroyed everything, He killed Jaa! Shrek Repsoned.

 

Who "he"? Said Eljay.

 

Tuma! Shrek Scream While starting to fade away cause he don't belong in bionicle...

 

Suddenly the roof came down, and some "Hunted" Mask came down... And tried to kill eljay with their powers.

Eljay escaped.

 

He ran, and ran utnil he clashed into Velika, A po-matoran.

 

Velika, what are you doing here? Eljay asked.

 

Velika responded: I am here to tell you that you should fight back.

 

Ooh, I should. Eljay said. But I can't do anything with my mangosteams!

 

You're power isn't mangosteam, it's canon Eljay. Velika Said.

 

Well, Then, Karzahni is alive, and want's to kill you, you better run. Said Eljay.

 

Velika Ran, and ran and... well it's not about him.

 

So suddendly Tahu appeared.

 

What happend to you? Eljay said.

 

Tahu responded, The hero factory upgraded me, I'm omega now! In exchange for me catching jawblade.

 

So, think you can take that dude on, Tuma or whatever? Eljay said.

 

Sure! Tahu said.

 

*Tuma Killed Tahu*

 

I am the mighty Tuma, you can't kill me! Tuma Said.

 

And the Masks said "Hail Tuma, Hail Tuma!"

 

Eljay Ran some more, until Tuma said "Stop! I'm not Tuma, I'm here to call you back to the podcast, you're done playing Lewa... Cause I... Am... Makuta Mesonak!"

 

You Can't stop me Mesonak, I will be Lewa, whatever you do! Eljay said.

 

No Eljay. DIE!!!!! *Mesonak Blasted Eljay with a beam of shadow*

*Eljay Died* But before he died, he changed canon so that there were lava above mesonak, killing him.

 

And so neither of them were ever in the podcast nor bionicle anymore...

 

THE END.


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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 07:01 PM

My Story "Eljay becomes a Toa" is going to become a Movie and canon.

I hope you all love it.


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Posted Aug 03 2014 - 09:15 PM

I was Hahli, the source of all Eljay madness. Check out my fanfic at "My canon cannon!"


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I was Hahli on MakutaFest 2014. I started "Makuta Meso" and was asked to write Eljay fanfic. Read it here: http://www.bzpower.c...non/?hl=+cannon

 

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Posted Aug 05 2014 - 12:43 PM

#jumpeduptheyell
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Posted Aug 05 2014 - 03:15 PM

I plan to outdo you ALL with my Adventures of OmegaTahu epic. Expect more details soon....


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Posted Aug 05 2014 - 03:50 PM

#killhahstags

Anyways Snubby, is it going to have some Jump Up The Yell in it


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Posted Aug 07 2014 - 09:35 AM

Oh, I didn't see this post earlier, but there's a link in my signature to my fanfic story. I was hahli on UStream.


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I was Hahli on MakutaFest 2014. I started "Makuta Meso" and was asked to write Eljay fanfic. Read it here: http://www.bzpower.c...non/?hl=+cannon

 

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Posted Aug 07 2014 - 02:24 PM

My Story "Eljay becomes a Toa" is going to become a Movie and canon.

I hope you all love it.

Why was the video deleted?


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Posted Aug 08 2014 - 02:53 AM

It was made for a short joke


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